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Potions Under Duress The Whirl of my Life
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The Whirl of my Life

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The Whirl of my Life

septentrion

14 Reviews   |   14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 23 Favorites )

Romance post-HBP/HBP compliant Potions Under Duress 2,381 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Peter Pettigrew Severus Snape

Hermione finds a magical parchment, and lets her curiosity gets the better of her. My answer to the eleventh prompt of Potter Place (details at the end of the story).

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Chapter 1: The Whirl of my Life


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10/10

Lkmaide

Short and fresh-- nicely done.

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

Thank you very much. It was one of my first piece in English, so I appreciate the review even more.

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

Thank you very much. It was one of my first piece in English, so I appreciate the review even more.

10/10

pickles

I've enjoyed your responses to the Potter Place challenges.

Thank you for another wonderful story. 

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

I'm glad it made you read this older story. I'm even glader that you liked this one as well. Thank you for reviewing.

8/10

Maddy Riddle

I like it. I hope Hermione would be able to help him get a new life. :)

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

That's the point left to your imagination, dear reader. Thanks for commenting.

0/10

snapeophile

Nicely done!  I enjoyed reading this.  Your response to this prompt was very creative!

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

Thank you. I tried to write something not to cliché, you've just told me I achieved it.

0/10

Cissy_n_Snape

Nicely done.

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

Thank you.

0/10

theprincessofmars

You might want to switch your first few paragraphs from passive voice to active voice. That change would make your story a lot more engaging and exciting.

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

Thanks for your constructive criticism. I won't probably rewrite this story, but I can try to think of your advice for my future writings.

6/10

KMJ

That was cute... a bit rushed but cute... i wish i had one of those papers...!

-karla 

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

Thanks for your comment. I'm aware I have a tendency to write "rushed". I try to develop more in my writings, and I'm becoming better at that, but the tendency is there. That's why I'm proficient with drabbles.

0/10

snapemylove

This is wonderful!  I'm so glad to see another prompt response.  I was considering doing this one as well, but after this story I'm not quite sure now.  You wrote an excellent story!  Thanks for sharing it!

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

You'll have me blushing. But I don't want to prevent other authors to write answers to this challenge. Why wouldn't you give it a try? Thanks for your nice review.

10/10

KarenDetroit

I like it. I like the parchment idea. Tightly written, too, no excess verbiage.

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

I'm glad you appreciate "tightly written" works because that's my way of writing. I'm in awe with authors who can write 5000 words for only one scene without being boring. As for the parchment idea, it wasn't from me, it was the challenge. Thanks for the review.

0/10

Southern_Witch_69

Thanks for posting this. I had hoped someone would take up this challenge. I like it very much, and you've done a good job with it. I can only wonder how they work things out. :)

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

Well, this challenge was too tempting. I did my best with it, and let you imagine how things work out  Thank you for those interesting challenges on Potter Place. Another one is tempting me, but I think I'll write it in French, my first language. My French-speaking audience could grow angry with me if I don't feed them.

9/10

ancientgirl

Great one-shot.  Thanks for posting it.

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

I'm glad you like it. I assure you it's my pleasure to share.

9/10

DawnEB

I like it   Having Hermione falling at his feet being the real clincher for Snape turning to the Light, and no real Happy Ever After, just a hint of promise.

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

Thank you, Dawn. I wanted to give it an open ending.

9/10

togspled

i want that parchment now... certainly would make life easier. :)

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

I quite agree. Thanks for reviewing.

0/10

kimjo2

wonderful!  i like an ambiguous!snape as a change and you wrote a perfect one.  thanks so much

Response from septentrion (Author of The Whirl of my Life)

I aim to please.

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