Verus Votum
Moreteadk39 Reviews | 39 Ratings, 0 Likes, 44 Favorites )
Severus is hit by a stray spell that makes him behave... rather oddly! Especially towards Hermione.
Response to prompt number 22 of the Winter 2007 prompt challenge at the Potter_Place Yahoo group. The prompt in its entirety is included below the story.
Not HBP-compliant
Chapters (2)
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Moreteadk
Member Since 2006 | 17 Stories | Favorited by 19 | 146 Reviews Written | 250 Review Responses
Born in Denmark in the year of '79. Drink a lot of tea and is completely an utterly addicted to my dearly beloved LJ account. Feel free to friend me if you're so inclined.
I'm only posting my own favorites and newer stuff here. All my other stuff can be found at my fic comm on LJ, but I'm a fairly mediocre writer though, so consider yourself warned.
There's a lot of Draco/Hermione, a somewhat smaller amount of Severus/Hermione and a wide-ranged smattering of minor pairings including but not limited to Adrian/Hermione, Neville/Lavender, Albus/Sirius, Filch/Luna, Draco/Ginny, Harry/Pansy and Ron/Voldemort. There's also some general stuff and some original fics there.
Reviews for Verus Votum
Love this so far! I'm surprised he isn't more pissed off in his more lucid moments though.
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
You want to know something? I am too! LOL
I'm glad you liked it. :)
LOL...this is to cute!
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)
It's up! It's up!I'm so glad I got to read it before I went to sleep. This is charming. I particularly like his irritation, but the subconscious way he makes flowers while thinking of something else entirely!
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
Hee! *smooches you* I'm so glad you liked it, oh far superior one.
I'm glad the subconscious things he do is working. :)
What a nice answer to the prompt. The red hearts made me laugh aloud.
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. The hearts bit wasn't even in my outline, it just sort of dropped in. :)
AUGHH--Update update update update!!~Lotm
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
*is worried about the Mob*
Second half has been submitted, so it's just a question of time. :) I'm so glad you liked it (and all sorts of humbled because you're you and I love your stuff!)
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
*pokepoke* Hey! Less gushing and more writing, okay?*hugs*~Lotm
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
*salute*
Yes, ma'am!
I can't wait to read more! This is such fun!
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Second half has been submitted, so it's just a question of time. :)
Great job so far. I like Severus' in character out of characterness. Great start!
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
'in character out of characterness' HEE! That's a good expression, I think I'll keep it. :p
I'm glad you liked it. :)
Poor Snape! I wonder if he will get around to telling Hermione over dinner and if she will help him remedy the situation if she does ascertain what is going on. I'm looking forward to reading more!
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
Hee hee! Second half has been submitted so it's just a question of time and you can see for yourself. :) I'm glad you liked it.
I'm loving this! It's funny and sweet at the same time. Please continue :-).
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
Second half has been submitted, so it's just a question time. :) I'm glad you like it. :)
It's great. I love Snape in this one. Bwahahaha. When I read about him drawing the hearts, I laughed so hard. I could just see his horrified expression. LOL! And I like the other professors' reactions, too, the betting and such. :)
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
Thank you, I'm so glad you like it (although I still really sort of... hate it. Has given me far too much grief, this one has).
The bit with the hearts wasn't even planned in my outline, it just sort of dropped out of the blue and intruded itself on the story. It has come to be one of my own favorite bits as well. :)
I read this one ages ago. I love it that in his head Severus knows what he needs to say but he simply can't say it. I'd have enjoyed a bit of Severus being grateful for Hermione's help without all the over-the-top romance behavior and some more detail about what happens after he's cured.
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
Yes, but this was as far as I took it. :) I'm glad you liked it regardless. :)
You nailed this prompt! Really good story.
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
Thanks. :D (sorry about the delay in responding)
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
Thanks. :D (sorry about the delay in responding)
Very clever and amusing story. I really enjoyed it! It was almost a 'relief' when Severus turned snarky again, and his first few words "...wilderness of hair..." are priceless!
Response from Moreteadk (Author of Verus Votum)
It was a relief, wasn't it? I'm glad you liked those particular words, I agonised about them forever trying to come up with something that wasn't completely useless.
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)
I don't know where I was or what I was doing when this little gem went up, but I'm very glad that I found it this morning!!! Excellent!!! :)