Second part of your story was superb. A very fitting ending. I did wonder at Snapes proposal naked at that if it was just to get out of the book but happy he continued with it and his exploration of HG once they got back home.

I loved this so much. Thanks for writing and sharing. And I am still smiling widely after finishing this story - fair cheered me up as I have flu and am sure my cough has cleared . So thanks.

OMG I am writing you a review while still laughing hard after reading the first part to this story.

The whole situation is just perfect and with the silliness going on with the outfits and the reactions of both to the situation has had me beaming as well as choking with laughter.

Bet Severus will not be so quick to open a package that is not his ever again.

The outfit worn by Severus is fixed inside my head . It was him walking off in the wrong direction and him having to come back around and walk past HG in those tight leather pants that had me howling with laughter till tears fell.

I am loving this superb story based on your own challenge. Perfect so far and am off to read the folloing part that I am sure is equallly as good if not better.

Thanks for sharing.

You know, it's such a pity there aren't scads more of these Lost in a Book challenges, because I absolutely adore them! That being said, this one was no different, in fact it was much better then most- and suprisingly unique for being such a familiar storyline. Although I will admit, I did snicker a bit at picturing Severus in an all leather outfit (it was the squeaking noise I envisioned when he moved that just about killed me) Awesome job though!

I was sure I'd read this before (on Ashwinder?), but it evoked such fond memories that, as with any really good fairy tale, it bears repeating. And repeating. And repeating....

A delicious, credible setup, and a nice touch to have him realize that they'd been living like an old married couple without the one really fun benefit. So glad to have them live happily ever after, courtesy of dear Luna. 

Thanks, Lotm! You always deliver.

YAAAAAYYYYY!!!bravo! bravo!very very sexy...the tounge thing was a little... strange. but if one can get over how it would look... it sounds like an excellent spell.

Wow oh wow. That was so so BRILLIANT I laughed so much, especially on the "I know full well that I've got the good looks of an anaemic wax bean and the personality of a diarrhetic porcupine" but. Comic genius it had to be said. Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this. Well done on such wonderful writing. An excellent response to the challenge. *hugs*.

Really good and funny!! I enjoyed a lot reading it! Congratulations!!

I have to say, I absolutely LOVE these lost in a good book challenge entries. I enjoy reading our beloved characters mingled into other beloved (or not so beloved) stories. Very sexy rendition here of the Hood. :)

Very erotic and very, VERY funny! Another great one LOTM!!!!!!!

Very entertaining! I love your work!

Oh my God! You just had to put the image of Severus as Jean-Claude in my head didn't you? You Bad Bad girl.  Thats so cruel yet sooo good.

I love your response to your challenge :) (I usually adore your work) Thank you both for writing and issuing the challenge. I appreciate your efforts.

Ah Lady, another great story.  Really liked this one.  What an ingenious bit of magic.  Wish I had one of those books of my own. lol    

LOTM,    First off, congratulations on your book deal! Now a whole new world of people are going to see what a magnificent storyteller you are!!!!!     I was thrilled to see a new story posted by you when I logged on this evening.  You NEVER disappoint.  Once again with humor and the brilliance of a well turned phrase, you've written an incredibly sexy and erotic tale.  I loved every fabulous second of it!! Thank you so much for the treat.

"The plot won’t advance until you get that stick of loneliness and woe-is-me pulled out of your bum, and turn yourself into a Slytherin Sex God"

I couldn't help laughing. Isn't that true of any SS/HG fic (and many other storylines, for that matter)?

Loved it.  Just wish that I could put that down on my christmas wish list. 

ROTFLOL! *wait while I catch my breath*That was too much. Talk about hysterical. Where to begin? Treasure line, I don't think I've ever heard that particular expression. But the image of Rickman (from some play or other) about twenty, with long hair, bare-chested, wear tight white pants that hang low on his hips, showing off his 'treasure line', immediately comes to mind.His tongue...growing. Wow, I want that spell. Now! His too tight pants (and the image they invoke...*sigh). His odd gait as he walks away...LOL.Minerva offering her toys (funny, yet provoked a shudder in me, too). And their coupling, both in the book and in 'real' life was hot. I like how when the story started, they were very formal and reserved with each other (nice build-up about Severus's place - or lack there of - in wizarding society). And as the story progresses, wow!Funny, well written, incredibly entertaining. Thank you for a great read, I enjoyed this immensely. 

LOL, for a moment I thought maybe Lucius was involved, what the the Lucious in the title.Great story.  I've always thought there was something a bit erotic and suggestive about the story of Red Riding Hood.

Now, where can I get a copy of this book? That would be a very nice experiment ...

What an imaginative mind you have!I was literally sucked into this story of yours. Am just holiding on long enough to post a short review before I have to follow the plotline into chapter 2 ...

Very funny. Great romp.

must... not... salivate... :DOh, dayam. That was good. Loooooooking forward to more.-Liz (one key still not working, or else this would be full of exclimations.)