Part III
Chapter 3 of 3
lady_rhianA resolution is reached.
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A/N: As always, my sincere thanks to the ladies at the gs100 for their inspiration. Enjoy the last installment!
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Her stirring slowed.
“We made love and you know it,” he whispered.
“It’s inappropriate.” She shook her head. “I won’t apprentice you. I’ll be a Charms Mistress at the end of the year; I don’t need to be a Potions Mistress, too…”
“Oh, but you want to.”
“Oh, but I don’t.”
“It’s not inappropriate, Hermione.”
“It’s inappropriate if you have feelings for me!”
“Oh, so you don’t have feelings?”
“You said things that I cannot forget!”
“You are blowing this out of proportion!”
“Well excuse me, Professor, for looking at the situation realistically! I will not apprentice to you, I will not live with you…”
“And you won’t love me?”
**
He stared at her desperately, eyes searching.
She looked up at him, her eyes shining.
“Like hell you don’t,” he muttered, taking her by the waist and pulling her close. His mouth descended on hers immediately, lips pressing insistently, his hand running through her hair, desperate for a response.
After a moment, he let go of her.
“No,” she whispered, her hands reaching up to touch his face. “No, don’t…”
“So this is what it takes to secure your agreement?” he murmured.
She quirked a smile.
**
“I’ll think about it,” she said, turning back to her mixing as if nothing had happened. “I doubt I can be convinced.”
He chuckled, running his hand through her mane of curls.
“I know you can be,” he said, his eyes piercing hers.
“Really?” she asked, eyes twinkling. “Just how do you plan to pull off such an impossible mission?”
“Well,” he started, picking her up by the waist and setting her on the counter, “I can intrigue your mind, body, and soul, and you’ll accept my overtures because you also are unable to resist a challenge… I think I’ll start challenging your body, if you don’t mind.”
“Not at all,” she whispered.
**
His hands skimmed over her knees and thighs, lingering briefly around her hips before darting up her torso.
“You bloody tease,” she murmured, pulling his head to hers.
He shook his head from her grasp and laid a flurry of insistent kisses around her collarbone, smiling as he saw her eyes flutter. Her head hit the cupboard with a clunk.
“Are you alright?” he asked, concerned, his hand moving to cradle her head.
“Fine,” she muttered. “This doesn’t mean I’ll marry you, you know…”
“Of course.”
“It’s going to take more than this to convince me… OH …”
“No doubt, no doubt,” he murmured, running his hands down her back, delighting in the shiver he felt.
**
The door opened.
“Severus! Hermione!”
They hurriedly pulled away, sending the bowl of pumpkin batter smashing to the floor, the bowl scattering to the feet of a very flustered Molly Weasley.
“Molly,” Severus said, annoyed. “What can I do for you?”
“I…” Molly sputtered, looking like a deer in the headlights.
“We’ll make a new batch of pumpkin bars, Molly,” Hermione offered, wrapping her arms around Severus’ neck.
“Well, I never…”
“Molly.” Severus held a hand up. “Go back, check on the new baby, and don’t interrupt us for ten minutes.”
Molly’s mouth dropped.
She shut her eyes tightly. “Please don’t do anything on the counters. I cleaned them this morning.”
And with that, she turned on her heels and walked out of the room, Severus and Hermione sputtering with laughter.
**
“Now,” Severus asked, turning back to Hermione, his hand trailing down her cleavage, “where was I?”
“Here,” Hermione murmured, putting his hand exactly where she wanted it to be.
His hand lingered briefly, fingers teasing. He paused, taking his hands away, resting his palms on the edge of the counters.
“Severus…” she started threateningly.
“I refuse to make love to you in this cursed residence,” he said matter-of-factly.
“Why?” she asked, raising an eyebrow.
“Have you seen the number of children they have?”
She raised an eyebrow. “Good point.”
“My place or yours?”
She wrapped her arms around his neck and looked into his obsidian eyes.
“Take me to your dungeon.”
“With pleasure.”
**
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Latest 25 Reviews for A Mess in the Kitchen
32 Reviews | 4.44/10 Average
Squee. Funny I dont remember thsi being posted...I musht have been drunk. XD
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Oh, it was! :-) You are an absolutely fabulous woman. *hugs*
I WONT TO GO TO HIS DUNGEON!not fair...sigh...I loved it, well written.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
I want to, too! ;) Thanks so much; I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
good chapter that whole personal space thing i have a friend whose boyfriend got into my personal space one night when i was there. i did not like it one bit he is a creep
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Yes, personal space is definitely an issue to work with when I'm writing about couples! I'm very glad that you enjoyed the story. :)
Why can she not see he wants her, if i where Hermione i'd jump the man so hard he would prolly be the one running from me!!!
_KarlaMarie
(desperately in a puddle of lust with Severus Snape)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
As would I, I assure you! But we've still got one more installment to go, dear. :) Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh, this Hermione is a little unsettling. She should be glad he's interested in her, I'd say. Someone of my, uh, Narcissa's caliber is much more acceptable. I should hope that he turns on his heel and doesn't look back, leaving her to realize the mistake she's making by being so harsh to one who obviously cares for her.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Well, there is one more installment left. Wait and see how it ends. :) Thanks for reading!
Post the rest! Please?
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Of course! The last installment will be up as soon as the site can get it up. Glad you're enjoying it!
This seems to be a very interesting story - I'm looking forward to follow it! Wish the chapters were a lot longer, though ;-)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
That's the drabble format - one hundred word installments. :) Brevity and shortness is mandatory, but there's still one installment to go! Thanks for reading & reviewing.
Love it!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you, dear. :) There's more to come!
this is a really good idea for a story i think.
waiting on the update! -karla
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you. :) Glad you like it!
Oh, I like it--cooking=earthy, warm; his glances=heat; her reaction=blazing cold with a hint of mucho backstory! Post the rest!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
I love that you love all the sensory detail. :) The rest will be posted soon, m'dear!
cute chapter
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you. :) There's more to come!
OOOO! I like it! I'm terribly happy that your fellow drabblers have convinced you to add more. I really want to keep reading!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you. :) I'm so glad you're enjoying it. There's more to come!
oh wow what a drabble. she is harsh. will you continue and tell what happened in paris? waiting for more. p
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
The last installment is posted! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Gulp. Thank god you have the next chapter going - I can't wait to see what happens!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you so much. :) The last installment is posted!
Delightfully seductive Snape here.
Snape is playing with a loaded deck and he knows it. =)
Knowitall or not, H can't deny she's female.
Oh this is a seductive one....
“Take me to your dungeon.” I love that. Makes me all swoony. *snicker* Poor Molly. Severus is adorable when he's desperate - and I'm glad Hermione made him work for it.Yay.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
So glad you enjoyed it. :) And yes - Severus is quite adorable when he's desperate... I'd like to have him right where Hermione's got him!
That's what I call persuasion!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Definitely! Glad you liked it, dear. :)
Yay! That was gooood :-)
I really liked Hermione's temper and their whole interaction was just perfect.
And extra sparks for "Take me to your dungeon."
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you so much! I'm so pleased you liked it, m'dear. (glad you liked the last line, too!) :)
“Take me to your dungeon.” -My new favorite saying!
Love the whole story and glad it has a happy ending ;)
-KarlaMarie
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you dear! So glad you liked the whole thing. :)
Very nice. Just enough backstory for understanding, and I liked the open ending. We get to imagine how their negotiations will proceed...
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Exactly. ;) Thank you so much for the compliments - I am very pleased that you enjoyed the story! I am glad you appreciate the open ending, as not many readers do, and that particular type of ending is one I am quite fond of. Best wishes.
excellent. as always.
for the heck of it they should leave some sort of mess on the counter..
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
I think that Severus said it well... any 'messes' at the Weasley residence may result in unexpected additions to the family! Thanks so much for reviewing; I'm very pleased that you enjoyed it.
Ooh la la! What a delight! The drabble form is quite intriguing, and you do very well with it, my dear.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you so much, dear! I'm very glad that you enjoyed it. (love that icon!)