Severus' POV
Chapter 2 of 2
Southern_Witch_69Severus' POV of the Valentine's Day Challenge on WIKTT. A little ride with the woman of his fantasies...
ReviewedDisclaimer: Not mine, I say! But I wish it would be. See chapter one for challenge details.
A big thanks to the brilliant Charmed Nay.
Absolutely ridiculous! Albus certainly didn't need to have this catastrophe waiting to happen! Look at the little dunderheads, he thought darkly. They are prancing about excitedly as if Christmas has come again! Severus stalked through the crowds, hissing at all in his way. He had seen Albus and Minerva talking conspiratorially and pointing to the most ludicrous thing he'd seen yet. The Tunnel of Love, indeed! A bright pink building decorated with red hearts and little cherubs stood before him. Couples were getting into little carts two at a time and disappearing into the entrance.
Raising an eyebrow, he watched as Draco, Gregory, and Vincent strode up to Padma Patil. He wished he could move closer to hear what they were saying, but he didn't want to appear interested. What the...? Draco had just kissed the girl's hand. Something wasn't right. They were now going to stand in line to ride the contraption. What was it about this thing? He could feel a pull. It's as if he wanted to go stand in line himself. "Hell no," he growled aloud.
He looked out over the crowd. Where was she? No sign of his bushy-haired nemesis as of yet, but she would surely be there. All of her other friends were present, save Potter and Weasley. They would be along shortly, and he would do as he always did. He would watch her. What was it about the chit that fascinated him so?
Her lips. Yes, a few months back she'd been chewing on her lower lip as she'd contemplated something on the essay before her. She'd scribbled down a few more notes before bringing her quill to her mouth. To his horror, he'd found her mouth, lips, and teeth enticing. What other things would she be able to bring pleasure to with those actions?
He'd never been attracted to a student before, much less one as irritating as she. She, however, was nineteen and, as such, of legal age. It wasn't as if he were lusting after a child. She was no longer a child. He smirked to himself, remembering over the holidays how he'd 'accidentally' walked in on her as she'd had a bath at Grimmauld Place. She had never known that he was there, but he'd been drawn to a voice. He had heard some sort of singing, and he'd wanted to see which infernal brat had woken him from his much needed sleep.
They were going to pay even though he had forgotten to place a soundproofing spell on his room. The door to her room had been locked, but he had easily unlocked it without her knowing. He had wanted to catch her unawares and ream her for being so bloody loud! However, noting that she was not in her bed and that the bathroom door was ajar, he'd decided to remain unseen a bit longer. He had placed a Disillusionment Charm on his person and had a peek. Granger had been lying back in the tub with her eyes closed.
She was singing, or trying to sing, some odd song. He was mesmerized once again by those lush little lips as they formed the words. His gaze dropped down to her body. The only blasted thing he was able to see through all of those bubbles was a small portion of one of her breasts. A perky, pink nipple and a rounded bit of flesh poked through. He fled the room as quietly as he could before hurrying to his own to relieve himself.
That had been the exact moment he'd known that he desired her completely. Someone crashed into him suddenly, breaking him from his reverie. "Watch where you are going!"
"S-sorry, sir," Longbottom said, looking completely afraid.
Severus sneered and moved to the side slightly. The boy was with the Weasley girl and apparently trying to show her that he wanted to be her man. It didn't seem like she wanted any of it. Poor girl. Rookwood had pulled a number on her, and to hear Minerva tell it, she was still seeking counseling over it. At that moment, his dark eyes met the soft brown pair that belonged to the woman who plagued his fantasies. What was she thinking? There was an odd expression on her face.
"Legilmens," he whispered, flipping his wand casually. A flash of their last conversation accosted him. He could feel her annoyance that he had commented on her attire. He then felt her joy as she obviously thought she had gotten one over on him. He smirked, losing eye contact. He remembered the day well.
He had almost given in to the urge to kiss her. Granger had still been upset by the battle that had taken place, and he'd felt the need to involve her with things. Her eyes had been dull until he pretended to need help with Minerva's potion and the fetching of its ingredients. She had followed him into the forest without question. At one point, he'd found himself directly behind her. Had he not realized what he'd been about to do, he would have moved her hair aside to kiss her neck. Her tangy scent had been intoxicating. He'd jeered about her messy hair to put things back into perspective.
She was still a student after all. Her flimsy cloak hadn't done much to hide her womanly figure, and he'd felt the need to comment on that as well. Hell, he was only a man. Having her so near, alone, hadn't really been a good idea after all. When she'd rounded on him about how he had been dressed, he'd given in by apologizing and moving away from her. He had been overdressed actually. Severus had wanted to look appealing to her. When she'd gaped at his apology, he'd known that he'd made the right decision. It had been too soon to act on his desires. He had a plan to stick with!
His eyes narrowed. Just whom was she planning to have a ride with? She seemed to be paired with Potter. Well, of course, he thought sourly. If it had been anyone else, he would have likely found a way to hex him accidentally at some point in the future.
"Well, well, well," he murmured as Pansy approached Potter. He'd had no idea that a student in his own house would actually want to spend time with the brat. He chuckled slightly as Granger looked put out. Ha! Now she would have to ride alone. Good. Severus didn't want to see her interested in anyone. He wanted her to be alone and easily vulnerable by the time she graduated. Then, he would begin his seduction. Then, he would have her. She would never know that he'd long planned this, of course.
Suddenly, the wretched man bellowed, "Lone rider! Step right up. Need another rider." Severus smirked. How embarrassing! No one seemed to be going forth, much to his satisfaction. Something then happened. A feeling in his gut pulled him forward forcefully. One step. Then another. To his horror, he was making his way to the cart. What the fuck is going on here? She didn't even look to see who it was that had sat with her. He decided to look straight ahead. What the bloody hell am I doing riding in a damn pink cart with a student? "Well, that's a good lad. Off you go!" Severus felt the cart lurch forward. He would be sure to hex the ride operator as soon as he got off. The bastard must have charmed it somehow!
"Sir?"
She had finally realized that it was he who had chosen to ride with her. He could hear the surprise in her tone.
"Good evening, Miss Granger," he replied, sounding bored and still not looking at her. Part of him feared that he might see repulsion in her eyes.
"You felt like riding through The Tunnel of Love?" she asked incredulously.
"Don't flatter yourself, Miss Granger. I simply felt a pull in this direction. When I heard the fellow calling out, I got in. I didn't even realize it was you until I sat down," he lied. He finally looked at her with a smirk. "I couldn't very well get back out now, could I?" It was the truth. Some bit of ruddy magic had forced him to join her, and he couldn't have fought it if he'd tried.
"I suppose that would have been rude, yes." She turned away. Severus watched as she looked around uneasily. She was likely hoping that nobody had seen them together. As the cart entered the opening of the tunnel, they were shrouded in darkness.
"Er... Professor, do you hear that?" she asked, inching closer. "Sounds like a million muffled voices."
Allowing himself a wicked grin, he enjoyed the feel of her thigh brushing against his. He sighed. "It's the hum of magic, Miss Granger. Obviously the fools have put something a little extra into this ride. I daresay, the magic is what must have compelled me to do something as foolish as to get on the ride in the first place."
"Something just brushed against my arm!" she squealed, moving closer. In order to feel her body flush against his, he placed his arm around her, relishing in the fact that she was seeking protection with him. Perhaps his feelings were not so one-sided. And had that been a sigh of contentment just now? He then felt a nudging also.
"I felt something on my side as well," he murmured to make her feel at ease. Light suddenly shined throughout the room and nearly blinded them. Disgusting fluffy pink material clung about the floor and walls. The ceiling above them had floating clouds and some ruddy cupid aiming an arrow in their direction. There were falling rose petals, floating hearts, and a large, lacey chaise near one side. Above it, a neon sign on the wall was flashing in bright shades of red. It read, Hermione's Love Nest. Severus sneered at the room in general. It reminded him of a little girl's room!
"What the hell?" she asked incredulously! "I did not put that there! This is ridiculous! I would never decorate a room so horridly! Oh, honestly! I'll bet the Headmaster is behind this."
He began laughing loudly. "Well, well, well! Miss Granger, I would assume that this room is made from your innermost thoughts. Are you quite certain these frilly bows and floating rose petals are not some fantasy?" He might have known that she would be like so many of the other little romantic sots running about the castle. He had hoped she would be above such frivolities.
"I assure you, Professor, had I imagined being somewhere with a love interest, it would not be in a room such as this!"
He looked at her for a moment. Was he a potential love interest then?
The cretin above them spoke. "Hello, Hermione. Hello, Severus. This is a special room. You can choose to get out here to do the deed or move on to the next room."
Deed? "What deed?" Severus asked acridly.
"What?" Hermione echoed.
"Well, you are in The Tunnel of Love, of course! You have to kiss before you can exit. You were drawn together to ride through by a bit of magic. It seeps out into the crowd and pulls people together. People who seem well matched." The cupid began giggling madly.
"I will do no such thing! She is a student!" Severus bellowed indignantly. He would not have his plan thwarted by some magical pest! Realizing that he was still holding her, he tried to pull his arm from around her, but it wouldn't budge.
"Blast! Are you stuck to me?" So... she hadn't liked his arm around her then.
"It would seem so," he said dryly. "You may as well let us through, you impertinent pixie! No such deed will be occurring."
The cupid bounced around, looking much like Peeves. "It appears we have a dilemma then. You will continuously ride until it happens. When you entered the dark room just there, your inner thoughts were probed," he said saucily. "You, Severus, deep down, envisioned this to be what Hermione would like if she was to receive a dreamy kiss."
Damn! Guilty as charged. Some part of him, perhaps, did think of her on a soft, pastel-colored bed begging to be kissed. The pesky blighter shouldn't have said so!
"You thought I would like this?" Hermione asked, looking at him with a crazed expression. "I can certainly tell you that this is not to my liking!"
Thank Merlin for small miracles then! He was glad that this... childish room was not what she liked.
"I'm being framed. I thought no such thing! He's a liar," he said, feigning resentment. He turned to glare at the pest above them. "Let us through. We are not getting out here!"
"Suit yourself," he said mysteriously. The room darkened again, and they felt the lurch of the cart pulling forward.
"Good Lord, Professor! That room was horrible! I'd call it a right, sickeningly sweet room. I'm not exactly the type of girl you thought me to be!" she scoffed.
He agreed with her on that point, but she seemed to have believed the pest! He didn't want her to know that on some level he may have imagined her wanting a place such as that.
"If you dare to sa..." He was cut off as the lights came back on, and the cart stopped. "What the fuck is this?" He looked around in awe. Bloody hell! They were in a damn... dungeon. This room had a dark green mist floating about near the ceiling as a substitute for clouds. Damp, humid air glided over his skin. There was a large bed with silky, black sheets near them on one side with what appeared to be chains hanging from the bedposts. A flashing neon sign above the bed read, Severus' Lair.
"What the bloody hell is this? Professor! What are you playing at? This is clearly a room devised from your thoughts!" She looked suspiciously guilty.
"I assure you, Miss Granger, that I've never in my wildest dreams imagined anything like this before! Well, perhaps once when I... Enough!" he roared. "Let us pass!" He had imagined a scene similar to this not that long ago...Hermione's wrists tied with silky scarves as he had his way with her.
A sex goddess clad in leather while wielding a whip approached them. "Will you not stay and share a kiss?" Her dark eyes glimmered with mischief.
"Certainly not," Hermione said in disbelief.
Damn! She really didn't like him, did she?
"Why not, Hermione?" the woman goaded. "You are the one who thought of this as Severus' ideal place for a passionate kiss."
Aha! The truth! Severus turned accusing eyes towards her. "So, the truth is revealed. You most certainly aren't the girl I thought you to be. Your tainted little mind concocted this room for me? I am a Potions master, not a Dungeon Master!" However, he could easily make the change if that was as she desired it.
"If I had ever thought of this absurd room, which I didn't, I would never have thought of such... rubbish!" She looked around uneasily. "Besides you live in a dungeon. This does seem appropriate!"
He could see she was lying. Had she thought of him and imagined that this type of room would be where he wanted to be with a woman? That this was how he would enjoy the pleasures of the flesh?
He smirked at her for a moment before speaking to the woman. "Let us pass."
"As you wish," she said. With a crack of her whip, they were shrouded in darkness.
"Professor, maybe... maybe you should just give me a little peck on the cheek. I mean, it would get us out of here, wouldn't it?"
He smiled smugly for a moment. She wanted to get this over with, and she would actually agree to have his lips pressed against her skin. He would not let her know that this would be acceptable to him. Not yet.
"Miss Granger, I don't think that such an action would be prudent. You are still my student. As such..."
Once again the room lightened. This time lush trees and several rose bushes surrounded them. Large, pink, lacey bows were tied around the trunks of the trees. Above them, the sky appeared to be nearing sunset. The shades of red, orange, and pink were beautifully displayed. There was a velvety red heart-shaped comforter spread near the foot of a tree. Overstuffed, pink pillows were present as well. Two books were laid open as if they had been left in the middle of a read. There were even glasses and chilled wine waiting for them.
"Er? Is this you?" she asked, gazing starry-eyed at the romantic scene before them.
"I... don't know," he admitted. He could not be certain. It did appeal to him, but she seemed to approve as well. He longed to be out on the pallet with her, holding her, sharing a moment or two of peaceful companionship. "Perhaps we should just get out," he said softly.
Damn! She would be on to him if he kept acting like a schoolboy. He added sharply, "To get this over with if nothing else."
She nodded and moved away from him. "Hey, we're unstuck."
"So it would seem," he said in a bored voice. He rather liked the closeness and immediately missed her warm body as she moved away.
As if pulled by some magical force, he followed her as she went to sit on the soft pallet. "It's cushiony," she said with a giggle, picking up the book nearest her. "Oh! I have been wanting to read this."
She looked beautiful sitting there comfortably. "This must be your ideal place then."
"Maybe," she shrugged before lying back against a plush pink, heart-shaped pillow. She hid behind her book before asking, "Do you... like it?"
"It is acceptable," he said, not wanting her to know exactly how much he appreciated the room. He took a seat next to her and picked up the other book. "I have been thinking of reading this book as well." Interesting.
She lowered her book and looked at him. "Maybe this is a mixture of what we both would have wanted."
He looked at her, thinking of her words. What we both would have wanted. Did she just mean theoretically, or dare he hope that she meant the two of them? "Perhaps... Would you like a glass?" He nodded to the wine next to them.
"All right," she agreed. After he filled a glass, she took it and helped herself to a long swig. "Not bad."
"No, it isn't," he said, taking a sip of his own drink. "It's quite... pleasant." Not just the scene, but the company as well.
They sat in silence while reading and sipping on the wine. He had been wondering how to break the silence when she began to laugh.
"Look at this!" She pointed to a section in the book.
He put down his glass and book, eagerly moving closer. "Good Lord! What the hell are you reading?" He took the book from her to look at the cover. He raised an eyebrow. "Sylvia's Love Tales is what you wanted to read?" It was one of those trashy witch novels!
"Well, I heard Lavender and the others talking on it. It sounded interesting, but doesn't that seem a bit ridiculous? Who would try that to land a boyfriend?"
A small debate ensued where he explained that the woman's desire to have the man was understandable, and he could see her going to all lengths necessary to try to win him. "I don't think she should go as far as to brew an illegal potion, but I could see her using a few tricks." Hadn't he been thinking of doing much of the same? No potion or anything, but the art of seduction was nothing more than mind games. His plan would work.
Hermione claimed that she did not think the potion should have been brewed either, but couldn't fathom why the woman would feel so desperate. "I mean, honestly, if he doesn't like you, then move on," she said disbelievingly.
"Spoken like a Gryffindor," he jeered. "It is clear that this woman is a Slytherin. Tell me, Hermione. What would you do should you find yourself fancying someone that didn't share the feeling?" Perhaps he could listen to what she had to say on this subject and use it to his advantage.
"If I thought he'd never return the feeling, then he would never know how I felt. I would simply think of him from afar, and I would eventually get over him," she said softly, gazing at him intently.
Why was she looking at him like that? She is implying this about me! He could play along with this. It would come out.
He returned the intense gaze equally. "How would you ever know for sure that he didn't feel that way if you didn't use that Gryffindor courage to ask him?"
"I don't have to. I can tell by the way he treats me. He'd never be interested in a young witch like me," she said, not realizing she was inching closer.
He relished that she had moved closer to him. And she had said young witch! That meant she was definitely referring to an older wizard. Him. Severus Snape. His body moved closer of its own accord.
"Perhaps those are merely Slytherin tactics to make you believe he would never be interested when he actually has been interested," he replied steadily, not wanting to give anything away just yet.
"Well... that's just wrong. He should tell me."
Indeed?
"What if he can't find the words?" What could he say really? He could see it now. Miss Granger, the moment you are not my student, I intend to seduce you, ravish you, and fuck you for days on end. That wouldn't do.
"Then why can't he show me? Give me a sign?" Oh, hell. He could do that.
Severus brought his lips to hers for a light brush. "Like this?" he questioned, pulling back slightly.
"Yes," she breathed, putting a hand on his cheek to guide his mouth back to hers. Her lips parted, allowing his tongue entrance, and her body shivered against his. Ever so slowly, he lowered her back down to the comforter, never breaking the kiss. Her warm mouth was everything he had imagined and more. She tasted of something sweet. Likely some candy she had eaten. He nearly moaned as he felt her hands come to life. She had one hand caressing his back, and the other was groping his hair.
One of his hands cupped her face gently while the other held him above her. Finally breathless, they parted. Her wide eyes frightened him for a moment. Surely he hadn't gone too far. She had wanted that as much as he had. Just in case, he said, "I believe we have met the requirements to leave this place."
"Oh, right," she said.
He could see and hear the disappointment. She wasn't ready to leave.
"I guess we should be off then."
"I suppose so," he agreed. Neither moved. Plan be damned. He wanted those luscious lips again. They were everything he'd longed for over the past few months. With a sigh of resignation, he brought his lips back to hers for another dazzling kiss. When he pulled away this time, he stood up. He could not do too much too soon. He knew of her interest now, and that was enough. Until later. He offered a hand to help her up and didn't release it until they were seated back in the cart.
They had both begun to speak at the same time. Laughing, she told him to go first. He nodded. Using his most sincere voice, he said, "I... That... We can't. I'm your teacher." He so wished that they could carry on, but it wouldn't be prudent whilst she was still a student.
He watched in amazement as her jaw set firmly. Defiantly. "Not for much longer, Severus. I can wait if you can."
He'd been waiting! Something vexed him. He had to know, so he smiled for a moment. "I would like that, but why me?"
"Why me?" she countered.
"Touché," he said with a smirk. "Oh, here we are."
The cart had exited The Tunnel of Love once again. Well, how long could they have been in there? The crowd seemed to have dispersed some.
The jovial ride operator helped them out of their cart. "Night, you two. You're the last to come out."
Severus had long lost his desire to hex the man. Whatever he had done to the ride had been beneficial.
They silently made their way to the castle. Once they neared the castle door, she said, "Happy Valentine's Day." He'd forgotten about that. No wonder everything was decorated with all the ruddy pinks and reds.
He wanted to kiss her. To tell her that this was the first Valentine's Day that he'd ever enjoyed, but he only whispered, "The same to you."
She nodded and turned away.
"Hermione?" He couldn't let her go. Not yet.
"Yes?" She turned back eagerly.
He could see it in her face. She wanted to be with him. Wanted to spend time with him. The plan would just commence sooner than he had originally planned. Surely kisses and caresses wouldn't be too out of the question?
"Perhaps you would like to accompany me to the Astronomy Tower. The February skies are nice on clear nights such as this." She didn't hesitate to take his hand as he held it out to her. The feel of her skin on his sent shivers down his spine. Yes, they would definitely have to make arrangements to spend time together until she graduated. After that, well, that was another story.
A/N: I hope you all didn't mind this companion to my original story. I felt that the other was lacking, so I added more.
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I loved Severus' POV, it is a little more... hard core than Hermione's but that was only to be expected.
Just lovely, can't wait to read Severus' POV.
Loved the humour from Severus' POV! :D
That was so sweet.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Be Mine... I'm Yours)
Glad you liked it! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Be Mine... I'm Yours)
Glad you liked it! :)
Hmmm....I wouldn't mind taking Hermione's place on that ride. LOL. Nicely done, my dear.Elura
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Be Mine... I'm Yours)
Thanks!
I don't think that I mentioned that I like Pansy and Harry as a couple. (Severus and Hermione kind of go without saying, or I wouldn't be reading Potions under duress, now would I?)I like both parts of the story. Albus is such a sneaky person!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Be Mine... I'm Yours)
Thanks for reading. I've used Harry and Pansy together elsewhere. Kind of like an enemies uniting type of pairing, huh? hehe
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Be Mine... I'm Yours)
Thanks for reading. I've used Harry and Pansy together elsewhere. Kind of like an enemies uniting type of pairing, huh? hehe
My favorite part was the cliched "Love Nests" I also liked the reading room, with whatever the person wanted to read. (wouldn't that just be heaven?)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Be Mine... I'm Yours)
LOL Thanks! :)Heaven indeed. I'd love it
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Be Mine... I'm Yours)
LOL Thanks! :)Heaven indeed. I'd love it
That was fun. I liked both POVs. Snape had better get decorating that dungeon.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Be Mine... I'm Yours)
thank you! He does need to liven up the "lair" some.
I absolutely love reading a story that has his and her thoughts. That was a fun little story, thanks for sharing.
I'm quite glad you added more. I'm also glad to know they aren't going to completely abstain from each other's presense until graduation. I enjoyed knowing Severus' POV. It added a bit of depth to a piece of fun fluff. As always I love my favorite couple. Thanks for the candy.
If only the world held such magic. Many lonely people would be happy. Needless to say, I'm happy for Severus and Hermione or I wouldn't be reading this. Dumbledore needs to tell Severus he approves. Thank you for a second chapter. It would to too easy to leave it at that.
I really like the Snape POV. I'd read the Hermione before on a different site, but I think that the Snape POV really inhances it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Be Mine... I'm Yours)
Thank you! I prefer his, too.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Be Mine... I'm Yours)
Thank you! I prefer his, too.
I've read a bunch of the valentine's challenge fics, but this one stands out! I love that you let us see the scene from both perspectives. I do adore a sceming Slytherin! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Be Mine... I'm Yours)
yay! thanks, pook! I liked his version better as well. I really like a Snape that wants hermione and goes for it. hehe
I believe both POV work well together, but Severus' is better. I just like to see him going after her like that. Awesome.Tamara
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Be Mine... I'm Yours)
Thank you! :) I like his POV better, too.
Ron is so male. All he cares about is getting between a girls legs and filling up his stomach. OMG, you have Harry and Pansy together, perfect. It so figures Albus is behind the ride and getting Hermione and Severus together. That is so him.
Tamara
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Be Mine... I'm Yours)
Thank you for reading. :)
That was such a cute story and loved both of their POV's. Thanks!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Be Mine... I'm Yours)
Cheers! I appreciate the read. :)