I love the way the story started- the way you write it seems as if each character was interrupting the flow of the story to get their two cents in- and certain parts in particular made me giggle (library Switzerland, Crooks ignoring all boundaries and wards). Good start to the story!

I love the way the story started- the way you write it seems as if each character was interrupting the flow of the story to get their two cents in- and certain parts in particular made me giggle (library Switzerland, Crooks ignoring all boundaries and wards). Good start to the story!

Loads of fun!

Loved it!

Oh I loved this! The banter between them all was perfect :) thank you so much for sharing. 

Loved it! Severus & Lucius ~ who could choose. 😊  I think you had the right amount of backstory.  Characterization was perfect.  Well done sweetie! 

Ahhh....  The humor in the dialogue brought me many smiles and a chuckle or few.  Thanks for sharing.  You've brightened my day.

You did wonderfully, Ladymage Samiko! There must be a back story for this story to work. Even without the blatant smut we all adore the story was very erotic and feels to me like chapter 1 rather than a one shot. I would be delighted to read much more.  

Severus obviously doesn't enjoy sharing generally, but he was a gentleman since this is so new between them all and especially for Hermione.  I think Lucius could endure a threesome with out jealousy for quite some time. He is more self confident, could find another lover easily but does have standards. Severus needs to possess. I think that is another reason why he choose to go last. Once he had been with Hermione it would be difficult for him to just leave the room and give her to another man. 

I'm not sure that Severus is made to be in a threesome for the long haul. I think he needs to be needed.  I would enjoy several more chapters where they graduate to advance play for a while and then Lucius realizes the need to facilitate a lasting relationship between an unsure Severus, whom feels unworthy, and a Hermione that while she is sexually attracted to Lucius falls deeply in love with Severus. 

Optionally, I would also love to challenge you to convince me that the three of them could eventually happily move into Malfoy Manor (Lucius could never live at Spinner's End) and live a full, happy life where Super Hermione has two lovers/husbands and is witch enough to be able meet both of their needs physically, emotionally and intellectually, and the three of them live happily ever after with neither man feeling like the third wheel no matter what the rest of the wizarding world has to say.  Option 2 sounds near impossible to me.  

What a wonderful story! I loved hermione's gumption, her banter with Lucius and the tenderness and care she shows Severus. I'd like to believe she picks severus but all three get together once in a while. Thank you for this delicious little treat of words. 

Quite an interesting read.  I would love to know Hermione's choice of either, both, or none.  :) Thank you for the wonderful story.

Why, you've done a quite enjoyable job with this prompt, the only thing to regret is that it's already over.

Beautifully done, without backstory smut is just boring. Lucius or Severus? I know which one I would choose, but then I don't have Hermione's ..... experience.

I really loved this, I really love the three together!! Thanks for a sweet look at Lucius and a dark intense look at Severus...and Hermione, well what a lucky Bitch!!!

Love the open ending. :)

So nice to read something of yours, longer that 100 words.