OMG is that creepy!

the best fiction i've read in the past two days, FOR SURE. and i don't read fiction very often! -a

HAHAHAHAHAAA!!! but what happens next??!! i think there needs to be more chapters!! :P

LOL! Wow... yikes. Creepy indeed. Sloppy seconds! ~snicker~

Um...odd. I'm not sure I'd call it creepy--but I had to read it twice to take it in.  Sure left me with an "eww' postscript.

That was creepy...I'd say you succeeded.

Wow...well done.

gah!  you succeeded!

Ummm....ewww. Someone obliviate me! I'll pay you!

Ummmm.... YUCK?  I want to be sorry to write that as a review, but it only seems appropriate and what you were looking for.Quite the snippet into a world I'm not sure I would go much further into. Thanks for sharing???

Uck, yuckkkkk, I need an obliviate after that......thanks sooooo much for that mental imagery(sarcasm..........). Fia.

Uck, yuckkkkk, I need an obliviate after that......thanks sooooo much for that mental imagery(sarcasm..........). Fia.

That was one of the most disgusting thing I have ever read, and that’s saying something! The whole romp around in Harry’s sloppy seconds thing gave me one of the worst mental images I have ever experienced in my life and I have a pretty sick mind so that is no small feat!

A top-notch piece of work (that is if you were aiming for the toilet, my bile defiantly is!)

-karlamarie

ps- I give it five porcelain pottys out of five Cheers!

*fapfapfapfapfap*

You aimed for creepy... I'd say you did quite well. LOL.

Oh....EEWWWWWW!!!!!

Great job, and mission accomplished!

Very creepy for such a small fic! Well done