Bah, can't look at art on my phone cause it won't copy text to make links.. Grr. I'll have to try to remember to look at out later on a desktop.
Well, so far I really like your story, I'm a sucker for him getting a happily ever after in one form or another.

Is there a sequel to this story? I'd love to see how Severus and Hermione continue their relationship!

Wow... that was very intense!  I really liked the cover story that Hermione came up with, but I do hope that she did remember to construct the "old photos" and such that she referred to that "led" her mum to inquire after Severus. At first, I was horrified at him having to have all knowledge of magic obliviated from his mind, but thinking about it now, this probably was the very best outcome for him... no more guilt and pain about having to murder Dumbledore, no more guilt and angst about Lily's death, no more self-hatred because of his bad choices in his youth and young adulthood.  And I really liked how they looked at each other at the end. :)

I loved your story, so that I would really love to read some more. Have you ever tought about writing a sequel? My head is spinning with all the possibilities!

That made me want to cry so much. I absolutely loved it and the artwork at the end was amazing. I love art that is that intense, it makes for a better story.

That was a brilliant ending. Even though Severus is stripped of his magic and all his adult memories, at least he gets to live  his life as a free man, and ofcourse with a wonderful woman with him!

I still can't get over the despicable way the Ministry is treating Severus, and not even giving him a chance for a retrial. The pensieve moments are wonderful, a way for Severus to escape for a few moments from his terrible reality.

That must have hurt his pride inceredibly to ask for that memory, and foe a whore to not even be willing to cooperate...What a terrible way for the wizarding world to treat an unsung hero.

Well - it hurt to see Severus turned into a muggle since he had done so much and sacrificed so much for the order. It was good though that Hermione brought him home and wanted to continue with him... good chapter

The memories that she provided Severus were steamy and I am glad he asked her if she would do the real thing with him. The ministry is giving him such a raw deal - I hope that some other way can be found.

Such a sad chapter - poor Severus is in such a bad condition and his pride must almost be broken from what he has had to endure. I am shocked he asked for a memory but it makes it even more sad that he is reduced to this state

This story has haunted me. The first time I read it, I left it feeling saddened and a little disturbed. The second time, I thought that it was brilliant, but the thought of Severus without magic just broke my heart. For some reason I keep wanting to come back and read it again.

I think it's highly creative and heart wrenching . What a punishment - to live your life without your memories. I think you've done a wonderful job of displaying what life in Azkaban could really be like. I also think you've done a great job with Hermione. You've really captured her nature by making her willing to go to any means for her cause. Well done. It's a beautiful piece.

Amazing story, and actually quite realistic. Snape is very in character, as is Hermione. Thanks ver much for writing :o)Have a good one,Sue.P.S. Odella's artwork is AMAZING. I can't describe any other way.

What a beautiful but complex story!I am happy that Severus whas the opportunity for a happy life but I feel saddened by the Severus before the memory loss. As if he is separate and therefore alone.Catharine

Aww! Already finished?  This piece deserves a SEQUAL... *wink, wink, nudge, nudge*  Great work! 

Sad, and yet promising.  Excellant.

I love this story,especially the way the 'happy ending' is tinged with sadness - far more believable and moving. In fact I think the sadness of the ending possibly outweighs the happiness because it just seems so incredibly unfair that his memories have been taken from him. But as I said before, the injustice of his treatment is, sadly, realistic. It was also incredibly well-written (in the humble opinion of a first year English Literature student!)

A most interesting story. I'm glad Severus finally got a chance at a normal life, even at the cost of his magic and memories.

I love the ending!!! (Well, the whoke story, actually.  Though after so much despair, a happy ending is so nice) :-)

         

A very moving story.  I especially liked the ending. The art for the piece is better than anything I could have imagined in my head.  I'm only sorry this story is over.

My goodness that was wonderful.  You portrayed life in all its truth - good and bad.  Thank you for creating this.

I'll admit now I did skip over and read this fic on another site because I was too impatient to know the ending. Oddly enough I didn't find it as much of a downer as it might have been, the key being Severus' own observation at the end that he's among people who care what becomes of him. On the other hand, it's hard not to fantasize about a sequel in which he somehow stumbles back onto his memories. Anyway, this ended up being a lot more complicated emotionally than I thought it would be, which was a big strength.

I really liked this. Even without magic SS gets a chance of a new life without the bad. Even if he innocent he can't forget what's happened and here he gets that chance well done

Great job!! I'll be waiting for your next fic, assuming that you will write more.

Quite a promising start :) Looking forward to the rest!