Three - A Man Cloaked in Shadows
Chapter 4 of 8
x_dobbyGrace explains everything and Patrick has a nightmare.
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an original fanfiction by olivia
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Three
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A Man Cloaked in Shadows
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"W-well," Grace began, looking nervous. Elphan squeezed her shoulder and gave her a wry smile. She continued, her voice shaky at first but then becoming stronger:
"Um, well, you k-kind of collapsed in the store room while I was unpacking boxes. Do you remember?"
Patrick thought, then nodded. Yes, it was all coming back... Grace had been chastising him for showing up late to work and nearly being fired. Then, the raging pain in his forehead, then... nothing.
Grace went on. "After you collapsed, I yelled for Elphan. He came in and saw you and the look on his face...," she smiled wanly. "Well, then he magicked you onto a stretcher he conjured and took you with Side-Along Apparation to St. Mungo's. The Healer... um, I think she should tell you herself."
At that moment a tall, cheery woman with a huge toothy smile, clipped shiny blond locks, and a fearless demeanor walked in the room. She was dressed in a long white coat and carrying a silver clipboard. Her wand was stuck into the space at the top where a pen is usually kept.
"Hello... Patrick, is it?" Her voice was high and chirpy, like a twittering bird. "I'm Healer Bransworth. Well, I see you've collapsed... Unfortunately, we didn't find any medical reason for this occurrence. We'd like to run some tests to make sure everything's shipshape, and if everything is, you can go. Is that all right?"
She talked at a rapid pace, so it took a few moments for Patrick to digest everything she'd said. After a couple of seconds had passed, he finally replied, "Okay, sure. I just want to find out what's wrong with me." He looked up at Victoria, and she smiled sadly and waved a little with two of her fingers.
Healer Bransworth smiled her wide grin again. "Fabulous," she replied, then quickly scribbled something on the clipboard with a pen that had been tucked behind her ear. "We'll start right away."
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Victoria stayed over at St. Mungo's that night after an increasingly uncomfortable series of medical tests, stealing into Patrick's hospital bed when the Healers weren't looking. Elphan and Grace had long since left when she finally crawled in bed and under the sheets. She snuggled up beside him, her body curving almost perfectly into his like they were molded to fit, like a puzzle being completed. She kissed his cheek, and he smiled, even with his still-lingering headache.
"Good night, my love," he whispered, and then they were both fast asleep, him clutching her tightly and vice versa.
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The fog-laden street is thick and the air itself seems to suffocate all who pass. Patrick, wary, steps onto the quiet suburb, the full moon casting a ghostly light on its inhabitants. He walks down, wondering if he is the only human being left in existence. His footfalls make thick, hard thunk-like sounds on the asphalt as he walks.
Is he? he wonders again. Is he truly the only human left?
The world is empty and still. It doesn't answer his question.
Quickly, nervously, he takes out his wand and says quietly, "Homenum revelio." Yes, there are a few more humans here tonight... but where, that is the question....
He walks farther, his footsteps falling harder on the paved ground. All around him, apartment buildings rise and sit like expectant Christmastime guests, buildings that would usually be buzzing with late-night activity and life. But not tonight. They stay silent and cold as an unnamed tombstone.
Wait... a sound! He isn't alone, after all. He stops, suspicious, wand drawn, and turns his head, seeing the whole vast, dark street under the high moon. Footsteps echo to his left. They echo to his right. He swivels his head, faster, faster, wondering, heart pounding邑ho is out there!?
Then, a man! Patrick turns, wand pointed accusingly at the unknown figure of a tall man, slightly stooped over, swishing a long, black cloak on his lanky figure. Everything about him is black揺is clothing, his features, his shoulder-length hair. It is as if he is clothed in shadows.
The shadow-cloaked man runs down, past Patrick and not even glancing his way. "WAIT!" Patrick cries. This man may be his only hope! Who is he? What is his purpose!?
Patrick, forgetting all cautionary measures, stuffs his wand into his pocket and runs towards the quickly diminishing silhouette of the shadow-cloaked man.
Patrick's legs are long, so he reaches the man fast. "Wait... Stop..." he pants, gasping, out of breath. The man does stop, which surprises Patrick. He hadn't been expecting him to. "Who are you?" Patrick asks frantically once he has recaptured air in his lungs. And when the man doesn't answer, Patrick asks it again, "Who are you? Who are you!?"
In response, the man turns his body so his face is reflected in the sheer moonlight. And what Patrick sees is both terrifying and familiar.
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Patrick awoke with a slick sheen of sweat coating his entire body. He sat up slowly and gasped for breath. Victoria was dozing on an armchair by the window. At her boyfriend's outburst, she suddenly looked up. "Oh, Pat, you've woken," she said, smiling. "About time. It's nearly ten o'clock."
Patrick nodded, unable to take his mind off that horrifying dream. What had happened?! Who was that man? In the dream the man had been familiar, but now... he couldn't even picture the face. The silhouette, though, he remembered down to the bottom of his shoes. The shadow-cloaked man... what had it meant?
Suddenly Healer Bransworth walked in, her tall heels clacking on the tiled floor. "Good news!" she announced cheerily, clasping her hands in front of her. "You're perfectly normal. You can go home this afternoon." She talked on, describing exactly what the medical tests had detailed about his body, but Patrick wasn't listening.
"...And that MCAT scan, well, that didn't show anything either羊eally, it's amazing what you can and can't find on these things..."
All he saw, all he heard, was the shadow-cloaked man and his cold, clacking footsteps.
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A/n: Another chapter gone! 4 down, 4 to go... we're halfway there.
Oh yeah, almost forgot葉he 'MCAT scan' stands for 'Magical CAT scan'. I didn't know if anyone could figure that out besides me. ;]
One last note: sorry if this chapter was a little shorter than normal, but as I say, quality over quantity. :]
xxOlivia
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Ahhhh, the battle has begun. I like it and can't wait to see what happens. ^.^
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
thanks!!look out for the final chapter in a week or so. xxolivia
Curiouser and curiouser! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
thanks!! i'm glad you like it! 'curiouser and curiouser' is ollivander's line, right? i have to reread book 1. :] xxolivia
Gee, now who could be both "terrifying and familiar" and "everything about him is black"??? ^.~ hehehe This is just so interesting.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
hee! thanks for being such a faithful reviewer! i'm glad you think it's interesting, too. :] xxolivia
well its pretty clear as to who the characters are...... just cant guess how the story is gonna develop.... u've got me hooked now
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
haha, thanks! i'm glad you like it! look out for chapter three soon!! xxolivia
OOOOOO That sure is one big cliffie. I can't WAIT for his explanations. And of course we all know the lightning bolt birthmark just can't be a coincidence!!! ^.~ *doing the Happy Dance 'cos I dont' have to wait long for the next chappie!!!*
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
awww, thank you! and, well, i'm juuuuust saying that it COULD possibly maybe be just a coincidence... or not... ;] and you're right, i just submitted the next chapter. thanks for reading!! xxolivia
hmmmm verrrry interesting. ^.~ Need more clues before I start to try to put everything together. But I like Patrick and Victoria. they're cute. Oh and don't worry about the cheese. There's always room for a little bit!! =D hehe
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
Lol! Thanks! I was a bit worried about the cheese; I feel better now. :] Glad you like it! I just put up Chapter Two and it's in the queue now. xxOlivia
OOOO I'm very intrigued. Nice "hook" ^.^ I'll be hoping that you'll post the next chapter soon too!!
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
aw, thank you! i'm glad you liked it :] actually, i was going to go post the new chapter now! so stay tuned! xxOlivia
I liked that he began to reminisce (sp?) when he walked into the forest. And I LOVE that Snape saved him but I would have liked it a little bit more if he had given Severus a "thank you" at least before he took off to find his friends. But all in all nice. ^.^ Thanks for finally getting this up here. hehehe (had to tease a little bit!! )
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
No, it's fine. ;] I will be the first one to admit that I'm a procrastinator. I'm glad you liked it! xxolivia
So, the action will heat up like crazy now... Hope Harry's headache goes away soon. *sends cyber-aspirin to Mr. Potter*
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
cyber-aspirin... HA! (i bet i'm the only person on the planet who would have laughed out loud at that like i did... lol) xxolivia
OOOOO neat!! Altho I must confess I had a little giggle to myself as Severus "summed up" everything. In my head I heard Inigo (from the Princess Bride) say "Let me 'splain. No there is no time. Let me sum up" But then that's how the brain works without it's first cup of coffee. ^.~ But I will admit that I didn't put 2 and 2 together enough to realize that Elphan and Grace were Ron and Hermione. Silly me. Can't wait for the next two chapters.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
finally!! someone else who is a princess bride fan!!! my friend can do this hilarious imitation of inigo saying, "my name is inigo montoyo. you killed my father. prepare to DIE!!" lol. :]but getting off my princess bride spiel, thanks for the review! yeah, i'm working on chapter 6 now and it's just a little bit done, but i'm prolly going to finish it soon. :] xxolivia
Is the character named Elphan or Elphonse because you have both in this chapter.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
eek! i just went back and checked and thanks so much for pointing this out! *grovels at your feet and kisses your shoes* it's supposed to be Elphan, sorry. *cringe cringe cringe* xxolivia
Took me a few days to get around to this (RL sure can do that to a person, huh?) But I'm so glad I finally got the time. I just love the pace of this. It clips right along without feeling pushed. I can't wait to see how Patrick/Harry handles the "lifting of the spell". Write fast!!! ^.^
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
thanks so much!! i'm trying to write fast, but school is making me busy... i'm about 1/2way through chapter 6 though, and it's going good. :] xxolivia
Response from Bentwaters (Reviewer)
Well then I suppose I'll be a bit more patient. ^.~ School is important.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)
is it? i never realized. lol ;] stay in school, kids!!