A Mess in the Kitchen
lady_rhian32 Reviews | 4.44/10 (32 Ratings, 0 Likes, 29 Favorites )
Hermione is ignoring Severus while baking pumpkin bars in the Weasley residence. He wants her attention - and something more. How far is he willing to go to get what he wants? Inspired by the Pumpkin Challenge at the grangersnape100.
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Squee. Funny I dont remember thsi being posted...I musht have been drunk. XD
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Oh, it was! :-) You are an absolutely fabulous woman. *hugs*
I WONT TO GO TO HIS DUNGEON!
not fair...sigh...I loved it, well written.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
I want to, too! ;) Thanks so much; I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
good chapter that whole personal space thing i have a friend whose boyfriend got into my personal space one night when i was there. i did not like it one bit he is a creep
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Yes, personal space is definitely an issue to work with when I'm writing about couples! I'm very glad that you enjoyed the story. :)
Why can she not see he wants her, if i where Hermione i'd jump the man so hard he would prolly be the one running from me!!!
_KarlaMarie
(desperately in a puddle of lust with Severus Snape)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
As would I, I assure you! But we've still got one more installment to go, dear. :) Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh, this Hermione is a little unsettling. She should be glad he's interested in her, I'd say. Someone of my, uh, Narcissa's caliber is much more acceptable. I should hope that he turns on his heel and doesn't look back, leaving her to realize the mistake she's making by being so harsh to one who obviously cares for her.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Well, there is one more installment left. Wait and see how it ends. :) Thanks for reading!
Post the rest! Please?
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Of course! The last installment will be up as soon as the site can get it up. Glad you're enjoying it!
This seems to be a very interesting story - I'm looking forward to follow it! Wish the chapters were a lot longer, though ;-)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
That's the drabble format - one hundred word installments. :) Brevity and shortness is mandatory, but there's still one installment to go! Thanks for reading & reviewing.
Love it!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you, dear. :) There's more to come!
this is a really good idea for a story i think.
waiting on the update! -karla
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you. :) Glad you like it!
Oh, I like it--cooking=earthy, warm; his glances=heat; her reaction=blazing cold with a hint of mucho backstory! Post the rest!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
I love that you love all the sensory detail. :) The rest will be posted soon, m'dear!
cute chapter
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you. :) There's more to come!
OOOO! I like it! I'm terribly happy that your fellow drabblers have convinced you to add more. I really want to keep reading!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you. :) I'm so glad you're enjoying it. There's more to come!
oh wow what a drabble. she is harsh. will you continue and tell what happened in paris? waiting for more. p
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
The last installment is posted! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Gulp. Thank god you have the next chapter going - I can't wait to see what happens!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you so much. :) The last installment is posted!
Delightfully seductive Snape here.
Snape is playing with a loaded deck and he knows it. =)
Knowitall or not, H can't deny she's female.
Oh this is a seductive one....
“Take me to your dungeon.” I love that. Makes me all swoony. *snicker* Poor Molly. Severus is adorable when he's desperate - and I'm glad Hermione made him work for it.Yay.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
So glad you enjoyed it. :) And yes - Severus is quite adorable when he's desperate... I'd like to have him right where Hermione's got him!
That's what I call persuasion! 
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Definitely! Glad you liked it, dear. :)
Yay! That was gooood :-)
I really liked Hermione's temper and their whole interaction was just perfect.
And extra sparks for "Take me to your dungeon." 
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you so much! I'm so pleased you liked it, m'dear. (glad you liked the last line, too!) :)
“Take me to your dungeon.” -My new favorite saying!
Love the whole story and glad it has a happy ending ;)
-KarlaMarie
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you dear! So glad you liked the whole thing. :)
Very nice. Just enough backstory for understanding, and I liked the open ending. We get to imagine how their negotiations will proceed...
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Exactly. ;) Thank you so much for the compliments - I am very pleased that you enjoyed the story! I am glad you appreciate the open ending, as not many readers do, and that particular type of ending is one I am quite fond of. Best wishes.
excellent. as always.
for the heck of it they should leave some sort of mess on the counter.. 
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
I think that Severus said it well... any 'messes' at the Weasley residence may result in unexpected additions to the family! Thanks so much for reviewing; I'm very pleased that you enjoyed it.
Ooh la la! What a delight! The drabble form is quite intriguing, and you do very well with it, my dear.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Mess in the Kitchen)
Thank you so much, dear! I'm very glad that you enjoyed it. (love that icon!)