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Sweet Memories
x_dobby12 Reviews | 0.0/10 (12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Patrick Mayfield is leading a relatively normal Wizarding life until one day, suddenly, he learns that his whole existance has been fabricated. His whole world is not what it seems.
What do you do when your whole life is a lie?
A/n: This is a Harry/Ginny fic, although it may not seem like it at first. :]
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hi.
check out my livejournal for stuff on me. anyway, i recently finished my first novel, and i'm not sure if i can put it up online and then get it published later in my life. so i'm working on that. but if i can, i'll def. be posting it! :]
UPDATE: just found out that i can't post my novel online. sorry, guys!! but i'd rather get it published into a real book than put it up online. i'm going to try to get it published soon. :]
*CURRENTLY WORKING ON*
Sweet Memories ;; 6 1/2 chapters finished ;; no chapters in queue ;; 7 chapters total ;; An action story with a side of romance featuring Harry Potter and Ginevra Weasley
Secrets of Shell Cottage ;; 2 chapters finished ;; none submitted ;; 3-5 chapters total (haven't decided yet) ;; Luna and Dean were at Shell Cottage with Harry, Ron and Hermione... this is what they did those fateful weeks
'I Live for You' ;; 3 1/4 chapters finished ;; none submitted ;; 5 or 6 chapters total (haven't decided) ;; A fateful night with Draco Malfoy turns Ron against Hermione, so she and Ginny concoct a dastardly plan for winning him back--slight humor, mostly romance/drama
*wipes brow and collapses on couch* phew... I need to get to work. ;]
xxOlivia
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Reviews for Sweet Memories
Ahhhh, the battle has begun. I like it and can't wait to see what happens. ^.^
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
thanks!!look out for the final chapter in a week or so. xxolivia
Curiouser and curiouser! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
thanks!! i'm glad you like it! 'curiouser and curiouser' is ollivander's line, right? i have to reread book 1. :] xxolivia
Gee, now who could be both "terrifying and familiar" and "everything about him is black"??? ^.~ hehehe This is just so interesting.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
hee! thanks for being such a faithful reviewer! i'm glad you think it's interesting, too. :] xxolivia
well its pretty clear as to who the characters are...... just cant guess how the story is gonna develop.... u've got me hooked now
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
haha, thanks! i'm glad you like it! look out for chapter three soon!! xxolivia
OOOOOO That sure is one big cliffie. I can't WAIT for his explanations. And of course we all know the lightning bolt birthmark just can't be a coincidence!!! ^.~ *doing the Happy Dance 'cos I dont' have to wait long for the next chappie!!!*
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
awww, thank you! and, well, i'm juuuuust saying that it COULD possibly maybe be just a coincidence... or not... ;] and you're right, i just submitted the next chapter. thanks for reading!! xxolivia
hmmmm verrrry interesting. ^.~ Need more clues before I start to try to put everything together. But I like Patrick and Victoria. they're cute. Oh and don't worry about the cheese. There's always room for a little bit!! =D hehe
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
Lol! Thanks! I was a bit worried about the cheese; I feel better now. :] Glad you like it! I just put up Chapter Two and it's in the queue now. xxOlivia
OOOO I'm very intrigued. Nice "hook" ^.^ I'll be hoping that you'll post the next chapter soon too!!
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
aw, thank you! i'm glad you liked it :] actually, i was going to go post the new chapter now! so stay tuned! xxOlivia
I liked that he began to reminisce (sp?) when he walked into the forest. And I LOVE that Snape saved him but I would have liked it a little bit more if he had given Severus a "thank you" at least before he took off to find his friends. But all in all nice. ^.^ Thanks for finally getting this up here. hehehe (had to tease a little bit!! )
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
No, it's fine. ;] I will be the first one to admit that I'm a procrastinator. I'm glad you liked it! xxolivia
So, the action will heat up like crazy now... Hope Harry's headache goes away soon. *sends cyber-aspirin to Mr. Potter*
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
cyber-aspirin... HA! (i bet i'm the only person on the planet who would have laughed out loud at that like i did... lol) xxolivia
OOOOO neat!! Altho I must confess I had a little giggle to myself as Severus "summed up" everything. In my head I heard Inigo (from the Princess Bride) say "Let me 'splain. No there is no time. Let me sum up" But then that's how the brain works without it's first cup of coffee. ^.~ But I will admit that I didn't put 2 and 2 together enough to realize that Elphan and Grace were Ron and Hermione. Silly me. Can't wait for the next two chapters.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
finally!! someone else who is a princess bride fan!!! my friend can do this hilarious imitation of inigo saying, "my name is inigo montoyo. you killed my father. prepare to DIE!!" lol. :]but getting off my princess bride spiel, thanks for the review! yeah, i'm working on chapter 6 now and it's just a little bit done, but i'm prolly going to finish it soon. :] xxolivia
Is the character named Elphan or Elphonse because you have both in this chapter.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
eek! i just went back and checked and thanks so much for pointing this out! *grovels at your feet and kisses your shoes* it's supposed to be Elphan, sorry. *cringe cringe cringe* xxolivia
Took me a few days to get around to this (RL sure can do that to a person, huh?) But I'm so glad I finally got the time. I just love the pace of this. It clips right along without feeling pushed. I can't wait to see how Patrick/Harry handles the "lifting of the spell". Write fast!!! ^.^
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
thanks so much!! i'm trying to write fast, but school is making me busy... i'm about 1/2way through chapter 6 though, and it's going good. :] xxolivia
Response from Bentwaters (Reviewer)
Well then I suppose I'll be a bit more patient. ^.~ School is important.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
is it? i never realized. lol ;] stay in school, kids!!