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Time Will Tell
Punkindoodle51 Reviews | 5.0/10 (51 Ratings, 0 Likes, 55 Favorites )
A magical clock, a secret message, time travel and a murder that must be prevented. Nominated at Quill to Parchment, Dangerous Liaisons and He Had it Coming.
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Everyone seems to be taking things in stride despite the random outbursts. now I wonder how the Malfoy clan will handle the news?
Tee hee. So they made it back. I was a little confused because in the chapter with Dumbledore it mentions that Draco can tell what the letters are going to spell but doesn't want to say it in front of DD, yet when Hermione says it's the word 'pendullum' Draco seems as if he had no idea what the word might spell.
Anyway, glad they've mad eit back and I'm looking forward to seeing how they deal with their friends now.
I remember this chapter - of course. It was an excellent chapter. Very emotional. I remember wiating to see when Hermione would figure it all out. Very well written.
I DO remember this chapter and the next. I suppose I will just have to skip ahead a bit (or skim to re-familiarize myself with the story) to find out where I actually left off. I am excited to finally see how this all turns out, what all the puzzle pieces mean, and how the two will get back to their own time - as well as what will happen when they do!
I kinda skimmed this chapter because I believe I've read it before. Maybe I was farther ahead than I remember? Anyway, at this point Draco and Hermione seem to really be a couple, despite the pushing away and pulling close stuff. If they were truly 'on the fence' they wouldn't be kissing at every turn so couple-dom it is. :) I do wonder about the Greeks being disturbed by their kissing though. In Greece at that time I don't think it was especially unheard of or even looked down upon for brothers and sisters to get it on - gross as that is.
Off to the next...
YOu do a good job of making the reader feel the intensity of the chase scene. I felt as if I was running with them while I was reading it.
I started this story a while ago and I'm glad to see it's complete. I'm really curious how the two are going to get out of this mess and you've made the messages vague enough to peak my interest that much more. I'm trying just as hard as they are to figure it all out. :)
Ive just read the whole story, it was such an emotional read. I had a strong bond for the relationship between hermione and draco..and i wanted them to have a happy famiy. I have never been so sad reading a fic before, and although it sounds negative, it is astonishing. I dont normally feel this strong. The part where jasper had his tongue, eyes, hands ripped off by his own grandfather, screaming, i was shocked. Truely amazing writing and thank heavens it had a happy ending. I will always remember this fic, and ive read quite a few.
Well done and thank you !
Gorgeous!
Response from Punkindoodle (Author of Time Will Tell)
Thanks!
Response from Punkindoodle (Author of Time Will Tell)
Thanks!
Neat. I wonder where they will wind up next.
They definitely know just the thing to say to hurt the other most, don't they?
Why did he offer her an olive he just put into his mouth?
What does it MEAN?! You have well and truly caught me up in your story.
She is nuts!
I don't think they really wanted to go further back in time. :) Especially that far back. tehehe
Response from elsolel (Reviewer)
oops, hit review button twice,
Response from elsolel (Reviewer)
oops, hit review button twice,
I don't think they really wanted to go further back in time. :) Especially that far back. tehehe
Like it's their fault that some High Priest mistook them for gods. I always wonder at that.
Fun. Why do they think the two of them are gods? I'll just keep on reading.
What a great way to grab the reader's interest! Why is there a capital U in the middle of the sentence?(yay random story button)
That was incredible!!! OMG I thought for a while through there that the bad bad man had been Sev but thank Merlin it wasn't. Do you think Jasper was the next Dark Lord or just Dark? This was a fantastic read and you ended it so nicely. I'm sorry Amee was never born, but she was so right in a way and I'm sure it started in the womb. You've got to keep writing your other fic now-- thanks!
Response from Punkindoodle (Author of Time Will Tell)
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reviewing!
i just wanted to let you knwo that i was enjoying this story for a while, maybe the first ten chapters or so, but then it really took a turn in another direction (the plot, the characterisation). I just couldn't continue. I do like your s tyle, and I hope your next longer story will be something I can continue
Response from Punkindoodle (Author of Time Will Tell)
Thanks for reading as far as you could. I'm glad you at least enjoyed some of it. I know this started out light and humerous, but as in real life, it took a dark turn.Was it the mythology that turned you off, or the darker things such as murder or incest? Just wondering.Punkin
SO Sweeet!!!!!!! The perfect ending for the most perfect Story!!!! It's sad that amee doesn't exsist anymore but I guess it was better that way!
Response from Punkindoodle (Author of Time Will Tell)
Thank you so much for reviewing! It was sad that I had to make Amee not exist, I really liked her.
OMG that was intense I loved it!!!!!!!!!!You should make like 2 endings for the story it would be so awsome and OMG HE is the one that Might kill herms!!!!!!
Response from Punkindoodle (Author of Time Will Tell)
Thank you so much for reviewing! Just wait until you see just how crazy Japser will be. I'll warn you ahead of time that it's going to get very dark before the end.
That was an extreme chapter.
It's so sad how Jade totally lost herself. I think she should have just been hospitalized for her own good. I hope Draco can figure out a way to save Hermione, too, but I have this weird feeling like it's all just going to stay the same, because that their future was to go back in time and see that, but that their future was already like that, and going back in time didn't change anything because it was part of their future, like I already said. So it's all going to happen like the older Draco and Amee said, and then the story will end. Simple as that. But don't take me wrong, I still want to read the story!
Please don't tell me anything, though, even if I'm right.
Thank you for a great chapter! It was gripping. And I don't pay compliments unless they're due.
Katie
Response from Punkindoodle (Author of Time Will Tell)
Thank you so much! As the story progressed, it got very dark, as you will see in the final chapters. I won't say if there is a happy ending or not...