Four - Victoria Kidnapped
Chapter 5 of 8
x_dobbyAnother disturbing dream, one that becomes a chilling reality...
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an original fanfiction by olivia
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Four
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Victoria Kidnapped
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"Goodbye! Goodbye, feel better!" Healer Bransworth chirped as Patrick, leaning on Victoria, limped down the hospital corridor to home. He was still weak, although his headache had diminished. His lover smiled encouragingly at him as they exited the hospital's main front doors and lowered themselves down the steps carefully. For this occasion, Elphan had managed to secure a Muggle car from his father. The old, battered white vehicle was actually a comfort to Patrick: he was too tired to Apparate. He'd been sleeping all day, but still he felt the urge to curl up and rest.
His head drooped onto Victoria's warm shoulder in the backseat of the car on the way home. She whispered into his ear as they were pulling into the parking lot of her apartment complex that he would stay with her for as long as he needed, be it days or weeks. Patrick frankly didn't really care where he stayed at the moment: he was exhausted, worn out, and his headache was making a subtle return.
He dropped onto the bed he and Victoria had shared just twenty-four hours ago and fell asleep before his head hit the pillow. The last thing he saw before he was completely out was Victoria, smiling kindly, standing over him. Then, he slept.
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It is the same street, the same dream... Patrick chases the shadow-cloaked man again. He runs faster and again forms the one question he truly needs answered: "Who are you?"
But the shadow-cloaked man stays silent, his face still stubbornly hidden. He just looks to Patrick, eyes shielded, and beckons for him to follow. They pad down the empty street together as the first seams of orange dawn stretch over the waiting horizon.
They walk, seemingly, for hours, and Patrick's legs begin to tire and ache. He wants to ask how much longer, how much longer will they walk, but for some reason he keeps his mouth shut. He feels as if he only has one question: that question being this man's identity. He doesn't want to waste his one question, and so he is silent.
Finally, they reach an abandoned old manor. Its ragged, peeling walls and floors coated with inches of dust aren't promising as the shadow-cloaked man and Patrick step inside. The man points to a figure lying crumpled in the corner.
Then, unexpectedly, he speaks, and his voice is as low and hissing as if he were speaking Parseltongue, although plain English comes out of his mouth.
"You must wake. You must wake and remember... Harry Potter."
Darkness.
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Patrick awoke suddenly with a start, all headachey and tired feelings gone. The light outside Victoria's bedroom window hadn't changed much; he must have only been asleep for an hour or so.
VICTORIA!
Where was she!? Patrick sprung out of bed, thankful that he was fully dressed. He dashed to the bedroom door and called out fervishly, "Victoria? Love? Where are you? Are you here!?"
But his words fell upon deaf ears. There was no reply.
Oh, dear God! Victoria!
Suddenly, a flash of memory came into his mind as sharp and clear as if he were standing right at the scene: his lightning-shaped birthmark tingled, and he closed his eyes. He saw the same scene from the dream. There was the dilipidated shack, standing on unsteady beams, and a feminine figure crumpled in the corner, trembling. There, hovering above her, was the shadow-cloaked man, laughing maniacally.
Patrick's eyes shot open. That BASTARD! he thought, trying desperately to think of where that strange shadow-cloaked man could have taken Victoria. For there was no doubt in his mind that that was what had happened: Victoria had been kidnapped by the shadow-cloaked man.
Then, another flash of memory revealed where he had to go. That's it! The Shrieking Shack! he thought triumphantly, and without a moment's hesitation he turned and Disapparated on the spot.
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Hogsmeade Village was growing darker in the evening's setting sun. Patrick ran along the dirt pathway, down to the cul-de-sac at the end. He leaped over the gates surrounding the terrible Shack and then ran inside without a second thought. Victoria filled all his mind, his senses... at that moment, there wasn't one thing he wouldn't do to protect her, to save her.
He dashed up the stairs and found the room in which he had entered in the dream along with the shadow-cloaked man. He took a deep breath, then pointed his wand carefully and blasted the door open in one swift, fluid motion.
There was a muffled, masculine yelp from the other side; Patrick rushed in. Victoria, as he had guessed, was lying curled up in a corner, trembling from head to toe in fear. When she saw Patrick, her eyes widened. "P... Patrick...." She mouthed the word, her lips forming around the syllables, but she did not actually say them. Patrick ran over and helped her up, brushing off her clothing. He smiled at her reassuringly, then went for the shadow-cloaked man, lying beneath the heavy door.
He pointed his wand straight at his heart as the blackhaired man finally pushed away the door and stood, shaking out his robes. The hood of his cloak fell away, revealing a face with yellowish, sallow skin and deep set, penetrating eyes. Somehow, the face was terribly familiar, and yet Patrick had never seen the man before in his life.
The man, slightly taller than Patrick himself, just stared. "Harry Potter," he said slowly and softly. "So you've returned. Fear not. I am on your side."
What? Who was Harry Potter? What side? Did he think there was a war going on or something?
But the man continued. "I apologize about your... ah, girlfriend, but I had to bring you here. To explain. And also to keep my cover."
Explain? Explain what? And cover? What 'cover'?
Patrick scowled. "Okay, I don't know who the hell you are, but you've got three seconds to either start explaining or either get the hell away from me and Victoria."
His face softened, and he almost smiled. "Oh, how naïve." He chuckled. "Victoria. Her name is Ginny. Ginny Weasley."
"What?" Patrick's grip tightened on his wand, still pointed directly at the man's heart.
"You, boy, are not Patrick Mayfield. Everything you have experienced for the past two years has been a lie. But now—now is the time to lift the spell. Let me explain."
And with that, he began talking.
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A/n: This is distinctly reminding me of another cliffie I had, where a certain Grace Shields was about to start explaining things... haha. Anyway, I'm going to start Chapter 5 really soon, if you'll just hang in there. :] Reviews, too, are very welcome! They truly motivate me to write. They really make my day. :]
xxOlivia
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Ahhhh, the battle has begun. I like it and can't wait to see what happens. ^.^
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
thanks!!look out for the final chapter in a week or so. xxolivia
Curiouser and curiouser! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
thanks!! i'm glad you like it! 'curiouser and curiouser' is ollivander's line, right? i have to reread book 1. :] xxolivia
Gee, now who could be both "terrifying and familiar" and "everything about him is black"??? ^.~ hehehe This is just so interesting.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
hee! thanks for being such a faithful reviewer! i'm glad you think it's interesting, too. :] xxolivia
well its pretty clear as to who the characters are...... just cant guess how the story is gonna develop.... u've got me hooked now
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
haha, thanks! i'm glad you like it! look out for chapter three soon!! xxolivia
OOOOOO That sure is one big cliffie. I can't WAIT for his explanations. And of course we all know the lightning bolt birthmark just can't be a coincidence!!! ^.~ *doing the Happy Dance 'cos I dont' have to wait long for the next chappie!!!*
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
awww, thank you! and, well, i'm juuuuust saying that it COULD possibly maybe be just a coincidence... or not... ;] and you're right, i just submitted the next chapter. thanks for reading!! xxolivia
hmmmm verrrry interesting. ^.~ Need more clues before I start to try to put everything together. But I like Patrick and Victoria. they're cute. Oh and don't worry about the cheese. There's always room for a little bit!! =D hehe
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
Lol! Thanks! I was a bit worried about the cheese; I feel better now. :] Glad you like it! I just put up Chapter Two and it's in the queue now. xxOlivia
OOOO I'm very intrigued. Nice "hook" ^.^ I'll be hoping that you'll post the next chapter soon too!!
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
aw, thank you! i'm glad you liked it :] actually, i was going to go post the new chapter now! so stay tuned! xxOlivia
I liked that he began to reminisce (sp?) when he walked into the forest. And I LOVE that Snape saved him but I would have liked it a little bit more if he had given Severus a "thank you" at least before he took off to find his friends. But all in all nice. ^.^ Thanks for finally getting this up here. hehehe (had to tease a little bit!! )
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
No, it's fine. ;] I will be the first one to admit that I'm a procrastinator. I'm glad you liked it! xxolivia
So, the action will heat up like crazy now... Hope Harry's headache goes away soon. *sends cyber-aspirin to Mr. Potter*
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
cyber-aspirin... HA! (i bet i'm the only person on the planet who would have laughed out loud at that like i did... lol) xxolivia
OOOOO neat!! Altho I must confess I had a little giggle to myself as Severus "summed up" everything. In my head I heard Inigo (from the Princess Bride) say "Let me 'splain. No there is no time. Let me sum up" But then that's how the brain works without it's first cup of coffee. ^.~ But I will admit that I didn't put 2 and 2 together enough to realize that Elphan and Grace were Ron and Hermione. Silly me. Can't wait for the next two chapters.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
finally!! someone else who is a princess bride fan!!! my friend can do this hilarious imitation of inigo saying, "my name is inigo montoyo. you killed my father. prepare to DIE!!" lol. :]but getting off my princess bride spiel, thanks for the review! yeah, i'm working on chapter 6 now and it's just a little bit done, but i'm prolly going to finish it soon. :] xxolivia
Is the character named Elphan or Elphonse because you have both in this chapter.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
eek! i just went back and checked and thanks so much for pointing this out! *grovels at your feet and kisses your shoes* it's supposed to be Elphan, sorry. *cringe cringe cringe* xxolivia
Took me a few days to get around to this (RL sure can do that to a person, huh?) But I'm so glad I finally got the time. I just love the pace of this. It clips right along without feeling pushed. I can't wait to see how Patrick/Harry handles the "lifting of the spell". Write fast!!! ^.^
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
thanks so much!! i'm trying to write fast, but school is making me busy... i'm about 1/2way through chapter 6 though, and it's going good. :] xxolivia
Response from Bentwaters (Reviewer)
Well then I suppose I'll be a bit more patient. ^.~ School is important.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
is it? i never realized. lol ;] stay in school, kids!!