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Of Debts and Debt Collection
Anastasia405 Reviews | 6.33/10 (405 Ratings, 0 Likes, 242 Favorites )
A novel-length post HBP HG/SS romance adventure. What if Severus returned, trained Harry for the final battle and worked to destroy the final Horcruxes? Story is complete and will be updated regularly.
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Sometimes I find myself wondering why I read fanfic. A wonderful, compelling, hopelessly romantic, exciting, almost epic story like yours, makes me realize why I don't stop reading fanfic. Because every once in a while a story like yours comes along, and seldom as that may be, I really don't want to pass out on it. Thank you!
A absolutely charming story, a happy ending, what else can I ask for?
A very nice story.
Terrific. Thank you!
*sigh* Is that the end? Absolutely wonderful story! :) Deserves more stars than possible here. The characterization was brilliant! :)
Response from Anastasia (Author of Of Debts and Debt Collection)
Thanks and no, not the end. One last chapter to go. :)
Wow it's so beautiful. Do you intend on making an epilogue or is it the real end? Cause even if I know this has to end I don't want to. And we've a marriage to attend. Well maybe more than one but only theirs matters to me.
Response from Anastasia (Author of Of Debts and Debt Collection)
Thank you and yes, you do have a wedding to attend. Wear something nice. :)
~Ana
Great chapter, kind of sad that it's all comming to an end.
You are incredible! I was sitting here with my mouth open ...WAITING, thinking, is he gonna kiss her? Is he going to KISS her? Please GOD THEY MUST KISS!! THen they did! Mistress of suspense, you are!And that table throwing, I do love it when Severus gets his rage on!Good Job!Livvy
Stunning chapter. I wept buckets!
i've enjoyed this fic very much! Can't wait for the Epi.
*sobs of happiness*
In my opinion, this final battle scene was written a thousand times better than JKR's. It was riveting and seemed very realistic (for all that I know about war and battles *lol*). You painted the picture perfectly, and I could see everything happening as though I were there watching it all take place.
Response from Anastasia (Author of Of Debts and Debt Collection)
There was a final battle scene in JKR's? ;-) Juuust kidding. Actually, Debts was finished in February 06, so I had no idea what she would come up with. I was disappointed with her vision considering the amount of action she started DH with. In my opinion, if you take the reader that high, you need to end even higher. After burning down a mansion and half-destroying a castle, I figured that I'd better top it all (or the original readers would have eaten me for lunch).
One last chapter / epilogue to go as soon as I get my lazy self to review the commas.
Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. :)
Nothing at all as wonderful as a joyous ending. They don't have to live 'happily ever after', but it's worth it to see them live without fear.
Brilliant chapter, so exciting! I'm glad George died instead of Fred, I was gutted when Fred died, he was my favorite!So sad it's all coming to an end, but loving the excitement.
Sniff....
Very exciting! I like how we actually see Charlie. I like the bit about the Dementors obeying Death Eaters. I like the dragon fighting! Did you kill George because Fred died in canon or is that sheer coincidence? Although I would have preferred Severus to drop the wards, but . . . meh.
That battle was amazing!!! I feel really bad that George is dead, but such things happen in battle. At least he and Fred were having fun at the time. It all comes to a head next. Voldemort's immortal, so now Harry can do his thing. I can't wait until the next chapter!!
Very exciting chapter! I loved every minute of it!
Awesome chapter soo suspenseful lots of action. Well written love the strategy !!!
I thought you couldn't do better than the Severus' seduction chapter. Obviously I was wrong. You have this incredible ability to drown the reader into the action, to make him hope and fear, and called at everyone to say :"watch your back" before they were off guard. That's symply amazing. ANd I'm so sad it's almost finished. Bouuh :°(
Very exciting! I like how we actually see Charlie. I like the bit about the Dementors obeying Death Eaters. I like the dragon fighting! Did you kill George because Fred died in canon or is that sheer coincidence? Although I would have preferred Severus to drop the wards, but . . . meh.
I want my Severus too, who will say me things like that. I hope none ofthem will die or it would be so unfair. Pleeeaaaase.
I've been eagerly awaitng this chapter to post from the queue. I'm so glad I don't have to wait any longer. This chapter was so beautiful, yet also so very sad. Everyone realizes that the end is near, and whether it means their victory or doom, remains to be seen. I thought the interaction between Hermione and Severus at the end of the chapter was so full of bittersweet romance, that it was almost heart-wrenching. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
This has been a very enjoyable read thus far. I don't normally comment on a WIP when I'm reading the first $however_many chapters already published, but there were some points that had me giggling out loud. The part about the thunderstorm was wonderfully erotic and sensual, there were comments Severus was making that had me giggling, and my but the eroticism in his words! I also found it quite . . . ironic that for all his complaining in the beginning that war will not begin with an owled invitation, he seems to have set it up nearly exactly like that! :P
I've never payed much attention to the frightenning side of Severus. Well you almost scared me with that too cynical and violent person. I really prefer him embarrassed with his emotions or seductive. But that's my personnal opinion and I understand completely that was necessary for the plot. Anyway it's scary but brilliant.