Weaknesses
Chapter 4 of 8
ShadowThe pair do some research.
Reviewed"No, Miss Granger," Severus snarled at Hermione. "I do not now, or in the future, need your help with these experiments. Go back to your books and research. Minerva may have asked me to work with you, but that does not mean I must work with you."
Heaving an irritated sigh, Hermione flounced back to her desk and the tottering pile of books on its surface. She ducked her head behind the one closest to her, scowling at the printed pages, an embarrassed flush staining her cheeks. When Minerva had told her Professor Snape was willing to work with her, she had been elated. She would now have a chance to try out other forms of research with experimental potions.
The problem was that Professor Snape was now even more withdrawn and snarky than he had ever been when she was a student. He refused to let her give any input and was treating her like an ignorant first year, sending her off to her books whenever she approached him.
She understood that it couldn't be easy for him. He had all his regular teaching and supervisory duties during the day and then had to work in the makeshift potions lab in the North Tower after sunset, the only time it was safe for her to be about, with the know-it-all he so obviously detested.
Lowering her book slightly, she glared at her ex-professor. What she couldn't understand was why he was ignoring her completely since it was her dilemma they were trying to solve. Surely it would be more beneficial to their research to enquire about her symptoms, her cravings or any side effects? But no, the great Professor Snape carried on all by himself, as usual.
Slowly, Hermione placed the book back on the table, got to her feet, and quietly made her way to where the professor was bent over his work. For a few minutes, she watched him over his shoulder as he prepared the last of the ingredients he was adding to the brew. It didn't take her long to identify the brew. It was apparently a mixture between a Blood Replenishing Potion and a Strengthening Solution. A phial of slightly viscous, red liquid was lying to the right of Snape's workspace.
"What is in that phial, Professor?"
Snape, who was concentrating on slicing the daisy roots symmetrically, had not heard her approach. He jumped as she spoke, causing his knife to slip, slicing his index finger instead.
Cursing under his breath, Severus reached for a bit of material lying on the desk, twisting it around his finger. He then levelled his glare on the hapless young woman who had caused his misfortune.
"Are you some kind of imbecile, Miss Granger, that you would creep up on a person who could be preparing potentially volatile substances? Has six years of Potions lessons taught you absolutely nothing?" he barked at her.
Hermione bristled at this insinuation of her incapability. She took a step towards the angry man in front of her.
"For your information, Professor, I did not interrupt you in the preparation of just any potion. I had already identified the potion you were preparing, as well as ascertained that it was not a dangerous item that you were working with," she indicated the now bloodied roots, glaring back at him.
"Never the less, it is your fault that the final ingredient for this potion has been ruined."
"If you would deign to tell me some of the things you are working on, I might not need to ask you questions constantly. I'm sure you do realise that I am no longer your student, and you might have noticed, this problem does concern me somewhat!"
Severus took a deep breath, closing his eyes in exasperation. He was not going to get this potion finished if he continued this childish sparring with her.
"Fine, Miss Granger. I am trying a combination of Blood Replenishing Potion and Strengthening Solution. The ingredients in both potions, when combined, have a calming effect on cravings. This new concoction is commonly used to help with the rehabilitation of wizards addicted to... certain substances."
Hermione nodded her understanding. "So you were hoping this mixture would calm my cravings, rendering me less dangerous. What about the need for nourishment?"
Severus glanced at her. "Correct. The issue of nourishment was to be solved by adding this." He held up the phial of red liquid. "I assume you are the cause of the diminished rat population within the castle grounds?" When Hermione nodded again, flushing slightly, Severus continued. "This is a vial of rat blood. I had hoped that adding this to the new mixture would solve that particular problem, allowing you more time for research as you will not need to go hunting."
As he spoke, Severus adjusted the makeshift bandage on his finger. His blood was already seeping through.
"Oh, I'm so sorry, Professor! Please let me heal that for you." Hermione hurried towards him, her wand in one hand, her other outstretched as if to take hold of his injured digit.
"No thank you, Miss Granger. I am quite capable of sorting out my own injuries. If you would be so kind as to return to your research, so I may with continue mine."
Severus turned away from the young woman, the blood-soaked material falling to the ground as he did so.
Hermione's footsteps stopped dead. The cold-shoulder treatment never seemed to fail with the eager young witch. Severus smirked to himself.
Hermione had watched the bit of fabric drop to the floor. She stopped, her eyes locked on the ruby red liquid soaked into the fibres. Her nostrils flared as the first, tantalising, metallic scent reached her. She licked her lips and closed her eyes. The smell of fresh human blood enveloped her, dulling her mind to all else, except the fact that she would soon be drinking from this newfound fountain of bliss.
Severus did not turn around as he heard the footsteps resume. He assumed she would return to her desk, just as she had always done. It was only when he felt a presence behind him that he knew all was not well.
Hermione shoved her prey into the wall before he could fully turn around. With her hand on his neck, she pushed upwards until just his toes were brushing the floor. In the back of her mind, Hermione was amazed at the strength she was capable of.
With her free hand, she grabbed her victim's injured finger, lifting it up to her face. Again she inhaled the scent of the blood, felt the wild beating of the pulse in his wrist. She could feel her incisors lengthening in anticipation of what was to come. Slowly, she drew the finger into her mouth and sucked on the wound.
Releasing his finger, she adjusted her hold on her prey, dropping his position to a more accessible height. Almost lovingly, she brushed away the strands of black hair that concealed what she truly desired. Once his neck was bared to her gaze, she caressed the soft skin. Just one bite and it would all be over for him.
She looked at his face one last time before striking. Black fire met her gaze. A mixture of horror, resignation and (could it be) understanding shimmered in his eyes. It was the understanding that broke her from her trance-like state.
"NO!" she cried, backing away from him, revulsion and terror coursing through her. "What did I do? What was I thinking?" she sobbed.
Hermione turned and fled to her open window, escaping into the night.
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Severus sat slumped against the wall. He used what strength was left in his limbs to stand himself up and stumble back to his work bench.
There he sat with his head in his hands, calling himself every name he could think of.
He had become soft, too complacent. He had let himself grow comfortable around her. He knew what she was, but he had allowed himself to forget. He was too involved with enjoying the company of a young woman who was not afraid of him, not frightened to tell him where to get off if she thought he was in the wrong.
As much as he tried to lay the blame on her, he knew it lay squarely on his shoulders. As soon as she had raised his finger to her lips, he knew. It was his fault; he should not have left an open and bleeding wound in front of a vampire. He had expected the sharp pain in his neck and for his end to come quickly. He had not expected the look of realisation in her glazed eyes mere seconds before the horror and revulsion at her actions.
It seemed the smell and sight of the blood had been too overwhelming for her to resist. But why had she not reacted the same way to the rat blood? Perhaps it was the fresh blood that had been so over-powering.
Severus lowered his hands from his head, staring at the injured finger where the blood had begun to ooze again. He looked at it intently for a long while, as if it had all the answers hidden beneath the skin.
Severus jerked upright as if something had struck the back of his head. His finger did have all the answers! Well, at least his blood did.
He had noticed over the past few weeks of working in such close proximity to the girl (no, young woman) that she was becoming even more frail and ill. She was much paler than when he had first come across her, the dark circles under her eyes looked like heavy bruising, and she was definitely getting thinner by the day. He knew she was hunting rats and other small creatures in the forest, but it did not seem to be making much difference.
She needed human blood to survive.
Unfortunately for her, she refused to allow human blood to pass her lips. It was a very admirable promise, but it would not do for the silly twit to waste away because of her stubbornness.
The only solution was that she never knew about it. She could continue to think she was swallowing rat blood.
Grabbing his silver dagger, Severus quickly drew it along the delicate flesh inside his elbow. Holding a clean phial to the wound, he soon gathered enough blood to finish his potion.
Severus distractedly cast a healing charm over his arm and finger and inspected the bloodied daisy roots. If he was to use his own blood in this potion, they would not be wasted after all.
He just hoped his plan would work.
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54 Reviews | 5.7/10 Average
Wonderful !!!!!!
Missy/LovesRickman
I really enjoyed reading your Vampire Tale. A most unusual story that was well written and moved along nicely from beginning to its end.
Many thanks for writing and sharing.
Yay for them! That was pretty neat. A lovely ending for them. Severus really was the hero, and it's great! I think I would've liked Severus' POV a little more, perhaps some description of how he felt kissing her or something. But it was brilliant in the end and I loved how she rescued him from his nightmare.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
I will remember to include a little more of his POV in future.Thank you so much for your review!
Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)
Well, I'm afraid I'm quite guilty of neglecting Snape's POV myself because I get so caught up in Hermione's, and because his mind is a scary place ;)
Oh, Oh, this is interesting! Wait – is Narcissa the vampire that bit Hermione? Can they save her too? Does she know who bit her? Would that work? They could take Lucius! Oh, what a intriguing story… What an interesting premise!
And I don’t even LIKE vampire stories!!!! Usually.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
I was contemplating saving Narcissa too, but the story was getting too long, and the deadline was looming.it may be an interesting idea for another one tho.
HIS own blood? I have a feeling that will not only effect the potion - but them as well! Ooooh.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Sneaky, sneaky, but I'm not telling!
Oh, this is juicy. I love how Severus had to work through his delima - and you wrote it so well.I could feel the wheels of his mind turn.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Thank you. I really appreciate your review.
Oh, he found her! I do like how you describe things.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Thank you so much.
Oh, my gosh! The personal reflection regarding the absent reflection in the mirror - very powerful. I usually avoid vampire stories... but this has a good start.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Thank you so much. I really enjoyed writing it.
Lovely images of her and the mirror. Knowing from the summary what she was, it was fascinating to imagine the scenario of Hermione not being able to see herself, and the analytical part of her mind watching things move; I'd never thought of that before.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Thank you.I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I loved this story! Hope you win, I'll try to vote, but I just got my pc back from the shop...
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Thank you so very much for your reviews. I really appreciate them.I will let you know once the voting opens!
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Voting has opened at http://groups. yahoo.com/ group/Potter_ Place/surveys? id=1928839
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
Got it yesterday g/f. I voted for you and wish you the best of luck. Even if you don't win keep writing, you do great work! *hugs*
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Thank you so much. Your encouragement is amazing!
If you pardon the pathetic pun, this chapter was worth sinking my teeth into (acknowledges 'groans' of protest). Good chapter, nice flow and great pacing.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Thank you so much.
Nice ending!
Narcissa being "truly evil" made the final choice so much easier, of course - I can't help but wonder what it would have been like for Severus and Hermione if Narcissa had turned out to be an innocent victim herself. But then, those two had been through enough - no need to add yet another burden on them.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
I was contemplating that they help Narcissa too, but then the story would be a bit long, and deadline was looming.Thank you so much for your continuous reviews. I have really appreciated them.I hope to start a new one soon.
Severus was so strong. The way he helped Hermione exterminate Narcissa--his speech--was inspired. What a nasty piece of work Narcissa was. Poor Lucius.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Yip, he will miss her, but I had to have a "bad guy"!Thank you so much for reveiwing.
Hm... female, probably pureblood, considering the insults, knows Hermione enough to recognise her - Narcissa might just be a good fit to all of that!
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Thanks.What can I say, you are just too good!
Thanks for this tale.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Well, if the vampire is who I think she is, this complicates matters nicely!
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
I've always been partial to a few complications...
oooh. Does this mean that perhaps Narcissa is a vampire too?
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Uh, uh, uh! That would be telling.
I kinda see Hermione's "accident" as wishful thinking, that she was human again. If anyone can help her, it's Severus. They'll always be my OTP.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Well, that is what she wants most of all. I think you are right. She just "forgot".
well, it's not like Hogwarts hasn't been home to "dangerous creatures" before. Professor Lupin. . . What an equally frightening and fierce creature the other Hermione is. I only hope Snape can help her.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
If any one can help her, it would be Snape!
*heh* Snapey has compassion--he just calls it a need for "fame" and "recognition". Well played by Minerva; that was as manipulative as ol' Twinkle-eyes ever got.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
I like to think there may be a little bit of Dumbledore in the new Headmistriss!
Woot! Liking the twist that Vampirism puts on Hermione's character. Of course all the special warding would be like catnip to a practiced spy of Snape's caliber.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Yip. Dear old Snape was unable to resist.
I believe we now know where Narcissa is and who made Hermione a vampire. Lucius is going to be devastated.
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Oooooh!I so want to confirm or deny, but the last chapter will be up soon.Thanks for reviewing.
Intriguing beginning--I've always liked stories in which either Snape or Hermione was one of the undead. What will she do now? Feed from animals, but not people, or hunt down criminals?
Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)
Thank you.Hmmm. I didnt think of her hunting down criminals!