A Most Beautiful Country
Chapter 3 of 11
themistresssnapeTEMPORARILY ABANDONED. I PROMISE I WILL FINISH IT, BUT THE MUSE IS SLOW RIGHT NOW. It is all quite odd how the events to be related in this work were brought to my attention. Here, I reproduce them in full detail as they were given to me.
ReviewedChapter 2: A Most Beautiful Country
It would be quite useless to say that I found the gift of Lady de Chagny’s necklace enchanting. Although the engraving on the silver backing was no older than the summer of 1889, I was quite certain that the charm itself was almost two hundred years old. For nearly a fortnight after receiving such a wonderful gift from G.H., I spent the entirety of my research time searching for whatever scraps of information and any minor mention of the Lady de Chagny or any conspicuous relation. At the end of my search, however, I was hopelessly disappointed, as I had found no more than I had already been told by my secret correspondent.
Perhaps I had decided on my course of action from the moment I read the first missive sent to me by G.H., but it was a great stain on my will to actually take the first step on my journey beyond a pile of dusty books and rustling pages of notes. The summer was fading quickly, and the vibrant colors of autumn were appearing in minute doses upon the trees lining the streets of Paris. It was difficult to imagine how my journey would begin, as I was utterly unfamiliar with the area and would much rather have spent my time watching the golden hues of autumn seep into the trees.
So it was, on a bright, windy September morning that I prepared my luggage for the trip to the Chateau de Chagny. It was several weeks removed from the delivery of the gift from G.H. that I made my preparations to travel, and I had received a third missive from my correspondent listing a small bed and breakfast near the Chateau that would suit my needs. M. Rigalto was familiar with the proprietors of the inn, and made such arrangements with the caretaker that I was to stay for as long as needed without rent.
I was ill at ease with traveling alone away from the city, my stomach in knots and my hands uneasy with trembling as I waited in the lobby for the taxi M. Rigalto had summoned. My luggage sat on a tram by the door with a young bellboy, his dark hair blowing in the autumn breeze. Lady de Chagny’s necklace was in my purse, locked away safely in its box, and the many notes I had made of her life were bound in a leather notebook and tucked away in my luggage. I had no idea what I would find when I arrived at the chateau north of Paris, but I felt something calming in the pit of my stomach.
The driver of the taxi was a nice man from Orleans who spoke of nothing but Jean d’Arc for the entire drive. He told interesting tales about the holy warrioress and her great siege of the town. His voice was soothing, a lilting quality to it that matched the rhythmic shaking of the taxi. I relaxed against the seat, listening to the driver weave his tales and watching the outskirts of Paris fade away into a quiet countryside. It was a most beautiful country with groves of trees lining the roadway and fields of wildflowers stretching out far and away. The gold and orange hues of autumn were exploding from the uppermost branches of the trees down through the bottom. The sky was a crystal, sea blue broken by cotton ball clouds.
“Ah, mademoiselle, we have arrived.” The taxi had come to a stop in front of a large manor house bearing the name The King’s Bed on a wooden sign in the yard. The driver came around to open my door and held out his hand to help me out. My legs ached from sitting for nearly two hours, and my back felt as if it were in a vise. The driver was busy at the back loading my luggage onto a little tram as I stretched and walked up to the front door of the inn.
The door was made of sturdy oak reinforced with iron bars. There was a tiny window in the middle, the opening covered from within with a little door, sitting above an iron knocker. Taking the heavy ring in my shaking hand, I knocked twice and stood back. A stone balcony formed the overhang above the door, several urns of flowers sitting on its rails. Two small trees stood on either side of the door, sculpted into tight spirals and decorated with blue and white silk streamers. Sloping gardens stretched out to my right and left before disappearing around the back of the house. It was beautiful.
The door opened to reveal a young woman in a yellow country dress, her golden hair held back in a thick braid. She smiled, her gray eyes twinkling. “Welcome, mademoiselle, to The King’s Bed. Please come in,” she said as she stepped aside and dropped into what was unmistakably a curtsy.
I followed the young woman in, noting in passing that she could hardly be a year or more older than myself. The driver followed close behind, pushing the tram with my luggage uneasily over the rich rugs covering the polished wooden floors. Beautiful tapestries and paintings hung on the walls on each side of the entry hallway. A great window with French doors stood behind the desk at the end of the entryway. There was a grand staircase that rose to the upper floor on each side of the desk. A large portrait of King Louis XIV hung on the wall at the upper floor landing.
“Pardon me, mademoiselle,” I said, my eye caught by a portrait of a dark haired woman wearing a silver gown and hood to match. Her dark eyes were piercing, and her lips were turned upwards in a knowing smile. “ Would you know the woman in that portrait there?”
The young woman hardly glanced at the portrait, as if it were a common talking point of the guests coming in and out of the bed and breakfast. “That is Queen Anne, mademoiselle. The wife of King Henry of England,” she replied, still leading me toward the desk at the end of the entryway.
“Queen Anne?” I repeated, puzzled. “You wouldn’t be speaking of Anne Boleyn, would you, mademoiselle?”
“Oui, mademoiselle. This house was once a favorite home of Queen Anne when she was a young girl at the court of France. The Chateau de Chagny was built using the same plans as this very house.”
Copyright © 2008 The Mistress Snape
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Chagny Letters
16 Reviews | 5.94/10 Average
Poor Lady, childless and widowed at 26 surrounded by people who love her, who see the grief but do not understand her dispair, and have not the wit to save her. Why did she not just leave and save herself? She was nobody's ward, she was a woman of private means, not so? Why didn't she just retire somewhere and heal?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
You will see. That's a key plot point a little later on. But I give you this comfort, eventually she does save herself. ~The Mistress
Every single alarm bell in my head is going off right now. Who is this guy? I don't trust him any farther than I could throw him. He's just too,... too... too... slick. Hmph!On with the romance ^_^
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Nicolas is charming, isn't he? There is something not quite right about him, but you'll have to wait to find out! ~The Mistress
Lancaster--Howard--Boleyn (Tudor?)
Powerful names that rise out of the mist of the distant past into the present. The six basic questions (Who? What? Where? When? Why? and How?) are jostling for position in my brain. Your spell is well woven and I'm caught. Please continue.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Ah, I do love history! I doubt the Tudors will show up but the Fitzroys most definitely will! ~The Mistress
What a fascinating place to stay. So rich with history. I would love to be there. At least you're giving me the opportunity to go along for the ride. =) Nicolas Lancaster is an extremely appealing character. I look forward to see what happens with him.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you! I am fond of Nicolas, as he is based on my husband. ~The Mistress Snape
You have a lovely way of depicting a scene with such elegance. =)I think you may have a typo at the end. "Qui, mademoiselle…" looks like it should be "Oui, mademoiselle…"Anyway, this story just draws me right in. I feel like I'm part of the mystery, and the intrigue holds me there until it is unravelled.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you, for both the compliment and the correction. I have went through the other chapters and corrected them all. I am horrible at French and my translator was not here with me when I was writing it! ~The Mistress
Oh, this is very interesting. Is the details of this story drawn from fact? For example, did Count Phillipe actually die of pneumonia? I can't wait to find out who G.H. turns out to be.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
No, nothing about the details of the story is true. There are a few historical people who tend to pop up (Anne Boleyn for example) and some true events (WWI, which is coming up in later chapters). Other than that, it is purely my imagination! ~The Mistress
OH, and now there's a secret journal to read, too, not to mention an interesting historical artifact. It will be interesting to see how the connection between Anne Boleyn and Lady de Chagny develops. I like the pacing of this story -- it has a leisurely feel to it, but fresh events and complications continually turn up to prevent it from going slack.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you. I had hoped that it didn't appear too slow going. Your reviews are fuel to the muse! ~The Mistress
You build up the details very effectively in your descriptions of that lovely country hotel. That's an interesting mix of luxury and unease you've got going there. It really hints at some sort of affinity (maybe even possession) involving the heroine and some ghost of the past, but it isn't heavyhanded. M. Lancaster is another intriguing development -- lucky girl, having him as a balcony neighbor!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
I will say only this, the inn hosts know something about Emmyline Leroux that even she doesn't know. Perhaps that may give some clue to her connection with the past! And yes, I do love M. Lancaster already. He is based on my husband, though Gerard is Scotch-Irish rather than French. ~The Mistress
I can't shake the feeling, almost deja vu. This reminds me the most of the first time I read the original "Dracula." All of this calm, simple yet exotic beauty is quite frankly giving me the creeps. Looking forward to more.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
I am sorry that I am creeping you out, but I always did like the pace and mystery of Stroker's prose. Hopefully futher chapters won't be so creepy. ~The Mistress
Oh, I am very excited to read your story. I happened to have just finished reading Gaston Leroux's book. When I saw this on the newly added page, I was immediately intrigued. The prologue is certainly interesting so far. I enjoy your use of French in the story as well.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you, but I must be honest and say I do not speak French myself. A close friend was nice enough to translate for me. I am glad you are enjoying the story, and hope you continue to! ~The Mistress
most intriguing... does that mean that Erik and Raoul are cousins?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Not really. A relation, but that will be explained later. Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress
This is a good start, leaving me wondering just what it's all about. I thought it could use a little more on setting/time description, but I'm guessing it's modern time? I'm intrigued on what the gifts might be. :-)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
There's a little more along those lines in the coming chapters. I'm trying to work out some kinks before I post more. Hopefully, I'll get it worked out soon! Much love~~ The Mistress
Far be it from me to argue, but isn't a piece based on the Phantom of the Opera, still considered fanfiction?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Loosely based, of course. I suppose it is, but the original fiction is the only place on TPP to post it.
The entrance of Anne Boleyn into the tale is very intriguing, you're giving this history junkie a nice surprise. Once again, I love the tone, which really captures the sense of a big, fat Victorian novel -- flowing and richly detailed at the same time.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Anne came to my mind because I have just finished reading The Other Boleyn Girl by Philippa Gregory. It is a wonderful book. I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it unfolds, as I am working on the next chapter now. ~The Mistress
Very strange, and why is our dear Mlle. Leroux the very person to solve this mystery? BTW, I didn't say it in my first review, but the title of this story is irresistibly elegant.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
I cannot give that away so soon! Why, it would ruin the whole rest of the story itself! ~The Mistress
I hope you enjoy my little foray away from the world of fanfiction, just for a little while.
It's lovely, and even before I read your note I was thinking how reminiscent of a 19th-century novella it was -- the mysterious agent of change, the secrets to be sought out. (I'm remembering college readings of Kleist, as I studied German, not French.)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of The Chagny Letters)
Thank you very much. I am hoping to actually have it published upon completion, with a few minor changes (a few names here and there to remove it a bit more from the Phantom). Your reviews are delightfully encouraging! ~The Mistress