The Task... and the Hurdles
Chapter 2 of 5
MayavanavihariniHariniLong forgotten memories resurface when two individuals, poles apart yet strikingly similar to each other, happen to meet.
Reviewed"Aai, it's urgent. I need to talk. These visions… they are driving me mad!"
"I'm all ears. But finish eating your Pav bhaji first," commanded Narayani Patil sternly, stepping out of her kitchen. "Your visions will only worsen with your irregular eating habits."
Parvati didn't even attempt to argue with her mother. Clients and patients could be persuaded and convinced. Not mothers.
Narayani had been a rather strict parent, unlike her husband Vitthal, a former Slytherin student at Hogwarts. Yes, you read that right, but Auror Vitthal Patil was no Death Eater; he hated You-Know-Who. Despite being a witch AND a Pureblood, Narayani preferred to do things the Muggle way because she believed that using magic for daily chores was a wastage of magical energy. Magic, in her opinion, was a precious gift, not to be flaunted unnecessarily. She had ensured that the Patil twins were in no way distinguishable from the Muggle girls in the locality (much to the irritation of Vitthal Patil, who would secretly take the girls for Quidditch practice or an occasional visit to other wizarding families) until the Hogwarts letters arrived and the big feud started.
"Enough, Narayani. Our daughters need to realize that they are special…that they are different. I have told them all about my Hogwarts days..."
"Oh, yes, of course! So that they follow your footsteps… you egoistic Pureblood Western wizard!"
Blah blah blah…
"Do you think Aai is a Muggle?" Parvati would wonder.
"I don't really think so. Haven't you heard what she keeps yelling whenever Baba tries to make her understand? 'You egoistic Pureblood Western wizard.' Mind that. 'Western wizard'. Which suggests that she might be a witch, but not a 'Western' one," Padma reasoned.
The two sisters had learnt about their mother's magical talent much, much later. Not before she had volunteered to participate in the Battle of Hogwarts.
"I wish I had some more Sandhani left," she had sighed.
"Now what's that?" Parvati had never heard anything of this sort, though the name sounded surprisingly Indian.
"It's a magical herb that can heal bony injuries. Somewhat like your Skele-Gro Potion," explained Narayani.
"We had heard of Alternative Medicine, but now we have Alternative Magic too! Wow! Aai, you know of herbs we have never heard of. You will be a great asset to the army," gushed Padma.
Vitthal gave a knowing smile. "Your Aai was a topper at Mayavati, after all. It's the largest and the most ancient school of magic in India."
Parvati's jaw dropped open. "Aai, you never told us! You brought us up almost like Muggles!"
"Because Mayavi people need to learn not to take magic for granted."
Later on, Parvati was thankful about her upbringing, though. The terrible war had left her traumatized, and she had firmly decided to cut off all her connections with the wizarding world. She desperately needed a fresh life, a life that was not a constant reminder of Lavender's gruesome death. That was precisely why she had taken up a course in Clinical Psychology in a Muggle college, where nobody had the least clue about her magical abilities. She was now a successful clinical psychologist in Muggle London and even wrote for the Agony Aunt section in a leading Muggle magazine.
Her twin, on the other hand, proved herself to be quite a multi-tasker, using the Time-Turner to simultaneously attend the Healers' course AND Muggle medical school. It was her way of coping with the post-war stress—immersing herself in studies so that she had absolutely no time to think of anything else. At present she was undergoing specialization in Psychiatry.
Both the twins were empathetic listeners and keen observers, but were hopeless when it came to Legilimency and Occlumency skills (perhaps their emotional nature proved to be the biggest obstacle in mastering these skills). This had never created a difficulty in their careers, though, as they catered mostly to the needs of Muggle patients.
Until now.
Their much intriguing Potions Professor, as it turned out, was alive and was suffering from severe depression. He had been discovered in a half-dead condition from Hogsmeade where he lay in a near-comatose state after consuming an overdose of Firewhisky. After intensive care at St Mungo's, he was clinically stable, and his suicidal tendencies had decreased. However, he still maintained that he should have died. He needs psychotherapy, Padma convinced her seniors. Interestingly, Padma had found no trace of the Dark Mark on his body ever since he had been admitted to the hospital, and that puzzled her. The only substance that can remove the Dark Mark is the Suvarnakarani. How on earth did he come across that? You learn about that herb only at Mayavati!
Nevertheless, she had discussed him with Parvati in great detail, who, after much coaxing, had agreed to take up the case.
It had been a difficult decision for Parvati. Unbeknownst to anyone (except Padma, of course, who read her like an open book), she had a serious, unrequited crush on Severus. She had been reasonably good in Potions, which meant she had never gotten a detention with him; but she hadn't been as good as Padma (which might have earned her an occasional curt nod). She had never talked about her crush, because her upbringing taught her that such feelings towards a teacher were scandalous. She had tried her best to mask her feelings by actively participating in every anti-Snape discussion in the Gryffindor common room (Snape-bashing was a fashionable thing to do). She had hoped that it was just a stupid teenage crush which would go away as soon as he was out of her sight.
It hadn't.
Just like Severus was yet to get over his one and only infatuation. Lily Evans.
However, that wasn't the only thing bothering Parvati. Ever since she had heard about Snape's survival, she had been having these strange visions—an Indian-looking girl tying something around young Snape's wrist and dropping down dead instantly… Nagini making her final move… Voldemort's blood-curdling laugh… A glowing dial appearing around Snape's wrist… What on earth did these visions mean? Seriously, Parvati hated being a Seer.
She needed to talk to Aai. She would have all the answers. She always had.
A/N: 'Aai' and 'Baba' are the Marathi terms for mother and father respectively.
'Mayavi' is a Sanskrit word meaning magical.
'Pav bhaji' is a Marathi dish comprising hot buttered bread and a spicy preparation of assorted vegetables.
Mayavati is a beautiful place nestled in the lap of the Himalayas. The institute of magical education is my creation, though.
Thanks to nagandsev, the wonderful admin here, for her Midas touch!
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Who is Heer? Is she the samer age as the twins' parents? Then how did she become a little girl? And did Narayani deliberately give her the herbs to save Snape? How did she get hold of the herbs given her dislike of using magic? As you can see, I have many questions! I hope you will continue to write so they will be answered :)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Hi again! Thanks for reading and reviewing. I do have a plot on my mind that answers all your questions but alas, I can't spill the beans. It's reassuring to read your review. 😊 RL is killing me there (as my self-imposed exile from FB proves....lol) but I will be back.
I am curious to see how Indian magic ties together with Western, and what this dark force is. Will Parvati be able to heal the stubborn Snape's mind? Was the act of Dark Magic a form of rebirth, that kept Snape alive after Nagini's attack by trading a life for a life? Was it a willing sacrifice or murder? And will Parvati eventually embrace her magic once again? I suppose I need to read on... Well done on posting your first fanfic. You're officially a writer now :)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Ah,
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
, I'm overwhelmed! Thank you so much :)Yes, you are definitely on the right track though I can't divulge the spoilers yet! :P Am so glad you found it readable:)
Enjoyed how we're introduced to Severus and his state of mind, as snarky as ever--and also the interesting revelation about Padma and Parvati's mother! ' (...) Quite an interesting Dark Witch she was.”'--wondering how easy it will be for them to find out Aai's secrets...--looking forward to more!
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
To quote a Malayalam movie, Drishyam, "Scenes are deceptive." *wicked grin* nag, nag, where would I be without you? 'Thank you' sounds too superficial.. You know that already!
Severus lives! always good news, dark mark gone, and now Parvati on the job to bring him back from the brink. Looking forward to more.
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Of course he doesn't die. He. Just. Can't. Thanks so much dear for continuing to read this.. Your lovely review and shiny stars made my day!
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
You are a woman after my own heart, there is no way Severus can die, my heart will not allow it.
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
I promise to make sure he lives. And lives life to the fullest.
Stay tuned. Next chapter is up!:)
look to be and interesting story!!
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Thanks so much for the feedback. Glad you are enjoying it!
An intriguing start, looking forward to more.
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Dear
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
, thank you so much for your encouragement! It means a lot, especially for a newcomer like me..:)
Thoroughly intrigued and looking forward to more of Parvati and Padma, but especially to Parvati and her interaction with her newest client... Wondering about what will happen during their first session.Enjoying Parvati's perspective and inner thoughts, Padma care and concern for her sister, as well as this being a rare pairing and unique story from the Patil sisters point of view--again, looking forward to more!
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Thank you so much, nag! You just made my day! It was such a great honour to work with you, and it was even more exciting to get such an encouraging response for my debut fanfic. :)
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For some reason, hope it doesn't offend anyone, the elements of the opening chapters: the mother-father relation, the sisters' interaction, the whole family involved in courtship, remind me of the first chapter in 'Pride and Prejudice.'
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Dear
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
,
Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Well, I haven't read that masterpiece and I certainly intend to do so. Whatever interactions I wrote about were based on the conservative and rather strict, yet loving families I have observed around myself.
Nevertheless, I am flattered, to say the least..thanks for wasting your valuable time in reading this newcomer's writing!
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
, I just went through the chapter you mentioned (Internet has made it so much easier to search specific chapters of specific books). And no, my dear, Narayani Patil has only one thing in common with Mrs Bennet. Her fiery temper. I don't really understand how Mrs Patil reminded you of her. And you mentioned something about the involvement of the whole family in courtship. Well, honestly I don't know what you meant. I think I made it pretty clear that the only person who knows of Parvati's little crush is her twin. And the Patil parents don't even know about it, and rest assured, won't approve of it at all, as the upcoming chapters will prove.
Response from Fairfield (Reviewer)
I see now that I should have given in to the impulse to reply to your first response by saying you expressed it better than I did: it seems that whatever happens the whole family will be involved, and I should have said I know there are numerous differences between the stories. I suppose you are concerned that I have misled people about what you are writing. Nevertheless, that is what popped into my head, and the intuitive leap may have been far wrong or it may be that there are more similarities than I consciously realize.
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Well, tbh, many Indian families are actively involved in the selection process of prospective brides & grooms for their children and there's nothing wrong about that. So well, family involvement is something that HAS to be highlighted.. It may not be everyone's cup of tea, I understand.
ps Your chapter did not come across as melodramatic to me, but rather engaging and informative--I personally like to know a lot of the character's background, and love the exploration of Parvati's point of view and life experience shared, contrasting her twin sister's and parents, etc. You've set her up as a very strong, unique individual, and I'm looking forward to learning more about her--and of course her interaction with one particular tall, dark wizard!
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
Thanks a ton for your reassurance and kindness! The entire Patil family has a vital role in the plot.
And yes, I am looking forward to the first session with, ahem, him, as eagerly as you..*blushing*
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, sharing more, with its in-depth background about Parvati and her family--enjoying understanding the different influences in her life and life choices, along with the Marathi & Sanskrit terms, and also how long she has held a deep crush on a particular someoneLooking forward to learning more about her visions, her talk to Aai, and her inital session with Snape!
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Author of A Dream Deferred)
I'm flattered! In a humble attempt to provide an authentic Marathi flavour, I had to do a bit of research on Marathi as it is not my mothertongue (mine is Bangla). I am thrilled to learn that you liked the Marathi and Sanskrit terms!
My everlasting thanks to you!