Not a problem at all, I'm sure. LOL. Nice story line.

You sure do know how to write Severus.  Tamara

Well my dear Severus I believe any woman would be ready for you after that.  Hot.  Tamara

Bloody brilliant chapter.  Tamara

Good chapter - loved the keep to the bed line Severus gave her. I enjoy good smut and this was a definite winner.

Very sensual chapter - I enjoyed it. I always love it when they get together in a story - I think they make a good match

Good first chapter - enjoyed the bathroom scene where Hermione is running one million ideas through her mind.

I always like your stories and I always wrestle with what's not-quite about the flow of them, and I think I may finally have figured it out -- you have a real knack for the kind of dialogue that sounds like people are actually saying it. Your conversation reads like it could be pulled out into a screenplay and WORK, which is a very very incredibly rare talent that you should be immensely proud of. However, fiction isn't a screenplay. It's the stuff around the dialogue that makes fiction work, that gives readers the pacing and motion and expression that actors give to a screenplay. That's missing here -- you're relying heavily on this fantastic dialogue, but the other stuff isn't pulling it's weight, and the result is that dialogue that's really, if you imagine it said by actors, quite natural and beautifully done, ends up reading very stilted and monologue-like. Your plot and characters are good and your dialogue superb, but if you want to work on something -- work on this! And (even though I don't like fanfiction written in screenplay style) consider it as a possible career -- I think you'd be superb at it.

Dialogue is a bit clunky and unreal, but it's sweet

I thouroughly enjoyed this story. Snape still seemed Snapish--but sexy and appealing and its easy to see this Hermione coming out of the war.

This is such a lovely and erotic story on several levels.  Very nicely done!

Severus the Saviour! Well fed and well fucked...sounds delightful. Where is a man like this when you need one?

Still one of my favorites, Selene. Glad you brought it over here!

Ha ha - you must have had some people clammoring for more when you originally posted this. What a cliffhanger! I am really REALLY happy I can just click on the "next chapter" link. :)

A very sassy ending indeed.

They definitely have heat.

Charming beginning, I can't wait to see how things heat up.

ok what happens next i am enjoying your story very much when is your next posting going to be please dont end it like this there is a whole summer and reahbillitaion of hermione to consider grrrrrrr i always get sucked in to stories that arent finishedyours truly julie

One word to describe that...COOL!

Loved it!

i just love this little story i have read it several times you have a very artistic way of approaching the bad but leaving us with hopethank you

Great story and what a wonderful Severus (sigh).  Brilliant dialogue.