Reprisal
broomclosetravenclaw14 Reviews | 14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 16 Favorites )
After the war, Hermione is left alone at Grimmauld Place. She blames one man for her situation and plans to exact her revenge. Inspired by the Dark!Hermione Challenge on Granger Snape 100.
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broomclosetravenclaw
Member Since 2005 | 34 Stories | Favorited by 18 | 74 Reviews Written | 219 Review Responses
Well, as the decades catch up to me, I had to come change my bio, if for nothing more than to change my age. I discovered HP and fanfiction after the 5th book and was instantly drawn to Snape. I mainly ship HG/SS with my 2nd favorite ship being NL/LL, although I will write almost any (non-canon) pairing (ok, so I have been known to write a drabble or two with a canon pairing, but it doesn't mean I enjoyed it).
Reviews for Reprisal
The wolfsbane, that would explain how Lupin knows where Snape is. That is quite a clue. Cool!
I see you havent updated this in ages. I do hope there are plans to finish it?? 
Your Hermione seems bent on distroying Severus in her need for revenge. Oh my!
Wow... what has happened to Hermione... it is as if she doesn't really like Lupin, or anyone else for that matter!!! I am enjoying your writing and the story... I am finding it surprisingly compelling... darkly forbodding... I must admit that I find my heart going out to all of them!
Nice beginning... great writing... so sad... I'm almost afraid of where this is going though!!!
BCR, your Dark!Hermione leaves me breathless. Her use of Lupin is coldhearted and inspired. I can't wait to see where you are taking this! 'phile
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Reprisal)
Thanks phile. Yes, poor Lupin. And it will only get darker. *feels like I should insert an evil cackle here*
Although I normally dislike reading about a dark!Hermione, I must say I can't help coming back for more. Your story is really good so far, and most of all believably written. It isn't hard to imagine how Hermione might turn dark if she lost everything like this.
You also explore that sometimes very ruthless streak in her and how she might use it were she thinking of nothing but revenge.
Well done!
Grudgingly looking forward to more,
Shal
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Reprisal)
Thanks shal for the nice review. I am almost sorry that I sucked you in (almost). :)
wanted to add, it's really dark! maybe a bit too much for me :)
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Reprisal)
Did Dark!Hermione Imperio you too?
Response from Triskell (Reviewer)
to do what?
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Reprisal)
To leave this review.
original. She's worse than Snape now, she's destroying everything.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Reprisal)
Thanks. Worse than Snape? What has he done (besides kill DD)? She is just a bit mad or should I say single-minded.
Response from Triskell (Reviewer)
worse than Snape, because she's destroying what people are trying to do (move on) and they try to live now. But when she will notice she's like Snape (and even worse) only using them, they will be broken heart and well adn sadder.
oooh this is good.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Reprisal)
Thanks
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Reprisal)
. After 2,200 words it got too difficult to continue as a HG/SS drabble. Hope you don't mind that I am finishing it here (but I did give credit to grangersnape100).
this is very very interesting, Im enjoying this quite a bit!
-KarlaMarie
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Reprisal)
Thank you. :)
Wow, dark Hermione. She seems a bit mad to me. I guess wallowing in hate and misery can do that to a person. I look forward to seeing what happens and how things turn about--if they do.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Reprisal)
Yes, my Dark!Hermione is a bit mad (I suppose talking to Mrs. Black's portrait can do that to a person too *snerk*). Things will get worse (or a bit madder) before and/or if they take a turn for the better.
I didn't remember this story until now. I hope you will write more. As you know, I like Dark Hermione. But I also wonder how long she will support the fact she's using her body. Once it will be over, how will she be? It won't be an easy moment at all and she might even break down before the end.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Reprisal)
I will write more, second chapter is coming up. I decided to continue on after grangersnape with this, after 2,200 words, I decided it is no longer a drabble. ;)
wow. Hermione as a manipulative maneater. I love it!
wow this had an incredible start. i'm so sorry you abandoned it. but thanks for the begining.