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The Betrayal
sshg31626 Reviews | 5.35/10 (26 Ratings, 0 Likes, 28 Favorites )
Who is the betrayer and who is the betrayed? An angst-ridden romantic drabble series. Runner Up for Best Drabble Series at the Moste Potente Passions SS/HG Awards.
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Just an avid reader who somehow stumbled into HP fanfiction. I read and sometimes, I write.
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Damn, you made me cry!!
*deep breaths*
That aside, I absolutely love the idea of switching between Hermione's memory and the current state. It made me cry harder when I reached the part that explain why she couldn't look at him in the eyes... I love the storyline that go back and forth like that, revealing a little bit more as we read along. Splendid!
Seriously though, I think this could be developed into a proper chapter-y story than drabble series (as if I didn't cried enough! Hah!). Especially the part where he told her, he understand the guilt of fulfilling a blasted Unbreakable Vow 'cause well, he'd been there!
Lovely, absolutely lovely.
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
I made you cry? YES!! *grins* I made myself cry when writing it. LOL I'm so glad you enjoyed this one -- it is one of my favorites. Thank you so much,
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
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Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
I made you cry? YES!! *grins* I made myself cry when writing it. LOL I'm so glad you enjoyed this one -- it is one of my favorites. Thank you so much,
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
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