A Rude Awakening
tiddlywinks20 Reviews | 4.35/10 (20 Ratings, 0 Likes, 12 Favorites )
A humorous take on the morning after, when girlfriend meets cat.
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Member Since 2005 | 3 Stories | Favorited by 3 | 6 Reviews Written | 21 Review Responses
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O M G ! so funny, that poor child, scared for life. " a lemon drop short of a twinkle "
made me snort into my tea, not at all ladylike, but true.
Laughing out loud enough that my children gave me weird looks. Nice bit of humor, girl.
The single best line in the whole funny thing?“Do you want me to kiss it better?”
Funny and to the point. No redundant words detected. Good work.
Ahhh! Man! I loved this one! really funny! Please, write some like this!
Very cute. I like the Ravenclaw sneaking around. Keep up the good work.
"a few lemon drops short of a twinkle" excellent phrase! :)
Hahahahaha! Thanks for a much needed laugh in the middle of studying for final exams!
Response from tiddlywinks (Author of A Rude Awakening)
Ugh - finals! Hope you do well, and thanks for taking the time to review. ~Tiddlywinks
*giggle* That was great! I laughed all the way through!!
Response from tiddlywinks (Author of A Rude Awakening)
:D Glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Hilarious! If only you could bottle it, a cure for the stress of N.E.W.T.S! Brilliant.
Response from tiddlywinks (Author of A Rude Awakening)
I'll have to talk to Severus about that - he's the Potions master, you see. Glad you liked it - thanks for taking the time to review.
Cute, cute, cute! I love it. Care to write a sequel?
Response from tiddlywinks (Author of A Rude Awakening)
It has crossed my mind... although I guess it depends on whether the Lady does something else for me that I should write something else for her!
Oh, that was wonderful. I love the humor and the idea behind it. Naughty, but not overtly so. Bravo!
Response from tiddlywinks (Author of A Rude Awakening)
Well, you can't be too naughty when there are second-years about! I'm glad you liked it.
LOL loved it.
Response from tiddlywinks (Author of A Rude Awakening)
:D Thanks for taking the time to tell me so.
Poor Severus! Ouch!
Response from tiddlywinks (Author of A Rude Awakening)
Yes... but Hermione did kiss it better! Thanks for taking the time to review.
Oh that was very cute! I love cat stories 
Response from tiddlywinks (Author of A Rude Awakening)
I've just gotten my first kitten! She's sleeping on my lap right now, the little scoundrel that she is! Thanks for taking the time to review.
I was quite amused :) Thank you for writing
Response from tiddlywinks (Author of A Rude Awakening)
Glad you approve :) Thanks for taking the time to review!
...I don't know. It seems like the description of the Lady was a bit sparse and under-developed. There should've been something about her gloating as the two lovebirds in the bed made up for awakening each other in such an awkward manner...Nope, sorry. *sniffy look* I've given it a lot of thought, and you'll just have to write a sequel, this time with more pussy action in it! (BAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!)*ahem* ~Lotm *smirk*(...Good job!)
Response from tiddlywinks (Author of A Rude Awakening)
Lol - hey, you get to sleep on Severus' crotch! Which is a position many would envy (shall I put up a poll at WIKTT?)Actually, I'm thinking the next time I have to repay someone with writing I might put them in as Hermione's familiar and do a sequel to this. So 'Lady' might get a reprise...I'll see what I can do about the pussy action :P-Tiddlywinks
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
Well, Crooks himself is cute... I wouldn't mind him as a co-actor. I do love long-haired males... ~Lotm
Response from tiddlywinks (Author of A Rude Awakening)
I wouldn't have picked you as having a thing for redheads, but I shall keep it in mind :D
I should leave the honors of first review to Lotm, but I am an impatient pilfering kinda gal.
You had me laughing so hard, I think I separated a rib. The cabin boy is now smoothing salve onto my sore chest, trying to distract me from reading this again. (Though, if I did, it would be an excellent excuse for him to apply more salve... )
Excellent little story. If you couldn't tell, I enjoyed it immensely.
Response from tiddlywinks (Author of A Rude Awakening)
You're an "inpatient pilferin kinda gal"? You pilfer inpatients? Shouldn't in-patient's be left in appropriate care? You're a devious woman!But a devious woman with nice comments and a cabin boy, so you can't be all bad :P I'm glad you liked the story.
*cackles in laughter* Oh, my my my... This is still quite amusing even when re-read much later... Thank you!*hugs*~Lotm
The hand of retribution! Snort hahaha I really loved the third person (student) trying to figure out what the heck happened. I will look for more of your works. Thanks for the laugh.