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Breathing Love
anogete207 Reviews | 6.07/10 (207 Ratings, 0 Likes, 230 Favorites )
Spoilers for DH!!! Hermione has problems of her own, but she can't resist trying to track down the man she saw in a small cafe just down the street from her new flat. He couldn't possibly be Severus Snape, could he?
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anogete
Member Since 2005 | 6 Stories | Favorited by 258 | 8 Reviews Written | 655 Review Responses
I'm a 26-year-old Accounts Payable manager for a construction company. Basically, I'm paid to write checks and intimidate the menfolk around here. I live with my boyfriend and our dog. I wasn't sucked into the HP fandom until just after the release of HBP. So, I'm a newbie compared to most of the fans out there. I've written in several other fandoms (under different pennames) - Anita Blake, Buffy, X-Files, etc.
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Thank you! I quite enjoyed this story.
Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)
Thanks!
“Ron? You’re madly in love with Ron?” made me snort out loud. :-D
Lovely story, and I'm very glad it had a thoroughly happy ending!
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I couldn't help myself. I always have to poke fun a Ron just a little bit.
squeeeee!! and he's back! this is such a marvelous ending, and I've enjoyed the entire story. thanks so much for sharing it with us!
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I'm terribly behind on responding to reviews. I should be ashamed. Anyway, thank you so much for the encouragement. I appreciate it!
What a sweet ending. I'm so very glad the potion worked.
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I'm terribly behind on responding to reviews. I should be ashamed. Anyway, thank you oodles for enjoyig the fic!
This story is so, so amazing. I've reread this chapter over and over. I eagerly await the next addition!
Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)
Thank you! I've just uploaded the next chapter to the queue. It should be up shortly.
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are awesome!
I cant wait to read more!
Toodles,
Deep Shadows
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Thank you!
Anonymous
I like it that they don't just meet, recognize each other as who they are, and go on... but things are more complicated, as they are in real life. Good chapter!
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Anonymous
A good and promising start! I really enjoyed it, can't wait to read an.
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"Sometimes you would look at me and smile, and I would feel like I’d lose my mind for you. ‘Lily, who?’ I’d think.”
Good!
Really enjoyed this chapter. Hope everything turns out well for them both.
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Thank you!
Yes, very beautiful. I enjoy reading your story very much and I can't wait for the last chapter. Thank you.
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Thanks!
"Come for me" from her lips, he he.
Glad to glimpse a happy ending.
Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)
I did a mushy, lovey-dovey ending in the last chapter. :-) It should be up soon.
Terrific. I am enjoying this very much and looking forward to the rest.
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Thanks!
Sweet! His concern for her at the beginning of the chapter was gorgeous. Poor man must have been beside himself, when Hermione didn't show up. His promise to her was gorgeous, and echoes that DH scene perfectly. There are similarities, but a huge contrast, too. Hermione's promise to herself was equally gorgeous.
I love your love scenes, Anogete. Just the right amount of detail, and it always seems so natural -- nothing forced or manipulative -- when they become intimate.
Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)
Thank you! I'm glad their closeness came off well. I was in a bit of a rush to finish this fic when I was writing it (other evil fandoms were nipping at my heels), so I was concerned it would come off as just too much. Glad that it didn't!
That was beautiful. I love the poem he quoted to her.
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Thank you!
Oh, those two chapters were wonderful.
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Thanks!
squeak! He sold his mother's wedding ring to buy her potions ingredients! He went back to the wizarding world (well, Knockturn Alley for a bit) to buy her ingredients! He's going to make her a potion himself! And they had sex, and they both told each other how much they love them. SQUEEEEEEEEE!
(ps - I hope your family's plans for your grandfathers are going well - both the colon surgery and nursing home)
Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)
The one thing I loved about DH was that it gave all the HP writers the license to write Snape as a romantic. He'd do anything for someone he cared for.
The plans for the grandpas are well. One is settled in at the home and liking it better than the hospital. The other has minor surgery next week to take are of one of the evil!polyps.
That's so beautiful! You made me smile and made my heart ache at the same time.
Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Oooh, I loved this chapter. Romantic!Severus without losing his snark is wonderful! The love scene was very well done, lots of warm fuzzies flitting around my belly at the moment (which, you know, is the true test of a love scene ;) )
Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)
I love warm fuzzies! I'm glad I was able to give them to you!
That wa a truly beautiful chapter. You wrote Severus romantic, but not mushy or out of character. Great job! Your prose just seems to sing.
Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)
Thank you! I always want to write Sev as a romantic, but I'm also afraid he'll come off as silly if I do. I'm glad that didn't happen.
Severus was worried about Hermione missing a day and he has probably cured her. Wow. The guy is still a master. How touching that he sold his mother's ring to pay for ingredients. It is wonderful how they ended up in each other's arms.
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::sigh:: I love romantic!Severus. He's the best...
That was sexy, and unexpectedly sweet, too; Hermione's thought at the end was very poignant.
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Thank you!
Lovely, lovely! Love in-character "sappy" Snape. I must admit I did feel a frisson of worry when I read She vowed that she would never use Severus like everyone else had, even if he had promised her anything.
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I promise not to twist that last line around. I think it was just me being pissed that Severus is such a great person and everyone (including stupid Dumbledore) used him and discarded him. The poor guy...
More, more I want more! I think that Hermione will get him to return to the Wizarding world. Am I right?
Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)
Yes, you're right. He'll actually talk to Harry in the last chapter.
I love you. *sniffles* such a lovely scene.
Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)
Thank you!