Chapter 19
Chapter 19 of 21
MHaydnAlmost a PWP.
Chapter 19
"I know you're used to more luxurious surroundings," said Luna, "and my father always has papers scattered around."
"I like this," said Draco, settling into a sofa facing the fireplace. "It's comfortable."
"Should I get a tea, fetch a biscuit, peel a grape?" asked Luna.
All that could wait. Draco wanted to hear about her trip to London. She told him his mother had been a life saver. She and Padma had been nervous enough about the job interviews that they could barely function, and they had been continuously apologizing for their ineptness, but Mrs. Malfoy had shrugged it off and said she had put up with Draco for eighteen years and she could survive two girls for one week.
"I think mum needs a daughter," said Draco.
As she related the trip, Luna moved closer and closer. She had her left arm on his shoulder when he made the remark about his mother needing a daughter. She said that nothing seemed to bother him these days and moved closer. He replied that he was scared to death of that thing they were luring down to the bog. He knew Luna didn't approve, but he wanted to poison it. It was a menace. Luna said she agreed with him, that thing wasn't safe, and snuggled closer.
She had planned to lead Draco into a rational discussion of the future, their future. Did they have one? She had planned to approach the subject by talking about other couples. Did he think Theo and Padma had a chance? What about Professor Roeder and the older women? Had he noticed the way Pansy and Hermione looked at Professor Galland? She had to make a level-headed choice. Even now, losing him would devastate her.
The plan never came to fruition. She told him she had missed him, and when he said he had missed her too, she was all over him.
Draco hadn't been thinking of a rational discussion so much, but rather how to get out of an emotional pit he had dug himself into. He had let his fondness and admiration for Luna sway him into thinking he could have some kind of relationship with her, but he had taken a hard-headed look at his past behavior and a clear-headed look at Luna's behavior perhaps a bit kooky, but still beyond reproach. He couldn't imagine Luna or her friends or her family accepting him.
That, too, went out the window.
Suddenly aware of what she was doing, Luna jumped up, announced they needed a tea, and dashed to the kitchen. When she returned, however, Draco took the teacup she offered him and coaxed her into his lap. She was telling herself that she should both act normal and behave properly, but being in his lap was eroding her defenses.
"When I was just a little girl, I believed in Whispering Whiffles," she said. "They confide what people are thinking in the ear of innocent girls. Of course, sometimes they just whisper what the girl wants to hear."
"Tricky little devils, aren't they? When was the last time they whispered to you?"
"New Year's Eve."
"That was five months ago," said Draco as something whispered in his ear that he would learn more about this girl if he just listened instead of asking. Besides, he was content with her sitting quietly in his lap.
Her fingers were curling his hair. "They whispered that you would be sitting on this sofa beside me as we watched the fire," she said.
He gave her shoulder a small squeeze.
"They whispered you would be paying more attention to me than the fire."
He nodded yes.
"I'm not certain I should tell you anything more. They do whisper all kinds of things."
He let his hand massage her shoulders and watched her become even more dreamy-eyed. She was sighing as his hand worked its way down her spine. Her spine arched, and he regarded her breasts. A refined lady, he thought. "You're lovely," he said.
She was embracing him. Omigod, he thought as her breasts, firm and soft, pressed against him. He heard her whisper, "They told me you wanted to get your hands on me." He could hear her breathing. "It made me tingle," she said.
Tingle, thought Draco. Tingle. That's a good idea. Let's tingle.
"I do want to hold you," he said. "Did they whisper that I think you're intelligent and attractive?"
He accepted a tender embrace. I love the feel of this girl. I love the looks of this girl. By the gods, I hope I'm not falling in love with this girl. What am I going to do?
"And you're very sweet," he added.
Her embrace became more than tender as she said, "You wouldn't think that if you knew what I let them whisper to me, if you knew how much I enjoyed listening to them."
"They said 'Do this,'" she said as her lips found his with the gentleness of a young girl finding romance.
Luna sat up straight. "But I should grow up. I should listen to myself, not anything else."
Draco wanted to tell her, really wanted to tell her, that she should pay attention to the Whispering Whiffles, that they were making wonderful suggestions, but his core of pride prevailed. If she didn't want him of her own accord, then he was better off without her. No, you're not, an inner voice raged. Tell her to heed those Whispering Whatevers.
Draco's innards were in turmoil. What should he do? What could he say? He wanted Luna to stay where she was. Would she leave if he said the wrong thing? Would she leave if he said nothing? If he acted too slowly, would she decide he didn't really care for her? If he acted too fast, would she be offended?
"I like your company," he said. Omigod, how lame could one get?
"Do you have any plans?" he asked. He groaned inwardly lameness doubled, tripled. She was doing so well a little while ago, and now, he was blowing it.
Her finger twirled his hair. "Do you mean for the rest of today, Draco, or for the rest of the year?" she asked.
She noticed his dismay and regretted teasing him. Almost. He had been doing and saying lovely things a minute ago. Why had he become distant? Had he suddenly decided he didn't like her that much?
"Let me get you more tea," she said.
She wants to get away from me, he thought.
While she was in the kitchen, he idly picked up a copy of her father's magazine and started reading. He cursed himself. He should be making his excuses and leaving, not waiting around to get kicked out of the house. He became engrossed in one of the articles. It was the weirdest thing he had ever read, but fascinating.
When Luna returned and saw him reading the magazine, she almost dropped the teacups. She was mortified. He would be thinking all the terrible things people thought about her and her father. She could leave quietly by the back door and never have to face him again.
He looked up and said, "Your father makes connections. He constructs a coherent story. I have my doubts about his conclusions, but I see where you get your ability, although you're more cautious and more empirical than he is."
What!? thought Luna. She did drop the teacups.
Having missed the best moment to make his escape, Draco, deciding to act like a true gentleman regardless, rose from the sofa to wave his wand and clean up the spilled tea and broken china. Luna was looking at him strangely. As he passed her, heading for the trash bin, she took him by the upper arms.
"Draco?" she said intently enough that it caught his full attention and the tea and broken cups fell to the floor again.
"I'm starting to think you like me," she said, "as a person."
"Yes," he admitted, "but that's not entirely good. It makes me nervous and anxious around you."
Why am I admitting this to her? he wondered.
Luna, taking his confession in stride, said that his brewing tea while she helped was the very thing to calm him. A wave of her wand disposed of the previous disaster, and she led him into the kitchen. She hovered close as he filled the kettle, brushed against him as he located the tea leaves, and generally got in his way. He smooched her up. That would teach her not to get between a Malfoy and his cuppa really teach her: her breasts were getting perky.
"One lump or two?" asked the maiden.
"I'm getting a sweet tooth," he said.
The way he looked at her when he said that cracked the last barrier that Luna had. Long suppressed urges came to life, and her lips were crushing his. Her inner core was braced for rejection, but his arms went around her and pulled her close. She went delirious with the thought that he wanted her. All the affection and need that she thought she would never get to express welled up and she was all over Draco and Draco was returning all of it. She was aware of his hardness against her softness. She wanted that, too.
She caught her breath and said, "Let's go sit on the sofa."
Once there, she was in is lap. Her kisses were warm and soft. Her thoughts spiraled out of control. She would offer him soft Luna, hard Luna. She would care for him, support him. She would fight with him and struggle with him.
But now, she wanted him. Her breasts ached with their loneliness. She was fumbling with her buttons. He was telling her she was beautiful. He was tending her breasts with his lips, his tongue. He was the one she wanted between them.
Her secret place ached with loneliness, and she guided Draco's hand under her skirt. His hand caressed the smooth skin and firm muscles. She liked it, but a final remnant of primness had her knees together. Draco was giving her a loving look while his fingers gently pushed at them. A delicious feeling of surrendering went through Luna as her knees separated for Draco. He was the one she wanted between them.
She was giving him an adoring look as he parted her thighs. Her skirt slid up, and he could view the whole scene. The image would never leave him, and he knew he would never get tired of Luna spreading her legs for him.
She wiggled a little when his finger slipped under her knickers. It had tickled. When his finger slid into her, the hot slickness gave him a start, but he reminded himself that Luna was a girl. Even imperturbable, ethereal, loony Luna had a furry quim between her legs, and she would get wet for someone. It was still a bit of a shock that he was the one.
"Tell me what you like," he said.
She liked it all: his gentle exploring, his adoration, his astonishment at what he was doing. She was murmuring he was her darling, caressing him with soft lips, showering him with affection. She was moaning and telling him not to stop. His lovely, ethereal Luna was gasping and squirming. She was giving him a helpless smile. Her ethereal quim was drenching his fingers. Her thighs were crushing his hand. He held the flushed and panting girl, thinking she was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen.
"Oh Draco, let's go to my room."
She was pulling him up the stairs, pulling him into her bedroom, pulling him close. He let her undress him; he let her tear her own clothes off; he let her pull him inside her.
Being in Luna was like nothing else in the world.
Draco was going wild. He couldn't last. He had to last. He mumbled the numbing spell that was part of the Malfoy tradition: One took care of one's witch. He wished he hadn't. He wanted the whole thing back. But Luna gave him a knowing look. She knew what he had done. What little rationality he had left was thinking this woman was incredible.
The rest of his consciousness was worrying about what an animal he was. Her gasps filled the room as he pounded into her, into sloppy wet Luna. It was too good. He wanted her too much. All attempts at control failed when Luna wrapped her legs around him. Torrents of words were gushing from the lady: sweet things, lewd things, demanding things. She was demanding that he do her. Draco was riding the lushness and wildness of Luna. He was reveling in his discovery of an exotic beast.
Plunging into the jungle. He would go on safari forever.
"Draco."
Even through the spell, he could tell something had happened. He stopped. Luna was floating as her tight muscles went limp.
No one had warned Draco that his special lady's ecstasy would neutralize the numbness spell. All the things that Luna was and meant to him flooded in upon him, and she took the last thing he had left inside him.
He collapsed on her, totally spent.
He regained awareness to find that he was lying on top of her and she was running her fingers through his hair and looking at him adoringly. He embraced her and held her.
Luna finally said, "We need to rinse off."
They were drying after their shower when Luna said she wanted to go out for a coffee. He watched her dress. She was, once again, the imperturbable, ethereal Luna. A person might think she was untouchable. After she was dressed, however, she paused and declared something was missing. She dropped her knickers, placed them on the night table, and waved her wand. Into the top band of lace was woven
I "heart" Draco
She stepped back into her undies and said, "I'm ready. Let's go."
At the coffee shop, she wanted to share a strudel. She brought it back to the table and said it would be best if both got equal shares whereupon she cut it precisely in half. Then Draco watched her carefully divide the crumbs that had flaked off from the division. He was thinking he hadn't seen this side of Luna when she glanced sideways at him and chuckled at his concerned expression. Ravenclaw witches. He wondered what Theo had to put up with from Padma. But he couldn't muse about it too long, because Luna was feeding him strudel from her half.
He was telling her that he wanted to spend more time with her, lots more time with her, and if she liked, there was a place with lots of rooms and lots of space, and they could be together and have lots of privacy.
"Are you asking me to stay at the Malfoy Manor, Draco?"
"Yes."
"Really?" she asked.
"Yes," he said.
Her affirmative kiss was worthy of a true couple.
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36 Reviews | 10.0/10 Average
Loved all of the resolutions--Alain to escape back to Germany, him to harbour Theo and guide him. Seems that Padma will have her affluent family to fall back on. King Friedrich Wilhelm II was the monarch while Haydn composed, right? along with Nicholas II, Prince Esterházy being a major patron... what the students don't know or care about is still good for them to be exposed to--never know when it'll come in handy--thus sayeth another geek girl--lol! Cissy and Andy are survivors; I don't feel either will have regrets about their past liasons with Alain. It appears that the editor has accepted and values Biff for who and what he is and writes... Which is beautiful in and of itself on top of everything else in the story's arch. Lovely ending to Adolf and Hermione's storyline, so happy that Crookshanks gives his approval!Thank you for an intriguing, dynamic adventure and tale! Looking forward to more!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks for all the reviews.
It would have been more appropriate for Adolf to ask about the monarch of Austria although there were several of them since Haydn had a long life. Adolf knows about Esterhazy. He remembers what’s important.
At its heart, the story is a celebration of geek girls.
At the risk of ruining the story, it can be given an open ended and more upbeat conclusion by adding a third paragraph to the scene with Andy, Cissy, and Adolf
Adolf saw the sisters exchange glances. Two fleet-footed deer were after the wolf. With a name like Alain Roeder, they would begin their search in Alsace-Lorraine, and they knew Alain’s ego would not let him decline high profile assignments with their attendant publicity. Padma might be equally tenacious. Andy and Cissy would greet Alain with a triumphant smirk. Padma might grab Theo by the lapels, shake him until his teeth rattled, and then cry on his shoulder.
The reader can choose.
Just as good the second time around.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
That's good to hear. The question was what kind of naughty girl would Pansy like to be.
What is going on with Hermione? Curious to see where she is heading and the path(s) she might be choosing... Interesting bonding between the witches, survival and strategies--how to do so are vital. Enjoyed Cissy's acceptance of Luna, Draco & Luna being *together* and her reflection about Lucius 'He better say nice things, or she would bitch-hex him back to France.'--HA! Regardless of the Malfoy's innate coldness and cruelty, it seems Luna can not but help to protect all magical creatures, Draco being a very special one to her. Love the metaphors, details and tempestuous dynamics and elements of the Andy and Alain vignette, along with Biff and the editor's banter back and forth in between things. Great chapter!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks for the insightful comments. Hermione is on a dark path, unbalanced because her efforts to join wizard society have backfired. The older witches may be the first to offer acceptable advice to Hermione. Luna may bring needed warmth to the family. As Draco said earlier, "I think mum needs a daughter." Andy, who thought no one would ever want her, explodes.
Great chapter, looking forward to more.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thank you.
The visit to the zoo was very interesting,is Cissy in for a surprise ? we will have to wait and see. Poor Biff, Draco and Luna seem to have their own ideas of where the story is going.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks for the review. Responding to the zoo scene requires some empathy with animals. Draco and Luna appear to be an amazingly resilient pair.
The writing and scenario is as powerful as the first time I read it as a one-shot and as evocative then as now within this multi-chaptered work. Powerful, effective, a very striking development between them. Wondering about Pansy and Adolf's possible, continued discoveries of one another, and looking forward to more!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Glad to hear the chapter survived repetition: the first time as PWP, the second as character and plot development.
Enjoyed the contrast of the editor's reflections and depiction in the first vignette with the second one, both very powerful in each one's content. Luna's and Padma's family's 'gifts' for protection-HA!Enjoyed as well Biff's contribution--his style, cadence, rhythm, technique and dynamics between the two characters and atmosphere, description and pace. Love the different impressions each section makes, as always!Looking forward to more!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks. For the editor, the second effort is an elaboration of the first. More hyperbole about everyone's opinion of the Malfoys. You have a point: cadence and rhythm in erotica is difficult.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks. For the editor, the second effort is an elaboration of the first. More hyperbole about everyone's opinion of the Malfoys. You have a point: cadence and rhythm in erotica is difficult.
So glad that the ladies at The Pole and the Feather helped inspire Biff's Muse Enjoyed his inspired development of Theo and Padma's relationship set against a beautiful sunset, Pansy's assertiveness and Adolph's receptance, the boys getting into samurai lore and the inclusive possibility of the girls and any contribution they may have to offer to their game. Love the contrast of the editor's contribution to the Alain and Cissy underplot with Biff's addition; I love the supernatural elements layered on within the innate wizarding world: the beast, the entity, the possible connection or universality of either/them--it allows the reader's imagination to interpret the layers in so many ways: symbolism/metaphorical, allegorical, etc.--all intertwined, jolting and all encompassing at the same time--an exceptionally satisfying reading experience. Thank you again for such a multifaceted tale!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks for the kind words. I think the review reflects your imagination and ability to make connections. There is a dark current running through the story, and the separate vignettes each create their own impression. The Bayesian samurai scene is outrageous, but it shows Ravenclaws at play.
Enjoyed Biff's exploration further of insight into Luna, in her scene with Padma. Discovering that Luna and Draco have indeed connected was, for me, a viable happening. Perhaps it is because that Biff has written Luna potentially led into a romance, a quite 'acceptable' one for those who are sensitive to canon Luna involved and portrayed in a non-pedophilic way, as Draco (he, Harry & Neville are the youngest of their year/peers by a year) is her age, so their interaction is rather novel, innocent, and yet due to both's keen maturity by necessity beyond their years due to each one's unique background, it is very intense and 'adult'. It is interesting to see her expressing herself with Draco, as we only get a thin (perhaps one-sided) slice of her in canon, and all that we are given by JKR is that she goes on to get married to Rolf Scamander and have twins, etc.Sorry to carry on so much, it's just that I'm intrigued by Luna, adore the little of her that I've been exposed to, and enjoy when an author portrays her richly and with sensitive complexity as you have done.Enjoyed the editor's exploration and development of Alain and Cissay, and Adolf and Hermione's developing interaction. Looking forward to more!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks for the review. Musing about Luna is appropriate since I did mention what a problem she was to write. I'm a poor Potter scholar, but Luna appears to be someone wise about other's dilemmas. The basis for this characterization is her comment, 'It's like being with a friend,' and her picture in her bedroom of fellow students intertwined with the word 'friends.'
The zoo sequence is more revealing than Cissy realizes.
Earlier,I had an inadequate response to your comment about Draco and Theo coming into their own with the Crystal demo. It was a public display of what Padma and Luna had observed previously with Theo's essay writing and Draco's flight of imagination. It was left to the reader to imagine what this means to two Ravenclaw witches. Similarly for Hermione and 'Dunkle Weg.' I can't conceive of Ronald or Severus concocting such a thing for her entertainment.
Response from nagandsev (Reviewer)
Probably shouldn't be commenting further at this point as dental pain is still affecting me--just wanted to reiterate that I enjoy the musings about Luna, and also, the basis for this characterisation 'It's like being with a friend' as well as the mural she had painted always struck me profoundly & poignantly (when reading the books) about her and what I perceived as her loneliness and wish for interaction & what she imagined true friendship was with others/her peers, etc. So it's wonderful to see her and Draco interacting. Also her raging against how she is labelled by others who can't seem to see her true inner core. My comment about how her adult life ended up I only thought of because, against how others perceived her (and how so many write her in the fanfic world), she was able to get on with her life and capable of having a relationship, etc. Okay, best stop here. Just I'm enjoying this tale and am looking forward to more!
Yes, I think Alain must tread very carefully with the Black sisters; they might be unchartered territory even for someone such as he. The tension between the editor and Biff is building up--something is about to explode, and not just metaphorically! 'Write what you know, she thought. She knew selfish, cold-hearted bastards.'--HA! Hmmn, Draco's belief's about Luna's perception of him are one thing, but might he be surprised to find out if he's wrong? Or not... can't wait to read more!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Okay, you discerned two mature women, wondering if anyone could care for them, warily approaching and teasing a newcomer. Draco was hurt, and he is protecting himself.
Uff! The entity has seeped through and is quite aggressive--or perhaps, protecting its own interests? Andy and Cissy's predicament will need more aid or understanding, both--not all is resolved yet. Pansy is very attuned, seemingly beyond her own awareness and control... although it can be recognised by another. Enjoying the addition of Prof Alain... What other secrets will he disclose about our Prof Adolf? Hmmn, Draco is coming into his own... but at what cost to him? How will this affect Luna's perception of him further? Great chapter!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks for the review. The entity has revealed how dangerous it is. The story tracks six witches who are outsiders reconnecting, and to date, it has slighted both Andy and Cissy. Glad you are enjoying Alain since some fans intensely dislike original characters. A future revelation by Alain about Adolf will seem mild to readers, but it will have a significant effect on his relationships. Draco has not recovered from his loss.
Draco and Luna have come to a halt... Their impasse seems irreconcilable and previously unforeseen by both.:-(Enjoyed the different interactions between Prof Galland and Hermione, and then his interaction with Pansy; each sheds light on further dimensions of each one's character--yum!Enjoyed the editor writing her dialogue, and regardless of not expanding his horizons, Biff's depiction of Hermione and Flitwick--what will it cost Hermione? Some grave loss of friendship? Identity? Reading on!!!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Enjoyed your comments on this section.It is a chapter of betrayals: professional transgression by Adolf, shattering by Draco, deep by Pansy, self-deception by the editor, lack of accommodation by the Wizard World, cynical by Filius, and life-changing by Hermione.
I disagree with Biff. The most difficult person to write into a romance is Luna since I am sympathetic to the point of view that says a relationship with canon Luna is nigh on pedophilia. This chapter sees her in full, feminine rage - betraying her old persona.
The editor's contribution on the 'complicated human interaction' is poignant, lovely... but very poignant... even more is her wish to delete it... Draco's miniscule but growing observations and concern about what Luna would think & feel about him and his actions are intriguing. As are Padma & Theo's developing relationship, with a very observant Cissy around.;-)'Biff raged.' HA! I agree with his observation about Pansy and Hermione. His frustration is causing him to convey the differing opinions of Horace and Adolf in a very enlightening way--great chapter! (Hope this is coming across coherently, recovering from dental surgery, but determined to catch up on some reading!)
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Glad you enjoy the editor's spiels. they are difficult to write since it is not my natural style.
Luna is taking over Draco's thoughts, Theo is becoming bolder, and Cissy is a lonely, middle-aged lady.
Horace's opinion is anti-romantic enough and counter-fandom enough that it's a bit of a shock.
[I wish you a complete, speedy, and pain-free recovery.]
Luna sees the world as no other, I wonder what is wrong with the bunnys.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks. The unique view that Luna has of the world is one of the things the story tries to preserve although it is muted as Luna, along with the others, is going through a transition.
Herr Professor Galland's reception and interactions are intriguing--how everyone is responding to him and what each character projects onto him--looking forward to the continued revelations of his responses to them; Draco and Luna's development does have me wondering what their research will lead them to discover either about the bunnies, themselves, both. And of course, Biff and the editor's contributions, observations and inspirations are a delight and issue for intrigue and wonderment how and where their development will lead. Looking forward to more!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
You may have discovered a central theme of the story (unknown to the author, as these things go). Herr Professor Galland is an unknown quantity in a time of disillusionment. The two who appear to be the least adrift, Padma and Theo, have the least to do with him.Luna's discovery becomes important.
Oooooh, things are moving onto a new level with all! Padma and Theo have bravely committed to *something*; Luna and Draco are drawn to each other, and the editor and Biff have arrived on the threshhold of *something*--must read on quickly!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Things are finally happening. The premise is that in this uncertain new world, everyone is acting cautiously.
Love the array of interactions going on, revelations of perceptions of one another, and the editor and biff taking risks and pushing themselves onwards and into each other's territories!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Biff and the editor are pushing themselves - and showing signs of stress.
Love the contrasts of the editor's and Biff's inspirations, along with all of the dialogues and pairings, their observations and speculations; the nuances and interactions reveal so much, so concisely--reading on!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks. Andy and Cissy are plotting. Luna and Padma are revealing themselves as Ravenclaw witches.
Don't worry Biff, chicken soup can cure anything.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
We hope so. He's in need of serious rejuvenation.
Everyone seems to be dancing around eachother, including The Editor and Biff.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
The six women in the story are going through a transition period, and they are attracted to men who may or may not be treacherous. The editor wants to write a psychodrama, and Biff wants to write the sequel to 'My Wand Is Quick.'
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
The six women in the story are going through a transition period, and they are attracted to men who may or may not be treacherous. The editor wants to write a psychodrama, and Biff wants to write the sequel to 'My Wand Is Quick.'
Mmmm, both The Editor and Biff seem to be letting quite a bit of plot creep in.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Readers are being treated to an epic fail, which they may or may not find amusing.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Readers are being treated to an epic fail, which they may or may not find amusing.
Mmmm... can't wait for the next chapter, as the revelations of Biff's Muse coinciding along with the editor's is evolving in its captivating way: will Herr Professor Galland be safe from anyone's whims--Filius', Horace's, Draco's--Biffs?:-)Looking forward to more of the Lovegood's, Draco's and Adolf's collaborations!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks. We'll have to see if just Biff and the editor can provide enough variety and entertainment. Herr Professor does appear to be dragged into things. Their collaboration is the central plot.
Mmmm... can't wait for the next chapter, as the revelations of Biff's Muse coinciding along with the editor's is evolving in its captivating way: will Herr Professor Galland be safe from anyone's whims--Filius', Horace's, Draco's--Biffs?:-)
Looking forward to more of the Lovegood's, Draco's and Adolf's collaborations!
I hope we will see more of Luna and Draco , and I don't blame Hermione taking exception to Pansy's knee placement
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
There will be more Luna and Draco as the two adapt to the new world. Is Hermione jealous because Pansy is a better flirt?
Yea!!! Biff is back , can the rest of the staff be far behind ? eagerly awaiting more.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks. I didn't know Biff was popular. This is a milder meta-story than usual with only Biff and the editor struggling to produce something for the fan girls.