Insomnia
phoenix16 Reviews | 5.63/10 (16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 42 Favorites )
This story was written for the Potter Place Fall Prompt: Lupin and Tonks are shagging in the library of Grimmauld Place, but he notices that a transfixed Hermione is watching. He doesn?t tell Tonks and continues, giving the voyeur a good show. What happens when he gets Hermione alone?
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phoenix
Member Since 2006 | 54 Stories | Favorited by 136 | 1,108 Reviews Written | 1,209 Review Responses
I picked up the Harry Potter fandom around the time the first movie came out and began writing fanfic early 2005 after discovering the adult online community. I identify most closely with the Slytherins and you will see my taste in writing lends me to writing about Slytherins more often than not. In addition to fanfiction, I also make fanvids on the Harry Potter fandom. I'm a Perfect Imagination acredited beta and am willing to help authors. My main 'ship interests are Snape/OC (never really got into the SS/HG pairing) and LM/any female (with HG as a new favorite). I have dabbled in RL/OC and RL/NT and am okay with those pairings. I generally shy away from slash, just not my thing. For updates on my writing, check out my Live Journal
Reviews for Insomnia
OMG--can we have some more, please? Just love Remus and Nymphadora, and adding a sexually awakening Hermione into the mix--yum! Grovelling like Wormtail before Voldy for more, more, more!
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
This was definitely one I did think about writing a sequel to. I just loved the whole idea of this one. Hermione both embarrassed and excited by her voyuerism.
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
This was definitely one I did think about writing a sequel to. I just loved the whole idea of this one. Hermione both embarrassed and excited by her voyuerism.
o.m.g. well that was pretty freaking wicked!!! an encore perhaps?
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
I have been thinking of one for it. I just have to get through some other ideas and have the muses settle on one. :D
really good , love the plot
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
Thanks. I can't take too much credit for the plot since it was a challenge, but I really had to have fun with this one. I like stretching out of the usual box that I'm in. And that's what this was.
*fans self* Very hot!
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
LOL Yes, this one was. Sometimes a nice little PWP can be just the answer. This challenge was exactly that and that's part of the joy of it. Thanks for taking the time to review.
After this experience, she would have no problem whatsoever falling asleep.No, I wouldn't think so. :-)*Fans herself* Is ist only me, or is it hot in here?
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
LOL Yup, it's hot in here. :D This was a fun fic to write even though I do not normally go for the Remus/Hermione pairing. This was just such a great way to showcase it. :D
Thanks for reviewing. :D
much better than a glass of milk!
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
LOL isn't it? Strangely, it took me quite a while to come up with the title. The story was done and out to beta before I figured it out and it seemed so simple. LOL Though, I have to say that your review would have made a great title, too. :D
Wow... That was really good. I like your mischivious Remus, and Tonks and Hermione are very well portrayed as well!
bye,
Shal
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
Thanks, Shal. I really enjoyed playing with mischeivous Remus. So often, he's portrayed as bland and always morally upstanding, but if he had Sirius and James as friends, he had to have a darker side, too and I thought this really embodied it. I hope this fulfilled your Remus/Hermione smut desire. :D
Response from shalimar1981 (Reviewer)
It really fulfilled my HG/RL desire!
It was so refreshing to read. I'm fed up with Wolf!Remus and Shy!Remus more than I can say. Your Remus is three dimensional compared to all those clones out there. It's a pity this pairing is not so popular.
Keep it going!
bye,
Shal
Interesting!
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
Thanks. I like stretching my imagination from time to time and this was the perfect excuse for something out of the ordinary for me. :D
Sleep, indeed. :D
I really like that you had Tonks' hair changing color. A bit of humour in the middle of a PWP. LOL.
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
Thanks. I thought that would be a really neat touch. It was just a little something that popped into my head as I don't normally write Tonks. :D
~fans self~ Whew that was hot. Remus was quite the wolf and the whiff of a threesome there. Are you planning on continuing it sometime in the future? Hypothetically asked of course! :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
Thanks. I just loved the idea that Mr. Reserved-Professor has some kinky sexual tastes and that seems right up Tonks' alley. I know that a lot of times, those that are into that sort of thing are the lasts ones you would expect. I'm not sure if I'll do a threesome one or not. That could be a lot of fun for poor sexually clueless Hermione. 
Response from tinnidawg (Reviewer)
I think this is one of the few times I have read this pairing. I generally tend to read the stories, rather than go by predefined ships, and you had me glued.Yes, you had me captivated by the tale you wove. Thank you.
Hehehe. Nicely done. I don't normally read Lupin/Hermione, but you've done it justice. I think I must be a closet voyeur or something. I find that the idea of watching someone like that would be arousing. Teehee Thank you for responding to this one. I believe it was one I'd suggested. in search for something different. *grins*
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
Thanks. This was definitely different. LOL I think that's what got my attention when you first throwing ideas around. I'm not sure if this makes me a closet voyeur, too, but I had a lot of fun writing it. I just loved the whole idea of him seeing her and giving her a great show. LOL And I felt a need to write something smutty, but neither of my WIP are up for that.
That was steamy, all right! The old dog.. I mean, wolf... I mean, what a rascal!
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
Thanks. He was, wasn't he. LOL That's why I couldn't really resist this Prompt. Remus/Hermione is not normally a pairing I go for, but this was irresistible. :D
Very nice! I really liked how you portrayed Remus in this story…very interesting! Keep up the wonderful writing.~Jen
That was very hot. I like that you portrayed Remus much more sure of himself and his sexuality than a great number of tales. Not a 3-way pairing I would normally think of, but, then again, now, I may think differently.
I liked it!! I pretty much exclusively read only read SS/HG but this sounded quite interesting on the PPT facebook page. Are you going to add another chapter? I'd read more if you do. I don't usually feel attracted to Remus but I did in this story. Maybe he's too gentlemanly in other stories. The naughty Professor might have attracted my attention. I'm glad Tonks won't mind. It would have taken away from Hermione and Remus' enjoyment if he was a sneeking cheat. Who else have they have they been with? Tonks and Hermione would be an interesting couple.
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
The naughty professor was so much fun to play with and a great step out of my usual Remus box. I think like most others I tend to see him as quiet and reserved. It might be interesting to write a second chapter to this and stretch myself to write a threesome. Maybe when my muses finish another project they are working on.
Oh, yummy! RL/HG is one of my three favourite ships so it was fun sailing through this! Thanks for sharing.
Response from phoenix (Author of Insomnia)
LOL Thanks. This was a fun one to write. Sometimes these little challenges just take hold of you. I may one day revisit this and have her explore Remus' invite of a three-way. :D