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A Wish For Severus Snape Chapter 3: Chapter 3
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Chapter 3

A Wish For Severus Snape

Chapter 3 of 5

deianaera

Pan, the Greek god of passion and lust, does not often manifest directly. But when Hermione Granger makes an offering at his fountain (and touches his granite flank just so), he makes an exception. Or his daughter said pretty please. This is Pan, after all. Either one – or all or none – are possible.

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Hermione rose from the bed, taking the satyr’s hand in hers. Lust bloomed through her at the contact. Letting herself be guided, she was positioned in front of the satyr, her back pressed against her front, displayed for Severus’ perusal should he awaken. The demigod’s hands again roamed over her body, slipping inside her open top and fondling her breasts, hefting their fullness, teasing the already stiff nipples with gentle strokes and tweaks. Her mouth again went to work on the sensitive skin of her neck, and Hermione moaned at the twin pleasures.

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It was that moan, blending into dreams from reality, that shifted Severus from asleep to awake. In his dreams, he has been feasting on his fantasy lover Hermione, nibbling and licking and sucking on every inch of flesh he could envision. And while his fantasy lover did indeed moan, it didn’t sound so... real.

On reflex, he reached for his wand, but shock stilled his hand. He could not believe the same woman he’d lusted after for years was displaying herself wantonly before him. A faint glow lit the room with warm tones, showing Hermione’s lustful display to its fullest. Her pajama shirt was falling open, the faded royal blue exposing her soft belly, pale honeyed skin, and the lush curves of ripe breasts hidden behind a pair of strong, elegant hands.

He stared, trying to ascertain the identify of Hermione’s lover. But, other than the hands cupping the breasts he wanted to touch and lick and suck and bite and soothe, he could make out nothing. Letting his rage rise, he snatched his wand from beneath his pillow and pointed it at the pair.

Silent magic did his bidding as the room blossomed with light and the pair was separated and held in invisible bonds. Hermione stared at him, her gaze glassy with pleasure. Her lover was another shock. He recognized the creature that had been fondling Hermione immediately. Severus let his lips quirk in the faintest impression of a smile; he’d been told it was by far his most frightening expression. It did nothing to dent Hermione’s lust. He let his gaze stray over her partially unclothed form, lingering on the exposed curves and the shadow of her hips as they dipped into the waist of her pajama pants.

Shaking his head, Severus looked away. Even bound, the satyr still had a powerful effect. Pity they could not be banished like boggarts or even dementors. With a wave of his wand, he unbound the creature.

“Satyr, why have you come here?” he demanded, wand pointed at the creature’s chest.

The creature shook her head, sending her parti-colored curls flying. Her breasts swayed with the motion, and Severus swallowed reflexively, but his wand did not waver.

“That was unkind, Severus Snape,” the satyr replied. “Do you treat all guests in this manner?”

“Only those who enter uninvited,” he snapped in return.

She smiled, full lips wet and glistening. “Oh, Severus Snape. I did not enter uninvited. I am here at my father’s request. I am to grant that divine creature’s wish,” she said with a languorous gesture to the still bound Hermione.

Severus sneered. “You expect me to believe that an intelligent witch such as Hermione Granger knowingly invited a creature as you in?”

“You misunderstand me, Severus Snape. I said she wished. Such a wish too,” she added with a small laugh. She walked toward Severus, hips swinging, hooves silent on the wooden floor. “She touched my father’s icon, made an offering of gold at his shrine and said, ‘It’s said that you were a god of joy and pleasure. If there’s ever anyone who needed a touch of that, it’s Severus Snape.’ She pleased my father, and he let me come to grant her wish.”

She reached Severus now, his wand pressed against her bare chest. “Do you know this valley is Pan’s, Severus Snape? He is the patron of this village, and his will holds sway here. And every salacious thought you’ve had since you entered this place has been known to him.” She reached a hand and stroked his wand arm, setting fire to his blood. “Oh, yes. How better to grant the wish of one who pleased him than to give you her?” She raised herself up to whisper in his ears, her breath sending eddies of sheer want spearing straight to his cock. Against his will, his breath quickened and his heart began to race. “After all, he’s been aware of every salacious thought in her mind since she entered his realm as well. And I promise you, your attentions would be truly welcome.”

She lowered herself and stepped back, placing distance between them. “I am merely a facilitator in this case. If you ask, I will leave. But, I warn you now, Severus Snape, I will return until her wish has been granted.”

And between one moment and the next, she was gone, and the room was bathed in darkness.

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“Lumos,” Severus said quietly, as he regained control of his senses. “Finite Incantatem,” he said next, freeing his partner from the binding spell. He watched as she blinked, her eyes no longer glazed with passion, but huge and frightened. With a wordless cry, she seized her pajama shirt and held it closed with her arms crossed across her chest. He watched with interest as she began to blush furiously.

“Oh, Severus, oh, Merlin, I can’t believe – I’m so sorry – I mean, I wasn’t in my right mind, but I would never, oh God!” She ended with a wail, tears spilling down her cheeks. Severus was silent; he didn’t know what to say that would make this okay for her.

Apparently, he was silent too long. Hermione dashed into the bathroom and slammed the door behind her.

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47 Reviews  |  6.21/10 Average

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Bettina

Nice story! I hope they could agree on dinner, and  where to go for afters  .

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Hee :)I'm sure they'll figure something out...Thank you for reading!

10/10

Bettina

oh, my, Hermione, what did you activate now?

10/10

mick42

A Galleon well spent Severus. Now back to London, where they can hold on to each other to their hearts content.

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

HM_Roberts

Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrr..... Yum!

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

I'm glad you liked Thank you for reading!

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HM_Roberts

Marvelous beginning -- and a very unique take on Pan, I must say!  . I very much look forward to future installments? 

P.S. Will this be a novella, do you think? If so, I will put it on my "watch list". Many thanks for, thus far, an intriguing read!

10/10

Sampdoria

Absolutely loved the first three chapters. I do hope the satyr doesn't have to come back to often, not that I don't like her, but since her return will be because Hermione and Severus hasn't given eachother some joy......:-))

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Thank you for staying with me this far.I'm afraid to tell you that she will show up again, but I promise it's not all bad...

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On his terms

Well, he knows she is interested... one he just needs to DO something about it!

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

I know, right?  He will.  Probably.Thank you!

0/10

Minerva

(Bangs her head in frustration, repeatedly ...) I despair of these two, they are hopeless! Not even intervention from a demi-goddess will get it into their heads (or elsewhere). Wonderfully written, thank you!

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Ah, if it was easy, it wouldn't be any fun.  Thank you!

10/10

mick42

Ah... PLEASE don't tell him I called him a fool, I don't much feel like being turned into a frog.

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

10/10

orlando switch

Sometimes gods think things are so simple and straightforward while for us humans they are not.Let's hope Hermione's wish will be fulfilled before the night has end though.

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Well, if it's not, they're in for another visit... Thank you for reading!

10/10

mick42

Don't just sit there you fool!! go after her!!!!!

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

LOL!  I love your reaction!Thank you for reading.

10/10

TeddyRadiator

Lovely! I'm looking forward to what happens next! I love Severus and Hermione working together in fics.If I may make one suggestion: Brits don't use the word 'ass' to describe someone's backside. They use the word 'arse'. It's not a critique, just a Britpick.

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

I appreciate the Britpick.  I am American and, as I don't have a dedicated Britpicker, I don't use British slang and terminology if I can help it.  I know it can be jarring to suddenly come across a 'foreign' term in a fic - I feel the same way when I'm reading a fic that is clearly from an American writer and suddenly starts using 'arse' for ass.  To me, it's the lesser of two evils to use the terms I'm familiar with.Thank you!

9/10

Yolande

Intriguing. Mythology and Hogwarts; I hope it will be a long tale - Pan is such a wonderous God - and both HG and SS need his blessings. As for the Greek lilt - didn't the Romans worship whichever God took their fancy and answered a need??-  looking forward to the next unfolding.Thank you for not giving SS a sadistic bent - those variations of his character both sadden and squick me.

9/10

Yolande

Intriguing. Mythology and Hogwarts; I hope it will be a long tale - Pan is such a wonderous God - and both HG and SS need his blessings. As for the Greek lilt - didn't the Romans worship whichever God took their fancy and answered a need??-  looking forward to the next unfolding.Thank you for not giving SS a sadistic bent - those variations of his character both sadden and squick me.

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

I used Pan because I'm much more familiar with Greek mythology than I am Roman.  Faunus is usually the Roman analogue to Pan, but I found his normal perception as a younger woodland demigod didn't work for for this.  The older set of Pan myths - the idea of him as a more primal agricultural deity, the eldest of the gods - fits much better with a Green Man \ Horned God motif.  Which is perfect for this story.  :)Thank you for reading.

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

I used Pan because I'm much more familiar with Greek mythology than I am Roman.  Faunus is usually the Roman analogue to Pan, but I found his normal perception as a younger woodland demigod didn't work for for this.  The older set of Pan myths - the idea of him as a more primal agricultural deity, the eldest of the gods - fits much better with a Green Man \ Horned God motif.  Which is perfect for this story.  :)Thank you for reading.

9/10

wyndnfyr

Hawt!  If only they didn't need the help of a wish in order to see what the other wants...  But then if that happened, there wouldn't be a story!  xD

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Very, very true  :)Thank you!

0/10

amr

Oh, dear!  This is *great*!  Although if she thinks Hermione is suspicious and asks a lot of questions, she's going to have to raise the bar when she meets Severus.  Thanks for continuing this.

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Thank you for reading! 

10/10

mick42

Pan's daughter should be able to sort out our couple.

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

I'm sure she will.  Of course, she'd probably have more fun if they were stubborn about it...

10/10

maria

Looking forward to more!  Love this start.

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Thank you for reading  :)

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

Lovely and very intriguing beginning! I look forward to see what happens next!

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Thank you!  Next chapter is on its way.  I hope you enjoy it.

9/10

londonlupin

Looks like a good story is on the way

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Thank you!

0/10

Who

I am curious as to how a Greek god came to end up in England. But so far, you are convincing me that you can pull off an explanation, and I look forward to reading more!

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Thank you.  The explanation comes in the next chapter.  

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Thank you.  The explanation comes in the next chapter.  

0/10

GryffKat

Nice writing. Descriptive and lyrical with a good start to a narrative arc. Well done!

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Thank you!

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Thank you!

0/10

orm irian

Liking this! I look forward to the next chapter.

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Thank you!  Next one is in the queue.

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Thank you!  Next one is in the queue.

0/10

stgulik

What a promising beginning. I wonder what Pan will do to such a dour man. Can't wait to keep reading!

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Probably have a great deal of fun with him...Thank you for reading!

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Probably have a great deal of fun with him...Thank you for reading!

0/10

londonlupin

Sounds interesting Looking forward to reading more

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Thank you!

Response from deianaera (Author of A Wish For Severus Snape)

Thank you!

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