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The Curse of the Goddess
mayadidi78 Reviews | 7.08/10 (78 Ratings, 0 Likes, 53 Favorites )
Hermione is drawn into a plan to sabatoge one of Lord Voldemort's plans. As Hermione and her new allies work together they question where Snape's loyalties really lie. Eventual ss/hg. Rating for later chapters
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I was bored at work one day and decided to look up some information on the newest HP movie coming out... I accidentally stumbled on fanfiction and then i read the fire and rose. The rest is history!
Reviews for The Curse of the Goddess
The girls are definitely going to be a force to reckon with. Too bad Hermione and Ginny can't somehow get a word to Severus about what's going on. They know he's a double agent, but I think he would be a good resource to figure things out if need be. Of course, they can't let any of the other girls know because of their parents being Death Eaters. But I'm still enjoying this story. I'm also curious to know when the HGSS interaction will take place.
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
Thanks for the review, it is appreciated! I know the interaction between ss and hg is taking a long time... I'm trying to push it but they are so stubborn!
It's going to be slow at first, I just see it as happening in such a gradual way... it will happen though!
Hey mayadidi.This is such a great story. I like the way you make the girls stand out as strong and powerful witches when they bond through feelings of solidarity. We could all use a little more of that in the world. Hugs Carmille
I love the relationships with the girls. And I love Luna. I've always wished she ended up with Harry.
please update soon!!!
Good chapter, I like it.
So are you saying that Voldemort basically wants to utilize the same initial spell that Hermione found, to unite the women, only then Voldemort would leach their powers from them?
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
well hmm, i dont want to give too much away, but that is a good guess. Voldemort does want to use the same spell as Hermione, but thats all im telling at this point! :)
Thank you for writing this story. The mist of avalon is one of my favorite books. Your story also has something in common with the véry good fanfic "The Twenty" on ff, but i guess that can't be helped if one writes about female magic and Pansy/Hermione.....
Hermione should've definitely been in Slytherin, with her tactics. Seems like she and Pansy have a really good plan in the works. Hopefully, everyone else would be game for it. I understand why Pansy doesn't know about Severus being a spy, but it makes things slightly difficult for her, since she has to sneak around them. Perhaps he paired she and Hermione together in order to help Pansy out of the situation, while maintaining the image that he's following Voldemorts' orders.
I've just started reading this fic, and I'm already hooked. I would love to read the book Hermione has, and how Voldemort plans on using it. I'm really looking forward to seeing more.
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
I'm glad to hear it! Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy the way it develops.
How awful to think that your own father would sell you out to Voldemort, if that truly is his plan. Something like that should make Pansy question her loyalties.
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
I've always enjoyed the thought of an unlikely friendship between Slytherins and Griffindors. This is just one more thing that will push Pansy towards that friendship. Now, if i could only make sure JKR will make her a nice protaganist in the upcoming book...
Poor Pansy (and I never thought I'd say that).
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
since i began writing this story, I too have felt a certain level of sympathy for Pansy. Glad to know I am dragging some other fans along with me! :)
The Curse of the Goddess = The Blessing of a Witch... indeed. As a "blessed witch", I quite agree.
I'm really enjoying this story -- it's absolutely fascinating, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
Thank You! It's so encouraging to get reviews like that...makes me want to update more frequently! This is my first attempt at fanfic writing and its so exciting every time i get a review!hmm. gotta go write some more! hehe
Response from Vorona (Reviewer)
I know what you mean about reviews. At the same time, the reason I don't have any chaptered stories up is because I want them finished and edited as a whole before allowing the public access -- I'm paranoid that way. And I think I *would* be swayed too much by reviews: too many good ones would make me do a rush job, and too few might well make me give up entirely.
In a way, it's not surprising that it's your first story, since it's so [i]different[/i] from a lot of things I've read. So, it feels less like your caught up in the whole culture. On the other hand, it is surprising, since it doesn't read at all like a first story. I'm guessing you have a lot of practice in writing original fiction :)
My guess on the chocolate is very unimaginative, he had just eaten chocolate or was carrying chocolate on his person. The book is intriguing, reads as a blessing for a woman and a curse for a man or does the title change with the intent of the user?
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
well I like that so far my story is intriguing! it hopefully means you will continue to read! You will find out more about the title in the next few chapters, as well as the chocolate thing!
My vote is he had a harrowing ordeal and chocolate always makes wizards feel better (e.g: lupin giving harry choc. on the train when dementors are around)im so glad to hear we'll be getting faster updates. it had to be bad if pansy was asking hermione for help!
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
i wonder if the title changed for her because she's a witch, not a wizard?
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
Hmm. A harrowing ordeal. Maybe so, maybe not. :) but that does get me thinking! Yes I have the next chapter written and hope to post it in the next few days. Real Life is supposed to slow down for me any minute now....
I liked that. Sandalwood and chocolate? Interesting combo.
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
The combination of sandalwood and chocolate may be considered a tiny bit mary sue. I love both those fragrances so much that I had to have my Snape smell of them!
WOW! I'm so glad you've gotten such wonderful responses, they make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside (I can only imagine how you feel :D). *smiles* Wonderful wonderful!! ^_^I was actually looking through this chapter again and thinking that there's more we could've done, but seeing these fabulous encouraging reviews, I'm thinking it's fine xDReally congratulations, love. *hugs*
There were a couple of close calls for the girls and Snape is suspicious. His plan to have Hermione as his assistant and her to suggest Draco during their meeting was quite amusing. I don't think Snape or Dumbledore were expecting that.
The story has an interesting premise. The wait is worth it.
Oh, this was such an amazing update! I love this story, I'm glad whenever we have more to read!
Cool story! Though I'm not too sure if Hermione should be trusting Parkinson at all. I guess we will have to read on, to see what happens... ;) Cheers!
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
I already have the first six chapters written and will try to update quickly... read on to see what happens! :)
I'm guessing that it's Pansy! I'm very interested in what will happen next! :) Good beginning.
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
thanks so much! I really appreciate it! :) My favorite Reviews are from authors whom I already have a great respect for! I feel very flattered that you took the time to read mine! :)
Hi mayadidiThis is looking good. I like both chapters and think they are great. Keep up the good work.hugs Carmille
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your review; makes me want to get my next update out fast!
I take the opportunity to refresh my memory with what happened in the previous chapters.
I think that you have started off great! I can't say that I've ever read a fic that started off with a mysterious email...Very intriguing.
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
Glad you enjoyed the first part of my fanfic! every review is highly valued as this is my first attempt and writing! I hope you enjoy the rest!
Intriguing beginning! My first thought was to assume that "PPGreenwoman" is Severus Snape, who is of course a half-blood (especially since this is a Potions Under Duress fic) -- but that didn't seem to make a lot of sense on second thought, since he became predominantly steeped in the wizarding world long before the advent of e-mail (even many older Muggles, never mind wizards, don't understand e-mail that well)! I also doubt somehow that Snape would choose an e-mail address which suggests a witch, unless "Greenwoman" is somehow a reference to his mother Eileen Prince. I noticed that the letters "PP" are the initials of Pansy Parkinson, who apparently is going to appear in this fic, but she's a pureblood and so it seems unlikely that she would be using the internet. I'm curious to find out who this mysterious contact is...you have me stumped!
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
Thank you for your review, I love that its got you thinking so much! I already have submitted the second chapter so it should be validated hopefully within the week so answers to your questions will be forthcoming!!
Nice first chapter! It really makes me want to read more. :)
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
Thank you! I really appreciate it! I should have the next chapter up soon so keep your eyes open!