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Potions Under Duress Happy Birthday
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Happy Birthday

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Happy Birthday

averygoodun

28 Reviews   |   28 Ratings, 0 Likes, 46 Favorites )

Humor Drama Romance Potions Under Duress 5,993 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape

It had been a mistake. Both of them knew it at the time, but they went ahead and slept together anyway.

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averygoodun

Member Since 2005  |  19 Stories  |  Favorited by 316  |  122 Reviews Written  |  1,064 Review Responses

Right.  I would like to state, for the record, that I WILL finish "She Married Her Choice".  I will.  Assuming I am in control of my own destiny and accomplishments, that is. ;-)

Unfortunately, real life (mainly an attention craving three-year-old) and inspiration have been keeping me from creative endeavors for a while now.  I do foresee a time when that shall pass, but until then, I ask for your patience.

Thank you!

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10/10

braye27

The picture of Severus you have painted in this story is dear to my heart.  I always knew he would be a great daddy, and so he was!

Hermione is a wise witch, and allowing Severus to come to his own realization "that he wanted to be in her life however he could" was the perfect way to handle things.

My favorite part? 
She asked Hassan what he wanted the answer to be.
..... Severus ground his teeth.

I had to laugh out loud at the thought of Severus having to wait to find out if he was the father.  Well done!


Beth

10/10

glenda

How a sweet and wonderful fic!!!!!!!! you almost made me cry, thanks a lot for writing this, it is one of the pretiest that i´ve read.  Congratulatios!!!!!!!!!!!

9/10

Katie616

Oh, that was so touching! I just can't believe it! I totally loved it! The way you played out the 'who's the father' scene was pure genius. It would have really taken away from the story for her to just out-and-out say it, but they way you did it was just awesome. I am now a total fan. I really, really am.

I'll look around for more of your stories; I'm sure they're just as good as (if not better than) this one.

Thank you so much for a wonderful read.

Katie

10/10

aphrodites_child

Lovely story, I like how she kept him on pins and needles right up to the end....serves him right, hehe.

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thank you!

0/10

Brisinggammen

Lovely, just lovely. GinnyW is such a lucky girl!

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thank you!  She deserves it!

0/10

MollysSister

Lucky lucky GinnyW! What a wonderful birthday present. Does this mean Ginny's real name is Harriet?

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Aw, she deserves it!  But no, her name is not Harriet.  XD

10/10

karelia

Aaawwww! This is the kind of story that has me smiling for the rest of the day. :-) Absolutely beautiful.

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thank you!  I love making people smile!

10/10

lipa

Wonderful story.

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thank you!

10/10

DoctorQ

This is a beautiful story. I love how each of the characters stops thinking about what is best and starts feeling what is right. I also loved how you chose not to use dialog to tell this story. It really worked for me to receive both what was said and why it was said at the same time. Thank you.

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thank you!  This was a deliberate attempt to tell a story without a stitch of dialogue, and I'm glad you think it worked. Cheers!

0/10

Britt1975

Hermione forgot she didn't know how to be a mother and became one.

 The most beautiful, wonderful, accurate line ever to be written!  Wonderfully well done...this was real treat to read!

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thank you!!!

0/10

Ella Snape

Thank you for this very sweet story.  I really enjoyed it.

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thank you very much!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

It's a good story. I liked it very much. I found myself a little anxious at first, but it all resolved in a lovely manner. I also liked Hassan and how he treated Hermione. Nicely done.

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

I'm trying to expand a bit and write likeable characters. ;-)  Thank you.

10/10

Sampdoria

What a beautiful story!!! I really enjoyed it, I hope you will make more stories like this one! A job very, very, very well done!!!!

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thank you! 

0/10

Calicoskys

*melts* that was just awesome.

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thank you!

0/10

Terab

That was a very cute story!!

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Cheers!

0/10

septentrion

Nice birthday gift!

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

I was hoping she'd like it.  Thanks!

10/10

KarenDetroit

Very sweet! Thanks, I needed that!

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

You are welcome!  I'm thrilled you liked it!  Thanks.

10/10

mistaria

Awww~ totally cute. <3 I do enjoy me a good Hermione is knocked up fic, as there are very few of them. ^^ Her reactions and preparation for motherhood was perfect.

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

There do seem to be a dearth of knocked up Hermione fics that don't involve rape.  'Tis a shame. 

Thank you.  I'm glad you liked it! 

10/10

Gardengirl

I really enjoyed this! The imagination malfunction just cracked me up. Thanks for that ~

Hope to see more like this from you soon!

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked that bit. 

More of other stories should be on its way soonish! 

10/10

Fawkes_07

*squish*  Awesome as always. 

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thank you!

10/10

sinbad

I loved that story.  Snape ran from Hermione until she caught him, cute and original.

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thanks!  Although, I think of it more as Snape ran away from his own feelings until they caught and tackled him.  But that's my take and shouldn't influence yours. :-)

Cheers! 

10/10

GinnyW

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Oh, Avery, I love, love, LOVE THIS! It is absolutely perfect. Not too sappy, just.... *contented sigh*

A baby!fic with a happy ending! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE, again!

And I can't wipe the smile off of my face for anything. My sister keeps looking at me as if I've lost my mind. :D

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! You are absolutely wonderful!

*Hugs you* 

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

I am so glad you liked it!  (It's silly, but I was inspired to write this from my thank you pic to you for the exchange. Hee.)

You are most welcome, and I hug you back. And thank you so much for the squees and joy and friendship you've offered! :-)

10/10

wsanders

That was an awfully sweet and well-written story. Very enjoyable. I thank Ginny for inspiring you to write this.

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thank you! 

9/10

Marguertia

That was a really adorable little story!! Bravo :)

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thank you!

0/10

zambonigirl

*sniffle*That was so beautiful!

Response from averygoodun (Author of Happy Birthday)

Thank you!

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