Is this story complete?  It is marked as such, but you seem to have left the characters in mid-air without any kind of resolution.  I have a problem with your portrayal of Hermione here (please take it as constructive criticism--I will not be harsh).  She is supposed to be 28 years old, with considerable life experience: med school, army, medi-witch training--but you have her behaving like a teenager.  You should let her story-age and experience be reflected in her characterization, if possible.

I hope there's more, it's such a wonderful story.   Severus reaction to the lectures is hysterically funny.

Oh goody *grins* I can't wait for the next installment!

I loved this story, I still love i.  And it's kind of neat reading it in this format now.

excellent story.  hope to see a sequel..

great beginning. onto then next chapters.

Nice job. Ass-gremlin is quite an interesting term. I really loved this story...you did a wonderful job with it. ~Jen

I loved this chapter! Finally some action! LOL! I loved the condom exercise too...great job!~Jen

Great job! I liked all the students' comments about Severus...nice touch. Keep up the good work.~Jen

Great job with this chapter. I really liked the end when Hermione came on to Severus...nice job!~Jen

Very interesting chapter! I love the fact that Snape stumbled a bit on his words when he asked her about her virginity...funny idea. Great job!~Jen

Another nice chapter. I loved the enthusiasm (sp?) she had to try out the shampoo. I would have probably done the same thing...my hair's a curly, tangled mess a lot too. Again, great job.~Jen

Nice intro chapter! I can't wait to read what happens. I really liked the line "killer of all things cute and cuddly"; it describes Severus very interestingly.~Jen

Great story.

Great story though it was a little out of character for the most part but you said that in your A/N... Well done and I hope to see more from you in the future. Cheers, Sonia

And it only gets better! Poor Snape seems a bit embarrased by the topic, doesn't he? Not that he would ever admit it whitout a healthy dose of Veritaserum. LOL! Now, I'm really curious about the seventh years lesson!

News is the fastest moving thing in all of Hogwarts. News and rumours, which are, in theory, the same thing; then again, in theory Nick Carter has talent.

Well, he has got some talent--he's good at looking pretty for the camera.  

Seriously, though,  I'm enjoying this story so far.  Keep it up, though you may want to be careful about the way in which Hermione interacts with Snape.  Perhaps it's just my perception of the character, but the fact that she's being so forward with him seems more than a little out of character for her.  As for Snape, he seems to be a bit more easygoing and a bit less sharp in this story than he is in canon--he just somehow doesn't ring true.  If this is for a reason, fine, but if it isn't you may want to do a bit more research into this character.

Overall, though, good work.  I look forward to reading more and seeing how the seventh-years react to the new class.  

OOOH Do keep the capters commingElen

i love this snape! and hermione is prettier without being ho!mione. good chapter.

Nice idea for the story.  I like how you've had Hermione join the Army.  I don't know quite how the Army works in Britain, but I'm sure Hermione would greatly appreciate the military as a new and diverse experience.

Also, just a minor note, if you want to fix it...but it's so minor, you probably don't need to: Students in Britain don't "graduate;" they "leave" school.  "Graduate" is an American term.  Just a bit of constructive crit.

But, overall, very nicely written.  Well done!

~Julia~ 

Oh, I'm glad you gave a reason for Hermione to suddenly have wonderful hair, :).

So many authors simply say that Hermione came back to school and was suddenly a goddess.  Nice job on keeping it real.

Well done!

~Julia~ 

I'd love some of that shampoo myself!  Good job!

Hehe.... wonderful. Now where's the rest? lol.

Very nice how you brought him around in the end. I love that closing bit of speech between them. The class setting was quite fun.

hehehe...herms. nice take on the challenge! :)