Parts 21-36
Chapter 4 of 6
sshg316Who is the betrayer and who is the betrayed? An angst-ridden romantic drabble series. Runner Up for Best Drabble Series at the Moste Potente Passions SS/HG Awards.
ReviewedWhipping his head toward Potter, Severus stared at the saviour of the wizarding world in absolute shock. This did not make any sense. Why would Hermione make an Unbreakable Vow with Potter and what did the Vow require of her? His mind was awhirl with possibilities and their various ramifications. In a daze, he turned back toward the witness stand.
"Miss Granger," began the Chief Warlock, his tone incredulous, "are you telling this court that Harry Potter asked you to make an Unbreakable Vow regarding this case?"
Black eyes met brown, and the raw pain he saw was almost unbearable.
***
Hermione held Severus' gaze for as long as she dared before turning her attention back to the Chief Warlock. "Not exactly, sir. The Vow pertained only to the mission, but it was quite ... specific."
There was whispering amongst the Interrogators as well as the bystanders, and Hermione waited for the inevitable questions, struggling not to fidget in her seat. Impulsively, she found herself looking toward Severus, desperately attempting to tell him with her eyes what she could not speak aloud due to the current circumstances. She loved him, she had not willingly betrayed him, please believe her, please forgive her.
***
Severus' breathing quickened as he read the desperation in Hermione's eyes, awakening the dormant sense of protection he felt toward the witch. He wanted to go to her, to hold her and tell her everything would be fine, that he loved her .... No. There may be more going on than he was aware of, but he needed to know the entire truth before he could even consider trusting her with his heart once more. Schooling his features into his usual unreadable façade, he broke their connection. He would reserve judgement until everything was on the table; then, he would decide.
***
Hermione watched as Severus' expression turned cold, and she felt his rejection like a Bludger to the stomach. It was truly over he would never forgive her. Her melancholic thoughts were interrupted as the Chief Warlock began to speak.
"Please tell us, if you can, about the Vow and its oaths, Miss Granger."
"O-of course." Hermione took a deep breath and prepared to turn against her best friend since childhood. "Approximately six months ago, Mr Potter called me into his office. He had an important mission for me one so secretive it would require an Unbreakable Vow on my part."
***
Severus listened intently as one of the Interrogators asked, "Isn't that level of secrecy highly unusual?"
Hermione nodded her agreement. "Yes, it is. I've been best friends with Mr Potter since we were eleven years old. We fought side by side in the war. I cannot tell you the number of times we have saved each other's lives." She glared at Potter, her tone becoming accusatory. "I trusted him implicitly. It never occurred to me that he would ask me to do anything that would go against my own personal code of conduct."
"But he did?"
"He most certainly did."
***
Conjuring a glass of water, Hermione sipped the cool liquid before continuing.
"He did not inform me of any aspect of the mission until after I took the Vow." Hermione winced at her naivety in taking Harry at his word.
"Hermione, I wouldn't ask this of you if it weren't absolutely necessary."
"Of course, Harry. I understand completely."
"Ron Weasley served as our bonder, although he had no knowledge of the mission."
"What were the specifics of the Vow," asked a wizard in bright blue robes to her left.
This was it then. There would be no going back now.
***
Moving to the edge of his chair, Severus strained to hear her low murmur.
"I vowed to do whatever I deemed necessary to uncover evidence against the person I was being asked to investigate. I vowed to collect said evidence in a tangible fashion. I vowed to provide access to the evidence to Mr Potter and to the Wizengamot. And finally, I vowed that until the other three oaths were met, I would only discuss the investigation with Mr Potter or the presiding court.
"It wasn't until some time later that I realised exactly what I had sworn to do."
***
Hermione described the events that followed making the Vow. She was aware of Harry's fierce glare, but she ignored him, continuing with her testimony.
She explained how angry she had been when Harry had informed her that the subject of the investigation was Severus Snape.
"The man was acquitted by the Wizengamot! He sacrificed his entire adult life to fighting Voldemort. He should be left alone!"
"Hermione, I'm not arguing with you about this. I'm positive he's doing something illegal. Anyway, it doesn't matter now. You made an Unbreakable Vow to do whatever it takes to find evidence against Snape."
***
Severus was livid. Didn't the idiot realise what could have happened? What if there had been no evidence? What if he hadn't been distributing that potion? Hermione would have died had she been unable to find any prosecutable activity. Cursing under his breath, he returned his attention to Hermione.
He listened as she explained how having no other option she had befriended him, earned his trust, and provided the Charmed journal to collect potential evidence. Severus noticed that she left out the intimate nature of their relationship, instead making it appear as if they had been simply very good friends.
***
Hermione explained how she would read the journal whenever the opportunity arose. Her voice was steady despite the horrible guilt she felt at having invaded Severus' privacy. It didn't matter that over the course of their relationship he had shared with her much of what he had written.
"When I found the evidence I presented earlier, I immediately contacted Mr Potter. Mr Snape was arrested at his home, and I took possession of the journal. Given the nature of the Unbreakable Vow, I believed it was in my best interest to keep the evidence in my possession until the trial."
***
Severus tried to remain attentive to Hermione's testimony, but could not keep from remembering the day Potter and his Aurors had come to escort him to Azkaban.
"You won't get away with it this time, Snape. We have evidence solid evidence."
"I don't know what you are talking about, Potter," Severus replied with a sneer.
Potter smirked. "You'll find out soon enough. Oh, look here's our operative now! Hermione, love! So glad you could join us!"
At the time, he had been consumed by rage, he had misread her unusual demeanour. She had not looked him in the eyes once.
***
"This is fascinating, Miss Granger," the Chief Warlock began, "but unless you can provide some further information, we have no other option but to find Mr Snape guilty."
Hermione looked at Harry, her gaze cold. "Mr Potter worded the oaths so that the only evidence I could provide would be against Mr Snape. Fortunately, after my earlier testimony, my Vow was fulfilled. I can now show you the evidence that will exonerate Mr Snape.
"If you would please, look at the list of names entered into evidence earlier and compare them to a previous ruling made on July 23, 1999."
***
Severus was stunned. He listened as Hermione informed the Wizengamot that the names of those he had provided the potion to coincided with people they themselves had determined to have been coerced, placed under the Imperius Curse or otherwise forced into taking the Dark Mark. Each of them had been pronounced innocent of all charges and released. Having the Dark Mark, however, had made their lives especially difficult, despite their innocence. Who wanted to hire or sell to someone who bore the Mark? Their homes were vandalised, their children ridiculed. Severus had felt compelled to help them however he could.
***
"This potion has allowed them to live their lives as if they had never been Marked. Mr Snape has done a wonderful thing, and he deserves to be praised for it, not punished." Hermione concluded her testimony by saying that it was clear from the journal that no one else had been given the potion and that, with the distribution completed, the instructions and ingredients list had been destroyed. There simply was no cause to think that a fugitive Death Eater would be able to use it to escape prosecution.
"How do you know he won't give it to them?"
***
Severus held his breath and watched Hermione's face as she turned to answer Potter.
"I know because I have read the journal in its entirety. I know because I believe he needed to help these people. I know because he was a trusted member of the Order of the Phoenix. I know because he risked his reputation, his life, and his very soul to defeat Voldemort. I know, Harry Potter, because Severus Snape is an honourable man."
Severus felt his heart swell at the obvious intimation that he was more honourable than Potter. It was no wonder he loved her.
***
Hermione slumped in relief as the Wizengamot declared Severus free to go. She walked on unsteady legs to where he was now standing. She stared at him, feeling uncertain, her heart beating a staccato rhythm. Did he still hate her? Stepping forward, she handed him the journal, her eyes shining with unshed tears.
"I'm so sorry, Severus. I hope that one day you can forgive me."
He said nothing, but accepted the book. Suddenly, Hermione felt a wave of dizziness, and she swayed dangerously.
As if through a tunnel, Hermione heard Severus say her name before she faded into oblivion.
to be continued ...
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Betrayal
26 Reviews | 5.35/10 Average
lovely story
So lovely! You're a fabulous writer!
You said angst, you meant angst. This was just lovely. I see what you were saying about loving the "he thinks she doesn't love him and he's terribly in love with her" stories ... ~adores you and this series~
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Yes, that angst just kills me. Glad you enjoyed it, my dear. <3 <3 <3
Wonderful story, thank you so very much.
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Thank you! :)
WOW! I missed so many of the drabbles and drabble series that I decided to save them for reading last before voting on the SSHG Awards. I am truly stunned by this series. You had me on an emotional roller coaster ride from the beginning. I feel almost as spent and relieved as Hermione at the end. Congratulations on a well-deserved nomination. The only other thing I can say is"Morethansirius...and I love you."
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Awww! *GLOMPS* Thank you so much for the lovely comments! I have to admit, this is one of my favorites of the things I've written. It was my first attempt at something with angst. I was really happy with the way it turned out -- for such a short piece, it packs a lot of emotional punch. I had to have the happy ending, though. LOL ;) I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I'm thrilled to know that you experienced the ups and downs along with Hermione. Thanks, again!
Very Emotional...wheewww. Very good thanks
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
awwww, meanie! This is just a cruel place to stop and make us wait......
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
It is cruel, I know. Muahahaha! :) If it helps, the next set is already in the queue!
Thanks!
Very interesting!
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Thank you! I hope you're enjoying it!
OK, I'm hooked I'm assuming that Hermione cheated on Severus (I know I shouldn't ass-u-me). Cant wait for more!
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
I'm glad you're hooked! The next set is in the queue, so not too long of a wait. Thank you for reviewing! :)
Interesting.
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Thank you!
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
Once I have a bit of background I'll be able to make a better responce. lol
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
LOL I completely understand! No worries - I appreciate you taking the time to review!
The second and third sets are in the queue right now, and I promise you'll have a much better idea of what is going on by then. :)
What a terrible (and at the same time, wonderful) stopping point! You've hinted at so much backstory and have created a powerful dynamic between them in just 600 words. Looking forward to your next posting!
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you so much for reviewing! :)
All the angst, none of the annoying side characters! Awesome.
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Your review has me grinning. You're right; what could possibly be better? Thank you so much! :)
wow great story,im in "hate harry" mode now lol.im glad theres a happy ending,hehe im a sucker for those
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Hary was a real prat in this one, wasn't he? :) I'm glad you enjoyed it - I'm a sucker for happy endings, too!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
A beautiful ending. Very well done!!!!
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
A beautiful ending to a lovely series. I love the device of the charmed 'truth only' diary. Great job!
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Thank you so much - and double thanks for coming and reviewing this again over here. :) You're the best! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Have I said how much I like this series of drabbles? No? Well, I do.... very much. Good work -- More to come?
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Aw ... thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this little story. :) No more on this on this series, at least for now. I may revisit this universe later to see how the reconciliation is going. I wrote this series to get over a bit of writer's block. Luckily it worked, so should writer's block come my way again, I may add more. :)
Thank you, again!
awwwww, how sweet. I'm glad cannon's unbreakable vow was mentioned, it made the story that much more real.
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed my little tale, and thank you for all the lovely reviews throughout. :)
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
You are more than welcome.
I think it was rather cowardly of Harry to run off. He should face what he did to his friend not 'Get a few things straight in his head'. I wonder if men ever really grow up?
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
I doubt it. LOL Harry should have stayed to face the consequences of his actions, but I think he knows Hermione enough to know that if she were to see him when she awakens, she'd hex first and ask questions later. *snickers*
Argg! Could you at least warn people of cliffhangers?
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Muahahaha! :) I must admit, I love to write cliffhangers. They are just too much fun!
I hope you're enjoying this little series. Thanks for reviewing!
Ahhh. This set explains Hermione's difficulties very clearly. And I really like how you've used her sub-conscious 'dreams' to fill in missing information.
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Thank you! I really wanted to keep the alternating points of view and decided this was the best way to do that, as well as to show what Hermione went through. It was also nice to get a glimpse at their relationship. I'm so glad you're still enjoying this - the final chapter is in the queue!
You very skillfully used the concept of the Vow in this set and the way HG called Harry out in this one is wonderful. Another evil cliffie, though--you must stop that! *snickers*
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
*cackling evilly* I must admit, I love writing cliffies. They are so much fun!
Thanks, again! I'm thrilled you are enjoying this!
Arrrgggh! An Unbreakable Vow! Damn that HP! Your second drabble in this set leaves much more of an impression and communicates much more import, than one can reasonably expect from 100 words!
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
You say the sweetest things! :) I know! The Unbreakable Vow caught me by surprise, too! LOL
Thank you so much!
Fabulous last line--After betraying the man she loved, betraying her best friend would be easy.You write suspense very well. And I have to admit that I was happy that HG was so distraught from guilt!
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Thank you very much - what a lovely compliment! Hermione is feeling very guilty. *nods* I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
very nice. I love where this is going.
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Thank you so much!
Reading this again reminded me how much I loved this series when I first read it. All this heartache and angst and guilt - I'm so very glad it had a happy ending, or I'd be sobbing now.
Response from sshg316 (Author of The Betrayal)
Thank you so much! This was my first foray into angst ... but of course I had to have a happy ending. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it again!