this really builds well and ends quite nicely :)

I almost skipped over this just because it is in 2nd person POV. I typically find it very difficult to indulge in 2nd person reading.

However, this is written well enough to maintain my attention, and the tension you built in this is wonderfully done.

Elura

wow - nice first-person.  that's hard to do!

Bloody hell that was hot.  My imagination is going to go crazy with this one.   Tamara

You read that others were asking for the story from his POV. You wonder if the writer ever did one. You sigh, sure that this, too, is just the result of your overactive imagination. You know that his perspective couldn't possibly have been as fevered as hers. ...Or could it? Nice job!

I don't normally like stories told in second person, but this one sucked me in. Beautiful and simple. And the second person also includes that really nice touch at the end about it not being your(our) overactive imagination. Wouldn't we all love it if that were true? Nice work!

overactive imagination indeed....*wry grin*

Great, great story! No matter how often I re-read it, the sensual atmosphere still captures me, and I keep holding my breath till the end. Absolutely wonderful!

can't stop reading must finish Oh my, that was incredible. I can't belive the suspense and emotion you used in such a short amount of time. I am stunned silent.

Lovely story with a very cute ending. Wish my fantasies would come true but insted I get to read this which is a great subtitute thank you

Very hot. Is there more?

Amazing. I was enthralled from the first sentence. You have conquered the most difficult task of writing in second person and it drew me right in. I highly recommend this story to everyone.

Wow. Great story. Fantastic to see someone cut through the crock, finding the ending between H/S that all shippers want - and in record time. Made for some very intense reading. Thanks. Great use of second person BTW. Would love to read this story from Snapes POV. Keep up the wonderful work.