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Vengeance is Sweet!
Southern_Witch_6966 Reviews | 7.08/10 (66 Ratings, 0 Likes, 126 Favorites )
A spiteful Severus decides the only way to bed Hermione before Harry does is to pretend to be a gigolo for one night. Inspired by Betz's Gigolo Challenge at WIKTT.
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It not weakness to love. It takes courage and strength to love and to be loved. Tamara
It was his mother, he made that promise to, wasn't it? Tamara
So it's his father that has him so screwed up. Sure did one hell of a number on him. Tamara
Someone really needs to kick the shit out of that voice in Severus' head. It's more trouble then Voldie-butt. Tamara
I can not believe he would say such a thing to her. It breaks my heart. Tamara
Vengeance might be sweet but if you look past that, you just might find out that it's not worth it, in the end. Tamara
Good ol' Harry. At least they got that out of the way and move with being friends. Severus is so jealous. He can deny all he wants but its there. Albus and Minerva really need to stay out of it. I know they mean well. Severus just can't stay away. Tamara
Albus and Minerva should never got involved in the first place. Their meddling only makes it worse and it takes longer for the couple to fix their relationship afterwards. I'm surprised Severus thinks he can have it both ways. Touch and be touched by whomever, while Hermione can only have him. It doesn't work that way. Poor Harry, he should have let Draco get it over with then Severus wouldn't have anything to use against him. Who knows he might have even enjoyed it. Severus, Severus when will you ever learn? Brilliant chapter, SW69. Tamara
I under the chapter a little to well, I'm afraid. Enough said. Tamara
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OMG Everybody is playing everybody. I love the titles of the chapters. I just hope all the scheming Severus is doing doesn't come back to bite him on the ass. Tamara
For a minute there I was beginning to think that Hermione, Harry and Rolanda was putting Severus on. Now, I think everyone but Harry is putting someone else on. Oh boy did that make any since? lol Tamara
I believe Severus' father had gone a little insane after his wife pasted. Ok maybe alot insane. Who knew that Ronald Weasley was a stand up guy? So she knows he loves her, now if he would just say the words. Tamara
Oh, I am so glad for them, that they were able to find a healthy bond. Very touching story. Hard to read at times, but worth it!Livvy
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Vengeance is Sweet!)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you stuck with it and was able to read to the end. :)
You know, a lot of people misinterpret the Bible where it says that the "sins of the father will be passed on to the future generations". In the Hebrew, what it really means is that the "consequences" will be handed down. My grandfather beat my mother, and she in turn beat me. My mom does not carry the "sin" of her father, he has to account for his actions. But the consequences are there. She passed on the dysfunction in our relationship. I have problems with my temper with my daughter, but I am determined to break the cycle of abuse. I do not hit my daughter. I am not perfect, I do yell, but when I do, I apologize and tel her mommy was wrong and I'm sorry and it's not her fault. Hopefully, she will be less damaged as an adult.It is good to see the background as to how Severus' father warped him into the man he became. It's easy to say- "oh, Snape- he's a bastard" and that's it. No, violence begets violence and it is a cold reality that as humans, we are never going to be perfect, but I beleive with God's help we can change. I know that, from my own experience that He is changing me, little by little.This has been a great fic. I can't wait to see how it will all wrap up.Livvy
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Vengeance is Sweet!)
My grandmother and I had a conversation just like this when I was younger. She'd admitted to being abusive to my mom and said that hers was the same towards her and her mom's mom was as well. Etc. My mom and I didn't have problems until I was older, but she was very rough. My grandma told me that it was up to me to break the cycle of abuse. Same words.And I have for the most part. I treat my son as best as I can without all the bs. I do yell, but it's only when I'm fussing over something serious, not just because. Last night on my LJ I posted something under a locked post about how upset I was over something I'd said about my son in front of him, hurting him in the process. We've talked it out now, but I felt so horrible.:( I had that fear, which I explained to others, that I was slowly acting like her. She and I get on well now, but then, I'm an adult. Are you on Live Journal? I'm trying to remember if you're on my list or not. If you aren't and you get one, let me know. :)
This story is just gut-wrenching! Such an emotional rollercoaster. But you have captured the level of dysfuctional that I've felt about Snape's character for a long time now. He doesn't get what love is. Love is possession, obsession, it's f@#ked up! I wonder if you would take a look a the fic I've been posting, "Possession". I wonder what you would think about it. Especially the next chapter that is coming up. I see parallels with this story and mine. It's weird!I love this fic, although it wears me out! You must have gone through the proverbial ringer writing this!. Well, I'll carry on to the next chappie!Livvy
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Vengeance is Sweet!)
Oh, I enjoyed writing this story. Many of the reviewers didn't appreciate it. LOL Those reviews are over at Ashwinder. People came out of the woodwork to tell stories of past jerks they dated. I based Snape on some of my own experiences. In general, I don't see this to be Snape, not really anyway. There's too much info that's out about him now. This was post book five writing.I am reading your story. Well, I read them all but the last one, which I think someone else took in queue. I'll catch up on it though. :)
Oh my gosh!!! That was hilarious! I did not see tht one coming. OKay dashing off to the next chappie!Livvy
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Vengeance is Sweet!)
Hahaha... Most people smile after chapter one and then things start going downhill. LOL
Came across this story today after doing a random search. Read it all through and have thoroughly enjoyed it.
Your character portrayals are brilliant. It was a deeply motivating story that proves love can conquer all.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Vengeance is Sweet!)
thank you very much. I"m happy you liked it. It's one that starts off fun, turns dark, and then makes its way back to good.cheers! :)
I finally got round to finishing this story. Whenever I read a story that is this long, it really has to be good and show great character-development, like Severus sure did. This must be one of the better long stories I've read, will definately check out anything else you might have. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Vengeance is Sweet!)
Thanks for reading and for sharing that! I'm very happy that you liked it. :) Hope you like anything else you read. :)
What could I possibly say that I haven't already in my other reviews??? Brilliant, Lovely, Terrific, outstanding! I loved it of course. Thanks.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Vengeance is Sweet!)
Cool. Thanks for reading. Some people find this one a bit difficult for a while, but I'd hoped to show gradual change. :) cheers.
This was a very enduring story and very close to the truth for some people. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks for being so wonderful. Merry Christmas!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Vengeance is Sweet!)
thank you! :)
It starts to heat up. I love how Albus is once again orchestrating everything...lol Meddling, old fool, indeed. :D
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Vengeance is Sweet!)
thank you!
Well, I'm reading this one again too. It's weird to read the sneeky, somewhat lightheartedness of this chapter, knowing how dark and deep this story gets, and the growth they will go through. And I'm off!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Vengeance is Sweet!)
thank you! lol
Brilliant story. Even though its an older one, I still enjoyed it. Cheers!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Vengeance is Sweet!)
thank you!
Thank you for a briliant story. There were times when it was so intense that I needed to leave it for a day or two. Your characterisations were really believable. All the best.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Vengeance is Sweet!)
thank you! I appreciate that. :)
Well obviously I know that you went on with the story but I am so glad you did. Brilliant chapter. I'm off to 14 now.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Vengeance is Sweet!)
thank you!