What Exactly Are the Dark Arts?
Chapter 4 of 5
MayavanavihariniHariniLong forgotten memories resurface when two individuals, poles apart yet strikingly similar to each other, happen to meet.
Reviewed“Yes, your visions. What exactly do you see?”
“I see this girl… an Indian-looking girl, around sixteen or so… And I see Snape… He’s roughly the same age. The girl ties something on his wrist and drops down dead immediately.”
Narayani sat erect and closed her eyes, concentrating on Parvati’s description. “Do you see anything else?”
“Yes, I see You-Know-Who, and his snake, Nagini. You-Know-Who laughs madly while the snake approaches Snape. It’s all blurred after that.”
“Is that all?”
“Wait, there’s a glowing dial that appears around Snape’s wrist after Nagini attacks him.”
Narayani did not speak a word. Tears rolled down her cheeks uncontrollably.
Parvati was perplexed. She wasn’t used to seeing the emotional side of her mother. In fact Narayani had been the one to convince Vitthal not to take the two girls away from Hogwarts. (“We are Marathas, Vitthal! Such cowardice doesn’t suit us,” she had said loftily.)
“Aai, are you OK?” Parvati asked her mother gently.
Vitthal, who had just come back from the Ministry, was shocked at what he saw.
“Narayani! What’s the matter?” He was terribly worried to see his wife crying. She hadn’t cried even once in all the twenty-seven long years they had been married.
The Patil matriarch wiped off her tears violently. “This is the problem with you Western guys. There’s little you learn about mastering your mind. That’s the sole reason why I ended up losing an old friend,” she said bitterly. “Because her only crime was to fall in love with the wrong person,” she added with a hint of sarcasm in her voice.
Parvati didn’t know how to react.
“Are you talking of Heer, by any chance?” Vitthal finally broke the awkward silence.
Narayani nodded sadly.
“But how did she die? Dumbledore told us that it was an act of Dark Magic! I am ready to avenge her death, come what may! She was my best friend at Hogwarts.” Vitthal looked visibly angry.
Padma was entering through the fireplace at that very instant.
She held her breath, wondering what the conversation was about. But she chose to keep quiet. If Narayani Patil was indeed a Dark Witch, it might be revealed any moment now.
Narayani’s reaction was unprecedented.
“Dark Magic, did you say? Do you remember the definition of Dark Magic?” she challenged.
“The branch of magic dealing with unknown and potentially dangerous forces,” answered Vitthal, when the impact of realization hit Padma like a bolt of lightning.
‘Unknown’.
The word had lost its significance to the more prominent second part of the definition, ‘potentially dangerous’.
So ‘unknown’ forms of magic, more specifically, forms of magic unknown to the Western world were included under this definition too. And that included the traditional Indian magical arts taught at Mayavati.
That was grossly unfair.
But Parvati was only getting more and more perplexed. Who was this mysterious Heer, the mutual friend of her parents? All she could guess was that this girl was a Hogwarts alumnus, and possibly a hapless romantic like herself. But what could be her possible connection with Snape?
A/N: The Marathas are a well-known warrior clan hailing from Maharashtra, India.
Thanks to nagandsev, the wonderful admin here, for her Midas touch!
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11 Reviews | 7.27/10 Average
Who is Heer? Is she the samer age as the twins' parents? Then how did she become a little girl? And did Narayani deliberately give her the herbs to save Snape? How did she get hold of the herbs given her dislike of using magic? As you can see, I have many questions! I hope you will continue to write so they will be answered :)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Hi again! Thanks for reading and reviewing. I do have a plot on my mind that answers all your questions but alas, I can't spill the beans. It's reassuring to read your review. 😊 RL is killing me there (as my self-imposed exile from FB proves....lol) but I will be back.
I am curious to see how Indian magic ties together with Western, and what this dark force is. Will Parvati be able to heal the stubborn Snape's mind? Was the act of Dark Magic a form of rebirth, that kept Snape alive after Nagini's attack by trading a life for a life? Was it a willing sacrifice or murder? And will Parvati eventually embrace her magic once again? I suppose I need to read on... Well done on posting your first fanfic. You're officially a writer now :)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Ah,
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
, I'm overwhelmed! Thank you so much :)Yes, you are definitely on the right track though I can't divulge the spoilers yet! :P Am so glad you found it readable:)
Enjoyed how we're introduced to Severus and his state of mind, as snarky as ever--and also the interesting revelation about Padma and Parvati's mother! ' (...) Quite an interesting Dark Witch she was.”'--wondering how easy it will be for them to find out Aai's secrets...--looking forward to more!
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
To quote a Malayalam movie, Drishyam, "Scenes are deceptive." *wicked grin* nag, nag, where would I be without you? 'Thank you' sounds too superficial.. You know that already!
Severus lives! always good news, dark mark gone, and now Parvati on the job to bring him back from the brink. Looking forward to more.
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Of course he doesn't die. He. Just. Can't. Thanks so much dear for continuing to read this.. Your lovely review and shiny stars made my day!
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
You are a woman after my own heart, there is no way Severus can die, my heart will not allow it.
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
I promise to make sure he lives. And lives life to the fullest.
Stay tuned. Next chapter is up!:)
look to be and interesting story!!
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Thanks so much for the feedback. Glad you are enjoying it!
An intriguing start, looking forward to more.
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Dear
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
, thank you so much for your encouragement! It means a lot, especially for a newcomer like me..:)
Thoroughly intrigued and looking forward to more of Parvati and Padma, but especially to Parvati and her interaction with her newest client... Wondering about what will happen during their first session.Enjoying Parvati's perspective and inner thoughts, Padma care and concern for her sister, as well as this being a rare pairing and unique story from the Patil sisters point of view--again, looking forward to more!
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Thank you so much, nag! You just made my day! It was such a great honour to work with you, and it was even more exciting to get such an encouraging response for my debut fanfic. :)
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For some reason, hope it doesn't offend anyone, the elements of the opening chapters: the mother-father relation, the sisters' interaction, the whole family involved in courtship, remind me of the first chapter in 'Pride and Prejudice.'
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Dear
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
,
Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Well, I haven't read that masterpiece and I certainly intend to do so. Whatever interactions I wrote about were based on the conservative and rather strict, yet loving families I have observed around myself.
Nevertheless, I am flattered, to say the least..thanks for wasting your valuable time in reading this newcomer's writing!
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
, I just went through the chapter you mentioned (Internet has made it so much easier to search specific chapters of specific books). And no, my dear, Narayani Patil has only one thing in common with Mrs Bennet. Her fiery temper. I don't really understand how Mrs Patil reminded you of her. And you mentioned something about the involvement of the whole family in courtship. Well, honestly I don't know what you meant. I think I made it pretty clear that the only person who knows of Parvati's little crush is her twin. And the Patil parents don't even know about it, and rest assured, won't approve of it at all, as the upcoming chapters will prove.
Response from Fairfield (Reviewer)
I see now that I should have given in to the impulse to reply to your first response by saying you expressed it better than I did: it seems that whatever happens the whole family will be involved, and I should have said I know there are numerous differences between the stories. I suppose you are concerned that I have misled people about what you are writing. Nevertheless, that is what popped into my head, and the intuitive leap may have been far wrong or it may be that there are more similarities than I consciously realize.
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Well, tbh, many Indian families are actively involved in the selection process of prospective brides & grooms for their children and there's nothing wrong about that. So well, family involvement is something that HAS to be highlighted.. It may not be everyone's cup of tea, I understand.
ps Your chapter did not come across as melodramatic to me, but rather engaging and informative--I personally like to know a lot of the character's background, and love the exploration of Parvati's point of view and life experience shared, contrasting her twin sister's and parents, etc. You've set her up as a very strong, unique individual, and I'm looking forward to learning more about her--and of course her interaction with one particular tall, dark wizard!
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Thanks a ton for your reassurance and kindness! The entire Patil family has a vital role in the plot.
And yes, I am looking forward to the first session with, ahem, him, as eagerly as you..*blushing*
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, sharing more, with its in-depth background about Parvati and her family--enjoying understanding the different influences in her life and life choices, along with the Marathi & Sanskrit terms, and also how long she has held a deep crush on a particular someoneLooking forward to learning more about her visions, her talk to Aai, and her inital session with Snape!
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
I'm flattered! In a humble attempt to provide an authentic Marathi flavour, I had to do a bit of research on Marathi as it is not my mothertongue (mine is Bangla). I am thrilled to learn that you liked the Marathi and Sanskrit terms!
My everlasting thanks to you!