Choices: Chapters 70 to 78
Chapter 7 of 12
PearleHe was a fool to hold Hermione to her original promise. It was time to rectify that mistake. But it seemed fate, and Hermione had other plans. Can Severus learn to live with the choices he's made, even at the cost of his own happiness?
ReviewedSummary: He was a fool to hold Hermione to her original promise. It was time to rectify that mistake. But it seemed fate, and Hermione had other plans. Can Severus learn to live with the choices he’s made, even at the cost of his own happiness?
A/N: The story is written in drabble form, one hundred words per chapter. The brevity of the chapters forces the emotions to stand out sharply against the action. The first forty chapters were posted in the drabble collections – Round Nine through Fourteen. Since so many have asked me to post these as their own story, I’ve decided to compile them here.
Disclaimer: The characters, settings, etc., of the Harry Potter series are not mine; they belong to J.K. Rowling and Co. I promise to return them when I am through. Well, most of them anyway.
The Choices We Make
Chapter 70: Life Is Full of Minor Annoyances
Once again, Albus greeted him at the door.
“How’s Hermione? I trust all went well tonight?”
Severus snarled at his friend. “Don’t you have anything better to do than stand here waiting to annoy me?”
Albus smiled. “Well?”
“It went…fine. As well a date with my own wife can go.” Severus sighed. Leaving Hermione at her door had been more difficult than he’d anticipated. “By the way, you need to connect her Floo to my office. She can’t keep trudging up the path from Hogsmeade. Especially since she’s taken on more work. I don’t want her to tire herself out.”
Chapter 71: Tempting Fate or Put On A Happy Face
“For obvious reasons, I can’t leave an open connection. Is there a way to contact her when she’s ready to comes through?”
“What about setting a time to open and close the Floo?”
Albus shook his head. “I’d rather not have anything that specific set up. There hasn’t been any real trouble in the last few years. Still, it’s never wise to tempt fate.”
Severus snorted, he knew all about fate. “I gave her a two-way mirror. She’ll call me when she’s ready, you can open the connection then.”
“Splendid. Smile, things are looking up.”
“Right. Wonderful.” He agreed, miserably.
Chapter 72: The Edge of Reason
Saturday turned into Sunday, the weather warmer than usual. Severus contemplated the stack of essays in front of him, not really seeing them. Perhaps he could set up a small garden outside the side entrance. Hermione often commented how much she missed her parent’s garden. It might give her a reason to visit their quarters, if only to check on the plants.
Holding the two-way mirror, Severus called to her. “Hermione.”
The image of his estranged wife, a quill stuck messily through her hair, her expression one of intense concentration, appeared in his mirror.
“Hermione,” he intoned, louder this time.
Chapter 73: Eavesdropping
The witch jumped. “Oh great, not only do I dream about him, now I’m hearing his voice when he’s not here.”
A sly smile appeared on Severus’s lips. “And what, pray tell, do these dreams entail?”
“Severus? Where are you?”
“You’re not going to tell me your dreams?”
“Where are you?”
“Pick up the mirror you have propped to the side and you’ll see me.”
The two-way mirror he’d given her. She’d forgotten about it. It was like looking into a wizarding photo, without the loop. His lean image looked back at her.
“Good afternoon, I trust you slept well?”
Chapter 74: There’s No Place Like Home
“Good afternoon, yourself, I did sleep well. I’m just going over the lesson plans for the classes I’m taking over.”
“I won’t keep you. I spoke with Albus. Contact me tomorrow by mirror when you’re ready to come through and he’ll open the Floo network. You’ll come through in my office.”
“Thank you. I really do appreciate it. The walk to school is fine, it’s the trip home that’s getting tiring.”
Unconsciously, Severus winced at her use of the word ‘home’ when referring to the cottage she was renting. Home should have been with him, in their chambers at Hogwarts.
Chapter 75: A Glimpse of Things To Come
“Which is exactly the reason you should not be walking up and back. Is there anything I can help you with?”
Hermione sighed. “No, Filius has the lessons already planned. I’m just reviewing the next set of charms. Tell Albus thank you for me. It’ll be nice to sleep in a bit since I don’t have to allow for travel time. I can call to you when I’m ready. How does eight a.m. sound?”
“That’s fine. You’ll be able to have breakfast before your first class.”
“Severus, I…I don’t know what to say. You’ve gone above and beyond. Thank you.”
Chapter 76: Understanding
She should not have had to thank him for caring. Hadn’t that been one of the problems she’d pointed out, his lack of involvement in their marriage? This should’ve been a natural part of their relationship, not just a reaction to circumstances.
Severus shook his head; maybe he’d actually learned something.
“Don’t thank me, I’ve a vested interest in your continued good health. You need to remember to stop and eat; I know how you get when you’re involved in something. I’ll have the mirror with me tonight when I make rounds, just in case. Call if you need me.”
Chapter 77: Of Zippers and Reality
Hermione laughed. “Be careful which pocket you put the mirror in. I don’t think you want the sound of my voice issuing from your zipper while you’re walking around.”
While he found it difficult to voice his pleasure, Hermione had no such problem. His body responded to the image of his wife, in the flesh, her voice coming from the very area of his body she had just mentioned.
She smiled as she watched Severus shift in his chair, pleased she seemed to be having an effect on her taciturn husband. “I’ll call you in the morning. Take care, Severus.”
Chapter 78: Forty-Two Days and Counting
He didn’t want to sever the connection; all he had to look forward to was bad essays and another evening alone. Severus regarded his desk calendar. School was over in six weeks, after that, Hermione wouldn’t be coming to the castle on a regular basis. He’d have to schedule dates if he wanted to see her. Six weeks. He’d have to make the most of that time.
He had a month and a half to win her over, to prove he’d changed. Forty-two days to show her how much he cared.
Severus sighed, he only hoped it was enough time.
TBC
A/N: Just a quick note to thank all those that have been following “Choices.
I did have every intention of answering each review, but RL has dramatically cut into my free time lately, so I have been spending the little free time I have, writing instead (yes, before you ask, this does include finishing the next chapter of Dances…grin). More “Choices” (and “Dances”) to come!
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68 Reviews | 6.62/10 Average
hello: Greetings from e-nuff, (Not unfinished fanfics) we are here to remind you that this is the month of Finish your fanfic, please give us a relly happy update to this wonderful story, so we can say our mision has been acomplished!!!!!!bye!!!!!
i love this story! it's wonderful to watch him work to win her back.
;_< How could you Pearle.... this was such a cliff hanger... aww... I hope it's all right in the next series of drabbles.
Despite being in a frenzy for more chapters, I have to say that the "Or what?" ending was perfect. Damn.
Poor Severus! All he wants is his wife to come back home. He has been on his best behavior for chapter after chapter and what does Hermione do? She rejects him yet again! I feel so sorry for him. I don’t think he will tolerate only a physical relationship. Have pity on the poor man Pearle!!
Yeah, an another update! Booooo, evil leaving it like that. Oooohhhh, Severus, watch what comes out of your mouth!!!! What an emotional ride, great job.
Actually I thought it was funny. Severus really has no idea what to do, does he?
Evil.....and good to see these archived.
as much as i would love to have him break down just now and hermione comfort him and then they live happily ever after, i doubt that's what you have planned.oh well. your way is probably more interesting. ;)can't wait for the next part. hope you're feeling better.~
Oh Pearle, I've been following this story since you first posted! Please do another soon; just like canon, I both want and don't want it to end! (And of course, I want them both to end up happily-ever-after-together ... )
If she wasn't pregnant, I would be tempted to have her strung up. Puh-lease don't let Severus put that threat into motion.Very enthralling stuff!
O dear, he still doesn't get it, does he?
You call this a natural place to end the chapter? Only if you update soon!
Well, I'm not big on drabbles, but I enjoyed what I read. I just never really satisfied with drabbles because just as you sink your teeth into them, they're over. However, I bookmarking you for the evil cliffie.........cheers!
Response from Pearle (Author of The Choices We Make)
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I'm completely loving this. As much as I'd love for you to finish this NOW, I know what it's like to be sick and in and out of the hospital. Take it as it comes and please be well.
Another nice updte. I'm happy you are feeling better.
I love this story... and whats this about an update on Dances? I'm dying to know what happens in both stories.
Great update, but mostly I'm glad you're well enough to write some more!
Huge hugs,
Response from Pearle (Author of The Choices We Make)
Pearle,So glad to hear hubby is on the mend. I was so excited to see an update from you. I assumed that meant that things were getting better. I hope you are feeling well, and of course I am looking forward to lots more updates of this and Dances.
Oh Pearle, such WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL news..I'm so happy for you all..I will keep you on my prayer list! You take care...I loved these, Poor Severus!! WILL she come back to him?? He is so stubborn, but he loves her!!!Thank you fo this update!
I love to read more soon... scuh talent. Love the chapter titles, they're so witty. I think I introduced a friend of mine to your wonderful fanfiction..
Yea, Pearle! Thanks for a delightful update. Don't overtax yourself - be well! I'm glad you have felt up to this, though... always a great read. Cheers, Michelle
A really enjoyable work of literature. Wonderful intricate plot, emotive dialogue and all round jolly good read! Glad you're feeling better, maybe Severus will make you one of those vitamin potions?Look forward to more of this and more Dances With Witches!
I wish you good thoughts for your recovery. I hope your feeling 100% better soon! And Thank You for the update! This really is a lovely relationship story and I get all tingly inside when I see you've updated. Good on Severus for his honesty--I think Hermione needed to hear that! Great job!
it just makes me cry...i keep thinking dam girl i'm going to smack you silly...sure he made a mistake..but get the stick out of your ass and come half way...i love this series...hopefully the angst will end soon...take care...keep up the good work...