First Contact
Chapter 1 of 10
mayadidiHermione is drawn into a plan to sabatoge one of Lord Voldemort's plans. As Hermione and her new allies work together they question where Snape's loyalties really lie. Eventual ss/hg. Rating for later chapters
ReviewedThe Curse of the Goddess
Chapter 1: First Contact
Disclaimer: While I might wish I did, I do not own any of the Harry Potter characters or the Harry Potter Universe. They belong to J.K. Rowling and I will not be making any money from this.... I'm just taking some of my favourites out to play...
A/N: I want to profusely thank my betas Saffron Angello and Brandy Schippers.
This story would be incomprehensible without them!
Hermione glanced at her computer screen when she heard the familiar 'ding' indicating that she had received an email. It was halfway through her summer hols after her fifth year, and she had started spending more and more time online out of sheer boredom. She had finished her summer homework not three weeks after term had ended, and she had not yet heard from Dumbledore about when she and Harry would join Ron at the Burrow. She idly wondered what would happen with number twelve Grimmauld Place now that Sirius was... She pushed that thought away before it was complete and opened her inbox to see who had sent her an email.
She had a few online Muggle friends she tried to keep in touch with during her breaks from Hogwarts. (They had all been informed that she was going to a boarding school in Switzerland.) She assumed it was one of them sending her a greeting.
She was sorely mistaken.
Hermione's eyebrows shot up to her hairline, and she let out a surprised gasp when she saw the subject of the email: CONSTANT VIGILANCE.
'Constant vigilance' brought her back to her fourth year when the impostor Moody was teaching DADA. The subject line indicated that the sender was a wizard and probably one from Hogwarts, but she didn't know any wizards who were internet savvy. She looked at the email address to try and determine what this could mean; she felt a bit apprehensive about receiving such an unexpected email. The sender's name was listed as PPGreenwoman. Well, that doesn't really give me any clue, Hermione thought in exasperation. Questions raced through her mind as she opened the body of the email, reminding herself that hexes could not be sent over the internet and that there was no magical equivalent of a computer virus.
To: HWwitchgurl
From: PPgreenwoman
Subject: CONSTANT VIGILANCE
You have no reason to trust me, but you must. I am what you are and learn what you do. Need help. I am not of DE. Please meet me. I will be Waiting at the Room close to where the learning starts. Come in time to put a stopper in death.
Serpente verde.
Hermione was shocked. This was not what she had expected, and frankly, she had no idea what she should do. The message was a code of sorts that much was obvious. As in everything else she did, Hermione was systematic and logical when she worked on puzzles or codes and most of this was pretty easy to figure out. She first thought about what she could make sense of at the outset of reading the message. The fact that she had received the email at all implied that the sender was half-blood or Muggle-born; 'greenwoman' and 'serpente verde' could only be a reference to a Slytherin and since no Muggle-born would be admitted into that House, that left a half-blood witch.
The passage 'Not of DE' was plain as well. DE would be an acronym for Death Eater.
However, the rest was more confusing. She recognized the last phrase; 'put a stopper in death' was from Professor Snape's first year preamble, a speech she doubted she would ever forget. As if she was eleven years old again she clearly remembered sitting in the dungeon, wholly entranced by his silken voice, soft and menacing. So that part of the message could be an allusion to Potions, or it could be another Slytherin reference as Snape was their Head of House. Hermione made a mental note to come back to that.
'Waiting at the Room close to where the learning starts.' What could that signify? Hermione pondered on the sender's meaning for 'learning.' Magic was the obvious answer, but there must be more. Her brow furrowed in contemplation. Hogwarts is where they learned, but where did it start? Racking her brain, she recalled her first year when she first began at Hogwarts. She had met Harry and Ron on the Hogwarts Express... A smile crossed her face as she thought back to that day. She had been helping Neville find Trevor when she had met the boys. Later they had teased her that she had been lecturing them in her bossy voice right from the start.
Hermione's eyes widened as the realization hit her. The train. King's Cross Station, platform nine and three quarters. Perhaps that was what her mysterious correspondence had meant by 'where the learning starts'? Hermione's breathing became shallow with excitement as she quickly searched online for shops within 20 kilometres of King's Cross.
'Aha!' she exclaimed when she found it, clapping her hands together. The Waiting Room was a hotel and pub near King's Cross Station. She knew where to go now, but when? She read over the email again. The only part she hadn't figured out was that last bit: Snape's speech. Hermione mulled over what she had gathered. Snape, Potions... Slytherin and Gryffindor had Potions together. That could be the connection with Potions; perhaps this person had been in her Potions class last term...? She mentally sifted through her memories of last term's Potions classes, but nothing came to mind. She thought about the Slytherins in her class, but she, Harry, and Ron had always done their best to avoid them whenever possible. She remembered how irritating it was to deal with Malfoy and his gang right after lunch while waiting in the corridor of the dungeons. Right after lunch... one o'clock, could that be it? Her face shone with a radiant smile as she realized that she had figured it out. She had always loved that feeling of satisfaction when she solved a particularly tricky riddle.
Seconds later, however, her face fell when she thought about what this message meant. Was she actually thinking of meeting this person? Someone whom she knew nothing about, and who she didn't know if she could trust...someone from Slytherin? It would be foolish to go; it was probably a trap. After the fiasco at the Ministry, Voldemort had been revealed and was again at large and dangerous. And as Hermione was known to be a close friend of Harry Potter, it was most assuredly not a safe time to attend a clandestine meeting with a stranger whom she knew nothing about. She glanced at the email again, though she had already memorized the message.
'Need help.' There was no way to sense emotion from an email, but Hermione imagined that she could sense desperation in those two words. The whole tone of the message seemed to imply danger. This person could have written something like 'come in time to bewitch the mind and ensnare the senses,' rather than the particular part of Snape's speech that they had chosen, put a stopper in death. Hermione couldn't help but feel a sense of foreboding as she re-read those words. Was someone's life in danger? Regardless of whom the email was from, could she ignore a plea for help?
As Hermione debated with herself, she could not help but picture her aforementioned professor sneering in disdain how such brainless nobility was so very Gryffindor.
Hermione didn't know how long she sat at her computer staring at the screen, pondering her options. She knew she couldn't ignore this email, but all the same, she wasn't foolish enough to walk blindly into a situation that could very well be a life-jeopardizing risk.
If it wasn't summertime, she could simply Disillusion herself and stroll into the pub unseen to find out who this mystery person was before showing herself, but she couldn't use magic without running the risk of being caught by the Ministry of Magic. Well, she thought as her lips quirked up in a triumphant smile, perhaps I can't use magic, but I can use Muggle means of disguising myself.
Hermione went to her closet and started rummaging around. Her hair was her most distinctive feature, so she would need to hide that. She found a baseball cap she had never worn (a cousin had bought it for her on a trip to America the previous summer). She hastily stuffed all of her hair up into the cap and found a pair of dark sunglasses. She changed into a non-descript pair of trousers and white tank top and considered her image in the mirror critically. The cap and sunglasses did well to hide her countenance, and if she stayed out of direct light, it would be difficult to discern who she was.
At the last minute she slipped on a light jacket and lightly taped her wand to her forearm. Restriction for Underage Wizardry or no, she would not go into this without her wand, and she wanted to be able to reach it easily. Going into this without a wand would be ludicrous, and the subject of the email reminded her of what Moody would say to her in a situation like this: Constant Vigilance.
AN: Well, there it is, my first chapter of my first fic. What do you think? Please let me know!
*The Waiting Room is a pub near Kings Cross in London. I have never been there, only looked it up online. Anyone familiar with it? I hope I didn't lead Hermione into a meeting at a dive bar in the bad side of London....
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Curse of the Goddess
78 Reviews | 7.08/10 Average
Please do write on , it is so diverting.
The telepathy is described with gentle wit, and the feminine power makes one want to feel a bond like this.
The reviewer who analysed Snape as being taken advantage of , as women have been , are, wrote it down with clarity.
Do write more , even after this long pause, or has it been abandoned?
Ps. You made me want to reread M. Bradley's book again.
Happy autumn.
This has been a very pleasurable read and thrilling ride so far. I have really enjoyed the premise of this story.
Thank you very much for writing it and sharing it with us even if the chances now of this being completed was very low. Many thanks.
This has been a very fascinating story so far, and the premise is just fabulous. The idea to test their O&L skills against Snape and Dumbledore is also very creative.
It is really a shame that this story is abandoned, but thank you very much for such an intriguing read this far, in any case.
Thank you.
Schooling is important, so is work, there is nothing to forgive. Wonderful chapter and well worth the wait.
No worries, and no forgiveness is necessary. :-)
Besides, an update of this fabulous, refreshingly unique story--however long it might take--is more than enough for me! I was so excited to log in and find a new chapter, you really made my day!
On to the story: It makes sense that the Hogwarts wards would prevent someone outside the castle from communicating with someone within... Voldemort might able to torment Harry through his scar, but it wouldn't do for him to be able to communicate directly to students/staff who may already have taken the mark. Not to mention what it would do to poor Severus if the Dark Lord was able to enter his mind at will.
*Shudders*
BTW, I like that former Headmistress Derwent is trying to help the girls, it's so rare to see the portraits involved in a story... other than Phineas Nigellus, that is.
But I can't wait to see how Severus and Hermione get along once she starts as his lab assistant. He's bound to start subtly fishing about Hermione's friendships with the girls from his house, little does he know she'll be doing a some fishing of her own. This should be interesting. Not to mention, fun!
And thanks so much for the update, it is totally appreciated. :-)
I love how sneaky Hermione can be.
I sort of feel bad for Severus at this point. He doesn't know that Pansy isn't interested in taking the Mark. Of course, Hermione can't risk letting him know, since he has to go in front of Voldemort. I think Hermione working wiith Severus will be an excellent way for them to develop an attraction. There's already a slight one, but it can be developed further.
It's all that hot chocolate he drinks. Perhaps he drips it down his front! :)
Interesting ritual. :)
Wonder if he was flattered or disappointed about how she imagined his anatomy? :)
LOL, the girls are going to convince Hermione that she needs an older, smarter man... :)
That's an interesting assortment of girls. :)
Poor Pansy. What a situation to be caught in.
Chocolate... mmm... think I have some in the pantry...
Sorry, you side-tracked me. I like the little flickers of interest they show in each other.:)
Unlikely bedfellows, but any enemy of your enemy is your friend, they say! :)
Good riddle! :)
I have been reading your story since the first chapter, and it is amazing. I am incredibly entranced by the story, the friendship between the girls of all houses, and Hermione and Snape's mutual interest in each other. Brilliantly done! I wanted to wait until I got to the last chapter you had posted to send you this review, but each and every one of them is fabulous. I can't wait to read more, and as a fan of the Camelot story, I enjoyed Morgaine being an intergral part of this!
The bonding spell the girls preformed reminds me a lot of the calling of the corners, etc in wicca/witchcraft, etc...right down to the Athame. Well done!
Write more soon! I think I may have found my new addiction!
The gift from the goddess is a mixed blessing. Hopefully Hermione will find a way to control the gift quickly.
This story fascinates me! It takes Hermione at the center of the story and brings in lesser known characters to form a really unique plot. I am enjoying the ride and can't wait to see where you take the story. Something tells me that tragedy awaits in later chapters.
You've hooked me with the story. the potions lab should make for some interesting fantasies.
I just discovered 'Curse of the Goddess' and read straight thru all the chapters you've posted so far ... I am completely hooked. What an amazingly unique story you have here! I'm totally enjoying the interaction between all the girls, it's so rare to find a story featuring real interhouse friendships. I can't wait to see Severus' reaction when he finds out that the sisterly friendships between Hermione, Pansy, and the others are real and especially how they've been testing their new Occlumency skills on Dumbledore and himself.
Excellent job, I look forward to see where your story goes from here!
I love how Snape and Dumbledore are underestimating the girls.
Please write more. This is exquisite.
I have really enjoyed this story so far, but I was wondering when you were going to update it?
Fantastic story and great writing/characterisations. I love the humour, detail and the friendships that have emerged. I chuckled over Ginny's 'revelation' to McGonagall (which was handled with the aplomb that we could expect from an experienced Head of House) and the image that Hermione sent was truly wicked (he he), but Snape's reaction and later unconcious stroking of her elbow was a delight.I don't know very much about Goddess or Wiccan traditions/rituals but you made it sound true (great writing again) and it emphisised the merging of the four elements (which I believe is a central tenet?) also the equality of the participants, the importance of the sisterhood and the leaving of thier old lives behind-a coming of age ritual considering their ages. The Goddess religions also seem to be connected to fertility rites, which then works in with their ages. You tie this ritual with the coming together of the four houses (I'm sure JKR stated that she utilised this concept for the four houses - Slytherin/Water, Gryffindor/Fire, Hufflepuff/Earth and Ravenclaw/Air), and contrasts starkly with the hierachial nature of Voldemort/DE, Dumbledore/The Order, Wizarding society, our own Muggle world, and monotheistic religions which are largely patriarchal in construct. Goodness me I found out today that Testify and testiment are derived from the Latin Testisculus (yes one and the same male gonads!) - because under Roman law a witness was legally admissable only if testicles were present. Puts 'Legal Testimentary capacity' in a whole new light and...Imagine - 'My Last Will and Testicles' - sounds weird! But I digress... It is interesting that Snape seems to be the wizard that will help them. While you work it well from the HG/SS romance perspective and Canon it is also interesting from the point of view when you review his history, and consider his 'feminine' qualities. He seems to have mainly been used by males to achieve power or be subjected to their whims for thier own ends (- ie. his father, Voldemort, and also Dumbledore). This is contrasted by his relationships with females - he seems to have been close to his mother (He identified strongly as 'The Half-Blood Prince) and his friendship/love for Lily seems to be his only true relationship based on equality and he has kept loyal to that. So for Snape to assist a sisterhood would be quite fitting because his struggle/loss of personal freedom and power of self-determination seems to echo a similar loss for women, witches and Goddess culture in history and subjugation under a patriarchal system/male figurehead/Monotheism. Snape also repeatedly sacrifices himself selflessly, like Lily, for the child (Harry), which while not exclusively maternal quality is touted by Dumbledore as such. Then there is his love of chocolate!You set up Voldemort's Shakespearian flaws so well - He seeks out this Goddess magic only for its power and misunderstands its very nature, like love, thereby revealing a potential weapon that the light can use. This parallels nicely his lack of understanding of love in JKR's storyline. He misunderstands again because he does not know or understand women. He viewed his mother as a common whore - and only seems to barely tolerate females.Apologies for the grammar and long sentences....and I just couldn't stop with this analysis. My inner shrink is coming out! Anyway Great story, really love it and please update soon!Cheers.
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
Wow, I had to respond to something like this! Thanks for the analysis. I will admit you have put more thought into it than I have! BUT I have a feeling I will be taking it into account as I write from now on! I am working on my next chapter and hope to update soon.
Response from reets67 (Reviewer)
Not too sure about less thought than me - it sort of flowed out, No moderation or self-control at times! :-) I look forward to the next chapter/s. Cheers.
Response from mayadidi (Author of The Curse of the Goddess)
Wow, I had to respond to something like this! Thanks for the analysis. I will admit you have put more thought into it than I have! BUT I have a feeling I will be taking it into account as I write from now on! I am working on my next chapter and hope to update soon.
Response from reets67 (Reviewer)
Not too sure about less thought than me - it sort of flowed out, No moderation or self-control at times! :-) I look forward to the next chapter/s. Cheers.