The Gentleman Nicolas Lancaster
Chapter 4 of 11
themistresssnapeTEMPORARILY ABANDONED. I PROMISE I WILL FINISH IT, BUT THE MUSE IS SLOW RIGHT NOW. It is all quite odd how the events to be related in this work were brought to my attention. Here, I reproduce them in full detail as they were given to me.
ReviewedCHAPTER 3: The Gentleman Nicolas Lancaster
I was to be boarded in the very room in which Queen Anne had bedded during her time with the French court. The room was large and lit by two sets of wide doors that opened out onto a private balcony at the back of the house. The bed was large and covered with a feather down mattress and pillows. There was a canopy of green silk with matching hangings. The covers were like ivory with the inn's monogram stitched in the center in gold. Beautiful tapestries hung on the paneled walls: altar cloths and great trains of courtiers bearing the fleur-de-leis on blue standards. A grand fireplace sat in the wall opposite the bed, a second portrait of the queen hung over the mantle.
The young woman in the country dress assured me that all arrangements for my stay had been taken care of and that I was to be allowed full use of the library still kept in the house. "Be assured that we will do all that is necessary to make your stay as productive as possible, mademoiselle. I am to understand that you will be going to the Chateau de Chagny while you are staying with us?" said the young woman as the last of my luggage was taken from the tram and placed at the foot of the bed.
"Oui," I replied. "Were there arrangements made as to how I might go between the chateau and here?"
"M. Rigalto has arranged for a car for you, mademoiselle. You shall have one of the men from the inn to drive you as you wish. If you wish to go to the chateau now, I can fetch him for you."
I turned on the spot, taking in the whole of the room and feeling the uncomfortable ache in my bones from riding in the taxi for so long. "Thank you, but I believe I will go to the chateau tomorrow. For now, I would like to rest."
"As you wish, mademoiselle. If you fancy something to read, the library is in the east wing of the house. Its doors are always open when there is daylight." The young women dropped again into an unmistakable curtsy and backed out of the room.
I stared up into the dark eyes of Anne Boleyn as the young woman quietly shut the door to my rooms. I could hear the wind rustling through the leaves on the trees in the orchard and the crunch of gravel as a second car arrived out front. The heavy feeling of sleep clouded my thoughts so much that I swore that I saw Anne's lips quirk upwards in a sly smile. I stifled a yawn with the back of my hand and stumbled over to the bed, quite certain that I would fall into sleep before I sank onto the mattress.
I awoke what seemed several hours later. The sun burned crimson and orange through the windows of my rooms as it sank below the horizon. The room was warm and quiet, much like my apartments in Paris. So comfortable was the bed that I was hardly inclined to move, much less rise for supper.
There was a soft knock on the door of my rooms. "Yes?" I called, waiting as the young woman poked her head around the door. "We are serving supper in the dining hall, mademoiselle. Would you like to come down, or should I have something sent up to you?"
Still fighting the muffled grogginess of sleep, I forced myself to sit up. "I will come down, thank you. Please give me a few moments to freshen up."
The young woman smiled and backed out of the room as I stood and made my way to the small bathroom attached to my rooms. I splashed my face several times with cold water and combed through my dark hair with my fingers. My black eyes stared back at me from the looking glass over the sink. Even to myself, I looked unbelievably tired and ill at ease.
I stumbled sleepily as I made my way from my rooms down the hallway toward the grand staircase. My stomach was once again tied in tight knots and my hands were trembling with unease as I leaned heavily against the banister while I climbed slowly down the stairs. Bright candlelight flickered from the chandelier hanging in the entryway, seeming to dance in time with the sound of tinkling cutlery and laughter from the dining hall.
A dark headed man stood at the doorway, his head tilted back to rest against the frame. His eyes opened at the sound of my shoes muffled against the carpets. He looked up at me, a curious expression on his face. "You must be Mlle. Leroux," he said, his voice a smooth and deep timbre that vibrated to my bones. He inclined his head in a slight bow. "I am Nicolas Lancaster."
"Good evening, M. Lancaster," I replied, inclining my head back at him. "Please excuse my appearance, as I had a lengthy ride from Paris and desired a nap before supper."
He smiled indulgently and offered me his arm. "Would you allow me to escort you in to supper?" he asked. Quietly, I accepted and allowed him to steer me into the dining hall and into a seat next to his own.
The table groaned beneath platters of roast chicken, glazed ham, scalloped potatoes, steamed vegetables, and sweet rolls. Two grand candelabras stood near each end of the table, glittering with six tapered candles each. Plates were passed around, each piled high with samples of each of the many dishes provided by our hosts. Besides M. Lancaster, and myself, there were two other guests, an elderly couple who were traveling through the countryside on their second honeymoon. Then, of course, there were our hosts: the young woman, two older gentlemen, and a young man of approximately the same age as myself.
"What brings you to this part of France, mademoiselle?" asked M. Lancaster, looking at me from the corners of his dark eyes. "Surely you are not a born Frenchwoman?"
I stifled a laugh. "Actually, M. Lancaster, I am a born Frenchwoman. However, I was raised abroad. My parents were professors of history and art. And so, of course, am I. My presence here is due to the Chateau de Chagny. I am here to study the life of the Lady de Chagny," I replied, taking the wine offered to me by one of my hosts.
"You and so many others," replied M. Lancaster. "It seems that there are always people in this part of the country looking after the Lady de Chagny."
M. Lancaster, who refused to allow the merriment of us all to wane, nearly always directed the conversation over supper. He insisted I be served first when a dessert of sherbet tart was served, and he would not allow me to leave the table without assurances that he could escort me back to my rooms.
"I am down the hall, Mlle. Leroux," he whispered later that evening as we made our way up the grand staircase to my rooms. My hand was tucked into the crook of his elbow, his own large, warm hand over my own. "Should you need me, feel free to send for me. There is a night man at the desk, and he will help you in any way he can."
I was quite sure I was blushing, but I nodded solemnly as we came to a stop outside of my door. "Thank you for your kindness, M. Lancaster. I will see you at breakfast," I said softly, bowing my head to him as so many others at The King's Bed were wont to do. Perhaps it was knowing that royalty had once been in this house, but there was an air of court ceremony blowing through these years old halls.
Largely due to my unusual nap the afternoon before, I was up with the dawn the next morning. My rooms were suffused with a soft golden pink light as I pulled myself from beneath the warm linens and threw open the doors leading out onto the balcony. The worn stones were cool beneath my bare feet and the air was crisp and clear with the scent of autumn. I stretched and pulled my dark hair over one shoulder, combing it through with my fingers.
"I do so love the country," I whispered, leaning over the railing to see the great French doors of the entry hall being thrown open to the morning.
There was a soft chuckle from somewhere to my left, and I looked over to find Nicolas Lancaster standing on his own balcony. He was sipping a mug of hot coffee and smiling out into the morning. "Good morning, Mlle. Leroux," he called from his balcony, the morning breeze ruffling his dark hair. "I trust you slept well?"
I smiled back at him though the shame at being caught in my nightdress rose in my cheeks. "Very well, thank you," I replied, dropping him a small curtsy for the fun of it. "And yourself, sir?"
"The same," he replied, holding his coffee mug up in salute. "Shall I meet you for breakfast or have you another engagement for this morning?"
"No, but thank you, sir. I had hoped to go directly to the Chateau de Chagny once my driver was prepared. I have much to look for, but I am quite unsure as to where to begin. Might I have the honor at supper tonight?" I wrapped my arms around my body against the coolness of the wind.
"Yes, now go inside before you catch your death of cold. I will go down to make sure your driver is ready to leave at your will," he said, shooing me along with a broad, handsome smile.
M. Lancaster was as good as his word. In fifteen minutes, I was showered, dressed, and laden with my leather notebook and research materials in my bag. My driver, who turned out to be one of the elderly gentlemen I met at supper the night previous, was found standing at the foot of the grand staircase waiting for me.
"Are you prepared to go to the chateau, mademoiselle?" he asked in his grandfatherly voice. When I nodded in reply, he offered me his arm and a soft, "Then off we are, then."
Copyright © 2008 The Mistress Snape
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Chagny Letters
16 Reviews | 5.94/10 Average
Poor Lady, childless and widowed at 26 surrounded by people who love her, who see the grief but do not understand her dispair, and have not the wit to save her. Why did she not just leave and save herself? She was nobody's ward, she was a woman of private means, not so? Why didn't she just retire somewhere and heal?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
You will see. That's a key plot point a little later on. But I give you this comfort, eventually she does save herself. ~The Mistress
Every single alarm bell in my head is going off right now. Who is this guy? I don't trust him any farther than I could throw him. He's just too,... too... too... slick. Hmph!On with the romance ^_^
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Nicolas is charming, isn't he? There is something not quite right about him, but you'll have to wait to find out! ~The Mistress
Lancaster--Howard--Boleyn (Tudor?)
Powerful names that rise out of the mist of the distant past into the present. The six basic questions (Who? What? Where? When? Why? and How?) are jostling for position in my brain. Your spell is well woven and I'm caught. Please continue.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Ah, I do love history! I doubt the Tudors will show up but the Fitzroys most definitely will! ~The Mistress
What a fascinating place to stay. So rich with history. I would love to be there. At least you're giving me the opportunity to go along for the ride. =) Nicolas Lancaster is an extremely appealing character. I look forward to see what happens with him.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you! I am fond of Nicolas, as he is based on my husband. ~The Mistress Snape
You have a lovely way of depicting a scene with such elegance. =)I think you may have a typo at the end. "Qui, mademoiselle…" looks like it should be "Oui, mademoiselle…"Anyway, this story just draws me right in. I feel like I'm part of the mystery, and the intrigue holds me there until it is unravelled.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you, for both the compliment and the correction. I have went through the other chapters and corrected them all. I am horrible at French and my translator was not here with me when I was writing it! ~The Mistress
Oh, this is very interesting. Is the details of this story drawn from fact? For example, did Count Phillipe actually die of pneumonia? I can't wait to find out who G.H. turns out to be.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
No, nothing about the details of the story is true. There are a few historical people who tend to pop up (Anne Boleyn for example) and some true events (WWI, which is coming up in later chapters). Other than that, it is purely my imagination! ~The Mistress
OH, and now there's a secret journal to read, too, not to mention an interesting historical artifact. It will be interesting to see how the connection between Anne Boleyn and Lady de Chagny develops. I like the pacing of this story -- it has a leisurely feel to it, but fresh events and complications continually turn up to prevent it from going slack.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you. I had hoped that it didn't appear too slow going. Your reviews are fuel to the muse! ~The Mistress
You build up the details very effectively in your descriptions of that lovely country hotel. That's an interesting mix of luxury and unease you've got going there. It really hints at some sort of affinity (maybe even possession) involving the heroine and some ghost of the past, but it isn't heavyhanded. M. Lancaster is another intriguing development -- lucky girl, having him as a balcony neighbor!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
I will say only this, the inn hosts know something about Emmyline Leroux that even she doesn't know. Perhaps that may give some clue to her connection with the past! And yes, I do love M. Lancaster already. He is based on my husband, though Gerard is Scotch-Irish rather than French. ~The Mistress
I can't shake the feeling, almost deja vu. This reminds me the most of the first time I read the original "Dracula." All of this calm, simple yet exotic beauty is quite frankly giving me the creeps. Looking forward to more.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
I am sorry that I am creeping you out, but I always did like the pace and mystery of Stroker's prose. Hopefully futher chapters won't be so creepy. ~The Mistress
Oh, I am very excited to read your story. I happened to have just finished reading Gaston Leroux's book. When I saw this on the newly added page, I was immediately intrigued. The prologue is certainly interesting so far. I enjoy your use of French in the story as well.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you, but I must be honest and say I do not speak French myself. A close friend was nice enough to translate for me. I am glad you are enjoying the story, and hope you continue to! ~The Mistress
most intriguing... does that mean that Erik and Raoul are cousins?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Not really. A relation, but that will be explained later. Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress
This is a good start, leaving me wondering just what it's all about. I thought it could use a little more on setting/time description, but I'm guessing it's modern time? I'm intrigued on what the gifts might be. :-)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
There's a little more along those lines in the coming chapters. I'm trying to work out some kinks before I post more. Hopefully, I'll get it worked out soon! Much love~~ The Mistress
Far be it from me to argue, but isn't a piece based on the Phantom of the Opera, still considered fanfiction?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Loosely based, of course. I suppose it is, but the original fiction is the only place on TPP to post it.
The entrance of Anne Boleyn into the tale is very intriguing, you're giving this history junkie a nice surprise. Once again, I love the tone, which really captures the sense of a big, fat Victorian novel -- flowing and richly detailed at the same time.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Anne came to my mind because I have just finished reading The Other Boleyn Girl by Philippa Gregory. It is a wonderful book. I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it unfolds, as I am working on the next chapter now. ~The Mistress
Very strange, and why is our dear Mlle. Leroux the very person to solve this mystery? BTW, I didn't say it in my first review, but the title of this story is irresistibly elegant.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
I cannot give that away so soon! Why, it would ruin the whole rest of the story itself! ~The Mistress
I hope you enjoy my little foray away from the world of fanfiction, just for a little while.
It's lovely, and even before I read your note I was thinking how reminiscent of a 19th-century novella it was -- the mysterious agent of change, the secrets to be sought out. (I'm remembering college readings of Kleist, as I studied German, not French.)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you very much. I am hoping to actually have it published upon completion, with a few minor changes (a few names here and there to remove it a bit more from the Phantom). Your reviews are delightfully encouraging! ~The Mistress