Any chance of an update soon?  I'm really enjoying this story!

Love the story, but found the "sex scene" a little graphic for my tastes.  It was unexpectedly graphic, considering the tenor of the foregoing chapters.  Going from Bradley to Harlequin is quite a transition.

Love the homage to Marion Zimmer Bradley's Mists of Avalon.  This story keeps getting better and better. 

Really liked this!  And I'm dying to know: WHY does Snape smell like chocolate?  Of course, anybody or anything that smells like chocolate can't be all bad. 

I'm also curious about the Sandalwood reference.

Very good!  I'm really interested in reading what happens next.

Oh this is just sooooo great. You really made me laugh at Snapes reaction and the way Hermione just sits reading like nothing ever happened is simply marvellous.

I think it's a unique story with great potential. I haven't seen this before. The power of women is no picnic in the park. They really can be deadly both in numbers and in individual feminine slyness. You seem to be using that fact well.

This fic is one I simply must read to it's end.   You have a good humour and a super abillity to describe a scene. I can hardly wait to see the effect of Hermiones 'fake' daydream and what the consequence is in the long run. Hmmmm! Will Snape see her more as an adult or will he brush aside the imeges and think notingh of it other than a deluded childs imagination?

Hugs, Carmille   

I was thinking of MZB, my mom and I have read her works many times, in fact one of my favorite book is The Free Amazons of Darkover, if you haven't read it yet you may want to give it a try.  I think subconciously it is reflected in my latest story especially later chapters.

This is really good, off to the next chapter....

mmm delishious chapter, I loved Severus's perspective on the matter.  As for smelling like chocolate?  My mom uses coco butter as a base for certain herbal treatments, maybe Severus does too.

Oh wow, what a meeting!  I suspect Hermione's brains and Pansy's self preservation instincts are going to be difficult to balance.  Very interesting and fresh.

The plot thickens!  Love the way the author keeps dropping in little teasers.

I think you are very creative, using Severus as a unwitting teacher by a pack of teenage girls is pure inspiration!

I also liked how you showed the day dream and its results.  Severus really should keep on his toes!

Excellent writing, very descriptive and detailed.  Well done!

Looking forward to more.

Ooh this is getting intriguing.

Excellent beginning, very gripping.

Lol @ the a/n 'dive bar' comment! I am quite surprised this is your first fiction?  I never would have guessed.

Absolutely wonderful, I love it  when women empower themselves.  All to often women are seen purely as victims and prey. I enjouyed this story so much I actually called my mom, and recomended it to her.  She goes by mysty.

Awesome! I actually laughed out loud when they were coming up with ideas... Very good! Update soon!

Don't get jittery about reviews, because I promise you that I love this story. It's bookmarked for me, so I'm always waiting for you to update!

This is really good so far! I really like it!

Hermione telling all the girls in her group has me worried. Are they under a vow of silence, I cannot remember? The false image Hermione gave to Prof. Snape was great. That scene gave me quite a chuckle at the end when Snape realized he would be unable to walk about the classroom with a hard on.

That was lovely.  I really enjoyed it. 

Great start.  Thanks to you for paying more than lip-service to inter-house relations!! 

That was hot.  Nice chapter.  I look forward to more.

Really good. Loved seeing more of Snape. And I just love the girls, the way that they are all so diferent and they help each other, a bit of each house.

The lemon was good but maybe a bit rushed, like if she was actualy saying her fantasy out loud and was really nervous about it. Though she was nervous, so it might be what you were loking for.

Love it! Pleeeeasse write more often. Pretty please!

The girls are well organized and seem to be making good progress in getting to know each other. It is too bad Hermione cannot run everything by Snape to relieve his anxiety, but I suppose that would be too risky. I think they (the girls) made excellent points against Hermione's attachment to Weasley.