Prime Beginnings and Calculated Ends
Chapter 4 of 9
Fairfield- 'I'm balancing yin and yang.'
Chapter 4: Prime Beginnings and Calculated Ends
It was another special Saturday for students to visit the village, and she walked the crowded but lonely streets. Ahead she saw a shock of blond hair talking to a mature figure at an outdoor table. She stood and stared as the scene unfolded. The student was complaining; the mature figure nodded in understanding. The student was gesturing wildly as he related some school farce; the mature figure nodded in understanding. The student took a sip of hot coffee from his father's cup; the mature figure shook his head in amused disapproval. The student joined his friends; his father waved a fond farewell. Desperate for something, even a pale copy of what she had witnessed, she walked over and sat at the table.
"Good morning, Miss Granger."
"Good morning to you, Mr. Malfoy."
"To what do I owe the pleasure of your company?"
"I just thought I'd say 'Hello.' Are you busy? I can buy you a coffee."
Mr. Malfoy didn't need another coffee yet, but he could assure Miss Granger that she was welcome to sit with him and enjoy a cup herself. "How are your studies?" After hearing her woeful reply, he tried to be reassuring. "You're in a slump. Didn't you recently perform brilliantly for the OWLs? A temporary slump is normal. Don't worry about it." He responded to her polite inquiries. "Mrs. Malfoy is doing well. I haven't seen Mrs. Granger, your mum, since the hospital ruckus." She reminded him of his loan. "Yes, I remember you have the old Numerology book. You can keep it longer." She remembered they had been interrupted the last time. "Yes, I can meet you the next special weekend, and we can look at it again." She looked cold. "You're shivering. Do you want to go inside?" She replied that everyplace here was crowded and noisy, but his home was nice, and she hadn't seen much of it, and she hoped she wasn't being too forward. "It's true; you didn't see much of Malfoy Manor when you were there. It's not too forward to suggest that you'd like to see more of it. We'll have to do it discreetly."
Two minutes later, Miss Granger was in a chair in front of a roaring fireplace, Mr. Malfoy had served Miss Granger tea, and Mr. Malfoy was stretched out on the rug.
"Did you ever think of teaching Arithmancy?" she asked.
"It would be one of the easier subjects to teach," he replied. "There's not much to memorize since it proceeds from a few general principles. Not many students take it. The classes are small and well-behaved."
She sat up straighter in the chair. "You have thought about it."
"When I was young and idealistic and thought I had infinite energy. Then I discovered how much time and energy it took to run the family estate and manage the investments. Even for an Arithmancy professor, teaching is a full time job."
He stared into the fire. "I think teaching Potions would kill me."
"Severus ... I mean Professor Snape was different during the summer," she said.
"I liked him then," she said. She blushed. "But I shouldn't say that about an older man."
'Lucky Severus,' thought Lucius.
"I wish he had talked to me and taken me places. I was stuck with two boys in a grim old place. All they could think about was Quidditch."
She put her hands in front of her mouth. "Oh, I shouldn't have said that."
He loomed over her. "You silly girl, I gave you a comfortable chair, plied you with gourmet tea, and you spilled the Order's secrets. Ha. Ha. Ha."
She shrank into the chair, turning pale and looking aghast.
Lucius felt remorse.
"Hermione," he said softly. "I was kidding."
"Miss Granger, think," he said. "My family has known the Black family for ages. I married one of the Black sisters. Is there anything significant about the Black family that I wouldn't know?"
Hermione Granger showed signs of recovery.
Lucius settled back on the rug. 'There's a thought,' he thought. 'I can screw Narcissa for information. The next time she's waving her toes at the ceiling, I'll pay attention to the yelling end. Hmm, seems to be a morning for bad humor. A better idea would be to listen the next time Cissy and Bella have a gossip fest. No, not even the Dark Lord would require that sacrifice.'
He noticed that Miss Granger was on her knees on the floor and looming over him.
"You scared the shit out of me, you bastard." She looked at him. "But it was still a good joke." She smiled, "Mature men are the best."
He was aware of Hermione stretching out beside him, her leg on top of his, her breasts pressing into him, her fingers twirling his hair, and her head resting on his shoulder. She was humming an aimless tune as she fell asleep.
'I've got the brains of the opposition in my arms. I want the brains of the opposition on the end of my prick. No, I don't .... Get a grip .... Yes, I do.'
His stomach growled to remind him that he was missing lunch. He ran his fingers through the hair of the schoolgirl.
It was early afternoon when Hermione popped up. "I feel ever so much better. What's for tea?"
'Berries rare as your breasts, scones sweet as your ass, clotted cream from your panties, and cheese ripe as your pussy,' he thought. "The usual," he said.
He brought out tea and sandwiches thinking that it would have been terrible if the Death Eaters had captured Natalie or Hermione. 'Okay,' he thought, 'I'm a sexist pig. I don't like torturing women.'
He watched her delicately consume a large number of sandwiches with her tea while he fought down the urge to talk about her lack of boyfriends in order to coax her into his lap. After dabbing a few crumbs off her lips, she sashayed around the table, placed her hand seductively on his shoulder, batted her eyelashes, and gave him a silky voiced, "You fill me so well; you make me feel complete."
He jumped. She chuckled. "Turnabout is fair play, Mr. Malfoy."
'I've sunk to a new low,' he thought. 'She's a schoolgirl. She's Natalie's daughter. She's a little minx! She's more than my mortal frame can bear.'
After tea, he brought his old Numerology text, paper, and pencils to the reading room. Hermione admired the argument that there were an infinite number of primes. A girl of infinite possibilities, thought Lucius. They struggled through the Euclidian algorithm, establishing the remainder was smaller than the divisor. Ah, the remains of the day, thought Lucius. They were ready for the unique factorization theorem when it was time for her to return to school. A unique day, he thought. He whisked her back to the village. She had had the best time she told him. The next visit, she would bring the Hadley Numerology book, and they could have even more fun.
Lucius, wrung out after a day of fighting down urges for a schoolgirl, had his own thoughts. 'Heaven save me. Wait, my wife can save me. She's good at that.'
- Dearest Natalie,
I realize we did not meet under the best of circumstances, but I did enjoy your visit. My husband and I were both entranced by your daughter.
You may or may not know that students are allowed occasional visits to a nearby village. Last Saturday, my husband was there to talk to our son, and he met Hermione. My husband will be busy on the next such occasion, but he suggested that I take you to visit Hermione. Would you be interested?
Most sincerely, Narcissa
One week later was another type of special Saturday, and Lucius had, once again, failed to save Narcissa from herself.
"Ewww!"
"You know you don't like it. I don't know why you insist on sampling the sake every month."
"It's to remind me that life isn't all brandy and chocolates. I'm balancing yin and yang."
It pained him to see Narcissa try it and dislike it. His friend had undergone indignities to obtain their recent supplies. Severus had strolled into a store in a poorer part of London and spotted half a shelf full of sake bottles with the word 'Reduced' on a banner in front of them. Severus had secured the lot.
"What do you do with this stuff?" the surly clerk had asked.
Severus, attempting to be polite in mundane society, had replied, "You warm it to blood temperature and drink it."
The clerk was incredulous. "Are you shittin' me?"
Severus nearly had his wand out for a lesson in manners when it occurred to him that the buffoon in front of him would never know the delights of a sake party.
Pity stayed his hand.
Lucius's attention returned to the present where Narcissa continued her commentary.
"Besides, it's cloudy. There isn't a single star in the sky, and it's going to rain. I'm starting to think these Moon-Viewing Parties are just an excuse for you and Severus to drink sake, grill squid, and eat wasabi peanuts."
"My family warned me about you...that you were hard to fool."
'It's a civilized ceremony,' thought Narcissa, some time later. Lucius and Severus had joined her for a cup of tea and then proceeded to the gazebo, followed by Sasha, the family hound. She could understand the hound...loyalty plus the possibility of tidbits. She recalled the period when Lucius and Sasha went hunting. Her aristocratic nature appreciated the wild taste of the game, and the knowledge that her husband and his hound had brought the animal down added to the flavor.
The hound had arrived several years ago when Lucius had a chance to indulge one of his fantasies. Lucius Malfoy would have simply died if anyone found out, but he had tried to ape the customs of the eighteenth century landed nobility. Chief among those customs was blood sports. Riding a horse looked suicidal but those portraits of the nobleman and his faithful hound plucked at his heartstrings. He thought acquiring a purebred would attract attention, but one of his orchard managers assured him that crossbreeds had all the qualities of the purebreds plus additional stability and stamina.
He had watched and then participated as the orchard manager played the strange mundane game of 'Frisbee' with his dogs. One of the females of a litter seemed quite taken with Lucius. He named her 'Sasha' and brought her home.
Narcissa shrieked. "There's going to be dog hair all over everything."
Lucius cuddled Sasha and told her not to pay any attention to the hysterical lady. Sasha looked at Narcissa with her mournful eyes until Narcissa relented and agreed that Sasha could stay.
Now, the first thing that Narcissa did in the morning was pet Sasha and let her outside. Narcissa spent the evenings that Lucius was gone curled up on the couch with Sasha beside her.
When she was old enough, Lucius introduced Sasha to Frisbee. He convinced Narcissa to try it. With Narcissa, the Frisbee went every which way, but Sasha didn't mind. She would retrieve it and run back to Narcissa with her eyes bright and her tail wagging. Narcissa had to learn not to have so much fun that her arm hurt the next day.
Lucius did worry that Frisbee was too tame and he was not training Sasha to be a mighty huntress. He decided to be philosophical about it. 'I can't have everything,' he thought, 'and Narcissa is having a great time.'
For hunting, he decided that shotguns were too crude and noisy. He would use his wand. And he decided he would be forgiving of Sasha. It was not her fault that he and has wife enjoyed Frisbee instead of training Sasha properly. When he went hunting, the first thing he discovered was that during their first ten yards of flight, big game birds were lower and slower than a Frisbee. Cuddly Sasha was a running, leaping, brown blur...death on four paws. It was much the same with young rabbits.
He didn't dare let Narcissa see Sasha's trophies: the limp bodies of cute and beautiful animals. He snuck them into the kitchen and gave them to the house-elves when Narcissa wasn't looking. They had several dinners of game, and then Lucius professed a lack of interest in hunting. Narcissa thought it a shame because Sasha seemed to enjoy it, but they all went back to mundane Frisbee.
Out in the gazebo, Sasha watched over the proceedings while Lucius and Severus toasted the moon even though it was not visible. They sipped several cups and related to the night.
When they had absorbed a sufficient amount of nature's wildness, Lucius broke the silence. "How's the spying, old bean?"
"Smashing. I told Dumbledore that Voldemort was back and was acquiring followers. I told Voldemort that Dumbledore knew he was back, and that Dumbledore was organizing a resistance group."
Lucius chuckled. "You are a clever man. You are a subtle man. Nay, a humorous man."
There was another interlude of toasting the moon, before Lucius spoke again. "I assume you're the one who told the Order about the old, unused safe-house."
"I told the Aurors," said Severus. "They needed a diversion before they caused real trouble. They spent a week planning the raid."
Lucius agreed. "A raid on an empty house does no harm and energizes both sides. Think of the stories the caretaker can tell: The demons descended upon him."
The two men and the dog watched the lightning and rain.
The drinking party had arrived at the point where they exchanged the small sake cups for large tea cups. The topic of conversation followed a similar increase in capacity. They were considering the differences between nature's law, wizard's law, and mundane law.
Under normal circumstances, Lucius would never let anyone know he thought about the mundanes, but the sake and the wildness of nature blew through him. Lucius had a complaint about the mundanes. "They get too involved with the law. They worry over it constantly. There's speechifying and debating and filibustering. They have a class of people who do that for a living."
"They do pontificate," agreed Severus, "but they have a talent for it. It's a sin not to use a talent."
Lucius allowed his friend had a point. He raised his cup in salutation. "To each his own."
"Been busy?" asked Lucius.
"There's a shortage of potions at the school infirmary."
"There's a drought of draughts?" asked Lucius.
The three of them took in the clouds, the wind, and the rain. It refreshed their souls.
Lucius brought up a delicate topic. "It's sad that you're alone. Isn't there anyone you care for, that you can trust?"
"There aren't many," said Severus, "and they're out of reach."
'That's something new,' thought Lucius. "Has some high-born lady caught your eye, some pureblood that only looks at other purebloods?" asked Lucius.
Severus watched the rain.
"She may be more available than you think, Severus. Perhaps at some soirée, we can introduce her to the aristocracy of the mind."
Severus shook his head no.
"You're leaving me guessing. Even if she's a married woman, we can introduce you." Lucius looked at Severus, but there was no reaction. "Unless," said Lucius, "she's the wife of a friend. Is that the pickle you're in, a pureblood aristocrat, a wife of a friend?" Lucius thought his friend was being difficult. "She may still be available. You're dashing, different. Her husband may not care for her anymore ... be glad to get her off his hands. She's neglected and lonely. You could be doing everyone a favor. Gallant Severus to the rescue."
Severus thought about the aristocratic Draupadi, her brave and crippled husband, and stared into the storm.
'There's a lot of hesitating and secrecy, old buddy,' thought Luciius. 'By the gods, is it Narcissa? Does he want to fuck Narcissa? Who doesn't? Perhaps he's already fucking her. Maybe he really, really wants to fuck Narcissa. Has my friend fallen in love with my wife? I'm going to have to play this one by ear.'
Lucius soared over the moon: 'Narcissa did have a marvelous pussy; its use was known to produce insights.'
Lucius retuned in time to hear Severus say, "Ah, but who would care for the greasy bat from the dungeon?"
"That's your school persona. It makes you look sly ... a lurker ... a conspirator. You run a double bluff. You spent the summer as an immaculate, well-groomed gentleman. The social season has just started. We can take you to all kinds of affairs. Why worry about your school persona? Unless .... Great thundering cats, Severus, you don't fancy someone at the school do you? Did that musty old place finally get a nubile instructor? I hadn't heard."
Severus was quiet. 'I can't tell anyone about Draupadi,' he thought.
"No. Tell me it's not true, Severus ... not a student."
For some reason, Severus saw a vision of smiling, vital Hermione. Before he could stop himself, he blurted out, "I can't help it."
Lucius was silent for a while, recalling Natalie. "Yes, that's true. We can't help it."
"We're minding our own business," said Severus. "Not asking for anything. All of a sudden, we become aware of some girl, hovering around."
Lucius stared into the rain.
Severus continued. "I'm mixing a potion; I think about showing it to her. I'm walking along the lake; I imagine her beside me."
"She only knows you as an instructor?" asked Lucius.
'What's happening,' thought Severus. 'Why is my mind filling with images of Hermione? What has Lucius conjured up?'
"I saw her last summer. She told me I looked handsome. Then she blurted out that I smelled good. That embarrassed her."
Severus gave his friend an accusing look. "I can see your brain cells turning over from here. You're asking what students I could possibly meet during the holidays. You're figuring out who she is."
Lucius was staring at the rain. He was seeing a bushy-haired figure, but it was a figure more mature than the one Severus was seeing.
Sasha, with the instincts of a faithful companion, saved the evening by mooching grilled squid from Lucius and then from Severus. They scratched her ears, and the world returned to normal.
"Did you learn anything from Crabbe and Goyle?" asked Severus. "I assume you treated them to the usual evening at the pub."
"They're supposed to be suspicious of me, but they can't turn down a round of drinks," said Lucius. "We go to a remote tavern where I supply the place with the good stuff for Crabbe and Goyle. It goes down smooth, really smooth."
"And?" said Severus.
"It's crazy, completely crazy," said Lucius. "They were the ones who robbed the Grangers. They were told to look for secret Arithmancy stuff."
"So they swiped a schoolgirl's Arithmancy books," said Severus. "For Crabbe and Goyle, that's better than average."
"It gets crazier. At the beginning of last summer, I found a box from the Hadley estate in the basement of the bookstore."
"The famous Arithmancy professor?" said Severus.
"Yes, and the same day I met Mrs. Granger shopping for her daughter."
"That's pretty thin," said Severus.
"Well, don't tell anyone, but I met Mrs. Granger again for a session of kite flying. Goyle tracked us, and I fed him a story about spying on the Grangers."
Severus sighed. "You planted ideas in his head, old chum. No good can come of that."
"According to Goyle," continued Lucius, "the Death Eaters scoured the bookstore and found another box from the Hadley estate. They're certain it's valuable, but they can't make heads or tails of it, and they've hidden it. They didn't tell Crabbe or Goyle the hiding place."
"Paranoia runs deep," they agreed.
Severus tried to sum it up. "You found some old Arithmancy stuff at the same time you began associating with the Grangers. From their point of view, the only reason to prize those dusty old manuscripts is because they contain spells of earth-shaking power. Arithmancy is gobbledygook to that crew, but Hermione Granger is a genius who can figure it out and rule the world."
'Paranoia runs deep, indeed,' they thought.
The sake party entered its last stage, and Sasha came into her own. The wild night air and the confessional conversation had stripped the two men of their facades, and they were two mellow souls, but the noble and steadfast Sasha provided the glue that held everything together. Mellow they might be, but they had prepared for their descent into depravity. Under the watchful eyes of the hound, Lucius and Severus brought out the hard-boiled eggs. Her ears pricked up as they were cracked and peeled. Of course she participated.
Dogs like the moon, too.
It is only a small shift from thinking about cracking and peeling a hard-boiled egg to thinking about Narcissa. After the two men left the house for the gazebo, she read a while and then retired. As she lay there she thought about the two men getting pickled...pickled enough that they would discuss which one could have her. She imagined them settling it like gallant gentlemen: They would flip a coin. They would flip a coin to decide who would have a crack at peeling her. 'Or who would peel me and have a crack,' she thought. Both were masters of disguise and concealment. She wouldn't know who it was.
Narcissa was sleeping peacefully when someone entered her bedroom and took the covers from the bed. She was waking up when someone blindfolded her and tied her hands behind her back. 'It's happened,' she thought. 'Someone has won the estate in a game of conquest. I'm the lady of the estate and part of the prize.'
Whoever it was grabbed her ankles and pulled her to the edge of the bed. She was face down with her legs spread. 'Do you like what you see?' she thought. Her nightgown had slid up past her panties. 'Do you want what's in them?'
Someone ran his hands up the back of her legs with his thumbs on her inner thighs. He did it again and again. He did it calmly and lightly. It wasn't the caresses that affected her. It wasn't the caresses that were making her sigh. It was the calm assurance behind them. Someone knew she was an aristocratic lady, and she belonged to the conqueror. Someone knew he could have everything if he treated her with kindness and consideration. If he treated her well, Cissy would offer her charms. If he continued to treat her well, Cissy would offer her allegiance. Her heart was optional, but it was possible.
Someone was treating her well. He caressed her lightly until she accepted the inevitable. She was face down with her feet off the bed. She wiggled towards him until her calves were off the bed with him between them. She wiggled towards him again until he was between her thighs. She was obviously offering herself. She wiggled again until she was pressing her warm, soft self against him. 'I'm valuable,' she thought. 'You want to keep me.' She was blindfolded and her hands were tied behind her back, but she was not gagged. He wanted to hear the noises Cissy Black made.
A rough voice told her to spread her legs wider. She knew he only wanted to see her offer herself. She opened her legs wider.
He did hear the noises Cissy Black made when someone parted her folds and worked his way into her depths. He did feel the way Cissy Black yielded when someone entered her. 'I can't take this too seriously,' he thought. 'She's wiggling to save herself. I can enjoy the way she wiggles, though. Wiggle for me, sweetheart,' he thought. 'Let me see if I can last through the pretend phase of her wiggles. She's a conquered aristocrat. She'll yield.'
'Yes,' he thought as he felt her become slick with sweat and her moves become slower and more sinuous. Her noises became higher in pitch. He felt her muscles as she groaned and writhed on his invasion. They were locked together in a desperate struggle. There were the last cries and spasms of a defeated province. Her struggling ceased. She lay under him...invaded and taken...limp with her surrender. He tasted sweetness.
He came into Narcissa like the tide: sweeping over the beach, sloshing like waves, riding higher and higher, pulsing in the ancient rhythm, covering the landscape with foam.
Narcissa thought it was over. She had surrendered and she had been taken. It was time for her conqueror to hold her and comfort her and let her bond with him. She felt him slide out of her. Too quickly for her to react, someone untied her hands, placed her on her back, and retied her hands over her head. He climbed back on the bed. 'Did I do well enough that he wants me again?' she thought. 'I'm safe. He'll keep me as his lady.' Then she realized it might not be the same person. 'Not two of them,' she thought, but before she could close her legs someone was between them.
'It's a terrible trick,' she thought. 'One of them had possessed her while the other watched.' She blushed with shame. 'One of them had invaded her and overwhelmed her until she moaned and writhed for their viewing pleasure. They had calmly observed her most intimate moments.'
She felt the other one entering her.
'It's the first one's turn to watch,' she thought. 'What does he like? Does he like seeing a cock part my hairy slit and plunge deep inside me to reappear wet and glistening? Does he like the vee shape of my thighs? Does he like the other view...the soles of my feet, my hips with the crack between them, my pink pucker, the shaft moving in and out of me? Does he like my sighs and squishy wet noise? Does he like watching the one on top of me have fun?'
'I'll show you fun. Want to watch a pureblood? Watch my legs go up. Watch me groan as your friend slams into me. Don't you wish you were the one driving me wild? Don't you wish you were the one making me lose control, making me yell and thrash as you had your way with me? Wouldn't you like to be the one between my legs as I arch my back and moan just before I yield, just before I do it? Yes, get jealous. Watch the lucky one on top of me as I wrap my legs around him and pull him into me. Watch as I make him lose it and squirt into me. Don't you wish you were your friend?'
'Your friend on top of me wishes he was you. He wishes he was watching this, watching his friend drive a lady wild, watching his friend get the ride of his life, watching his friend make a lady moan and squirm, watching his friend gush into her, watching her as she realizes she's going to have an orgasm.'
Narcissa shone. Her weapon was her lust-enhanced beauty. Her advantage was her surrender. Her victory was experiencing sex as never before and taking her captors with her. They romped like the first and last couple on earth. Their sex shot through them, leaving nothing else. They collapsed. Surely, Narcissa had prevailed.
The rope and blindfold disappeared. Narcissa was alone in her well-lit bedroom with Lucius.
"Oh, sweetheart," she said, wrapping herself around him. "That was wonderful."
"Are you okay?" he asked.
She held him until her heartbeat returned to normal. "Let's shower together, love."
Later, between fresh sheets, she held him and ran her fingers through his hair. 'I have the best husband,' she thought as she fell asleep.
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35 Reviews | 6.97/10 Average
Something tells me that even though they have screwed their way around and been screwed, in many ways and on different levels, our tomcat protagonists will land on their feet again, and continue on their salacious, precarious ways--excellent, vivacious tale! Brazen and titillating, brash and intriguing! Thank you so much!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thank you very much for your close reading of the text and your sympathetic reviews of this revisionist tale.It is satisfying that our two rascals have won a place in your heart (at least, I hope they have).It was a wild story.
“I think you made Mummy do the pussy dance.”--lol! Yes, Pansy, Uncle Lucius did, as will he make you--brilliantly precocious and irresistable, can't help but think of Lolita! But it seems Lucius is wrong about Natalie being content to settling for going back to her husband, she's back for more, which he willingly complies with as well as Severus for Hermione--again, love the parallel, synonomous narrative going on, and titillating erotic, and the undercurrent of the jewel plotline--fantastic chapter, as always!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
The narrative continues to be outrageous although perhaps no more outrageous than what people think but dare not speak or write. Lucius seems to be an adaptable soul, and he is adapting to the Parkinsons. Glad you are amused.You are correct. Natalie and Hermione have something the two wizards crave. In return, the two wizards are willing to perform the pagan rituals that keep the women happy.
Severus and Hermione have finally discovered each other, fully, and neither is complaining; indeed, they can't get enough of each other. Some things transcend the professor/student labels, as they have quite happily and satisfactorily discovered! Love the parallel commentary and actions. Meanwhile, Lucius and Natalie have moved forward in their getting to know each other; for what he needs, a mundane seems to be making him quite content, and she is discovering another side to a labeled dark wizard. Love the clinical narrative commentary of the biological parts actions and reactions being made during the copulation scenes--it's refreshing in its factuality, as well as very candid furry slits and such--brings a level of honesty and truth, rarely found, while at the same time titillating. The voyeuristic entity of the photograph, the daughter witnessing her mother in sexual acts, is quite a risque, erotic element and technique. Moderation, what's that?--lol! I believe each have gone beyond the limitations of virtue. Fantastic chapter, as always!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Hermione puts herself in his way. She teases him. He teases her. Amorous horseplay. It gets out of hand.Hermione's discovering that Lucius and Severus have been misjudged. From her point of view, they are more ethical than her friends. They would never copy her homework.Natalie's discovering there is less difference between the Death Eaters and Ministry than she thought. Lucius has good intentions, at least toward his own class. The movement has betrayed him.The challenge was whether or not a clinical description could be erotic, and the photographs push the narrative beyond the limits of good taste.
Ah, so Severus and Draupadi are giving it a go of sorts? He does seem tobe taming her shrew a bit... but will it endure? They both come across as very stubborn and set in their ways; however, it is new territory for both and this might allow some newfound freedom and creativity to spring forth from their combined chemistry... Meanwhile poor Hermione is suffering the first pangs of true jealousy as reality and accusations and recriminations are ebbing and flowing around--she sees herself and Lucius and Narcissa in a new, uncomfortable light. Great chapter, as always!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Once again, a close examination of the text. Draupadi is replanning her life, and she doesn't mind making plans for others too. On the good side, she is telling Severus he doesn't have to be trapped in his current existence, and she holds his skill in potions in higher regard than any power struggle.The chapter tries to depict a Hermione who is unprepared for the feelings she is having. Bookworms are capable of deeper emotions than most people realize. Almost hidden, the plot is advancing.
Love the simultaneous narrative and dynamics between Lucius and Hermione, and Severus and Narcissa, being depicted--truly brilliant and truly a unique reading experience! And then, Severus seems to still have some unfinished business with Mrs Nott... their situation has a sad twang to it compared to his more honest and open interaction with Narcissa. Perhaps Mrs Nott seems to have different kinds of barriers around her, a strong one being her own mentality--will Severus be strong enough, determined enough, to break through it, nurture soemthing else in its place, and at what cost to him, her? Great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Truly, a deep reading of the text. Severus and Narcissa are having a casual affair while Drapaudi faces a major change in her life. Her emotions are undermining her plans.The simultaneous narrative was an experiment.The plot stumbles forward.
Love how Lucius and Severus have a very unconditional, balanced, comfortable friendship--they accept each other and wish to help the other one out; there's a lovely camaraderie between them that layers on and enhances each one's situation--their ruminating over the witches in their lives. Narcissa may have the best husband, but he definitely seems to have the best wife; they are both very patient and very tolerant and vey open in a unique, at times seductively whimsical, way. They truly know and trust each other, including and beyond their engaging, genuine love-making. Great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Glad you like the two rascals. One might ask where their loyalties lie. One might ask if they have any loyalties to lie anywhere. Except, they stand by their friends, family, and loved ones.The Malfoys at play. They are beset on all sides in a violent society, and a group could have conquered the Manor. Cissy sets out to win over the conquerer. She is fighting for her life and the life of her son as best she can. Failure means execution at dawn. The Malfoys play close to the edge.
It is rather touching experiencing Severus' thoughts and feelings and sensations in such a way--there is something heartwrenching about his intimacy with his 'friend';everything has been stripped down to his human need to be touched and wanted, and wanting to touch, make love, and be needed. But then, I feel it would always be a novelty of sorts for someone like Severus who'd been so deprived most of his life of any warmth & liberating interaction of an intimate nature or such... Then there's Lucius, whose awareness and reaction to those he's attracted to seems quite beyond his control, barely--his sensual senses are heightened--Narcissa as well seems to be aware of his natural inclinations towards others, being something more than genteel manners... Hmm, things might get too rocky for our bad boy!
Lovely and engaging chapter, which way will Lucius' choices lead? He seemed to have it all, but now has discovered the unknown with the Grangers. And Severus seems lost but is learning how to take a chance and experience the tangible... Great chapter!
It is rather touching experiencing Severus' thoughts and feelings and sensations in such a way--there is something heartwrenching about his intimacy with his 'friend';everything has been stripped down to his human need to be touched and wanted, and wanting to touch, make love, and be needed. But then, I feel it would always be a novelty of sorts for someone like Severus who'd been so deprived most of his life of any warmth & liberating interaction of an intimate nature or such... Then there's Lucius, whose awareness and reaction to those he's attracted to seems quite beyond his control, barely--his sensual senses are heightened--Narcissa as well seems to be aware of his natural inclinations towards others, being something more than genteel manners... Hmm, things might get too rocky for our bad boy! Lovely and engaging chapter, which way will Lucius' choices lead? He seemed to have it all, but now has discovered the unknown with the Grangers. And Severus seems lost but is learning how to take a chance and experience the tangible... Great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
The first part tries to portray Severus discovering he is attracted to a friend that he admires professionally and his overcoming his internal barriers. The woman is determined and is not taking no for an answer. There are external barriers since he admires her husband.The attraction is deep enough that Lucius rushes to the lady's defense even though she has rejected him. Much to his distress, the whole thing becomes an entanglement with the other family members.Meanwhile, the plot stumbles forward.
Mmmm... yes, what's a bad boy Uncle Lucius to do? Love the photographs point of view and view of the couple couplingLucius has gone deeper into trying to fill something missing in his life that Natalie triggered, but Vivian has given him opportunity-- bitch that she is and now his bitch--to experience some other level of fulfillment. He's mellowed on one level only to intensify on another. His bad boy fire has not been extinguished only fueled. Again, I love your erotic detail with each character and his/her perception of himself/herself preceding, during, and following sexual acts--it's deliciously brash, truthful, and brazen--holding the mirror up to human needs, thoughts and action. Can't wait to see how much further Lucius will go into the deeper pit. Excellent, engaging chapter, as always!(p.s. Not sure if my message through TPP got to an active email account or not, but just want to thank you for your generous suggestion for an outcome, etc.--honoured and truly, deeply appreciate it!)
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Devastated by rejection, Lucius dives into a new experience. This might be the true Lucius, not distorted by the lens of canon. Likewise, the life of photographs may encompass more than canon can conceive. Brash and brazen? The narrative is outrageous.PS: You are welcome.
Brilliant Prologue--intriguing and magical to its very core!Merlin's hairy balls, how have I not read this? Uff! Love the mysterious young wizard clandestinely warning Lucius; Lucius having a change of heart about Muggles shown by his interaction with the non-magical mother. Love the brisk, engaging, intriguing pace and switch of scenes; Lucius wondering what a kite was (lol!) while checking the accounts with Narcissa nearby reading some erotica and contemplating them, and the simultaneous eroticism being depicted interchangeably in each one's inner thoughts culminating in their intense and deliciously descriptive, raw and honest love-making--brilliant *fans self*--another yummy gem of a tale to savour and enjoy! YAY!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thank you very much. The prologue drives the story although our wizards stumble through the plot haphazardly enough that it's not obvious they're getting anywhere - heroes I can relate to. The changing scenes introduce most of the characters and set things in motion. Lucius, it seems, is too intelligent and perceptive to be a true believer. Recent events have caused him to re-evaluate things.
From beginning to end, that was a damn amusing read.The wife's best friend bit, as pointed out above, was a perfect summation of the characters of the two men as you painted them.They've saved the world, and realize they have to face their angry ladies... perfect.The ability to make me see these two philanderers as romantics... priceless.I was also very amused by the comparison of Dumbledore and Voldemort. Truth be told, I had started reading this (as a result of a click on the Random Story link) but didn't really get why Lucius was so into Natalie Granger when he was so obviously with Narcissa, so I left off. The second time the Random Story link brought me here, I realized I was curious where you were going with this, so I kept reading. I'm glad I did. I was heartily entertained.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Glad you enjoyed it and commented. For someone who initially didn't care for the story, you managed to grasp its essentials.I am rather proud of the best-friend line.Facing their angry ladies is as close as this story gets to poetic justice and personal growth.There is a standard comic set-up: I was never so fond of Miss B as when I was with Miss A, and I was never so fond of Miss A as when I was with Miss B. This story and our characters don't go there - they are too romantic for that.In comparing Voldemort and Dumbledore, canon presents both sides as incompetent enough that I can't take them seriously - neither do Lucius and Severus.Yes, Lucius and Narcissa obviously belong together, but Lucius has this incredible character flaw that he shares with his best friend, Severus.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Glad you enjoyed it and commented. For someone who initially didn't care for the story, you managed to grasp its essentials.I am rather proud of the best-friend line.Facing their angry ladies is as close as this story gets to poetic justice and personal growth.There is a standard comic set-up: I was never so fond of Miss B as when I was with Miss A, and I was never so fond of Miss A as when I was with Miss B. This story and our characters don't go there - they are too romantic for that.In comparing Voldemort and Dumbledore, canon presents both sides as incompetent enough that I can't take them seriously - neither do Lucius and Severus.Yes, Lucius and Narcissa obviously belong together, but Lucius has this incredible character flaw that he shares with his best friend, Severus.
And the gentlemen end up together, toasting their victory. The heroic trio whose spirits were united hurled a hefty hex. They nigh on cracked the firmament with their valorous whoop: “VoldemortEatShit.”lololololololNow if only JKR had thought to write such a witty ending to the Wizarding warring. Sigh. Instead, she chose to off one of your major protagonists. Perhaps you could write him a happy and sexily ironic story?I'm sure that a lot of what you wrote escapes my more mundane mind, but I do hope you write much, much more...
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
I would have said celebrating their stumbling through, but that can count as a victory.
That hex is what everyone is thinking. Why not write it in plain Anglo-Saxon?Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Sly wit and sexy irony. And then: Moody is at the center of an ass-saving exodus. I burst out laughing.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
You are taking this story in the spirit in which it was written. Thank you much.
Can't begin to understand the symbols used in this last chapter, but I enjoyed your story. Thank you for writing
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Glad you enjoyed the story.Would it ease your mind to learn there are no symbols? Since there are no symbols, there is nothing to not understand.
Does this end with all the women, young and older having babies in 9 months? Natalie and the Parkinsons having pale blond-haired children and Drapuadi, Hermione and Narcissa having black-haired ones?
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
No, it ends in the next chapter with Lucius and Severus experiencing personal growth.
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
I liked your ending, too.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thanks for commenting. I admit your ending has its comic and dramatic possibilities.
Whew! I certainly wasn't expecting that last chapter to pan out like it did. That was insanely funny! As in laugh out loud funny. Especially since the rest of the fic was so serious in nature, this last little bit threw me for a loop, but I loved how you switched writing styles for this chapter. Well done with this chapter and the fic as a whole!
P.S. You've left me feeling a little embarassed and slightly duped. I was taking the whole fic so seriously and in the end it was really just a light-hearted romp. Way to go for pulling a fast one over on me like that!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for all the reviews.
Hope you don’t mind an extended response.
Comedy is difficult to end. A Tragedy ends with death and a Romance with marriage, but in comedy, the characters live and thrive. The last chapter ends the mystery-of-the-jewel segment of their lives. It fits the last chapter to treat the relationships in a light-hearted manner, but the two wizards are more concerned about their ladies than they are with the battle between Good and Evil for half the world’s magic.
Duped? Perhaps not. The story does not believe that only the relationship of a couple is serious and acceptable: It’s quite possible that Narcissa is a dedicated wife, doting mother, and devoted mistress; Natalie needs her wizard; Vivian has her proper companion; Draupadi has found the love of her life; Pansy and Hermione have made the correct choices for their soul mates; and the actions of Lucius and Severus are for the best. Lucius has thought this through. Severus thinks he will not live to see the consequences of his good intentions.
Glad you noticed the change in style. The first half of the chapter is loquacious; the second half is medieval-epic. The battle for the jewel is intended to be strict canon even though the writing style is different from the original novels.
lol only a couple of dubius men would equate cheating on their wives with their best friend as a compliment to both! A strange ending, but fitting.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thanks.
I am rather proud of that line – two unrepentant romantics – hence, evil to the core.
Great chapter. I loved the similarity yet duality of the juxtaposition of Hermione's and Natalie's relationships. Very well written and masterfully presented.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thank you very much.
Yes, duality is part of the story with relationships and scenes having a mirror image.
So complicated, intense and beautiful. Still amazing.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thank you very much.
I tried hard to write a tangled, deep, and lovely story. It is difficult to sustain: I’m always afraid the next chapter will let the reader down.
Fleeting happiness with various partners, how sad. Wasn't Severus thinking that he wanted Narcissa? I know it was their last fling. What is Narcissa thinking? She wants to see how Lucius and Hermione get along with a thought to Hermione living with them as a "daughter?" Intense acting skills will be needed there. Are these people really that self absorbed or that needy for affection. Perhaps they (Lucius, Severus, Narcissa, Draupadi, Mrs. Parkinson, Natalie, and Hermione) all do not belong in the same category. In my humble opinion, Hermione is in way, way over her head just by lack of experience alone. Yikes. What more could happen. This is kind of like Peyton Place (TV soap to give credit to the name). I am afraid of what will happen in the next chapter, but I want it anyway.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thanks for reviewing.
Narcissa wants to have a daughter with Lucius, not Hermione as a daughter.
Needy? We’ve arrived at a hectic point in their lives. Draupadi has lived alone for the last fifteen years. So has Severus, unless canon has been hiding something from us. Natalie has been alone for at least a year. Vivian is realizing she has been abandoned. For the first time in her life, a girl of seventeen finds someone who challenges her, understands her, finds her attractive, takes her seriously, treats her kindly, and deals with her fairly—heady stuff for a geek. Of course, he’s a villain. Drat.
I’m glad you’re awaiting the next chapter, even though it’s with trepidation.
Ahhh, I just love this fic so much. The relationships between your characters are so complex and multi-faceted. It's great fun to read. Wonderful job.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thanks for following the story. While writing, I kept thinking that a complex portrayal would pull people OOC (out-of-caricature).
Well, the men have got it bad. Hermione certainly seems to have come around to accepting the Malfoys after they rescued her and her mother. I wonder if Lucius will pursue Natalie again and leave Hermione to Severus. Narcissa either has a vivid imagination, has been reading too many romance books, or Lucius is really good with sexual spells.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thanks for reviewing. Glad you're interested in the story and the characters.
I am really enjoying this fic. I can't wait to see how the opal is going to affect the outcome of this story. I love Lucius's internal debate before he has sex, or lusts after someone. Funny and sexy. Very interesting.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Correct on both counts. Lucius and Severus consider their actions. (Draupadi delivers her opinion on that in a later chapter.) The influence of the opal waxes and wanes, but it will finally dominate the story. Thanks for reviewing.
I don't really know which way is up in this story--and I find that I rather like that confusion. Great job!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
I couldn’t have hoped for a better review. Thank you.
(I’m serious. This is something of a spoiler but I’m fond of stories where the scenes appear disconnected but are actually tightly knit.)
Now, that's a twisted tale you're spinning. I'm curious to see where you're leading us.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
I can tell you where it’s going. The second half of the last chapter will be a chanson de geste. Thanks for reviewing