Home Brings Comfort
Chapter 11 of 11
themistresssnapeTEMPORARILY ABANDONED. I PROMISE I WILL FINISH IT, BUT THE MUSE IS SLOW RIGHT NOW. It is all quite odd how the events to be related in this work were brought to my attention. Here, I reproduce them in full detail as they were given to me.
ReviewedCHAPTER 10: Home Brings Comfort
My things were packed and loaded onto the tram outside my apartment door. I was desperate to return home to England, to Oxford and my father. I had received a message from Madeline Howard early that morning that my father was unable to meet me at the airport, but was sending his research assistant to collect me. I was nervous, I had never met his research assistant as he had been hired after I left for France. At least my father called before I left the hotel.
“Are you alright, darling?” he asked above the sound of rustling papers. I smiled as I imagined him in his library with dozens of art books spread out on the table around him and a master’s work projected onto the wall. “Will you be okay traveling alone?”
“I’m fine, Dad,” I replied, checking drawers to ensure that I was leaving nothing behind. “The flight won’t be very long and I’ll probably sleep the entire way. I wish you could meet me at the airport, though.”
“I am sorry, darling, I really am. I cannot get away today, department meetings all morning. But Alec is a nice boy, you’ll like him a good deal,” my father said, a smile in his voice. “He’ll be there to collect you as soon as your flight arrives. Would you like him to have one of those signs with your name on?”
“Why not.” I checked the clock and realized that my taxi to the airport would be arriving in a few moments. “I’ve got to go, Dad. My taxi will be here soon. I love you, and give my love to Mum if you talk to her.”
“Love you too, sweetheart. Be careful.”
The trip home was uneventful. I felt little remorse for treating M. Rigalto so terribly, but I felt as if he had played some part in my delusion and I was not willing to be friendly with him. The young bellhop loaded my luggage into the car and received a warm smile and a decent tip before we were off. The flight was smooth and comfortable, as it was not full. I was so happy to be going home that I was able to eat a light brunch and take a short nap before we landed in London.
It felt wonderful to be home again, to feel the rain on my face and feel the cold autumn wind on my face. I could feel a new resolve and confidence pour through me with a suffusing warmth as I made my way into the terminal. The lights were bright and people were milling about, meeting family and friends and saying goodbye. I couldn’t hide the smile spreading across my face as I watched the people come and go.
I looked around the terminal for a moment before I spotted my father’s research assistant. He was near my age and handsome. He looked to be a little over six feet tall and had short, sandy hair. There was a wide smile on his face as he shuffled from one foot to the other, a sign reading Emmy Leroux in his hands. I took a deep breath, smiled in return, and made my way over to him.
“Are you Alec?” I asked, holding out my hand. I liked the look of him, the cool confidence and peacefulness that radiated from him. There was something in his warm, sea foam eyes that sent a wave of warmth through me.
His smile broadened as he shook my hand in return. “Yes, and you must be Emmyline.”
“Call me Emmy,” I replied, liking the way his voice washed over me. It was rough and sweet and reminded me of everything that made me happy. “Would you mind helping me collect the rest of my luggage from the baggage claim?”
“Of course,” he replied, taking my carry-on bag from me and throwing it over his shoulder. “You dad says you were studying in Paris. What were you there for?”
“Turn of the century French history. It was wonderful to visit Paris again after so long, but I’m glad to be home,” I said, sighing happily. Alec was still smiling softly as he listened to me talk and led the way over to the baggage claim. “I didn’t get very much done, but I was losing interest in the subject anyway. My dad always said that if I stayed with one thing more than a few months then I must be sick. I think I may change my study to English history. At least I won’t have to leave home again.”
Alec chuckled and began searching the conveyor belt for my bags. “I know what you mean. My dad wanted me to play football for Chelsea, but Mum wanted me to go on to university. I’m glad that I listened to her. I can’t stand the sight of a football now,” he said, reaching out for two of my trunks that I had pointed out. We waited for the third to appear.
“My mum wanted me to go on a long holiday before finishing my studies, but I just wanted to keep going. I think she wanted me to join her in Istanbul for the year. She’s studying Byzantine art and religious history. Oh, here,” I mumbled as I tugged my final trunk from the conveyor belt. “Where the bloody hell is a tram when you need one?”
Disappearing for a moment, Alec returned with a tram and began loading my luggage. Even beneath his worn leather coat I could see the muscles of his arms and chest coil and ripple as he hefted my trunks with ease. I watched with fascination, as the only men I had ever been around were academics and prone to be less than athletic and muscular. When he was finished, he smiled at me again and started off toward the exit.
“So, Alec, what are you doing working for my dad?”
“Not much,” he replied. “I just keep track of his books, papers, and appointments. I’ve helped get things prepared for his classes. Even taught a few actually when he’s been sick. Mostly the mythology and religious art courses, but I’ve done a few of the art history ones, too. Your dad’s been good to me, and he’s helped me with my own papers. He’s a good man.”
The crashing sound of a tumultuous rainstorm met our ears as the exit slid open. The cool English air swirled around us and heavy raindrops sprayed up as they bounced off the ground. Alec grimaced, a look almost as handsome as his smile, as he glanced from me to the torrential rains. He shrugged out of his jacket and handed it to me. “Put this over your head. It’ll keep you dry enough until we get to my car. Luckily, it’s just across the street there.”
I held the worn leather over my head, inadvertently inhaling the scent of his cologne. There was little I could do to hold back the laughter as we ran across the street, thudding through puddles and splashing water onto our clothes. Alec tugged his keys from the pocket of his soaked jeans and unlocked the passenger door for me before going to load my luggage in the trunk. The car was cold and water dripped from my clothes and the jacket in my lap as I watched Alec in the rearview mirror. The rain tapped on the roof and dripped off the end of his nose as he pushed the trunk shut.
“Holy shit,” he muttered as he hurried into the car. His hair was plastered to his head and his clothes clung to his well-muscled form. He glanced over me, taking in my soaked form. Laughing, he started the car and turned on the heat. “Well, at least you’re dryer than I am.”
I laughed, taking in the sight of him. The car began to warm as Alec turned out of the car park. I felt the color rising in my face as I closed my eyes, leaning back against the seat and finding the image of a rain-soaked Alec burned into my eyelids. It was a pleasant image, one that I was frighteningly comfortable luxuriating in as we drove out of the city on our way to Oxford.
© 2008, The Mistress Snape
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Chagny Letters
16 Reviews | 5.94/10 Average
Poor Lady, childless and widowed at 26 surrounded by people who love her, who see the grief but do not understand her dispair, and have not the wit to save her. Why did she not just leave and save herself? She was nobody's ward, she was a woman of private means, not so? Why didn't she just retire somewhere and heal?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
You will see. That's a key plot point a little later on. But I give you this comfort, eventually she does save herself. ~The Mistress
Every single alarm bell in my head is going off right now. Who is this guy? I don't trust him any farther than I could throw him. He's just too,... too... too... slick. Hmph!On with the romance ^_^
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Nicolas is charming, isn't he? There is something not quite right about him, but you'll have to wait to find out! ~The Mistress
Lancaster--Howard--Boleyn (Tudor?)
Powerful names that rise out of the mist of the distant past into the present. The six basic questions (Who? What? Where? When? Why? and How?) are jostling for position in my brain. Your spell is well woven and I'm caught. Please continue.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Ah, I do love history! I doubt the Tudors will show up but the Fitzroys most definitely will! ~The Mistress
What a fascinating place to stay. So rich with history. I would love to be there. At least you're giving me the opportunity to go along for the ride. =) Nicolas Lancaster is an extremely appealing character. I look forward to see what happens with him.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you! I am fond of Nicolas, as he is based on my husband. ~The Mistress Snape
You have a lovely way of depicting a scene with such elegance. =)I think you may have a typo at the end. "Qui, mademoiselle…" looks like it should be "Oui, mademoiselle…"Anyway, this story just draws me right in. I feel like I'm part of the mystery, and the intrigue holds me there until it is unravelled.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you, for both the compliment and the correction. I have went through the other chapters and corrected them all. I am horrible at French and my translator was not here with me when I was writing it! ~The Mistress
Oh, this is very interesting. Is the details of this story drawn from fact? For example, did Count Phillipe actually die of pneumonia? I can't wait to find out who G.H. turns out to be.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
No, nothing about the details of the story is true. There are a few historical people who tend to pop up (Anne Boleyn for example) and some true events (WWI, which is coming up in later chapters). Other than that, it is purely my imagination! ~The Mistress
OH, and now there's a secret journal to read, too, not to mention an interesting historical artifact. It will be interesting to see how the connection between Anne Boleyn and Lady de Chagny develops. I like the pacing of this story -- it has a leisurely feel to it, but fresh events and complications continually turn up to prevent it from going slack.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you. I had hoped that it didn't appear too slow going. Your reviews are fuel to the muse! ~The Mistress
You build up the details very effectively in your descriptions of that lovely country hotel. That's an interesting mix of luxury and unease you've got going there. It really hints at some sort of affinity (maybe even possession) involving the heroine and some ghost of the past, but it isn't heavyhanded. M. Lancaster is another intriguing development -- lucky girl, having him as a balcony neighbor!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
I will say only this, the inn hosts know something about Emmyline Leroux that even she doesn't know. Perhaps that may give some clue to her connection with the past! And yes, I do love M. Lancaster already. He is based on my husband, though Gerard is Scotch-Irish rather than French. ~The Mistress
I can't shake the feeling, almost deja vu. This reminds me the most of the first time I read the original "Dracula." All of this calm, simple yet exotic beauty is quite frankly giving me the creeps. Looking forward to more.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
I am sorry that I am creeping you out, but I always did like the pace and mystery of Stroker's prose. Hopefully futher chapters won't be so creepy. ~The Mistress
Oh, I am very excited to read your story. I happened to have just finished reading Gaston Leroux's book. When I saw this on the newly added page, I was immediately intrigued. The prologue is certainly interesting so far. I enjoy your use of French in the story as well.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you, but I must be honest and say I do not speak French myself. A close friend was nice enough to translate for me. I am glad you are enjoying the story, and hope you continue to! ~The Mistress
most intriguing... does that mean that Erik and Raoul are cousins?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Not really. A relation, but that will be explained later. Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress
This is a good start, leaving me wondering just what it's all about. I thought it could use a little more on setting/time description, but I'm guessing it's modern time? I'm intrigued on what the gifts might be. :-)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
There's a little more along those lines in the coming chapters. I'm trying to work out some kinks before I post more. Hopefully, I'll get it worked out soon! Much love~~ The Mistress
Far be it from me to argue, but isn't a piece based on the Phantom of the Opera, still considered fanfiction?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Loosely based, of course. I suppose it is, but the original fiction is the only place on TPP to post it.
The entrance of Anne Boleyn into the tale is very intriguing, you're giving this history junkie a nice surprise. Once again, I love the tone, which really captures the sense of a big, fat Victorian novel -- flowing and richly detailed at the same time.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Anne came to my mind because I have just finished reading The Other Boleyn Girl by Philippa Gregory. It is a wonderful book. I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it unfolds, as I am working on the next chapter now. ~The Mistress
Very strange, and why is our dear Mlle. Leroux the very person to solve this mystery? BTW, I didn't say it in my first review, but the title of this story is irresistibly elegant.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
I cannot give that away so soon! Why, it would ruin the whole rest of the story itself! ~The Mistress
I hope you enjoy my little foray away from the world of fanfiction, just for a little while.
It's lovely, and even before I read your note I was thinking how reminiscent of a 19th-century novella it was -- the mysterious agent of change, the secrets to be sought out. (I'm remembering college readings of Kleist, as I studied German, not French.)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you very much. I am hoping to actually have it published upon completion, with a few minor changes (a few names here and there to remove it a bit more from the Phantom). Your reviews are delightfully encouraging! ~The Mistress