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Taken at Wandpoint

Southern_Witch_69

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Drama Potions Under Duress 1,055 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Rabastan Lestrange Severus Snape

Hermione is snatched by a Death Eater! This is a response to the LJ's 30minutefics community--challenge #147.

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I adore the world of HP.



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Reviews for Taken at Wandpoint

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0/10

Crissytje

Technically getting rid of the testicals does not equal no more erections so technically he could still rape again. His libido will have gone down, but perhaps his lust for violence not? 
Personally I hope that he's more than traumatised.

0/10

Phoenix Fire

ack!!! ouuuuuuchh.... im a female and im cringing! Go hermione!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

:) Thanks for reading! :)

0/10

Severus_Student Proper

Wow! You had me till the end. I could have sworn Severus and Hermione were the couple to begin with. Bravo. Very few can keep me guessing as you did.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

Grin. Glad to have surprised you!

8/10

kimjo2

hahahahahahaha!!!!  serves him right!  am i the only one who has these thots?  thanks for a cathartic experience.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

You're very welcome. :)

10/10

Maddy Riddle

*giggles at the image of the two souvenirs in a jar*

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

~grin~

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justjen

Ouch!! hehehe!! I'm usually just a lurker at Potter Place and couldn't wait to see which curse you used!Great job!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

thank you! LOL

0/10

MollysSister

You are so sneaky! Of course I thought her abductor was Snape initally. SO glad I was wrong. Way to go Hermione!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

~grin~ :) Bad SW

0/10

Bravmiki

Scary.  Remind me not to mess with Ms. Granger!  I was so glad it was Rastaban she hexed and not Severus. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

Yeah! Me too. Thanks for reading.

10/10

KarenDetroit

Nasty piece of work. Not yours, his.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

LOL Thanks! :)

9/10

firefly124

Oh, nicely done!  Very good misdirect.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

Thanks! I'd hoped it would be misleading. :)

Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)

Very misleading! At first I thought it was Severus and Hermione was actually afraid of him. Then I thought it was him, and they were doing a role-play. And then you finally dropped the curtain, and wow! :-)

10/10

GinnyW

I read this when you posted it at 30minute fics. I liked it and loved what Hermione did to Rabstan. :) Nicely done.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

Teehee. Thanks! I just couldn't bear for her to do it to "the man," we love, so I used good ol' Rabs... :)

Response from GinnyW (Reviewer)

*snicker*

And you kept it so ambiguous up to the point when Severus appeared. :P

0/10

lovingsnape

hahahaha omg that was hilarious!!!! I do like old Rabbie though hehe poor fellow :D Good one!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

The poor bloke... payback's a bitch though. Teehee.

0/10

Leni

Interesting hex and nice use of a character we don't see so much in fanfictions. As always, I enjoy your writing.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

Thanks so much! My current wip has a bit more action for dear Rabastan. Teehee

9/10

KMJ

Hermione is a very vengeful young women. but the punishment fits the crime, poetic justice most will call it, i call it mad, evil and bloody brilliant! I love it!-KarlaMarie

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

Thanks for reading. I think those who take advantage like this should face similar punishments. :)

10/10

janis

Wow!  At first I thought it was Snape that you were writing about.  I'm glad it was Rabastan--and even happier that Hermione was able to teach him a lesson.

As always, your writing is excellent! I'm amazed that you could do this within the guidelines of the challenge.  Your muse must have been with you!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

It was a bit scary for me. I saw the challenge and said, "Heh. I can do this." So, then I opened up my word page, and my mind went blank after the first paragraph. I stared at the clock for about five minutes or so, just knowing I'd fail. LOL Luckily, my muse came 'round to help me out, but I nearly didn't have enough time to finish. :)

0/10

droxy

Excellent little tension filled story, with an excelllent revenge twist at the end.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

Muahahhaha! Thanks for reading, doll!

10/10

wartcap

Muhahahaha! You had me fooled, love! Excellent stuff. warty xxx

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

Teehee. Thanks, babycakes. *How's that dvd coming along?*

10/10

dara st john

Holy orchiectomy...If only rapists could receive that punishment in RL.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

I agree! Thanks for reading!

0/10

septentrion

Well done, Hermione!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Taken at Wandpoint)

*nods*Thanks for reading!

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