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Potions Under Duress The Betrayal
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The Betrayal

1: Parts 1-4

2: Parts 5-10

3: Parts 11-20

4: Parts 21-36

5: Parts 37-46

6: Parts 47-56

The Betrayal

sshg316

26 Reviews   |   26 Ratings, 0 Likes, 28 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 5,834 Words 6 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Harry Potter

Who is the betrayer and who is the betrayed? An angst-ridden romantic drabble series. Runner Up for Best Drabble Series at the Moste Potente Passions SS/HG Awards.

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Chapters (6)

Chapter 1: Parts 1-4

Chapter 2: Parts 5-10

Chapter 3: Parts 11-20

Chapter 4: Parts 21-36

Chapter 5: Parts 37-46

Chapter 6: Parts 47-56


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sshg316

Member Since 2006  |  20 Stories  |  Favorited by 376  |  199 Reviews Written  |  1,365 Review Responses

Just an avid reader who somehow stumbled into HP fanfiction.  I read and sometimes, I write.


 

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10/10

zyra

Damn, you made me cry!!


*deep breaths*


That aside, I absolutely love the idea of switching between Hermione's memory and the current state. It made me cry harder when I reached the part that explain why she couldn't look at him in the eyes... I love the storyline that go back and forth like that, revealing a little bit more as we read along. Splendid!


Seriously though, I think this could be developed into a proper chapter-y story than drabble series (as if I didn't cried enough! Hah!). Especially the part where he told her, he understand the guilt of fulfilling a blasted Unbreakable Vow 'cause well, he'd been there!


Lovely, absolutely lovely.

Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)

I made you cry?  YES!!  *grins*  I made myself cry when writing it. LOL  I'm so glad you enjoyed this one -- it is one of my favorites.  Thank you so much,

Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)

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Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)

I made you cry?  YES!!  *grins*  I made myself cry when writing it. LOL  I'm so glad you enjoyed this one -- it is one of my favorites.  Thank you so much,

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