Chapter 12
Chapter 12 of 21
MHaydnChapter 12
"This is ridiculous," said Cissy. "What are you going to do, hum the Mendelssohn violin concerto?"
"It might work, Cissy. It does respond to vibrations," said Andy.
"It'll respond," said Cissy. "It'll eat the violin."
Cissy turned to Alain. "But you don't use a violin, do you?"
"I use crystals which are more valuable than violins, and I would hate to see them eaten," he said, "but we can approach your entity cautiously."
"This is why I invited Professor Roeder to England," said Adolf. "Conducting a few seminars at school is a cover story."
"The honorarium for the seminars is not worth my time," said Alain.
"I take it you're not interested in molding young minds," said Andy.
Alain Roeder had been warned about the Black sisters.
The talk turned to his fee. A week of using crystals to calm the entity would cost one thousand Galleons. Thermal imagery had revealed the entity had a center which appeared to expand and contract rhythmically. This center had moved from under the house and down the slope toward the bog under the inducement of a supply of mice. They rejected using the crystals to give the entity the vegetative version of a heart attack on the grounds that its convulsions might wreck the house. Once the center was lured far enough away, Alain would sever the main body from the vestigial part remaining in the house. That would cost another thousand Galleons.
"Damn that Biff," muttered the editor to herself. "He hasn't left any openings, hasn't created any place where a sensitive writer could inject some human emotions into the story line. Well, if he's going to be that inconsiderate, then let the next scene be on his own head."
"It hadn't occurred to me that one could make a living in Arithmancy," said Draco.
"Applied Arithmancy," Theo reminded him.
The two had talked to Professor Galland about taking up the profession of Crystals the day before the first demonstration by Professor Roeder. He had assured them that one could make a good living at it if one became skilled and that Professor Roeder would accept apprentices if they showed talent. Draco and Theo had asked if Professor Galland had considered a life in Crystals. They were still puzzling over his reply. Professor Galland had said that he had studied crystals under Professor Roeder, but it was a question of spending one's life skillfully applying an understood topic or spending one's life clumsily discovering new things.
"You just want to make Padma hum," Draco accused Theo.
"I want to make her vibrate," said Theo. "Isn't there someone you want to resonate with you?"
Draco shook his head no.
Halfway through the demonstration, Professor Roeder asked for volunteers. Both Draco and Theo managed to tune two semi-precious stones until they oscillated on the same frequency. Once the jewels were vibrating, Professor Galland stopped the experiment before the resonance built enough to crack them. Professor Galland asked for more volunteers, but there were none. Both Draco and Theo accepted his invitation to not only make the stones vibrate in sync but to dampen the oscillation before it destroyed the crystals. It took several attempts before they were successful, and the two boys ended the session exhausted.
Padma took Theo to the study hall for tea and biscuits.
Out of the corner of his eye, Draco saw Luna hurriedly exiting the room. He walked to the study hall and sat in a corner with a cup of strong coffee. He did notice the whispering going around the hall followed by glances at Theo and him, and he did notice people looking at him as if he were something besides an ogre.
The mood that Friday evening was relaxed as Filius, Horace, Adolf, Alain, and the elves gathered. The first seminar on crystals had gone well, and the school had shown it had students who could master them. Filius asked if Alain minded listening to Tchaikovsky.
"Not at all," he said. The wizards and elves listened raptly, and when the piece had ended, Alain offered his opinion. "Someone once said that Mravinsky is proof that Tchaikovsky should be left to fire-breathing, vodka-swilling Cossacks."
Later that evening, when everyone was mellow, Alain cautiously mentioned the rumor that his friend was getting involved with a student. Adolf admitted that, despite his best efforts, there was some danger of that happening whereupon Alain advised him to extricate himself if at all possible.
Filius and Horace agreed with that sentiment, but they had misgivings about the advice that followed.
"Married women, my man," said Alain. "Lonely, experienced, and discreet."
Biff looked around for the editor. He had finished a pot of coffee, and it wasn't yet noon. He could barely read his own writing, and it was time for the editor to slow the pace of the story with one of her meandering paragraphs, but if she wasn't available, he would splatter the page with some of the phrases buzzing through his head. They could arrange them into something coherent later.
It was the second Saturday after the first seminar at school. There hadn't been any demonstrations during the last week because all the more harmonious crystals that were safe for students had been used to soothe the entity at the Black estate. The team had returned to luring it toward the bog. Despite the evidence that things were safer, Alain thought Andy was getting dangerously close, and he was shouting out a warning when Andy screamed and fell.
The first to reach her was Draco, and he was pulling her away when he stumbled, recovered to drag Andy a few more yards, but fell again. Alain and Adolf ran to place themselves between the fallen pair and a swarm of deadly strands. Each had two wands out, and they were using them like rotary scythes. Theo, Padma, and Cissy were helping Andy and Draco to safety while Filius picked off any tendril that appeared behind Alain and Adolf.
As Alain and Adolf were backing away, a panicked rabbit leaped through their swirl of spells. Its sliced sections fell with a plop, and Andy and Padma were violently ill.
The editor was sitting in her office with her feelings dented. After Biff had read her last two contributions, he said, "Okay," but with no enthusiasm, and he had looked troubled. She had wanted to rail at him: the prose fit the scenes, but she left the senseless clod to his own prattling.
Write what you know, she thought. She knew selfish, cold-hearted bastards.
The next Monday, Draco was back at school, trying to ignore his throbbing leg where two strands had pierced it, and trying to review the morning's class notes. He looked up to see Luna.
"May I sit here?" she asked.
He indicated he didn't care.
"Can we talk?" she asked.
He closed his notebook and nodded yes. He couldn't concentrate anyway, and what did a little more pain mean to him?
Luna looked close to tears. What she had once meant to him almost caused him to reach out and comfort her.
She took a breath. "I'm sorry for what I said to you."
"Okay," he said.
His neutrality was daunting. She had been wildly hoping that he would welcome her back, she could have coped with his railing at her, but his I-don't-care attitude nearly crushed her. She summoned everything and said, "I didn't know how dangerous that thing was. I wasn't thinking."
She paused.
"I'm the one who wasn't there when everyone was in danger," she said. "I'm the one who's a coward."
Deep inside Luna, her contrition was turning to anger. So, she had made a mistake. She was sorry. She had said things she regretted, but she had not actively harmed anyone. Who was Mr. High-and-Mighty not to forgive someone who had a moment of poor judgment? She would say one last thing and leave.
"You're the brave one. You saved your aunt."
"Not quite," said Draco in the split second before Luna left for good. "I bungled it, and the others had to rescue both of us. If you had been there, you would have done much better."
Did he really just say that? she wondered. She sat back down.
"I'm really, really sorry, Draco."
"I've said and done many things I wish I hadn't," he replied.
She looked around the room. "This is a quiet corner. Do you mind if I study here?"
"Not at all," he said.
Draco was thinking that her previous rejection of him was rational. He was harming innocent creatures to achieve his objective. Draco was thinking that her reversal was irrational. It was based on happenstance, and he had to be rescued from his impulsive actions.
Secretly, Draco believed that Luna remained disappointed that he and the others had not charged in like commandos to destroy the antagonist. Where was the heroism her feminine soul craved? He had to agree. He had hidden behind young and innocent animals. Having reached that conclusion, he felt no compunction about keeping any true feelings he might have to himself. After all, deep down, she considered him less than a man.
There was more. He admitted to himself that he was enjoying her soft look and her sitting close enough to him that he could take in her aroma. He admitted to himself that he would not jeopardize this by mentioning the real moral dilemmas. Would the entity die if lured to the bog? Would it thrive to the extent of harming the other wildlife? Would it be a danger to the surrounding population? Shouldn't the authorities be alerted? If the authorities were alerted, wouldn't they confiscate the estate and leave Andromeda with nothing? He admitted to himself that by not discussing these questions with her, he was treating her as an inferior, someone not able to face the realities.
Deep under the surface of the world's waters, be they now calm or now stormy, flows an immense current cold, unstoppable, impervious an icy and inhuman entity.
"Did you make that necklace?" he asked.
"Yes, she had, and she explained the details of its construction.
"I think that garland is a nice touch," he said.
"It's probably a bit wilted by now," she said, touching it and stroking her hair. "Would you like to help me get another? There's a place by the greenhouses where these plants grow."
He liked the idea. She took him by the hand and led him to one of her favorite places.
For the first time, Draco thought about getting in her pants.
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36 Reviews | 10.0/10 Average
Loved all of the resolutions--Alain to escape back to Germany, him to harbour Theo and guide him. Seems that Padma will have her affluent family to fall back on. King Friedrich Wilhelm II was the monarch while Haydn composed, right? along with Nicholas II, Prince Esterházy being a major patron... what the students don't know or care about is still good for them to be exposed to--never know when it'll come in handy--thus sayeth another geek girl--lol! Cissy and Andy are survivors; I don't feel either will have regrets about their past liasons with Alain. It appears that the editor has accepted and values Biff for who and what he is and writes... Which is beautiful in and of itself on top of everything else in the story's arch. Lovely ending to Adolf and Hermione's storyline, so happy that Crookshanks gives his approval!Thank you for an intriguing, dynamic adventure and tale! Looking forward to more!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks for all the reviews.
It would have been more appropriate for Adolf to ask about the monarch of Austria although there were several of them since Haydn had a long life. Adolf knows about Esterhazy. He remembers what’s important.
At its heart, the story is a celebration of geek girls.
At the risk of ruining the story, it can be given an open ended and more upbeat conclusion by adding a third paragraph to the scene with Andy, Cissy, and Adolf
Adolf saw the sisters exchange glances. Two fleet-footed deer were after the wolf. With a name like Alain Roeder, they would begin their search in Alsace-Lorraine, and they knew Alain’s ego would not let him decline high profile assignments with their attendant publicity. Padma might be equally tenacious. Andy and Cissy would greet Alain with a triumphant smirk. Padma might grab Theo by the lapels, shake him until his teeth rattled, and then cry on his shoulder.
The reader can choose.
Just as good the second time around.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
That's good to hear. The question was what kind of naughty girl would Pansy like to be.
What is going on with Hermione? Curious to see where she is heading and the path(s) she might be choosing... Interesting bonding between the witches, survival and strategies--how to do so are vital. Enjoyed Cissy's acceptance of Luna, Draco & Luna being *together* and her reflection about Lucius 'He better say nice things, or she would bitch-hex him back to France.'--HA! Regardless of the Malfoy's innate coldness and cruelty, it seems Luna can not but help to protect all magical creatures, Draco being a very special one to her. Love the metaphors, details and tempestuous dynamics and elements of the Andy and Alain vignette, along with Biff and the editor's banter back and forth in between things. Great chapter!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks for the insightful comments. Hermione is on a dark path, unbalanced because her efforts to join wizard society have backfired. The older witches may be the first to offer acceptable advice to Hermione. Luna may bring needed warmth to the family. As Draco said earlier, "I think mum needs a daughter." Andy, who thought no one would ever want her, explodes.
Great chapter, looking forward to more.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thank you.
The visit to the zoo was very interesting,is Cissy in for a surprise ? we will have to wait and see. Poor Biff, Draco and Luna seem to have their own ideas of where the story is going.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks for the review. Responding to the zoo scene requires some empathy with animals. Draco and Luna appear to be an amazingly resilient pair.
The writing and scenario is as powerful as the first time I read it as a one-shot and as evocative then as now within this multi-chaptered work. Powerful, effective, a very striking development between them. Wondering about Pansy and Adolf's possible, continued discoveries of one another, and looking forward to more!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Glad to hear the chapter survived repetition: the first time as PWP, the second as character and plot development.
Enjoyed the contrast of the editor's reflections and depiction in the first vignette with the second one, both very powerful in each one's content. Luna's and Padma's family's 'gifts' for protection-HA!Enjoyed as well Biff's contribution--his style, cadence, rhythm, technique and dynamics between the two characters and atmosphere, description and pace. Love the different impressions each section makes, as always!Looking forward to more!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks. For the editor, the second effort is an elaboration of the first. More hyperbole about everyone's opinion of the Malfoys. You have a point: cadence and rhythm in erotica is difficult.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks. For the editor, the second effort is an elaboration of the first. More hyperbole about everyone's opinion of the Malfoys. You have a point: cadence and rhythm in erotica is difficult.
So glad that the ladies at The Pole and the Feather helped inspire Biff's Muse Enjoyed his inspired development of Theo and Padma's relationship set against a beautiful sunset, Pansy's assertiveness and Adolph's receptance, the boys getting into samurai lore and the inclusive possibility of the girls and any contribution they may have to offer to their game. Love the contrast of the editor's contribution to the Alain and Cissy underplot with Biff's addition; I love the supernatural elements layered on within the innate wizarding world: the beast, the entity, the possible connection or universality of either/them--it allows the reader's imagination to interpret the layers in so many ways: symbolism/metaphorical, allegorical, etc.--all intertwined, jolting and all encompassing at the same time--an exceptionally satisfying reading experience. Thank you again for such a multifaceted tale!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks for the kind words. I think the review reflects your imagination and ability to make connections. There is a dark current running through the story, and the separate vignettes each create their own impression. The Bayesian samurai scene is outrageous, but it shows Ravenclaws at play.
Enjoyed Biff's exploration further of insight into Luna, in her scene with Padma. Discovering that Luna and Draco have indeed connected was, for me, a viable happening. Perhaps it is because that Biff has written Luna potentially led into a romance, a quite 'acceptable' one for those who are sensitive to canon Luna involved and portrayed in a non-pedophilic way, as Draco (he, Harry & Neville are the youngest of their year/peers by a year) is her age, so their interaction is rather novel, innocent, and yet due to both's keen maturity by necessity beyond their years due to each one's unique background, it is very intense and 'adult'. It is interesting to see her expressing herself with Draco, as we only get a thin (perhaps one-sided) slice of her in canon, and all that we are given by JKR is that she goes on to get married to Rolf Scamander and have twins, etc.Sorry to carry on so much, it's just that I'm intrigued by Luna, adore the little of her that I've been exposed to, and enjoy when an author portrays her richly and with sensitive complexity as you have done.Enjoyed the editor's exploration and development of Alain and Cissay, and Adolf and Hermione's developing interaction. Looking forward to more!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks for the review. Musing about Luna is appropriate since I did mention what a problem she was to write. I'm a poor Potter scholar, but Luna appears to be someone wise about other's dilemmas. The basis for this characterization is her comment, 'It's like being with a friend,' and her picture in her bedroom of fellow students intertwined with the word 'friends.'
The zoo sequence is more revealing than Cissy realizes.
Earlier,I had an inadequate response to your comment about Draco and Theo coming into their own with the Crystal demo. It was a public display of what Padma and Luna had observed previously with Theo's essay writing and Draco's flight of imagination. It was left to the reader to imagine what this means to two Ravenclaw witches. Similarly for Hermione and 'Dunkle Weg.' I can't conceive of Ronald or Severus concocting such a thing for her entertainment.
Response from nagandsev (Reviewer)
Probably shouldn't be commenting further at this point as dental pain is still affecting me--just wanted to reiterate that I enjoy the musings about Luna, and also, the basis for this characterisation 'It's like being with a friend' as well as the mural she had painted always struck me profoundly & poignantly (when reading the books) about her and what I perceived as her loneliness and wish for interaction & what she imagined true friendship was with others/her peers, etc. So it's wonderful to see her and Draco interacting. Also her raging against how she is labelled by others who can't seem to see her true inner core. My comment about how her adult life ended up I only thought of because, against how others perceived her (and how so many write her in the fanfic world), she was able to get on with her life and capable of having a relationship, etc. Okay, best stop here. Just I'm enjoying this tale and am looking forward to more!
Yes, I think Alain must tread very carefully with the Black sisters; they might be unchartered territory even for someone such as he. The tension between the editor and Biff is building up--something is about to explode, and not just metaphorically! 'Write what you know, she thought. She knew selfish, cold-hearted bastards.'--HA! Hmmn, Draco's belief's about Luna's perception of him are one thing, but might he be surprised to find out if he's wrong? Or not... can't wait to read more!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Okay, you discerned two mature women, wondering if anyone could care for them, warily approaching and teasing a newcomer. Draco was hurt, and he is protecting himself.
Uff! The entity has seeped through and is quite aggressive--or perhaps, protecting its own interests? Andy and Cissy's predicament will need more aid or understanding, both--not all is resolved yet. Pansy is very attuned, seemingly beyond her own awareness and control... although it can be recognised by another. Enjoying the addition of Prof Alain... What other secrets will he disclose about our Prof Adolf? Hmmn, Draco is coming into his own... but at what cost to him? How will this affect Luna's perception of him further? Great chapter!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks for the review. The entity has revealed how dangerous it is. The story tracks six witches who are outsiders reconnecting, and to date, it has slighted both Andy and Cissy. Glad you are enjoying Alain since some fans intensely dislike original characters. A future revelation by Alain about Adolf will seem mild to readers, but it will have a significant effect on his relationships. Draco has not recovered from his loss.
Draco and Luna have come to a halt... Their impasse seems irreconcilable and previously unforeseen by both.:-(Enjoyed the different interactions between Prof Galland and Hermione, and then his interaction with Pansy; each sheds light on further dimensions of each one's character--yum!Enjoyed the editor writing her dialogue, and regardless of not expanding his horizons, Biff's depiction of Hermione and Flitwick--what will it cost Hermione? Some grave loss of friendship? Identity? Reading on!!!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Enjoyed your comments on this section.It is a chapter of betrayals: professional transgression by Adolf, shattering by Draco, deep by Pansy, self-deception by the editor, lack of accommodation by the Wizard World, cynical by Filius, and life-changing by Hermione.
I disagree with Biff. The most difficult person to write into a romance is Luna since I am sympathetic to the point of view that says a relationship with canon Luna is nigh on pedophilia. This chapter sees her in full, feminine rage - betraying her old persona.
The editor's contribution on the 'complicated human interaction' is poignant, lovely... but very poignant... even more is her wish to delete it... Draco's miniscule but growing observations and concern about what Luna would think & feel about him and his actions are intriguing. As are Padma & Theo's developing relationship, with a very observant Cissy around.;-)'Biff raged.' HA! I agree with his observation about Pansy and Hermione. His frustration is causing him to convey the differing opinions of Horace and Adolf in a very enlightening way--great chapter! (Hope this is coming across coherently, recovering from dental surgery, but determined to catch up on some reading!)
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Glad you enjoy the editor's spiels. they are difficult to write since it is not my natural style.
Luna is taking over Draco's thoughts, Theo is becoming bolder, and Cissy is a lonely, middle-aged lady.
Horace's opinion is anti-romantic enough and counter-fandom enough that it's a bit of a shock.
[I wish you a complete, speedy, and pain-free recovery.]
Luna sees the world as no other, I wonder what is wrong with the bunnys.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks. The unique view that Luna has of the world is one of the things the story tries to preserve although it is muted as Luna, along with the others, is going through a transition.
Herr Professor Galland's reception and interactions are intriguing--how everyone is responding to him and what each character projects onto him--looking forward to the continued revelations of his responses to them; Draco and Luna's development does have me wondering what their research will lead them to discover either about the bunnies, themselves, both. And of course, Biff and the editor's contributions, observations and inspirations are a delight and issue for intrigue and wonderment how and where their development will lead. Looking forward to more!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
You may have discovered a central theme of the story (unknown to the author, as these things go). Herr Professor Galland is an unknown quantity in a time of disillusionment. The two who appear to be the least adrift, Padma and Theo, have the least to do with him.Luna's discovery becomes important.
Oooooh, things are moving onto a new level with all! Padma and Theo have bravely committed to *something*; Luna and Draco are drawn to each other, and the editor and Biff have arrived on the threshhold of *something*--must read on quickly!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Things are finally happening. The premise is that in this uncertain new world, everyone is acting cautiously.
Love the array of interactions going on, revelations of perceptions of one another, and the editor and biff taking risks and pushing themselves onwards and into each other's territories!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Biff and the editor are pushing themselves - and showing signs of stress.
Love the contrasts of the editor's and Biff's inspirations, along with all of the dialogues and pairings, their observations and speculations; the nuances and interactions reveal so much, so concisely--reading on!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks. Andy and Cissy are plotting. Luna and Padma are revealing themselves as Ravenclaw witches.
Don't worry Biff, chicken soup can cure anything.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
We hope so. He's in need of serious rejuvenation.
Everyone seems to be dancing around eachother, including The Editor and Biff.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
The six women in the story are going through a transition period, and they are attracted to men who may or may not be treacherous. The editor wants to write a psychodrama, and Biff wants to write the sequel to 'My Wand Is Quick.'
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
The six women in the story are going through a transition period, and they are attracted to men who may or may not be treacherous. The editor wants to write a psychodrama, and Biff wants to write the sequel to 'My Wand Is Quick.'
Mmmm, both The Editor and Biff seem to be letting quite a bit of plot creep in.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Readers are being treated to an epic fail, which they may or may not find amusing.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Readers are being treated to an epic fail, which they may or may not find amusing.
Mmmm... can't wait for the next chapter, as the revelations of Biff's Muse coinciding along with the editor's is evolving in its captivating way: will Herr Professor Galland be safe from anyone's whims--Filius', Horace's, Draco's--Biffs?:-)Looking forward to more of the Lovegood's, Draco's and Adolf's collaborations!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks. We'll have to see if just Biff and the editor can provide enough variety and entertainment. Herr Professor does appear to be dragged into things. Their collaboration is the central plot.
Mmmm... can't wait for the next chapter, as the revelations of Biff's Muse coinciding along with the editor's is evolving in its captivating way: will Herr Professor Galland be safe from anyone's whims--Filius', Horace's, Draco's--Biffs?:-)
Looking forward to more of the Lovegood's, Draco's and Adolf's collaborations!
I hope we will see more of Luna and Draco , and I don't blame Hermione taking exception to Pansy's knee placement
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
There will be more Luna and Draco as the two adapt to the new world. Is Hermione jealous because Pansy is a better flirt?
Yea!!! Biff is back , can the rest of the staff be far behind ? eagerly awaiting more.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Root Cause)
Thanks. I didn't know Biff was popular. This is a milder meta-story than usual with only Biff and the editor struggling to produce something for the fan girls.