Flying High and Taking Account
Chapter 2 of 9
FairfieldLo, how the mighty have fallen.
Chapter 2: Flying High and Taking Account
"Oh, hi, Lucius. You're early. Good. Is it okay if we skip tea? I'm afraid the wind will die on us."
He liked her enthusiasm. "That's fine with me, Natalie. Let's get the kites in the air."
It was Saturday morning. There was only a light breeze, but she had brought four kites...two for a light wind and two for a heavy wind. As she explained the mechanics, he got the impression that the rest of the world vanished for her. There was Lucius, the kites, and the wind. After they had flown the two light kites, she wanted to try a heavy kite. Lucius would have to run to get this kite high enough to fly in the stronger upper wind. As he sat on the ground catching his wind after the third unsuccessful attempt, he was tempted to sneak out his wand and send the sucker soaring. But they were finally successful by mundane methods, and Natalie was hopping with glee.
As he played out the string, she reached over to make adjustments and help. He watched the kite as her arms entangled with his. He watched the kite as he inhaled the fragrance of her hair. He watched the kite as her hip pressed against him, as her breast brushed him. He focused on the kite.
"You don't have to grip the string that tightly, Lucius," she told him.
He reluctantly quit for lunch.
Natalie beamed. "I was afraid you wouldn't like kites."
The two of them nibbled at their lunch, hardly aware there was food in front of them.
Lucius was aware of the lurker in the corner of the restaurant. He was hard to ignore, in fact. 'Easy enough to flush out,' thought Lucius. He told Natalie he would be back and walked briskly to the lavatory, as briskly as if he were trying to escape. Yes, here came the lurker.
Lucius stepped out of the doorway. "Well, well, Edward Goyle. What brings you to this part of London?"
"You startled me, sir."
"I suppose I did. Is the Dark Lord having you trail me?"
"Umm."
"It's quite all right. You're only doing your job. The Dark Lord is unhappy about the battle at the Ministry."
"It wasn't your fault, sir. You tried to take a bunch of brats alive, and then the damned Order showed up." Edward continued, "Do you know who that is, sir? That's Mrs. Granger. Isn't it dangerous to be around her?"
"Yes, possibly," said Lucius. "But I'm trying to spy on the enemy. She may let things slip that her daughter knows."
"That's brave of you, sir, but I think you're taking an awful chance. The Dark Lord might get suspicious, and those Order blokes are mean bastards."
"Look, Edward, you can help by not following us quite so closely. Don't worry about losing us. We'll be easy to track. She'll either want to put the kite in the air again, heaven forbid, or she'll want a coffee. You should be able to remain out of sight and still follow us."
Edward nodded his agreement. He would do his best.
Natalie wanted to go someplace quiet for lemonade.
"Did that dusty old box you bought the other day have anything worthwhile in it?" she asked.
"It's mementos from better times," he said.
She looked quizzical.
"Hadley and his friend Iverson were the Arithmancy instructors at Hogwarts for most of the nineteenth century."
"The school was larger then," she said.
"And more vigorous," he added. "The courses were tougher. Our Arithmancy department was world class."
"I remember reading about them," she said. "I looked for Hadley since you had mentioned him. There's a chapter about the two of them in one of the books I bought. They liked the ladies."
"Everything declined when Iverson died," he said. "He was younger, but he died fifteen years before Hadley. Hadley was still a competent instructor, but he gave up research and devoted himself to Druid Numerology. He said he was on the trail of something, but most people think he missed Iverson."
"Did Hadley teach until he died?" asked Natalie. "Did he continue like the history instructor?"
"No, he retired five years before his death. He didn't want to do a ghost of departed quantities number."
She kicked his shins.
She noticed his sad and wistful look. 'Is wizard society in decline? He really cares,' she thought.
Inevitably, the conversation came around to Mrs. Granger's major concern: the dark forces facing her daughter. Lucius decided to give a neutral account of the Dark Lord's rise, his sudden fall, and his struggles with Harry.
Lucius had just described the unfortunate meeting of Voldemort and baby Harry.
"Okay," said Natalie. "The Dark Lord gets zapped, but as I understand things, the wizard community didn't get any permanent satisfaction out of it."
"Uh ... yeah," said Lucius.
Natalie's brow furrowed. "Did the Dark Lord lay dormant until Harry Potter reentered the wizard world? Is there some connection between them?"
Lucius nodded agreement. He provided her with what he thought both sides knew about the encounter of the Dark Lord and baby Harry and its aftereffects. He ended with, "The question is, 'Why didn't the curse kill Voldemort?'"
"Really?" said Natalie. "I thought the question would be why the curse nearly killed him. Everyone knows the rebound is weaker than the original cast." She considered it more deeply. "It's much weaker if the collision is sticky. Clay and putty hardly rebound at all. Didn't some of the curse stick to Potter? He got a scar, parseltongue, a psychic connection with Voldemort, and apparently lots of power."
She thought for a while. "Do curses rebound? Is it just off people or off walls, too? Is a duel in a closed room dangerous?"
"I don't know," said Lucius. "We only know that Potter was impervious to this curse."
'And stop looking at me like that,' he thought. 'I feel stupid enough already.'
"We could investigate," said Natalie. "No, I couldn't, could I."
'A natural born experimental scientist,' thought Lucius.
"There's the curse of intelligence," said Natalie.
"We don't have that one," he said. 'That didn't come out quite right,' he thought.
"We'll find some wizards impervious to intelligence," said Natalie.
"We have those," he said.
"We'll blast them with the curse of intelligence, and when it rebounds, we'll get smarter and smarter."
'Wicked sense of humor, lady,' he thought.
Natalie sipped her lemonade.
'There should be a place in the wizard world for Natalie Granger,' thought Lucius Malfoy. 'It would improve things ... and she's cute.'
Natalie looked serious. "Lucius, I had a great time today. I've had a wonderful time, and it has caused me to be unfair to you."
"I don't understand," he said.
"When I met you, I had no idea who you were. I enjoyed your company, and I wanted to see you again. But I mentioned you to my daughter. She's hysterical. I half expect her to be lurking around here keeping an eye on me." Natalie took a breath. "She told me terrible things about you...things I wouldn't believe if my own daughter hadn't told me."
"The wizard world has been at war," he said. "I have done damage to the other side. And there's more than that. The people on my side have behaved badly, very badly...I among them."
"Lucius, I intended to show up today out of politeness, spend a short time flying kites, and say goodbye. I didn't intend to spend all day with you having fun. I'm treating you terribly. You've been nice to me while I've been thinking horrible things about you. But I can't ignore my own daughter."
The confrontation became too difficult for Mrs. Granger to sustain. "Lucius, I can't see you anymore. Goodbye."
Natalie Granger dashed out of the shop to be swallowed by the London transportation system and whisked out of sight.
'That was abrupt,' thought Lucius. 'She forgot her kites.' He was still in the numb state before all the pain hits.
Lucius was aware of a presence at his elbow.
"Mr. Malfoy, sir, the lady didn't leave too happy."
"Standard spy craft, Edward. Anyone shadowing us would find it difficult to believe that we'll have more clandestine meetings."
Edward Goyle nodded sagely.
As Mrs. Granger was running out the restaurant door alone, Severus was strolling with Mrs. Nott through one of her greenhouses. When they stopped to admire a spectacular fern, Draupadi took Severus's hand.
"You always struck me as a lady who's both warm and regal," he found himself saying.
He then found himself holding Draupadi...full court press. He became numb to the rest of the world as he stroked her hair. 'Is she crying?' he wondered.
The next day after lunch, Lucius kept his pressing engagement with the Parkinsons. He couldn't cry off even though he was now in the numb state from the pain of Natalie's leaving.
"I hate this stuff, and I don't see where it's going to do me any good," said Pansy.
"That's understandable," said Lucius kindly. "Only specialists in certain fields use it. A few years after leaving school you won't remember any of it. You won't want to."
"Huh?" said Pansy. A mellow Uncle Lucius was something new to her.
"What would you like to do your sixth and seventh years?" he asked.
"Well, Charms and Dark Arts," said Pansy. "I'm thinking of Potions because it will look good. I don't want to do Potions for a living."
"Right," said Lucius. "It will make you look competent. Your family is well-off, but you might like living an independent life in London for a while."
Pansy looked pleased at the thought. 'She would love to get out from under her mother's thumb,' thought Lucius.
"Doing well in Charms and Dark Arts and Potions should make you employable," he said. "There're pros and cons to taking Arithmancy. If you complete it successfully, it will make you look very competent, but we don't want it to hurt your performance in the other subjects."
"I'm not having any trouble in Charms and the Dark Arts," she said. "If I work at it, I can do the routine stuff in Potions. I'll never create anything in it."
'That was Severus's assessment,' thought Lucius.
'Uncle Lucius is certainly easy to talk to today,' she thought.
"It's the same with Arithmancy. I can plug and chug even though it's dreary. But I don't want to bust my brain on the hard stuff," she said.
Lucius waited, remembering that Natalie hated Calculus.
"Maybe I'll try all four subjects my sixth year," said Pansy.
"Okay," said Lucius. "Do you have your fourth year book here? We can cover a little bit today."
Pansy went to her room to get the book. Lucius knew that her third year in Arithmancy had been a smashing success, but the fourth year emphasized spatial relationships...the downfall of many. He remembered her parents after her third year: our daughter, the Arithmancy star. Young Pansy had basked in their pride. Then her marks had slipped to mediocre. 'Poor girl,' he thought. 'That must have hurt. Her mother was not the type to hide her disappointment. It might be kinder to get her out of Arithmancy.'
Lucius realized he was treating Pansy the way he wanted to treat Natalie. He wondered how Natalie was in spatial relationships. He wondered how she was in special relationships. 'I'll never know,' he sighed.
Lucius helped Pansy through a few problems, heard her school adventures, and listened as she carried on about her mother's latest weird hobby. Her mother had bought a mundane computer to help with the accounts.
"I wish Mum wouldn't do that. People talk about us," said Pansy.
'Ah, yes, a socially proper schoolgirl and her eccentric mother,' thought Lucius. He knew Vivian Parkinson did unusual things and then became defensive, even bitchy, about them. He reflected that Mr. Parkinson appeared in no hurry to return from the continent.
They quit well before tea. Pansy went to visit her friends after a hard session in Arithmancy, and Lucius went to examine the computer. He had heard stories about programming, and it struck him as similar to Arithmancy. Vivian Parkinson showed him how to start the computer and call up the interactive program. Yes, it was similar to Arithmancy. He had computed some large factorials and found the area under the sine curve when he noticed that Vivian was getting impatient. Lucius closed his Arithmancy programs and brought up the spread sheet to enter the Parkinson accounts.
Lo, how the mighty have fallen.
Vivian was standing behind Lucius as he entered the figures and played with the program. "I think Pansy learned a lot and had a good time today," she said.
Lucius, intent on the program, merely nodded.
Vivian adjusted Lucius's collar. "You would have made a good father for her."
He gently shook his head. He thought he had been a poor father to his son. He had modeled himself after his own father...a right cold bastard if there ever was one.
"Oops," he said. He had entered some figures into the wrong column.
"I'm sorry," she said. "I distracted you. I should leave you alone." She knew he preferred to work alone.
"No," he said. "You should stay and double check my entries. This is slow going, but we'll get everything recorded. It might take several sessions, though."
Vivian stood behind Lucius with her hands on his shoulders and checked his entries. 'I like this Lucius,' she thought. She had no idea that he was treating her the way he wished he was treating Natalie.
His behavior was having its effect on Vivian. He was only a few years older, but she and a number of other relatives and friends thought of him as Uncle Lucius. She had had naughty thoughts about Uncle Lucius. They had led to damp panties and moaning in the night. Now, he had prompted her daughter into success at Arithmancy, he had her daughter glowing with his kindness, he was helping her get through these atrocious accounts, he was letting her participate, and to top it off, he was acting like a boy with a new toy. She had always thought Uncle Lucius needed and deserved extra attention. He seemed approachable today, and a little innocent cuddling wouldn't hurt anyone.
"You seem tense," she said. "Let me rub your shoulders."
"It's all right. I'm okay," he said.
"Of course you're okay," she said. "But you've done a lot for Pansy and me. I should do something for you. It'll help you relax."
Lucius wasn't certain he wanted to relax. He was keeping the pain from Mrs. Granger under tight control. But Vivian was already rubbing his shoulders, and he didn't want to be unfriendly. The day had gone well with Pansy and Vivian. He needed something to go well.
Vivian felt him relax as she massaged his shoulders. It was great doing something for Uncle Lucius. It was great getting her hands on Uncle Lucius. Would he mind if she chastely kissed his flowing hair? Would he mind if she chastely placed her breasts against him? Would he mind if her breasts grew perky from the contact and her nipples pressed against her bra? A chaste kiss on his forehead that let him feel her perky breasts should be okay.
Lucius wondered if Vivian meant all the things she was doing. He was willing to take the chance. The pain from Natalie was overwhelming enough that Vivian's rejection wouldn't have any effect. The pain from Natalie was sharp enough that any distraction would be welcome. Lucius placed his hand on Vivian's. 'Okay, so far,' he thought as Vivian took his hand. Lucius pulled Vivian around to sit on his lap. Now she could chastely embrace him, kiss him on his lips, and press her breasts against him.
A little later, a little flustered, she blurted out, "Hope you don't mind my fat ass."
'Oh my, this is awkward,' she thought.
That left Lucius groping, not for naughty touches, but a suitable reply. "It's only a little bigger than Narcissa's," didn't seem appropriate. He managed to say. "You're a mature woman, not a little girl. And it's not fat."
That appeared to satisfy Vivian. "What would my daughter think?" she said.
"If she saw you sitting in my lap?"
"Yes."
"Your daughter's perceptive. She would think you found someone who likes you, who finds you attractive."
"Flatterer."
Lucius, trying to fill the void Natalie had left in his life, said, "It's the simple truth. Look at what you did with the computer. You researched them, brought one home, and made it work. Very few witches can do that."
"I was afraid you'd condemn me for a having a mundane apparatus, Lucius. What's happening to you?" She leaned over. Their breath mingled. "Are you getting mellow, Lucius? Are you becoming approachable?"
"I'm always approachable," he said, grazing her lips with his.
"No, most of the time you're scary...dominating and scary. I was always afraid of the terrible things you'd make me do if you got your hands on me."
"Terrible things?"
"Things my husband wouldn't like...terrible things."
"Terrible things? You mean getting you to relax as I stroked your temples like this?"
"Yes."
"You mean my holding you in my lap and expecting you to give me your soft, warm kisses as you're doing now?"
"Mmm. Yes."
"You mean holding you and admiring you," he said.
"Do you really? You know I'm a bitch."
'Yes, Vivian's a bitch, but I don't have to live with her,' thought Lucius. "I may not mind?" he said, cuddling her.
That amount of reassurance had her embracing him and nuzzling him as she flicked out her tongue. He had always thought Vivian had a nice figure. Now its warmth and firm softness was in his lap. 'I wouldn't mind having her,' he thought, 'but I have to be careful. Vivian, the bitch, would love to be a tease. I'll have to let her trap herself and then walk around later remembering how she writhed for me.'
A flushed Vivian looked at Lucius and gasped out, "You can't want me. I'm a bitch. Ask my husband."
Lucius held her affectionately, kissed her softly, and spoke gently. "I don't have to ask your husband. Would you like to be my bitch?"
He continued to speak gently. "Unbutton my trousers, sweetheart. Take my prick. Like that. Yes, kiss me like that. You're a beautiful and intelligent woman, Vivian. I want to have you. I'll take you like a bitch. I'll take you like the sweet, loving bitch you are."
She moved to the floor, unfastened his trousers, and took him between her lips. A minute later, Vivian looked up from the cock she had hard and glistening. She was on her knees looking at the man she had always regarded as Uncle Lucius. 'He really is going to have me', she thought. 'He really is going to make me be unfaithful.'
"Stand up, darling." She stood up.
"Take off your panties, Vivian." Vivian dropped her panties, lifted her skirt and straddled him.
He grabbed her hair. Then, to her shock, he kissed her gently, very gently. He continued his caressing kisses until she returned them. Only then did he begin his entrance. Once her folds were parted, he did nothing but give her the lightest of caresses with his lips. He let Vivian Parkinson look at him, look at him with open mouth and eyes, look at him as she opened for him, look at him as she made the intimate sounds of a married woman penetrated by a family friend.
'He's making me do it,' she thought, as she moaned with the spicy thrill of giving herself to Uncle Lucius. 'I'm a lonely woman, and he's taking advantage of me.'
'I don't live with her, and I don't have to put up with any of her bitchiness,' thought Lucius as he grabbed Vivian's shapely ass and wedged himself between her lovely thighs.
Vivian responded to his hard look, his possessive hands, and his demanding moves. It wasn't her fault that Uncle Lucius was being a bad boy and making her be unfaithful. It wasn't her fault that Uncle Lucius was making her perform like a sex-starved bimbo. It wasn't her fault that Uncle Lucius was driving her wild. It wasn't her fault that Uncle Lucius was turning her insides into cream pudding. It wasn't her fault that Uncle Lucius made her pussy dance.
After she recovered her breath, she glared at him. "Did you have fun? Was I a good fuck?"
He spoke kindly. "You are quite the bitch, aren't you?"
"I said I was. I asked you a question."
"You asked two questions. The answer is 'Not yet.'"
"Not yet?"
"Your husband's been gone for six months. You're lonely. But now that you've had sex, you can say, 'Thanks, Lucius,' and walk away. There was never any relationship."
"How can you say that?" she asked.
"You just scratched an itch." He replied. "There was nothing personal about it."
"You think I just scratched an itch."
"You scratched your itch, and then you were sarcastic about it. There's no affection lost or misplaced."
"That's a fine thing to say to a lady, sitting in your lap, sitting on your prick. Especially when she came for you."
"You liked it, didn't you," he said.
"Yes."
"You want more, don't you?"
"Yes," she said, suddenly breathless.
"You like it that I intend to possess you."
"Do you really want a bitch?" said Vivian.
"I'll show you," said Lucius, taking her to her bedroom.
The photographs of Mr. Parkinson in Vivian's bedroom saw a bad boy place Vivian Parkinson on her bed. They saw her strip and then lie back with her hands above her head as she opened her thighs.
There's nothing quite like seeing your wife spread her legs for someone else.
The photographs saw the bad boy hold Vivian Parkinson down and move up between her legs. They saw her tilt her head back and moan as the hard-faced man pushed into her. When he was completely in, he paused to let her smile shyly at the photographs...the photographs that had witnessed Vivian Parkinson take pleasure in being penetrated and mounted.
The photographs saw the hard-faced man begin the encouraging moves. They saw Vivian Parkinson respond. The photographs saw the bad boy make the moves of coupling. They saw the lady of the house participate.
The photographs had always been curious about Vivian Parkinson's bum during intercourse. They shifted to another frame. There it was: delightfully round and invitingly soft...offered to the bad boy. The sleek and classic bum contrasted nicely with the furry folds in which the bad boy had his rigid shaft. The scene was primal and captivating. It was beyond beauty. The fascinated photographs saw Vivian make a wet spot.
As the photographs shifted to see her face, a trick of light showed them an image of a wasp inserting himself again and again into Vivian Parkinson. Again and again, he stung her nervous system. Her insides turned to liquid; her muscles strained; her back arched in unbearable agony. She gave the photographs a smile to let them know her movements were no longer voluntary...just a lady-like smile before she succumbed to the mind-numbing, convulsion-causing venom. The photographs watched the bad boy ride a lady stung wild.
There's nothing quite like watching someone make your wife squeal
The photographs knew Vivian Parkinson never moved like that for them. They were not pleased, but they could not tear their eyes away.
The photographs had a stern face as our bad boy began the final act of making Vivian Parkinson unfaithful. He let them see him hold her hands above her head with one hand and hold her hip with the other. His eyes swept theirs to make certain they had seen him claim her. He paused to let the photographs see a demure Vivian Parkinson. She deliberately let them see her slowly spread her legs wider.
The photographs disapproved of the bad boy having Vivian Parkinson. Nevertheless, they still shifted to the frames that let them see the bottoms of her feet, her soft ass, and his rod moving in and out of that furry slit. They experienced every plunge into their lady.
The photographs wanted to watch Mrs. Parkinson's face as she let the bad boy have her. They returned to the frames that let them see her adoring look, that let them see her moan as he pushed into her. They saw the bad boy's tension increase. The bad, bad boy pushed all the way into their lady. Their lady gave them a helpless look as the bad boy had her. The photographs shifted to the view of Vivian Parkinson's bum, thighs, and slit...the married slit that engulfed the pumping shaft of a bad boy. The photos saw the wet spot grow larger. The photographs returned to see the content face of an unfaithful wife.
The photographs didn't need to ask. Vivian was good, and Lucius had had fun.
'These images are worth keeping,' thought the photographs in the second before Mrs. Parkinson waved her wand and wiped their memories. These memories were hers to relish. It also occurred to her that the photographs could be shocked the next time she was Uncle Lucius's.
He was just a man and she was certain she could give him an accusing glare. "Have you had your fun, yet?"
Lucius quietly waited out a married woman's you-made-me-be-unfaithful rant. When she finished, Vivian insisted they shower together with special soaps, insisted he wear a matching silk kimono, and insisted he stay for sherry and biscuits.
"You were marvelous, Vivian," he said after they had showered and she appeared calm and receptive. Experience had taught him the value of the amenities, and it pays to be kind to your bitch.
When she brought out the sherry tray, she found him sitting on the couch, perusing the programming manual. He was reading the section on Boolean expressions when she snuggled under his arm and suggested he come over this Wednesday. Pansy's Arithmancy and the household accounts needed more attention. He held Vivian and occasionally paused to nuzzle his new mistress as he delved into the structure of for-loops.
"Boys and their toys," said the lady to herself as she embraced her warm and terrifying Uncle Lucius, the bad boy who had made her be naughty.
'I overdid it,' thought Lucius. 'I meant to cover the hole left by Natalie, not jump into a deeper pit.'
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35 Reviews | 6.97/10 Average
Something tells me that even though they have screwed their way around and been screwed, in many ways and on different levels, our tomcat protagonists will land on their feet again, and continue on their salacious, precarious ways--excellent, vivacious tale! Brazen and titillating, brash and intriguing! Thank you so much!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thank you very much for your close reading of the text and your sympathetic reviews of this revisionist tale.It is satisfying that our two rascals have won a place in your heart (at least, I hope they have).It was a wild story.
“I think you made Mummy do the pussy dance.”--lol! Yes, Pansy, Uncle Lucius did, as will he make you--brilliantly precocious and irresistable, can't help but think of Lolita! But it seems Lucius is wrong about Natalie being content to settling for going back to her husband, she's back for more, which he willingly complies with as well as Severus for Hermione--again, love the parallel, synonomous narrative going on, and titillating erotic, and the undercurrent of the jewel plotline--fantastic chapter, as always!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
The narrative continues to be outrageous although perhaps no more outrageous than what people think but dare not speak or write. Lucius seems to be an adaptable soul, and he is adapting to the Parkinsons. Glad you are amused.You are correct. Natalie and Hermione have something the two wizards crave. In return, the two wizards are willing to perform the pagan rituals that keep the women happy.
Severus and Hermione have finally discovered each other, fully, and neither is complaining; indeed, they can't get enough of each other. Some things transcend the professor/student labels, as they have quite happily and satisfactorily discovered! Love the parallel commentary and actions. Meanwhile, Lucius and Natalie have moved forward in their getting to know each other; for what he needs, a mundane seems to be making him quite content, and she is discovering another side to a labeled dark wizard. Love the clinical narrative commentary of the biological parts actions and reactions being made during the copulation scenes--it's refreshing in its factuality, as well as very candid furry slits and such--brings a level of honesty and truth, rarely found, while at the same time titillating. The voyeuristic entity of the photograph, the daughter witnessing her mother in sexual acts, is quite a risque, erotic element and technique. Moderation, what's that?--lol! I believe each have gone beyond the limitations of virtue. Fantastic chapter, as always!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Hermione puts herself in his way. She teases him. He teases her. Amorous horseplay. It gets out of hand.Hermione's discovering that Lucius and Severus have been misjudged. From her point of view, they are more ethical than her friends. They would never copy her homework.Natalie's discovering there is less difference between the Death Eaters and Ministry than she thought. Lucius has good intentions, at least toward his own class. The movement has betrayed him.The challenge was whether or not a clinical description could be erotic, and the photographs push the narrative beyond the limits of good taste.
Ah, so Severus and Draupadi are giving it a go of sorts? He does seem tobe taming her shrew a bit... but will it endure? They both come across as very stubborn and set in their ways; however, it is new territory for both and this might allow some newfound freedom and creativity to spring forth from their combined chemistry... Meanwhile poor Hermione is suffering the first pangs of true jealousy as reality and accusations and recriminations are ebbing and flowing around--she sees herself and Lucius and Narcissa in a new, uncomfortable light. Great chapter, as always!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Once again, a close examination of the text. Draupadi is replanning her life, and she doesn't mind making plans for others too. On the good side, she is telling Severus he doesn't have to be trapped in his current existence, and she holds his skill in potions in higher regard than any power struggle.The chapter tries to depict a Hermione who is unprepared for the feelings she is having. Bookworms are capable of deeper emotions than most people realize. Almost hidden, the plot is advancing.
Love the simultaneous narrative and dynamics between Lucius and Hermione, and Severus and Narcissa, being depicted--truly brilliant and truly a unique reading experience! And then, Severus seems to still have some unfinished business with Mrs Nott... their situation has a sad twang to it compared to his more honest and open interaction with Narcissa. Perhaps Mrs Nott seems to have different kinds of barriers around her, a strong one being her own mentality--will Severus be strong enough, determined enough, to break through it, nurture soemthing else in its place, and at what cost to him, her? Great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Truly, a deep reading of the text. Severus and Narcissa are having a casual affair while Drapaudi faces a major change in her life. Her emotions are undermining her plans.The simultaneous narrative was an experiment.The plot stumbles forward.
Love how Lucius and Severus have a very unconditional, balanced, comfortable friendship--they accept each other and wish to help the other one out; there's a lovely camaraderie between them that layers on and enhances each one's situation--their ruminating over the witches in their lives. Narcissa may have the best husband, but he definitely seems to have the best wife; they are both very patient and very tolerant and vey open in a unique, at times seductively whimsical, way. They truly know and trust each other, including and beyond their engaging, genuine love-making. Great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Glad you like the two rascals. One might ask where their loyalties lie. One might ask if they have any loyalties to lie anywhere. Except, they stand by their friends, family, and loved ones.The Malfoys at play. They are beset on all sides in a violent society, and a group could have conquered the Manor. Cissy sets out to win over the conquerer. She is fighting for her life and the life of her son as best she can. Failure means execution at dawn. The Malfoys play close to the edge.
It is rather touching experiencing Severus' thoughts and feelings and sensations in such a way--there is something heartwrenching about his intimacy with his 'friend';everything has been stripped down to his human need to be touched and wanted, and wanting to touch, make love, and be needed. But then, I feel it would always be a novelty of sorts for someone like Severus who'd been so deprived most of his life of any warmth & liberating interaction of an intimate nature or such... Then there's Lucius, whose awareness and reaction to those he's attracted to seems quite beyond his control, barely--his sensual senses are heightened--Narcissa as well seems to be aware of his natural inclinations towards others, being something more than genteel manners... Hmm, things might get too rocky for our bad boy!
Lovely and engaging chapter, which way will Lucius' choices lead? He seemed to have it all, but now has discovered the unknown with the Grangers. And Severus seems lost but is learning how to take a chance and experience the tangible... Great chapter!
It is rather touching experiencing Severus' thoughts and feelings and sensations in such a way--there is something heartwrenching about his intimacy with his 'friend';everything has been stripped down to his human need to be touched and wanted, and wanting to touch, make love, and be needed. But then, I feel it would always be a novelty of sorts for someone like Severus who'd been so deprived most of his life of any warmth & liberating interaction of an intimate nature or such... Then there's Lucius, whose awareness and reaction to those he's attracted to seems quite beyond his control, barely--his sensual senses are heightened--Narcissa as well seems to be aware of his natural inclinations towards others, being something more than genteel manners... Hmm, things might get too rocky for our bad boy! Lovely and engaging chapter, which way will Lucius' choices lead? He seemed to have it all, but now has discovered the unknown with the Grangers. And Severus seems lost but is learning how to take a chance and experience the tangible... Great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
The first part tries to portray Severus discovering he is attracted to a friend that he admires professionally and his overcoming his internal barriers. The woman is determined and is not taking no for an answer. There are external barriers since he admires her husband.The attraction is deep enough that Lucius rushes to the lady's defense even though she has rejected him. Much to his distress, the whole thing becomes an entanglement with the other family members.Meanwhile, the plot stumbles forward.
Mmmm... yes, what's a bad boy Uncle Lucius to do? Love the photographs point of view and view of the couple couplingLucius has gone deeper into trying to fill something missing in his life that Natalie triggered, but Vivian has given him opportunity-- bitch that she is and now his bitch--to experience some other level of fulfillment. He's mellowed on one level only to intensify on another. His bad boy fire has not been extinguished only fueled. Again, I love your erotic detail with each character and his/her perception of himself/herself preceding, during, and following sexual acts--it's deliciously brash, truthful, and brazen--holding the mirror up to human needs, thoughts and action. Can't wait to see how much further Lucius will go into the deeper pit. Excellent, engaging chapter, as always!(p.s. Not sure if my message through TPP got to an active email account or not, but just want to thank you for your generous suggestion for an outcome, etc.--honoured and truly, deeply appreciate it!)
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Devastated by rejection, Lucius dives into a new experience. This might be the true Lucius, not distorted by the lens of canon. Likewise, the life of photographs may encompass more than canon can conceive. Brash and brazen? The narrative is outrageous.PS: You are welcome.
Brilliant Prologue--intriguing and magical to its very core!Merlin's hairy balls, how have I not read this? Uff! Love the mysterious young wizard clandestinely warning Lucius; Lucius having a change of heart about Muggles shown by his interaction with the non-magical mother. Love the brisk, engaging, intriguing pace and switch of scenes; Lucius wondering what a kite was (lol!) while checking the accounts with Narcissa nearby reading some erotica and contemplating them, and the simultaneous eroticism being depicted interchangeably in each one's inner thoughts culminating in their intense and deliciously descriptive, raw and honest love-making--brilliant *fans self*--another yummy gem of a tale to savour and enjoy! YAY!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thank you very much. The prologue drives the story although our wizards stumble through the plot haphazardly enough that it's not obvious they're getting anywhere - heroes I can relate to. The changing scenes introduce most of the characters and set things in motion. Lucius, it seems, is too intelligent and perceptive to be a true believer. Recent events have caused him to re-evaluate things.
From beginning to end, that was a damn amusing read.The wife's best friend bit, as pointed out above, was a perfect summation of the characters of the two men as you painted them.They've saved the world, and realize they have to face their angry ladies... perfect.The ability to make me see these two philanderers as romantics... priceless.I was also very amused by the comparison of Dumbledore and Voldemort. Truth be told, I had started reading this (as a result of a click on the Random Story link) but didn't really get why Lucius was so into Natalie Granger when he was so obviously with Narcissa, so I left off. The second time the Random Story link brought me here, I realized I was curious where you were going with this, so I kept reading. I'm glad I did. I was heartily entertained.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Glad you enjoyed it and commented. For someone who initially didn't care for the story, you managed to grasp its essentials.I am rather proud of the best-friend line.Facing their angry ladies is as close as this story gets to poetic justice and personal growth.There is a standard comic set-up: I was never so fond of Miss B as when I was with Miss A, and I was never so fond of Miss A as when I was with Miss B. This story and our characters don't go there - they are too romantic for that.In comparing Voldemort and Dumbledore, canon presents both sides as incompetent enough that I can't take them seriously - neither do Lucius and Severus.Yes, Lucius and Narcissa obviously belong together, but Lucius has this incredible character flaw that he shares with his best friend, Severus.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Glad you enjoyed it and commented. For someone who initially didn't care for the story, you managed to grasp its essentials.I am rather proud of the best-friend line.Facing their angry ladies is as close as this story gets to poetic justice and personal growth.There is a standard comic set-up: I was never so fond of Miss B as when I was with Miss A, and I was never so fond of Miss A as when I was with Miss B. This story and our characters don't go there - they are too romantic for that.In comparing Voldemort and Dumbledore, canon presents both sides as incompetent enough that I can't take them seriously - neither do Lucius and Severus.Yes, Lucius and Narcissa obviously belong together, but Lucius has this incredible character flaw that he shares with his best friend, Severus.
And the gentlemen end up together, toasting their victory. The heroic trio whose spirits were united hurled a hefty hex. They nigh on cracked the firmament with their valorous whoop: “VoldemortEatShit.”lololololololNow if only JKR had thought to write such a witty ending to the Wizarding warring. Sigh. Instead, she chose to off one of your major protagonists. Perhaps you could write him a happy and sexily ironic story?I'm sure that a lot of what you wrote escapes my more mundane mind, but I do hope you write much, much more...
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
I would have said celebrating their stumbling through, but that can count as a victory.
That hex is what everyone is thinking. Why not write it in plain Anglo-Saxon?Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Sly wit and sexy irony. And then: Moody is at the center of an ass-saving exodus. I burst out laughing.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
You are taking this story in the spirit in which it was written. Thank you much.
Can't begin to understand the symbols used in this last chapter, but I enjoyed your story. Thank you for writing
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Glad you enjoyed the story.Would it ease your mind to learn there are no symbols? Since there are no symbols, there is nothing to not understand.
Does this end with all the women, young and older having babies in 9 months? Natalie and the Parkinsons having pale blond-haired children and Drapuadi, Hermione and Narcissa having black-haired ones?
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
No, it ends in the next chapter with Lucius and Severus experiencing personal growth.
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
I liked your ending, too.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thanks for commenting. I admit your ending has its comic and dramatic possibilities.
Whew! I certainly wasn't expecting that last chapter to pan out like it did. That was insanely funny! As in laugh out loud funny. Especially since the rest of the fic was so serious in nature, this last little bit threw me for a loop, but I loved how you switched writing styles for this chapter. Well done with this chapter and the fic as a whole!
P.S. You've left me feeling a little embarassed and slightly duped. I was taking the whole fic so seriously and in the end it was really just a light-hearted romp. Way to go for pulling a fast one over on me like that!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for all the reviews.
Hope you don’t mind an extended response.
Comedy is difficult to end. A Tragedy ends with death and a Romance with marriage, but in comedy, the characters live and thrive. The last chapter ends the mystery-of-the-jewel segment of their lives. It fits the last chapter to treat the relationships in a light-hearted manner, but the two wizards are more concerned about their ladies than they are with the battle between Good and Evil for half the world’s magic.
Duped? Perhaps not. The story does not believe that only the relationship of a couple is serious and acceptable: It’s quite possible that Narcissa is a dedicated wife, doting mother, and devoted mistress; Natalie needs her wizard; Vivian has her proper companion; Draupadi has found the love of her life; Pansy and Hermione have made the correct choices for their soul mates; and the actions of Lucius and Severus are for the best. Lucius has thought this through. Severus thinks he will not live to see the consequences of his good intentions.
Glad you noticed the change in style. The first half of the chapter is loquacious; the second half is medieval-epic. The battle for the jewel is intended to be strict canon even though the writing style is different from the original novels.
lol only a couple of dubius men would equate cheating on their wives with their best friend as a compliment to both! A strange ending, but fitting.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thanks.
I am rather proud of that line – two unrepentant romantics – hence, evil to the core.
Great chapter. I loved the similarity yet duality of the juxtaposition of Hermione's and Natalie's relationships. Very well written and masterfully presented.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thank you very much.
Yes, duality is part of the story with relationships and scenes having a mirror image.
So complicated, intense and beautiful. Still amazing.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thank you very much.
I tried hard to write a tangled, deep, and lovely story. It is difficult to sustain: I’m always afraid the next chapter will let the reader down.
Fleeting happiness with various partners, how sad. Wasn't Severus thinking that he wanted Narcissa? I know it was their last fling. What is Narcissa thinking? She wants to see how Lucius and Hermione get along with a thought to Hermione living with them as a "daughter?" Intense acting skills will be needed there. Are these people really that self absorbed or that needy for affection. Perhaps they (Lucius, Severus, Narcissa, Draupadi, Mrs. Parkinson, Natalie, and Hermione) all do not belong in the same category. In my humble opinion, Hermione is in way, way over her head just by lack of experience alone. Yikes. What more could happen. This is kind of like Peyton Place (TV soap to give credit to the name). I am afraid of what will happen in the next chapter, but I want it anyway.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thanks for reviewing.
Narcissa wants to have a daughter with Lucius, not Hermione as a daughter.
Needy? We’ve arrived at a hectic point in their lives. Draupadi has lived alone for the last fifteen years. So has Severus, unless canon has been hiding something from us. Natalie has been alone for at least a year. Vivian is realizing she has been abandoned. For the first time in her life, a girl of seventeen finds someone who challenges her, understands her, finds her attractive, takes her seriously, treats her kindly, and deals with her fairly—heady stuff for a geek. Of course, he’s a villain. Drat.
I’m glad you’re awaiting the next chapter, even though it’s with trepidation.
Ahhh, I just love this fic so much. The relationships between your characters are so complex and multi-faceted. It's great fun to read. Wonderful job.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thanks for following the story. While writing, I kept thinking that a complex portrayal would pull people OOC (out-of-caricature).
Well, the men have got it bad. Hermione certainly seems to have come around to accepting the Malfoys after they rescued her and her mother. I wonder if Lucius will pursue Natalie again and leave Hermione to Severus. Narcissa either has a vivid imagination, has been reading too many romance books, or Lucius is really good with sexual spells.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Thanks for reviewing. Glad you're interested in the story and the characters.
I am really enjoying this fic. I can't wait to see how the opal is going to affect the outcome of this story. I love Lucius's internal debate before he has sex, or lusts after someone. Funny and sexy. Very interesting.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
Correct on both counts. Lucius and Severus consider their actions. (Draupadi delivers her opinion on that in a later chapter.) The influence of the opal waxes and wanes, but it will finally dominate the story. Thanks for reviewing.
I don't really know which way is up in this story--and I find that I rather like that confusion. Great job!
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
I couldn’t have hoped for a better review. Thank you.
(I’m serious. This is something of a spoiler but I’m fond of stories where the scenes appear disconnected but are actually tightly knit.)
Now, that's a twisted tale you're spinning. I'm curious to see where you're leading us.
Response from Fairfield (Author of In the Time of the Warlock)
I can tell you where it’s going. The second half of the last chapter will be a chanson de geste. Thanks for reviewing