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In Need of a Moment
Southern_Witch_6954 Reviews | 6.13/10 (54 Ratings, 0 Likes, 9 Favorites )
Hermione finds herself drawn to Ron's older brother. He feels the same. Is something possible between them? This is in drabble format--my first attempt at it.
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I adore the world of HP.
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Reviews for In Need of a Moment
somehow I knew you were going to kill off Ron. Although, I have to admit, I thought for a moment that you were going to kill of Charlie, too. That would have just been an emotional stick of dynamite.
The head jumping was a bit difficult. Took me a few lines each time to figure out whose head we were in.
Moving story, just the same. Well done, as always.
Loved it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of In Need of a Moment)
Thanks so much for reading :)
*sniffle* You did it again. Make my cry, that is. Those last two lines are PERFECT.The more I read of your work, the more I love your writing. You have a great talent of manipulating people's emotions with your writing. I hope you know that.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of In Need of a Moment)
Thank you for the comments. That's a very high compliment indeed. :)
Interesting set of drabbles--and yes, I did think Bill.
Oh, how bittersweet! I couldn't decide who I was pulling for! She seemed to love them both, but I think had more passion for Charlie. I never would have thought of these two, but you made it believeable! Great job!
Poor Ron. I think he's going to get it in canon, too. I still feel sorry for him. But, it was nice that everyone was able to see that he would have wanted Hermione and Charlie to be happy.It was a lovely ending and didn't feel cut short. I have enjoyed this drabble series very much. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. :)
*happy sigh* gods I adore Charlie and this story was amazing too... poor ron *he he he evil laugh*
You know I was following this one despite my lack of reviews for you. Seems that I have lost track of what's really important, neglecting my friends in order to do other things. I'm so sorry I haven't paid you the attention you deserve. I have a soft spot for the Hermione/Charlie pairing; he's the only Weasley I would like to see with her in canon. I have read great stories for these pairings, but yours has nothing to ask to the ones authors more familiarised with the ship write. I think that for a change you wrote a different Ron, one that seems to deserve Hermione because he's fighting for her. I liked him, and despite my general disdain for him, I felt quite fine with this Ron. Harry was perfect as well, the protective friend and almost brother for Hermione. He knows her well, and he takes care of her. He even approves her relationship with Charlie, because he knows that Ron wanted that, and because he knows that only him can make her happy. I liked the ending, quite sweet. Charon was a perfect choice. I had only heard Sharon before, but with a C is quite fitting. Very well done, it was sad and sweet, and in the end it worked the way it was meant to be. Love you, hon. I'll never neglect you again. *hugs*
Nice, as much as I wanted Charlie with Hermione that Ron had to die and was still noble was sad. Nice touch of him being honoured as he was?
Break my heart, why don't you? So sad. But absolutely wonderful at the same time. A perfect, bittersweet ending. Very well done.
Well, it was a bit unexpected. Is that non-con? Kind of reads like it - perhaps dub-con. I feel quite ill after reading it actually, but it's good writing, as usual. I think I'd have liked a warning.
Response from Chartreuse (Reviewer)
Sorry, one more thing. I just realised, after a moment's reflection, that your fantastic writing portrayed the emotions of hermione so incredibly well - it was no wonder I felt ill. LOL I know, sounds weird. It really affected me, put it that way.
*screaming!* OH MY LORD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your muse went to Rwanda for the Solstice... clearly not Ibiza like the rest! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
The horror! Hurry up and give us more!
*looks at you in horror*
But ... but ... nooooooooooo....
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of In Need of a Moment)
Uh oh? Teehee...*whistles evilly*
Response from HogwartsHoney (Reviewer)
Bad, naughty, EEEVIL Sunshine.
ohhh Charlie!! gods love him! SW69 you nasty pasty! heheh I hope Charlie comes through in the end! hehe well written can't wait for the next chappie!!!
ohh gods that chapter was amazing! god ron the prat! hehe he has to ruin everything! :D
god that was hot!! I love Charlie and HG there aren't enough stories on them :D well done...onto chapter two :D
Man, Charlie got caught up, eh! He had been wanting and needing her too long. I feel so bad for these three. Although she is attracted to Charlie, it seems to me that she truly wants Ron!
Oh my goodness. Heartbreaking. Just heartbreaking. You really captured it perfectly in those twenty-three drabbles. :) Lovely.
Oh my goodness. Heartbreaking. Just heartbreaking. You really captured it perfectly in those twenty-three drabbles. :) Lovely.
Oh my goodness. Tender, passionate. Very meaningful. I'm usually not a fan of pairing Hermione with Charlie or Bill, but this is just well done. :) On to read the rest of it!
This was heart-wrenching. I've never gone for anybody but Snape for Hermione (ok, and perhaps some Lucious action). But the way you've written this is wonderful. I know I couldn't write in drabbles even if I tried. Wonderfully done Southern!
This fic is so bittersweet! I want CW/HG together, and that is unual for me! LOL
Oh the angst-oh the sadness-oh the despair! My question is the same as Charlie’s how long does Hermione’s honest try going to last? Go Charlie!!
Okay...I've gotten the old (and I mean old) pom-pons out and I'm cheering for Charlie's Team. Go Charlie! Great set of drabbles!
Cheers
I'm not a big fan of most drabbles, but I really like this one. I find I'm enjoying the way the perspective switches back and forth with each one; I think that would not have been so easy to do clearly in another format.Much as I generally like Ron, I'm really pulling for Charlie to win out here. I'm looking forward to seeing how you end it.