Ok so I want to know what DD did with the bowling ball.  Do tell!    I think Severus is wrong, Remus is not a coward.  He just doesn't want to come in second and is willing to bow out until she wants him and only him.  That takes balls.  Severus just wants what he wants.

As for the hitting seen,  she should wait for him to pass out and so cook a big pot of gits, get them good and hot and pull the covers back and proceed to pour the whole pot all over him  and let him beat himself up.  That's what I would do.

The part where he attacks her, will it wasn't as bad as I thought it was going to be.  He pulled back and the last minute, which is good but to take her memories, that isn't going to go over to well when she finds out.  I think she will make the Dark Lord look like a pussycat.  And this chapter doesn't need any work.  It is very well done and you are a pro.

Oh boy did she give him something to think about or what.  Can anyone say, "Jealous"? lol

Yea, Remus. Helping Hermione get at Severus.  I always knew Wolfies would never change.

Every time I hear wine and dine you, I think of a saying, "Wine you, dine you, 69 you"  Perfect for this story, don't you think?

Harry is a true friend.  Now where do you find them like that?

yum threesome  to bad it didn't happen

lol  oh my well done Hermione that had to hurt lol

These two are just too much.  The banter is amazing.  And the way they think they have each other figured out.  Too funny.  You Are Brilliant

go get him girlshe really is the smartest witch of her time

Nope this is not going to work.  Severus still hasn't learnt how to be with a real woman yet.   He needs to appreciate her first.  IMHO.  He is such a bad liar.  I can't wait to see how he tries and pull this off.

Thank you for putting the summary at the beginning of the chapter.  At least his not giving up hope, if his is saving her ad.   No wonder he has a problem, if he is going to think of women as bitches.  Duh.  Hmmm,  I bet Hermione can solve his "IT" (lol) problem.My favorite line, "He continued to get fucked every which way but Tuesday, and even then, Tuesdays were not always pleasant."   I have never heard it put that way.

OMG he has  a list.  Perfect for Hermione, now they both can be organized.

ROFLMAO  "IT'S ALIVE"  Frankinstein has awoken.

Ron should stay drunk, I like him better that way.

Oh, no, please don't make all their heads so big.  No one will be able to be around them after this.  lol

I think this is the longest review I have ever write.

LOL, I love that you call his penis, "IT".   That's funny as hell.  And he is so over thinking the whole thing.  I'm sure he will never figure IT out on his own.  Poor Minerva, stepped into that one.   I bet she(Hermione) will show/tell them something, alright. lolBrilliant,Tamara aka

much thanks for completing this story. Often, we get lost in the writer's vision and are so let downwhen they are unable to finish a story. Your story is clever and quite amusing and at the same time delves into some real life problems     thank you, barb

This was awsome!Entertaining throughout the whole thing.I loved it!~

*leaves review here too* :D

Great chapter. A fantastic end to the story.

Again, I loved how everything seemed so sensual. Well, of course, especially because of the potion Severus gave Hermione ;) Excellent description and imagery for that part. 

I'm still sad to see this end... But what an ending! Congratulations :) Well done! 

 Well done for finishing! I was laughing today and thinking of you writing this story while reading the entry notes for Al's school: (ahem) 'Young children can learn to concentrate for surprisingly long periods of time if they are encouraged to finish what they are doing. This requires a lot of praise and encouragement from you if they find this hard, but it should remain fun.' Nuff said! LOL!

I started reading this on Ashwinder yesterday but I found it here and prefer reading stories on this site. What an ending! Thank the gods that I don't have to wait for the next chapter! ::grin::

Well, now...good to know I'm not the only one who had a grin thinking of Hagrid...hehe. I refuse to blush, dagnabit! Different is good.

And I'm  thoroughly enjoying your story; can't wait to continue...after the next load of laundry!     

Oh so many good things in this chapter! The part where Sev describes every feature of women that he loves was quite, whew! And when he lied about Remus being the one who needed the therapy I got a good laugh out of that. I am glad you had Hermione figure all of it out. Afterall she was called the brightest witch of her age. I certainly hope she can hem, give Severus a hand with his problem and soon! 'm looking forward to reading more of this frisky tale! ;p

This fic is so engaging and funny! I absolutely love Snape's thoughts; they are simply hilarious but still in character with his sexy snarkability!

Well that made me laugh! Especially the bit about Severus losing his fuckability; priceless!

I just have to say I love this line:

“But as for power… when I literally have the Boy Who Lived in the palms of my hands, well, that’s enough power to sate even this witch.”

The first chapters were definitely fun, and different from the last few, but the sprinkle of humor here and there with this interesting story line is more than enough. I'm just so curious about what you will do with the triangle. I love HG/SS but Remus is just so nice...How about finding Remus a nice witch? 

I already loved this story when I read it at Ashwinder. IT's still great. And I'm still hoping -and begging- for a SS/RL/HG threesome.

One would think that it would endear Hermione to have him go to such lengths to get help while trying to save his pride, but she completely does the opposite, vowing revenge. This just doesn't work for me. Her characterization. It's just over the top, this combined with the last chapters' portrayal of her. I hope she thinks over this and changes tactics. Otherwise, I don't know if I can continue reading her in this way. I read that it's your first story, so I can understand the desire to pull readers in with shocking plot, but it's a pity your characters are suffering in the process.

This Hermione is a right slag. I hope it's the liquer making her act this way. I hate when she's portrayed as a slapper. The Hermione we know isn't so loose.

Oh, I think Hermione will make a great therapist. I can't wait to see what she does to help Severus.

I loved it. I think you are an excellent writer--do not ever think otherwise dear Ruthie. Snape doesnt come off as evil or whatever, just as Snape. I thought the whole almost-rape sequence was well written. I didn't care much for Hermione's tantrum, but Severus did have it coming. I dont think u need to trash this chapter. It may take more work to get to where you plan to go, but it'll be worth it.

 ANd now she wants to send you this, 'the pink one'. Bless, she loves you!

This is from my wee girl. 'It's ME!' she's shouting, LOL! She's very supportive of her aunty Ruthie.