One - Meeting Victoria
Chapter 2 of 8
x_dobbyPatrick goes and has a very, er, interesting visit with Victoria Waters.
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an original fanfiction by olivia
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One
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Meeting Victoria
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Patrick Mayfield sat straight up in bed.
Ah, God... what time was it? He leaned over and looked at his bedside alarm clock. It was past ten in the morning. Late... too late.
Stupid Dervish & Bangs business meeting. Patrick frankly couldn't care one bit less about their expanding worldwide. From ten p.m. to long past midnight, Patrick had been forced to suffer through a dreadfully boring business meeting, complete with long-winded talks of stocks, funds and other monetary issues Patrick couldn't comprehend; old, chubby men with walrus-y, drooping skin, falling asleep and snoring loudly; and finally, water that tasted of salt, and sandwiches slathered in sour mayonnaise.
All in all, torture.
After quickly Apparating to his small flat in the downtown Wizarding section of London, Patrick had collapsed onto his bed and slept instantly.
"Stupid, crap meeting," he muttered to himself. In truth, it wasn't even he who was orginially scheduled to go to the boring thing. His fellow Dervish & Bangs worker Grace Shields had, but she'd fallen ill... nothing serious, but she couldn't go. So, Patrick and Grace's mutual boss, Elphan Perdock, had forced Patrick to attend. Hey, it could have been worse, he said to himself, working out a kink in his neck with his hands. Elphan could have said that I was going from the start. He could have favored Grace 'cause they're dating. At least he didn't do that, right?
He finally rolled out of bed and stood, standing firm even as his tired knees wanted to bend and break, and his body wanted to curl up and sleep. He tripped into the bathroom and quickly showered and dressed in jeans and a T-shirt.
Feeling much more awake, he walked downstairs slowly and stretched as he pointed his wand at the coffeemaker in the tiny, cramped kitchen to start it. After quickly drinking a cup of coffee and magicking the mug clean, he got up from the small kitchen table and left his flat.
He was going to visit his girlfriend, Victoria Waters. They had been dating since his seventh year at Hogwarts, and her sixth. She had just finished at Hogwarts and was working on being a Healer in Mark Muffel's Magical Medical School. Today, Saturday, they had arranged to meet and go for lunch.
Patrick had first seen Victoria when Grace Shields had introduced them. She was Victoria's best friend, although two years her senior. They had had a short, flirty friendship before that fateful Christmas Eve of seventh year when they had kissed under the mistletoe in the deserted Great Hall. Since then, they had been in love. Patrick had never felt the same way about any other girl. He'd had a few other girlfriends, sure. But they were flings; they didn't really mean anything.
Sometimes, lying in bed late at night, he feared Victoria leaving him. He thought that she would go to someone younger, handsomer, richer, more successful than some nineteen-year-old, parentless man, living on his own and working at a clothing store. It was a clichéd fear, he knew, but he thought it nonetheless. But then, the next time he saw Victoria, he would just kiss her lips and look into her deep, chocolate-brown eyes, and he would know, deep in his soul, that they would be together—forever.
He walked down the concrete sidewalk, hands in his pockets, braced against the crisp, early April winds. They whipped and curled around his body, chilling him from the inside out.
He reached Victoria's apartment building about ten minutes later. He went up on the lift and stood by Victoria's flat door, four-F. Suddenly, he realized he'd forgotten to buy flowers. Before leaving his own flat, he'd resolved to buy some on the way. And now he was here with no flowers to speak of.
He saw an old, stepped-on, dirty napkin lying beside her door from god knows when. He stooped, and wincing from the repulsiveness (for it looked as if someone with an extremely heavy cold had used the paper napkin as a tissue), he carefully picked up the old thing and took his wand from his pocket. He had never been the best at Transfiguration, but he was sure he could do this right.
A moment later, he rapped on the door with his knuckles and Victoria opened it, wearing a pretty, white blouse and skinny blue jeans with her flaming-red hair tied up into an elegant knot on the top of her head. Patrick let out a sigh. He wanted to kiss her right then and there. But instead he contained himself, grinning widely, holding one hand behind his back.
Victoria, realizing the game, smiled back. She turned and tried to twist her body so she could see what he was holding, but he turned with her so his back stayed behind. Victoria giggled. "Come on, love, what've you got?" she asked, chuckling as he playfully turned away from her every attempt to grab what he was holding—whatever it was.
Finally, with a mammoth flourish, he whipped out the hidden object and held it in front of her face. Her whole face lit up, and her mouth dropped open in shock and pleasure. Clutched tightly in Patrick's outstretched hand was an enormous bouquet of tulips, Queen Anne's Lace, and—the most abundant of the bunch—beautiful, bloomed-at-their-peaks red roses. She took the bunch and pressed it to her face, smelling it.
"Patrick!" she breathed, looking up at him. "They're fantastic! Thank you!"
She turned and beckoned slightly, heading down the front hallway towards the kitchen to fetch a vase of water. Patrick followed her and watched as she clipped the flowers and arranged them tastefully in a patterned glass vase filled with clear water. Somehow, watching as she arranged the bouquet, she seemed almost sensual, sexy... He suddenly walked over and wrapped his hands around her waist from behind. She was surprised, but then softened at his touch. He began leaving a trail of kisses up her soft neck.
She turned and kissed him full on the lips. He closed his eyes and sighed. Victoria was the perfect woman for him. He clutched her tighter and pulled up his leg, running it down hers.
She kissed him deeper, sliding her tongue into his mouth. His hands worked at her chest, but she didn't seem to mind. In fact, she welcomed it. They slowly walked out of the kitchen and down the hall together, Victoria leading the way, even though she was walking backwards.
They entered the bedroom, but Patrick hardly noticed, he was so consumed with Victoria and Victoria alone. Panting, they both fell onto the bed simultaneously.
Patrick wanted to be sure, though, before he did this. They had not yet slept together. "Victoria..." he said, breaking their latest kiss, "are you sure? Are you ready?"
She just smiled and kissed him. He took that for a yes. Slowly, surely, he began undoing the buttons on her blouse.
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The dusty, fading evening light was what Patrick woke to later that day. He felt disoriented for a moment, but then remembered that magical afternoon spent with Victoria. His body tingled all over just remembering... He looked over to where she lay, fast asleep, her golden-red hair fanned out beneath her like a halo.
She was so beautiful when she slept. Patrick wondered what she was dreaming. He hoped it was something pleasant—she deserved that, and oh so much more.
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A/n: My most sincere apoligies for the cheesiness in the lines, 'He would just kiss her lips and look into her deep, chocolate-brown eyes and he would know, deep in his soul, that they would be together—forever.'. But that's how Patrick felt! I can't change it now. ;]
I hope you liked! And I'll be posting the next chapter as soon as this one gets approved. :]
xxOlivia
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Ahhhh, the battle has begun. I like it and can't wait to see what happens. ^.^
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
thanks!!look out for the final chapter in a week or so. xxolivia
Curiouser and curiouser! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
thanks!! i'm glad you like it! 'curiouser and curiouser' is ollivander's line, right? i have to reread book 1. :] xxolivia
Gee, now who could be both "terrifying and familiar" and "everything about him is black"??? ^.~ hehehe This is just so interesting.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
hee! thanks for being such a faithful reviewer! i'm glad you think it's interesting, too. :] xxolivia
well its pretty clear as to who the characters are...... just cant guess how the story is gonna develop.... u've got me hooked now
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
haha, thanks! i'm glad you like it! look out for chapter three soon!! xxolivia
OOOOOO That sure is one big cliffie. I can't WAIT for his explanations. And of course we all know the lightning bolt birthmark just can't be a coincidence!!! ^.~ *doing the Happy Dance 'cos I dont' have to wait long for the next chappie!!!*
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
awww, thank you! and, well, i'm juuuuust saying that it COULD possibly maybe be just a coincidence... or not... ;] and you're right, i just submitted the next chapter. thanks for reading!! xxolivia
hmmmm verrrry interesting. ^.~ Need more clues before I start to try to put everything together. But I like Patrick and Victoria. they're cute. Oh and don't worry about the cheese. There's always room for a little bit!! =D hehe
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
Lol! Thanks! I was a bit worried about the cheese; I feel better now. :] Glad you like it! I just put up Chapter Two and it's in the queue now. xxOlivia
OOOO I'm very intrigued. Nice "hook" ^.^ I'll be hoping that you'll post the next chapter soon too!!
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
aw, thank you! i'm glad you liked it :] actually, i was going to go post the new chapter now! so stay tuned! xxOlivia
I liked that he began to reminisce (sp?) when he walked into the forest. And I LOVE that Snape saved him but I would have liked it a little bit more if he had given Severus a "thank you" at least before he took off to find his friends. But all in all nice. ^.^ Thanks for finally getting this up here. hehehe (had to tease a little bit!! )
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
No, it's fine. ;] I will be the first one to admit that I'm a procrastinator. I'm glad you liked it! xxolivia
So, the action will heat up like crazy now... Hope Harry's headache goes away soon. *sends cyber-aspirin to Mr. Potter*
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
cyber-aspirin... HA! (i bet i'm the only person on the planet who would have laughed out loud at that like i did... lol) xxolivia
OOOOO neat!! Altho I must confess I had a little giggle to myself as Severus "summed up" everything. In my head I heard Inigo (from the Princess Bride) say "Let me 'splain. No there is no time. Let me sum up" But then that's how the brain works without it's first cup of coffee. ^.~ But I will admit that I didn't put 2 and 2 together enough to realize that Elphan and Grace were Ron and Hermione. Silly me. Can't wait for the next two chapters.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
finally!! someone else who is a princess bride fan!!! my friend can do this hilarious imitation of inigo saying, "my name is inigo montoyo. you killed my father. prepare to DIE!!" lol. :]but getting off my princess bride spiel, thanks for the review! yeah, i'm working on chapter 6 now and it's just a little bit done, but i'm prolly going to finish it soon. :] xxolivia
Is the character named Elphan or Elphonse because you have both in this chapter.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
eek! i just went back and checked and thanks so much for pointing this out! *grovels at your feet and kisses your shoes* it's supposed to be Elphan, sorry. *cringe cringe cringe* xxolivia
Took me a few days to get around to this (RL sure can do that to a person, huh?) But I'm so glad I finally got the time. I just love the pace of this. It clips right along without feeling pushed. I can't wait to see how Patrick/Harry handles the "lifting of the spell". Write fast!!! ^.^
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
thanks so much!! i'm trying to write fast, but school is making me busy... i'm about 1/2way through chapter 6 though, and it's going good. :] xxolivia
Response from Bentwaters (Reviewer)
Well then I suppose I'll be a bit more patient. ^.~ School is important.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
is it? i never realized. lol ;] stay in school, kids!!