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To Beget an Heir
GinnyW161 Reviews | 8.76/10 (161 Ratings, 0 Likes, 154 Favorites )
**COMPLETE** Hermione and Severus are both after one thing, money. There is one way that they can both get it. Based on the WIKTT Surrogate Mother Challenge.
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I'm a 40+ year old mother of 4 who works full-time, goes to school, and writes in what little spare time I have. Once upon a time I co-moderate the SS/HG Gift Exchange with Shiv5468 and Scattered Logic.
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AARGH! Evil author...how could you do this to us???????????
Chapter was great...thank you for the update...HOWEVER, the ending cliff needs a speedy resolution--hint, hint! And Neville? Definitely not her type...although, he is rather attentive to her, she needs someone older *DUH*
Update again soon, please!!
Response from GinnyW (Author of To Beget an Heir)
That really was a terrible ending, wasn't it? Sorry about that, but I've learned that if I don't listen to the muse, then she ensures that writing the next chapter is hell. When I listen, she takes pity on me for having to catch the slack, and things progress much better. The next chapter will be up soon. Thank you so much, QueenP! ~Ginny
wow this story had me in tears for the most part, as a mum I can tell exactly what she was going through at thinking she had to give up her baby. A beautiful emotional storyyou are a credit to the writing profession!
Response from GinnyW (Author of To Beget an Heir)
Oh, thank you! I'm glad that it was emotionally moving, that was my intent. :)
excellent
yay!
Oh I hope this works! I like the father-daughter time.
yay!
very sweet. Nothing like Mama milk to fix the problem. Liquid gold. I couldn't bear to think of feeding my babies formula because I knew the natural resource I had within me was so much better. I couldn't stand the thought of wasting it and giving my babies something I felt was lesser.
I'm glad they worked things out.
ohh dear. What's Severus likely to read into this. I get the feeling he'll try to come to his own conclusions rather than talk to Hermione. Silly man. I can't imagine going through what Hermione is. I'd have been completely insane and I'd have insisted on seeing Snape. I'd have been ranting. I know, I did a fair amount of ranting after each of my children were born and really had nothing like Hermione's reasons. LOL.
I'm glad I didn't read this until all the chapters were done! LOL. Very good. I had a feeling this might happen. I can't wait to see Severus' reaction. Hope the baby is okay!!
ewww seaweed and jaffa cakes. I love Jaffa cakes but seaweed and pickles. blech. Even during pregnancy I never craved those things. Of course with my first pregnancy I had the added complication of a wonky gallbladder that had to be removed when my son was 3 months old. I craved eggplant, cucumbers and watermelon. Not together, however. Some foods that nauseated me back then (13 years ago!) still make me queasy.
Love the story. Love Snape and his insecurities. Neville annoys me. LOL.
beautiful and sad. I'm glad Severus told her about the potion. I was afraid he'd keep it a secret and feel guilty and that it was a nastier potion than the draft of peace which wouldn't normally kill a person. So he helped Minerva die in a way of her own choosing but he didn't kill her.
very sad. I know I'd be very attached. I was intensely attached to both of my babies long before they were born. I talked to them endlessly and we found out the genders before they were born so they had names. I'm still quite a mother bear. So I hope something changes that will allow Hermione to be in her baby's life.
coolio!! loves!!!
Well, I think he deserved that bit at the end. I think he means well, in his own weird sort of way, but he could do with some social skills. It is nice to know that she has Neville around.
He might be a bit bossy, but at least her room is nice. Neither one has a clue what they are getting into, do they?
No going back now! This is likely to be a wild ride for both. I can't wait to see how their first day goes.
Well, that went better than expected. For me, but maybe not for Hermione with that birds and bees comment. :)
It's horrible that she has no choice. But, it would have been worse to have the money dangled in front of her, then find out she has to reject it because the man is a true Death Eater. Can't wait to see how horrible and how wonderful he will be to her!
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TREMENDOUS FUN!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Oh how is he planning on conceiving this child?
I just discovered this and I am glad there is more to read after this chapter.
A very satisfying ending. Thank you.
Yes!!! I knew they could do it.
This was a great ending. It was a very enjoyable story.
Response from GinnyW (Author of To Beget an Heir)
Thank you, Kira!!! I've thoroughly enjoyed telling this tale... thanks so much for reading!!! Cheers! ~Ginny
I loved Severus and his daughter bonding, she is a Slythrein through and through. Fingers crossed for Harry.