Sweetest Perfection
Gardengrrl1315 Reviews | 15 Ratings, 0 Likes, 42 Favorites )
One shot. A precious moment in time, told from the point of view of our dour Potions master. It?s a bit romantic (I hope) and probably slightly OOC. It?s meant to be slightly vague. I?ll let you, gentle reader, decide the how and why?
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Gardengrrl13
Member Since 2005 | 7 Stories | Favorited by 6 | 150 Reviews Written | 35 Review Responses
Not too old, not too young...
I'm a Mom. Love music, Love to write.
Sometimes I don't think I have the patience for writing stories, so I pen poetry...
I'm working on that patience thing, though.
Reviews for Sweetest Perfection
Loved it, perfectly sweet!!!
This was very passionate and sweet. I like that it is told from Severus' perspective. Nicely done.
this managed to be both sweet and sizzling hot. beautifully written, and i think you did a really good job of writing from his viewpoint.
I loved your story! Very touching and so incredibly hot...
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
Thank you,
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
! I'm glad you enjoyed it!GG
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
Thank you,
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
! I'm glad you enjoyed it!GG
i think i wet myself...a little bit!.....teehee *blushes*
That was one of the if not the sweetest story I have ever read. You had me teary eyes.
Uber hot!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
Why thank you, Aurora!! I'm glad you enjoyed my bit of naughty fluff!! Thanks for leaving a review! GG
What a sweet, lovely story! You paint a beatuiful picture of a beautiful moment.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
Thank you so much,
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
!! I'm glad you like my little tale. :o) GG
Beautiful.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. GG
Lovely, sweet, delicious! A very enjoyable story. Thanks!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
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Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
... Thank YOU!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed my first foray in to the bedchamber!! *squee!* Thank you for the review!! GG
Oh, very nice. Sweet and romantic and emotional... sweetest perfection, indeed!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
*blushes* Thank you Avery G.!! I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for the review... I'm off to go squee, now!! *squeeeee!*
A very sweet PWP. Not sugary, not saccharine (nor aspartame nor even sucralose), just...sweet. Like whipped cream. The perfect amount of sweetness...which is apropos, because this was fluffy, too!...Now write something chocolate-cream-pie-ish so I can have the two together, please! ;-D~Lotm
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
Chocolate cream pie, huh? Hmmmm. I'll have to give that one some thought. *wicked grin* Seriously, thank you for the review, Lotm, I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was fun to write. *does happy hamster dance in chair* GG
A very breathtaking story! Would you pash the tissues please?
~The MistressP.S. 5 stars seriously isn't high enough!!! So I'm shooting 100 house points your way, not matter what house your in. Severus can get over it.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
Woot!! Mission accomplished! Thank you so much, Mistress that was an awesome review! This is my first attempt at erotica/smut/PWP. I'm glad you liked it!! *goes off to squee where family won't question me...* GG
Thanks for sharing. This was very sweet.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
I'm glad you liked it,
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of Sweetest Perfection)
! Thank you for leaving a review! GG
Loved your story...Depeche Mode has a song with the same title....