Confirmations
Chapter 9 of 11
nagandsevHermione researches further the Dark methods of Herpo the Foul. Flint confirms everything she and Sirius surmised about him during their intense time alone, leading Hermione to begin to lose control.
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Hermione felt an electrical current from within spark all the way through her.
"Senior Undersecretary Malfoy?" she repeated, staring at Kingsley and then to Sirius.
Shacklebolt gave her an odd look as Sirius' eyes grew wide in realization that this was something new and shocking to her, and he loudly commented, "And how is old Lucius? Which new commission is he proposing today?"
"Oh, you know. Same old, same old." Kingsley gave a tired sigh. "Nothing new up his sleeve. Always the same. He wants a registration for this and for that, to register various types of wizards...but we have more urgent matters to discuss, Sirius. Shall we?" The Minister nodded towards the Head Auror's office, and Sirius gave Hermione a look.
She implored him silently with her eyes that she wanted to speak with him further as soon as possible. He started to respond but turned his head, distracted by another figure approaching.
"Minister," said and saluted Marcus Flint breathlessly, his chest heaving with exertion and sweat beading his forehead and upper lip. "Good afternoon, sir."
Kingsley's eyebrows raised in mute question at the man's sudden appearance.
"Forgive my intrusion, sir," Flint was holding himself ramrod straight, the epitome of a dutiful Auror. "But I need to report to Auror Granger that the book she had asked for has been located."
Hermione felt a peculiar rushing in her ears. The book? The book...
Her heart pounded. Home, she thought.
Kingsley's brow furrowed. "Book? What...?"
"Elementum Deorc Coercere ande Coarcere: Blod ande Fortia!" she gasped hurriedly, ignoring the strange, twisted expression on Sirius' face as she reeled off the title.
Flint smirked and nodded. "The very same," he confirmed. "Parkinson is waiting to show it to you in the Restricted Section, if you would care to accompany me?"
Hermione clutched Sirius' arm.
Sirius gave her a grim, subtle nod, but even though Hermione took it as an affirmative, she couldn't shake off a feeling of sudden uneasiness and looked at Sirius and then to Shacklebolt, asking, "Minister, if it's all right? Head Auror Black will come with us?"
Before Shacklebolt could answer, Sirius replied, "I have this meeting with the Undersecretary and Minister...but Harry can go in my stead? And then join us afterwards."
Even as Hermione's forehead furrowed, wondering about Sirius' reply, she heard Flint irritably snarl, "Potter!"
Harry had arrived and was blocking Flint's path.
"Ah, good," boomed Shacklebolt's voice. "Harry can go with you, and when you three return, come directly to Black's office."
"Sir?" asked Flint, as if he didn't hear correctly. "Me, as well?"
"Yes, Marcus. You, as well. The Undersecretary will be joining us. Didn't he inform you?"
Marcus hedged, "Er, I think he mentioned some sort of meeting, sir. I didn't realize it was now...today."
During their exchange, Hermione couldn't help look at Sirius. You're not going with me?
He held her gaze, his jaw muscles clenching; his stormy grey eyes flashed at her with an emotion she couldn't put her finger on, unreadable.
Sirius diverted his eyes from her, curtly ordering Flint, "Well, get to it then and back as quickly as you can. Wouldn't want to keep Malfoy or the Minister waiting, would we?"
Flint huffed, threw a resentful look at Sirius and turned sharply away only to come to an abrupt halt.
Harry stood again in his way. "Hermione?" offered Harry, motioning the way to the lifts.
Hermione felt the energy of everyone, crisp and electrical. Sirius, Harry, Flint...they're all on edge, as am I! As they walked away and entered the lift, her mind raced, trying to puzzle out what Sirius and Kingsley were up to.
As the lift carried them down to the lower levels, she tried to calm herself, thinking, Undersecretary Malfoy? How was I to know that I needed to know about Undersecretary Malfoy?
Her thoughts were interrupted by Harry incongruously engaging Marcus in conversation.
"Missed some action the other night, Flint, at Borgin and Burkes."
Marcus grunted, affecting disinterest. He slouched against the lift's wall.
Harry pressed, "We could have used you around."
"How so, Potter?"
"Some nasty business was going down. An excellent Hit Wizard like you would have come in handy. But you weren't on duty."
"Even Hit wizards have to sleep, Potter, as you well know." He sneered, adding, "Yeah, I heard old Borgin was knocked off, burgled or something. What was nicked?"
Hermione and Harry's eyes met. Only Order members would know anything about this... and of course, the murderous intruders...
Harry kept cool. "We'll never know. Seems like the culprits stole some things, burned some things in the process, wished to get rid of some kind of evidence..."
"Connected with a Dark artifacts shop? Incriminating evidence? You jest, Potter," jeered Flint sarcastically. "You'll make Head Auror in no time."
Harry laughed, his eyes flashing. "You think, Flint? Gotta' get rid of Black first, though, right?"
The lift halted, and Marcus gave a sardonic look to Harry as he jerked the caged doors open. "Our stop."
Oh my God, was it him? He stole from and murdered Borgin? But why? He tried to murder me? But if it was him...but no, Sirius said Flint would need to keep me alive... a living conduit?
The air on the eighth level was thick with tension, heavier than ever before to Hermione, suffocating. Showing his drawn wand, Harry gave her a reassuring look as Flint impatiently took the lead several steps ahead of them heading hurriedly to the Restricted Section.
Hermione spoke in a low voice. "Harry, what are you trying to do? Why provoke Flint when we can't prove anything yet..."
"Can't we? I think we just got a confession, don't you?"
"Not quite. We can't yet connect him directly to the break in and related murder of Borgin, but..." She stopped herself, unsure of how much more Harry knew about Flint in relation to her and Sirius. 'If anything happens to me, confide in Harry. He'll help you. Help you in any way he can to get you back to where you wish, where you truly belong.' What all has Sirius told Harry? She blinked, remembering Borgin and Burkes. But there were two intruders!
Hermione whipped out her wand and silently cast a Muffliato around them. "Harry, listen to me. I don't know what all Sirius has or hasn't told you related to Flint, but we're going on speculations, strong ones but still without concrete evidence. Just do what I say." She softened her bossy nature, adding, "Go along with me, trust me, Harry, please? It's vital to everything we've been working on."
Frowning, Harry pushed his spectacles back but shook his head in agreement. "Alright, Hermione."
She silently dispelled the charm as they reached the Restricted Section's entrance alcove.
Pansy Parkinson awaited them, arching an eyebrow high as she registered Harry accompanying Hermione. Her heavily painted face forced a tense smile as she informed, "The book, Elementum Deorc Coercere ande Coarcere: Blod ande Fortia, was located, Granger. It's set out for you, ready and waiting."
Hermione tried not to stare at Pansy's pendant glittering on her cleavage. It seems alive with energy within... Is it a possessed amulet? A Horcrux? A container of Dark energy? A conduit? She tried to suppress a shudder and keep her heightened nerves at bay. "You...you remembered."
"I remember everything, Granger. Don't you?" Pansy gave a slow look to Harry and then back to Hermione, adding, "A blessing or a curse?"
"Pardon?"
"Memory." Pansy touched her pendent and grimaced slightly. "To remember everything... Even the unbearable and more..." A flicker of a soft emotion fluttered across her face. "Emotions. The emotions are what are too..."
Hermione stared at Pansy; something seemed off. Parkinson's usual hard-nosed sharpness was dulled. There was a softness to her edges she had never witnessed before.
"That's enough, Pansy. We've got an urgent meeting to hop to." Flint cocked his head at her as if to remind her of something.
Parkinson flinched momentarily but continued, annoyed, "How it feels to be... Where is Black?"
"With the Minister." Marcus snapped, "Granger, shall we?" He brusquely motioned toward the inner chamber's entrance.
"I'll go in with Hermione, Flint," stated Harry abruptly, apparently forgetting his agreement with Hermione.
"Why, Potter? That's my duty, isn't it, Granger?" Flint was giving her an odd look. "You might need me for my special talents. Remember?"
There was a strained silence. Hermione looked between the two men. Harry's jaw was set, and she could feel his magic, aggressive and protective, thrum through his body. Opposite him, Flint's tense body language mirrored Harry's, his lips drawn back in a smile that revealed his teeth. At this rate we won't find anything out about Flint's involvement in the attack on Borgin and Burke's! I've got to get Flint on his own and see if he'll give anything away, the arrogant idiot.
Hermione affected a bright smile towards Harry, putting her hand on his forearm to attract his attention. "It's all right, Harry. Flint always goes with me. It's our routine," she said, digging her fingers warningly into her friend's arm.
Harry's eyes met hers and she felt his mind brush hers. She felt his worry and concern, but she shook her head fractionally, and saw the flash of his understanding.
He relaxed slightly and stepped back. "Okay, Hermione," he said. "I'm sure that Pansy and I have got lots to catch up on while you two check out the books." He grinned at Parkinson, who grimaced slightly at Harry's words, but nodded her agreement.
"I'll be right here when you get back," Harry added unnecessarily.
Flint snorted under his breath, but Hermione felt bolstered by Harry's support and trust as she always did. She took a deep breath. Right, come on! she told herself firmly. Time to get some answers.
Plastering what she hoped was a convincingly confident smile on her face, she gestured before her to Flint. "Lead on, Auror Flint," she challenged him in a voice that was steady and true.
Marcus' look was calculating, but he quickly smiled in response and bowed. "Ladies first," he countered.
She faltered for a moment, but remembering her task, she gave a tight nod of acknowledgement and headed towards the passageway to the inner chamber, the intimidating figure of Herpo the Foul looking down upon them.
She passed in front of the dark stone slab, going right and deeper into the space, pushing the door open and entering the inner chamber.
Lit sconces threw light on the table and two chairs. Hermione saw that an ancient tome was already placed; parchments to take notes upon and special quills were ready and waiting for her.
The strange muffled whispers softly soughing in the tomb-like circular room immediately caused her to feel tranquil, yet on extra alert. She shook her head to focus. "Right. Let's get to it."
As she sat down in front of the book, her eyes gazed over it, and she broke out in goose pimples. Elementum Deorc Coercere ande Coarcere: Blod ande Fortia.
It was centuries old. The edges of the thick leather cover were well worn. The smell... Hermione's nose scrunched in reaction to its foul odour. She took in the varying splotches and shades of dark stains and discolouration on its grimy surface. But there was something that caught her attention. Its upper edge... The book looks as if it is... charred...the blacker, smudgy mark seems recent.
Flint watched her carefully, slouching against the wall, not sitting. He began to chew a nail.
"Should you," asked Hermione, hesitating, "should you check it to remove any Dark charm? To remove Dark energy?"
His eyes flashed as he quietly informed her, "The Dark energy has already been removed from it." He seemed to unconsciously touch his chest as he glanced at the floor. A small protrusion, forming a small lump, could be seen in the middle under his turtleneck pullover, like a locket being worn underneath. Marcus' eyes snapped to hers as he said, "It's alright, Granger...it's safe. You can touch it. Research to your heart's content."
Remembering what Sirius had pointed out, she reposted without thinking, "The Dark energy was channelled somewhere." She stared at the object hidden under his shirt.
"What?" snapped Flint.
"Transference of Dark energy from a Dark object goes from one source into another."
Marcus blinked, looking at her queerly, and rubbed at his chest, as if something was itching, irritating the skin.
Hermione took a second take as she contemplated the lump underneath his shirt's cloth, only to gasp softly as she also registered that his hand rubbing the object hidden from sight was maimed. Flint's hand is scarred. From a fresh wound, the skin drawn tight as if... from a fire... wounded from a burn...
"What are you staring at, Granger?"
Hermione looked up at him; the kind of brutality he exuded when he wished to intimidate was oozing forth, full force. Hermione felt a wave of dizziness as she felt déjà vu.
Marcus and I... but not here... there! My universe... and this Marcus...he's the same. He is my Marcus!
The room was spinning, and she closed her eyes, saying, "Nothing, Flint. Nothing."
She took a moment, and opening her eyes, she suggested, "Why don't you take Magicke Moste Evile..."
He Summoned it as quickly as she said it.
She blinked, watching him sit down carefully, and realized that Marcus' favoured more than just his right hand and arm; in fact, he moved noticeably stiffer as if in discomfort. "Like before, could you make notes for possessed amulets, Portkeys, Time-Turners...anything that could be used to propel a wizard through time and space."
He smirked but didn't comment, and she was relieved that he sat and took a quill and parchment, even if it was to humour her, as he was scowling at the pages as they fluttered open with a wave of his hand.
She opened the book. Slowly turning the pages at first only to start skimming through them, she let out an 'Oh!' of surprise seeing the section's title, Herpo the Great's Revelations...
It's like a medieval visual guide and outline for exsanguination techniques... She shuddered as she read, "For the purposes of capturing and containing the life force of a living being's essence." She took a deep breath as she forced herself to study in detail the graphic drawings and depictions of dissected parts of animal bodies... And humans!
Finding a detailed section about "curses most vile, though a necessity for magical survival", she started to skim and scan, jotting down notes and paraphrasing sections with details.
She glanced up at Flint. He wasn't making notes but seemed mesmerized by something he was reading. At least it's keeping him busy!
She furtively went back to her tome, searching for key words and phrases and stopped as she read, "Pushing magic beyond known boundaries and through torturous sacrifice, Herpo the Great invented such methods and processes for sojourning the constellations."
Here we go... She checked the parchment, her eyes flickering over the notes she had been making. "From exsanguination, contain and store the blood and life force within the inanimate object... Combined with the life force of the chosen sacrificed life source, one may experience transference to the calculated coordinates chosen..."
She rubbed her forehead in consternation. Like a celestial Portkey, sojourning the constellations, life force forcibly taken, contained within say... an inanimate object, an amulet. She gave the lump under Flint's shirt a glance, and her chest tightened. But the living conduit...a witch or wizard...bewitched by what means? She let out an audible sound of disgust at the potential possibilities based on Herpo the Foul's inventions through torturous sacrifice.
"Everything all right, Granger? Found what you were looking for?" asked Flint softly.
She didn't look up, answering, "I'm fine, and yes, I think I have found something useful."
She continued taking notes on the parchment, "Desanguination... and through exsanguination...The process of blood loss must occur while chanting the following Accio and containment curses over the first living object... allowing the blood loss, up to a degree sufficient to cause death..."
Hermione stopped for a moment and double underlined "the first living object".
She reread, "From exsanguination, contain and store the blood and life force within the inanimate object..." Then she drew a mind map, circling this sentence and connecting it with an arrow to "the first living object...the murdered victim... Vein or artery, the bleeding out must precede the fatal incision with meticulous care, rendering the subject to pain whilst conscious of their essence leaving their body, transferring to the chosen container, possession taking place."
Hermione suddenly felt nauseous and felt her temples starting to throb but pushed on, noting, "In the case of the second living object as the living conduit of magical force, it must be rendered insensible by captive hex... Thus can one's bolt of magic be intertwined, and the transference of self and conduit succeed in arriving at predetermined destination."
"The captor's curse must soar through the living conduit, penetrating, incapacitating it... Once the possessing wizard is encased with one's living conduit, the transference procedure may take place. A conjugation of the two becoming one must occur, a joining of body, mind and life forces..."
Hermione underlined "the second living object" and "living conduit". She went back to the phrase "one's bolt of magic". Bolt? Like lightning? The curse would be unimaginably powerful and sudden like electricity...? An Unspeakable. But the second living object... She gulped hard, realizing, Such as me, is kept alive, needed to be living, alive for the transference to occur... Unlike the first victim, the first living object... Exsanguination... murdered most foully...
She read slowly, once more, "Insert wand and pointed knife, once the first living object is incapacitated, through the skin just behind the point of the jaw and below the neck bones, severing forward the jugular vein..." Hermione felt faint, and the vague hint of stomach acid wishing to surface began to be tasted. I'm going to be sick!
She sat back, needing to pause from the gruesome content, and took deep breaths. She looked at Flint, who had gone back to chewing a nail and staring at a shadowed wall.
"Did you make notes on anything that could be used to propel a wizard through time and space?" she asked, irritated, apprehensive, her mind wanting to deny that any of this horrid, evil magic had been performed on her and Sirius. Why? She didn't want to believe anyone she knew was capable of it, affected by it.
"How would that be relevant to Weasley's murder, Granger?" he asked softly, shocking her by his bluntness, snapping her back to this reality. He cocked his head, looking curiously at her, stating matter-of-factly, "Besides, almost any inanimate object can be turned into a Portkey."
"And a living object?" she snapped at him before she could think twice.
Marcus froze and stared at her pensively.
Something came over her, and she belligerently pushed, pointing out, "Check Dark Portkeys...not the standard bewitchment of inanimate objects but the Dark bewitchment of animate objects, any usage of a living creature, say, a wizard or witch," she shoved Elementum Deorc Coercere ande Coarcere: Blod ande Fortia at him, "as a conduit of magical force, transporting one to a pre-arranged destination."
And there it was. Marcus knew that she knew. He knew that she knew what he had done, how he had done it, and to what lower depths of depravity and evil murderous Dark magic he had experimented and succeeded in performing... Herself the living proof.
So he knew that she knew... that he was her Marcus.
Marcus spat the gnawed fingernail to the floor. And eerily, he calmly commented, "Really, Granger?"
She watched him, and he actually smiled at her, a small, smug smile. "Then, that's the wrong the source for the answers you're searching for." He shoved Elementum Deorc Coercere ande Coarcere: Blod ande Fortia back at her.
Her heart was thudding hard, but she breathed slowly and deeply. "No, it's the right source. It's quite informative. Quite detailed."
"Well, details are important." His shifty grey eyes challenged her, slamming Magicke Moste Evile shut. "Ask me, Granger. Ask me all of those questions flying around in that keen mind of yours."
She rose instinctively, not liking the look he was giving her and feeling she needed to clear her mind. And I have to find Sirius at once! "Actually, I've enough notes for the day. We can go."
"So soon? You seemed to be just getting started."
Hermione grabbed the parchments she had made notes on and didn't comment but turned her back on Flint and walked quickly towards the library's door. She heard Flint's heavy steps in her wake, his breath sounding loud and rasping in the narrow passageway. She forced herself to keep moving calmly forwards, measuring each footfall as she made her way slowly to the exit. Flint was right behind her now, and she was shaking with panic, lifting her hand to push the latch of the heavy door open. Suddenly she felt him move, and her breath caught in her throat as his arm came around her shoulder and he leaned in. She clutched the papers to her chest and opened her mouth to shout for Harry...
But he merely added his weight to hers and pushed the door ajar, watching with that same sardonic smile on his face as she spun away from him and out through the opened doorway.
The relief that she felt when she saw Harry's familiar face beaming at her in the brightly lit corridor beyond almost made her knees go weak.
"That was quick," Harry said to her, clearly relieved not to have to continue his conversation with Parkinson. "Did you get what you came for?"
Hermione nodded, relief washing through her. We must... must get to Sirius! she thought.
"Hermione? You look a little pale..."
"I'm fine, Harry. Just need to get back to my office and clear my head a bit. And I need to talk to Sirius as soon as possible!"
Hermione heard Flint saying something indistinct to Parkinson as she hurriedly headed to the lift with Harry, but he quickly caught up with them just as they all entered the lift.
No one spoke on the way up. Only as they entered their office did Flint give a cryptic comment. "Too much information, Granger? Too much of something is just as bad as not enough, eh?"
She ignored him, hastily pulling out the objects from her cloak that she had Diminuendoed, and tightly gripping her wand, she enlarged the books A Translation of Herpo the Great's Treatises of Fundamental Magical Truths and Constellations of the Magical Heavens immediately.
Seeing her concentrated on work and Marcus seeming to meditate on some parchments on his desk, Harry offered, "I'll check if we're needed yet in the meeting. I'll be right back."
He left, and pretending that what had just happened in the Restricted Section wasn't bothering her, Hermione gave Marcus a fleeting glance, only to see that he was sitting at his desk, rubbing his chest again, slowly fondling the object underneath.
Ignore him! Until I can confer with Sirius! She urgently opened Constellations of the Magical Heavens, searching for methods and processes for sojourning the constellations.
She came across again the citation with the reference to the Herpo's treatise she had made notes from. So if the methods Herpo used were through murder, an act against nature, murdering the first living object, draining and suctioning the life force, capturing it for energy to propel the spell's force, like making a Horcrux, the wizard's soul would be torn... A murder was done to create the living force within the amulet, fed with Dark energy from evil objects, such as the books in the Restricted Section... possibly other murders... and vile acts of violation...
Her thoughts jumped back and forth. But why? What could make someone...him...do such horrid deeds? I don't understand... How could he? And Pansy was his accomplice? No! No witch could... She gave Flint another quick glance underneath her lashes.
But then, she remembered Bellatrix Lestrange. A slight tremble went through her at the memory of Bellatrix's torture, and she forced herself to further scan over the text, pushing aside the imagery of an unholy union of sorts between Pansy and Marcus. "The second living object is kept alive, sustained, fed off of like a parasite feeding off of its host... The vital component, the living conduit used as their current to transport... for the magical transference through time and space... the final incantation is Portus Constellatio."
Sirius and I are the conduit wizard and witch, formed as a conduit by and from the murder and life force of the murdered victim... She thought about wizards and witches who had recently been reported missing in her universe. Possibly murdered? Justin Finch-Fletchley? Susan Bones? ... Pansy Parkinson? But she worked in the Department of Mysteries, just like here...
Hermione's frustration started to boil. And it's not just these sickening curses of Herpo's, but the celestial coordinates of when the transference occurs must be found. Where to start? She searched the book for any section to shed light on any clues.
"This might be quicker." It was Flint. He stood above her and motioned to the old astrolabe on her desk.
"Just rotate the alidade on the back, line up the stars with the sighting holes...I suggest you choose the family of Orion... a dubious but useful constellation of stars." He gave her a triumphant look, pointing at the altitude markings around the edge. "Read off the altitude in degrees scaled here. Well, again, I suggest the coordinates of latitude between +60° and −90° in the Orion constellation..."
"Do you?"
"Yes, I do, Granger. Just turn the rete and once the star pointer marks the location of the Orion stars, the celestial sphere shall be yours to travel or return to... These charmed astrolabes will project the heavens anywhere. Here, on our lovely office wall." Pugnaciously, he urged, "Do it. Now."
Seeing her not complying, he spat, "No? Thought you wanted to return."
"To return?" Her eyes smarted. He's enjoying every twisted second of this!
"Yes, return, Granger." His eyes glinted with malice as he mockingly quoted from memory like an instruction manual, "Pinpoint the constellation or coordinates you wish, the point of the celestial sphere to bewitch oneself and one's conduit, and once spelled, be propelled through time and space to one's designated coordinates."
Like a cat playing with a mouse, he started to pace around her desk and offered, "I would suggest cross-referencing your notes about living conduits with Constellations of the Magical Heavens and measuring the latitude and longitude before casting the Portus Constellatio spell. Wouldn't want to end up somewhere else, would you?" His features darkened as he whispered, "If you survive the transference, that is."
Hermione was momentarily speechless, her thoughts racing again.
"So while you're at it, be sure to check the right ascension at 06h 12.5m to 07h 27.5m ." Flint cocked his head at her and asked grimly, "Why aren't you writing this down, Granger?"
She didn't know where he was leading with all of this. He knew everything. She didn't know what he wanted her to say.
"You seem confused. Didn't know I was into Divination so thoroughly, Granger?"
She found her voice at last. "Actually, I had a hunch you were." She held her chin up defiantly. "It's how you know that I want to match or crossreference formulated bewitched living conduits with transference coordinates that I'm curious about. And why? Why, Flint?"
"Really?" He took a step closer towards her. "How do you think I know, Granger? Tell me. And why? I so want to hear the reason from your lips."
He made a movement, and thinking he was closing in on her, she cried out, "Don't touch me!
"Why not?" Then he whispered fiercely, "When you know I've touched you before."
Flint smiled an evil smile and quoted to her softly, "'For the purposes of capturing and containing the life force of a living being's essence.'"
Oddly, even though her heart was thumping wildly, she suddenly felt a coolness, a numbness as he snatched her parchment of notes from the Restricted Section and read out, "'The captive curse must soar through the living conduit, penetrating, incapacitating it... Once the possessing wizard is encased with one's living conduit, the transference procedure may take place. A conjugation of the two becoming one must occur, a joining of body, mind and life forces...'"
He huffed and threw the parchment down on the desktop. "Bravo, Granger. Well done." He glared at her hatefully. "Makes one wonder if the penetrating or incapacitating is the most pleasurable of this 'magick moste evile'..."
She snapped her wand up, even as Harry's voice was heard, calling through the half-opened door, "The Minister's meeting has already started, hurry you two!"
Hermione gripped her wand even tighter.
"What are you waiting for, Granger?" Marcus whispered menacingly, "Do it. Hex me. Or tell Potter, the Minister, crow out to the rooftops, or can it be, can it truly be that you still can't prove a thing?" He cocked his head at her. "Remember?" He sneered and left.
Her breath had become shallow as she ran after Marcus who'd overtaken Harry, entering Sirius' office ahead of her and him.
Right before entering, Harry looked at her, concerned. "Hermione? What is it?"
Her mind was reeling, her heart pounding. She felt flushed and as if she was going out of her mind with a mixture of anger and other overwhelming emotions. "Harry, help me! The book was charred... It must have been at Borgin and Burkes. And Marcus' hand is burnt. Tell, Sirius. He must know."
"Right." Harry was studying her excited state with worry.
"I need to speak with him, privately. Urgently! Tell him, tell Sirius that Marcus knows everything now; he's my Marcus!"
"Potter? Granger? We're waiting," called Sirius from within.
Harry gave her an odd look, but assured her. "I will, Hermione."
As they entered, her heart raced even more, seeing Sirius give her a neutral nod, sitting casually on the edge of his desk, apparently listening to someone who had been speaking. Flint was already seated strategically between the Minister and, unthinkably, none other than Lucius Malfoy, who seemed to have been speaking.
Flustered, Hermione sat down beside Harry near the door, shutting it with a loud slam.
Malfoy had paused and, upon seeing Hermione, looked her over from head to toe, his trademark sneer causing her blood to boil.
Hermione felt like she would explode but held her tongue, gripping her wand even tighter.
How the hell did Malfoy become Undersecretary in this upside down place? And Flint! He...he... My Flint! The bastard! I've got to tell someone before I... She gave an urgent look to Sirius. I need you!
Sirius' eyes had narrowed, apparently aware of her highly agitated state. He gave a sharp glance at Flint, and his voice had an impatient edge to it as he urged Malfoy to continue. "You were saying?"
"As I was saying before being interrupted," Malfoy ostentatiously paused, giving Hermione a cool stare and then proceeded, "in order to take steps to protect those of pureblood lineage against attacks, this proposal, this registration will ensure that incidents such as what's been happening in the Department of Mysteries be minimalized..."
"What?" Hermione blurted out, the frustration she was feeling percolating uncontrollably upon being within arm's reach of the loathsome wizard, on top of the confrontation and full brunt of Flint's affront, unnerving her.
Malfoy's jaw muscle's clenched, his cold grey eyes giving way to the slightest glint of malice underlying his words. "My dear girl, this is not a Muggle-Born Registration..."
"I am not your dear girl, Malfoy." Her eyes flashed, enraged, as she looked from Malfoy to Flint.
"Undersecretary Malfoy, Granger," corrected Flint automatically.
The air was thick with tension. And you...you! It was on the tip of her tongue, taking every ounce of control not to scream out, not to incriminate Flint on the spot, revealing everything right then and there in front of everyone.
"Auror Granger, are you all right?" she heard Sirius ask.
Hermione couldn't look at him, feeling she would truly lose it if she did. Remembering his request, 'The past two days never happened: Borgin and Burkes never happened; we never happened... Pretend it never happened...you're good at that', she felt her eyes smart again, but took a deep breath and forced herself to nod. I have to wait! I have to wait till I can speak with Sirius first. I can't lose control now! Control yourself!
"Please, I know she is just getting back on her feet. Correct, Black?" Smirking, Malfoy's grey eyes glinted with a suppressed emotion, though his words were cool and calm. "Auror Granger, this is merely a proposal for a voluntary sign-up of those who are of Muggle-born origins," his lips twitched slightly, "as well as half-bloods, purebloods...an invitation for full collaboration, full participation in a new policy. To root out discriminatory mindsets on all sides."
Hermione couldn't keep her thoughts from racing back and forth wildly. She exploded, "Like yours?" She looked around utterly exasperated. "I don't understand what's going on here, but this cannot be right in any universe!"
"Granger!" It was Shacklebolt reprimanding her.
Momentarily forgetting her own dilemma and whether or not her experience was the same in this universe, she couldn't help herself and pleaded uncontrollably, "Sir, how can you sit here so calmly and listen to him after what he did, who he was...Voldemort's lieutenant?"
Only her breathing was heard, hard and loud. She felt like she was running a marathon.
But then, she was aware of Sirius slowly crossing to her, a pained look on his face as he stated, "That'll do, Granger. Let's get some fresh air, shall we?"
Hermione stood slowly, allowing herself to be guided to the door by Sirius, but looked at Malfoy as he had the audacity to say to her, "Need I remind you that the Wizengamot confirmed my being Imperioed, cursed beyond my control, Granger..."
"It's a lie!"
Malfoy's cool snapped, and he snarled at Shacklebolt, "I thought you said that she had fully recovered from Weasley's death, from her little break-down..."
"I'm right here, Undersecretary...you needn't talk about me as if I was not here," she ignored Sirius warning her to stop and gave Flint an accusatory look, "and I am not recovering from grief...I was attacked..."
"Hermione...Granger, that's enough! Come with me." He took her by the arm firmly and guided her out of his office and hurriedly down the hall to hers.
Entering, Hermione broke away from Sirius as he demanded, "What the hell has got into you, nearly blowing our cover...antagonizing Malfoy and Flint like that?"
They were both panting, adrenaline rushing.
She was waving her arms around, as if to catch her breath, expecting him to understand her somehow, agitated, unable to speak.
Sirius' voice softened seeing her level of distress and turmoil, seeing her pain and frustration, as he asked, "What's wrong, Hermione? What the fuck happened in the Restricted Section?"
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A/N: The greatest thanks to Proulxes, alpha/beta and contributor, for all of her time, patience and skill, unconditionally giving and helping me out! And thank you, Clairvoyant, for your admin time and help, also unconditionally giving. I truly appreciate it!
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37 Reviews | 8.08/10 Average
I loved the ideas in this story, nag. The idea of different universes - so dangerous that the knowledge of them has to be hidden deeply within the Ministry. I also loved the way you explored the natures of love and duty, and the conflict between them.... I'm not apologising for the happy ending either! I think that they both could do with a different ending than the one they were giften by JKR!!! Can't wait for your next story, sweetie! Pxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you for all of your support and feedback--yes, perhaps that kind of knowledge would lead to a kind of madness, knowing that your 'other' is living a life with different choices, different consequences... dangerous indeed. Couldn't/Wouldn't have done the happy ending without your Knuts worth;-) Thank you again for all of generosity--truly, deeply, madly appreciate it!
Some people do not take rejection well.
Unrequited love in canon reverberates through time; unrequited love in this story reverberates through time and space. Good depiction of Flint’s self-delusion that first-Pansy needs his help to realize that he is the one for her. It seems second-Pansy has delusions about Sirius, which makes Flint’s obsession with her a delusion.
Flint’s interrogation explains why Pansy made the choice she made in the previous chapter.
An idea held by the Ministry is that some things (this Dark Magic) should be destroyed. There is no way to use them for good (ie., LOTR). There is also the idea (or belief) that, once destroyed, they cannot be recreated again. Contrary to this are the propositions that nothing is all good or all evil (expressed by Hermione) and that anything one person can create, another can (not expressed in the text) and that one should study this item to develop defenses (which doesn’t appear explicitly in the text).
If this were a scifi story, the two homecoming scenes at the end would depict outcomes in different universes, but in this story, they may not. I can’t recall any previous chapters depicting dual universes.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, for all of your thoughtful reviews throughout this tale--I truly, deeply appreciate all of your detailed observations and feedback! Yes, was trying to depict different states of rejection, unrequited love, self-delusion/delusions and perceptions, and tie them all together--also had this notion of exploring the dubious, seemingly hypocritical nature of the Ministry of Magic, flawed but nevertheless persistent to keep face and keep the status quo consistent and protected.Yes, with this particular tale, I'll leave it up to the reader's interpretation of the ending scenes, how they wish to fill in anything not explicitly given/decided--suggestive and inferred ideas regarding the dual universes--again, thank you for your specific, detailed feedback, as it has helped enriched me and given me so much food for thought--thanks again!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, for all of your thoughtful reviews throughout this tale--I truly, deeply appreciate all of your detailed observations and feedback! Yes, was trying to depict different states of rejection, unrequited love, self-delusion/delusions and perceptions, and tie them all together--also had this notion of exploring the dubious, seemingly hypocritical nature of the Ministry of Magic, flawed but nevertheless persistent to keep face and keep the status quo consistent and protected.Yes, with this particular tale, I'll leave it up to the reader's interpretation of the ending scenes, how they wish to fill in anything not explicitly given/decided--suggestive and inferred ideas regarding the dual universes--again, thank you for your specific, detailed feedback, as it has helped enriched me and given me so much food for thought--thanks again!
Good chapter. Great tension and suspense. Enough happened and is revealed that it is difficult to comment on all of it. (One would almost have to take notes for a full review.)Did a previous chapter mention that Hermione had a scar on her neck?The conduit process resembles sex closely enough (penetration, possession, small death) that it makes Hermione ucomfortable with Flint. It may have contributed to her loss of control. Pansy and Marcus appear to be under compulsion from their amulets - Pansy less voluntarily than Marcus. A humane Pansy almost broke through. One might wonder if her fond memories are about Sirius or Harry. Marcus is careless enough that one can conjecture he is not the one in control. On the other hand, he may be certain enough of his power to not be discreet.Of course, a question is how much is Malfoy involved.
Response from MHaydn (Reviewer)
I forgot to mention the reversal with Hermione and Harry where she first cautions him about prematurely provoking people before one has solid evidence and then Hermione pulling that stunt in Malfoy's office.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you for continuing to read,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, and the very thoughtful feedback--truly appreciate your insight! Oh yes, it was mentioned in a previous chapter about Hermione's scar on her neck when Sirius traces it with his finger and asks her about it--should have included a reference to it or have had Hermione touch her scar while reflecting on Marcus, Bellatrix memories--thanks again for the keen insight on (missing) details! ) Food for thought!:-) I'm trying to convey that although Hermione is controlled, a professionally disciplined Auror diligently falling back on doing things by the book, when in a new situation her subjectivity and confusion about those and things done by them in the past doesn't fit in the box and even she can be hypocritical or lose control at times. Yes, I feel with this Hermione, the more the sexual elements of the conduit curse sinks in and the realization hits her, the more uncomfortable with Flint she would be; once she has time to solely focus on it, I'm not sure how she will fully react, but for now, it definitely has layered on and contributed to things overwhelming her in the meeting. Who and what Flint has done to her, her fluctuating memories and experience with him, the Lucius of her universe, etc.--takes its toll and is the last straw. Trying to convey it's all happening too quickly, her (worst) conjectures are true, etc. Yes, Pansy, Marcus and their amulets are all intertwined, who exactly her memories are about will be revealed, the narrative spaced out in the final two chapters, and it's a bit of both, regarding Marcus' behaviour--as always, you're spot on! Malfoy's degree of involvement will also be touched upon. Thank you again!
I admit to being as confused as Hermione. Which Flint started this mess, and whom did he (try to?) resurrect? How would he chose the other universe(s)?Do all three Flints gain from the deal?I kinda see why he'd pick Hermione: she's too smart when not thoroughly confused and thus too dangerous.Hoping you'll soon shed more light to this puzzle!Great narration anyhow. Will they now confide in Harry?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for continuing to read,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, and for your feedback! All will be explained in more detail in the next two, final chapters... well, maybe a brief epilogue, although I will try to cram it all in within the next two chapters. The next chapter's content is fully completed--just waiting for my beta to return from holiday and then I'll queue it. It will explain a lot regarding Flint's detailed motivations, intentions and a partial listing of why he chose Hermione. And then in the final/next to final chapter other details will, hopefully, round out the whole picture. As Hermione realises and confirms in this chapter, 'this' Flint is definitely her Flint--they are both from her universe (don't think I'm letting the cat out of the bag too much with re-confirming that :-) Her Flint definitely started it all, and all we'll know for sure in this story is how this Flint fares, although there will be some speculation about the other two by the end. I appreciate your copmments, and am sorry it's been, perhaps a little too intentional, confusing, so I appreciate your feedback about this.:-)Regarding Harry... next two chapters will reveal the extent of confiding in him;-) Thank you again!
Emotions erupt as the possibility of choosing between worlds arises. Sirius is committed to his true love while Hermione thinks in terms of familiar surroundings and old friends. Hermione might be thinkiing that Sirius will come to resent her because of the separation from his friends. If they are in complete control, they may be able to choose the best mix of different worlds.
Sirius plans a mission that does not include Hermione. I assume he is reacting to what he feels is a rejection.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for reading and the feedback--truly appreciate it! Yes, as the possibilty of returning draws nearer, both must deal with what each has found and what will be lost, and the acceptance of that. Or not. Control is an issue. Sirius plans, reasons, and decisions will become apparent, his perception of being rejected colouring them. Thank you again!
Oh, my, here goes Sirius the opportunist vs Hermione the stickler for the rules! You've comstructed a particularly fitting set of universes for Sirius' logic.I'm beginning to doubt that the current blend was Flint's intention! Or should I write the Flints' intention?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for reading and for the feedback--truly appreciate it! So glad that some dubiousness is coming across on some level; we'll see whether Flint, or the Flints , or how Sirius further contributes to Hermione's situation and decisions, etc. Thank you again!
"Get back here, you impetuous man," called Hermione from the bedroom.
"I'm of the moment," cried Sirius, "and I'm checking family mementos.""When I catch you, all Heaven will descend upon you, and fiery Hades will consume your scorning arse," declared Hermione.
And so it did.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Hahahaha! Brilliant,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
! I've been chuckling and grinning like the Cheshire Cat all day by your gift of a review/drabble! Yup, that sums up the whole kit and caboodle of it--he can run but not hide from a woman on *fire*--lol!Thank you for continuing to read and the generous feedback!
Good action sequence. Good portrayal of Sirius and Hermione.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you for continuing to read and the feedback! So glad the action sequence comes across effective enough as well as the depictions of Sirius and Hermione--thanks again, truly appreciate it!
Marcus and Pansy are such obvious co-conspirators that one wonders why Shacklebolt is not suspicious of them. Why didn’t Sirius detect Marcus suppressing Hermione’s memory?
On the other hand, another Hermione and another Sirius are running around in some other universe. The alternate Hermione was about to marry Ron-of-the-Biker-Chicks and may be a different person. Marcus and Pansy are disrespectful, and this may be pureblood prejudice, but it is also the way police treat suspects.
So, it depends on how twisty you want the tale to be.
Why doesn’t Hermione plan to reach out to Harry and Ginny? At the moment, she is trusting her romantic impulses.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, thank you so much for continuing to read and the feedback... truly appreciate it! Whether Shacklebolt is aware of Marcus and Pansy remains to be seen... Maybe a deus ex machina, maybe not... oops! hehe!Sirius not detecting Marcus' supressing Hermione's memory is due to something that's been done to him similarly by our other culprit which comes out a few chapters later, his senses dulled on some levels, and also a mandatory request by my beta to try to write this story through Hermione's eyes only, or as much as possible, as I have a tendency to (and enjoy it) write multiple characters pov's... so it's been and is very much a challenge for me to keep to seeing/experiencing things through her eyes, and/or force/limit the reader to this... I'm not comfortable with it, so I truly appreciate hearing from you what works and doesn't for you, and all the gaps left! Yes, I see that Marcus and Pansy could have multiple twists incorporated in their characterization and function in the plot... The ending is already written for this tale, but maybe in future tales, I can learn and try to layer on more sophisticated plots--this one intentionally being an obvious one, with the obligatory fangirl romance current winning out I was trying to convey that Hermione was still in a state of not knowing who to trust with their 'secret' except Sirius, being freshly thrown into the situation/parallel universe, but maybe she will reach out to others--she might definitely need to. Thanks again for giving me lots to think about!:-)
Response from MHaydn (Reviewer)
Okay, Sirius missing the memory suppression because he has been subjected to it is a subtle point carried to its logical conclusion. Very good.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Dearest
Both wish to reeturn to their original worlds. Since they are not tempted by new possibilities, their previous lives must have been acceptable to them. Why doesn't the wild Sirius want to explore a brand new world? What does he miss in his home world? Is it the other Hermione?
From the last scene, Flint is more than a physical thug.
The term "Unspeakable Pansy" is almost funny, but what is her relationship to Flint, and her previous relationship to Sirius?
There appears to be a lack of material on alternate universes in the wizard world in contrast to our world which has extensive information, including maps of the near domains. Out of the blue, is the Hogwarts Express a portal between worlds?
(Some of this review is a bit flippant.)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for continuing to read and for all of your feedback and observations! You're spot on regarding why Sirius, initially, misses his home world. ;-)Yes, there is much more to Flint; I'm loosely, very loosely, trying to explore writing an inverted detective story/'howcatchem', where we (both the writer & reader) are shown the criminal act and apparent, obvious perpetrator(s) but other aspects of the characters and the possible resolution of them may still be up in the air... or something like that--lol! It's fanfiction and the wizarding world so anything is possible--hehe! 'Unspeakable Pansy'--HA! *rolling eyes* The phrase is funny, given the different meaning(s) in a different context--lol! More of her relationship to Flint as well as her past relationship to Sirius will be revealed in the next chapter or two--definitely past history there. Hogwarts Express a portal between two worlds--now there is an idea! Maybe true alternate universes in the wizard world could be a sub-genre--so many possibilities! Thanks again for reading, truly appreciate it!
What a thrilling tale. I am enjoying it very much.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for reading! So happy that you are enjoying it--thanks for the feedback, truly appreciate it!
Ooh, that evil Flint. What a bastard. Still, there was nekkid Sirius... ;)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Dearest
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, yes, there is a nekkid Sirius *waggling eyebrows* Surely she can not let that go unnoticed or to waste (the bathrobe is not fooling anyone, eh? lol!) Hehe... Thank you so much for reading!xxx
You big tease! What did she find out? :)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
I have no idea--oh! hehe! More of Hermione's deductive findings in the next chapter--thank you so much for the read, sunny!<3
Ooooh... the plot thickens! Love the way your characterisation of Sirius is developing. I like his vulnerability... and when Marcus Flint asked Hermione to "Remember?"... shivers...! Keep writing! More! More! Pxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Dearest proulxes, thank you so much for rereading this and for all of your support! Yes, it's quite an experience writing this side of Sirius, digging deeper into what might be there if... Lot's of ifs--lol! Thank you for all of the nudging *squishy hug* Marcus... Well, he is Mr Innocent, isn't he? Feeling very *smug & smoothe* Thanks again for everything!<3<3<3
Flint looks like a shady bugger in any universe! :)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Sunny! Thank you so much for reading--truly appreciate it! And I agree, absolutely, Flint can't fool anyone regardless of where he pops up--'a shady bugger in any universe'-heeeeee! Thanks again!xxx
Love how you have depicted Hermione's confusion and trauma -- and I'm also impressed by Sirius' kindness and care. Perhaps there's something else gogn on here... ;) Pxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Aaawww, *squish* thank you for reading, yet again:-) & for your generous feedback before, during and after--I had the help of a dearest friend with the confusion & trauma depiction, couldn't have done it without the one and only proulxes! Yes, I agree, it's, um, *interesting* to see this possible side of Sirius... but maybe only Hermione brings it out of him;-) We'll see what develops between these two in this particular scenario, shall we? lol! Thank you again, for everything!xxx
another great chapter. Looking forward to understand what is going on. I like riddles but unlike Hermione can never understand them. Looking forward to more
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
! I truly appreciate your feedback--more will be revealed about what is going on, and if anyone can solve this, Hermione can:-) We'll see what she does about it! Thank you so much again!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for continuing to read,
Quite a concoction. Events and emotions from three different universes. Well handled.
I have the feeling that this universe is going to create its own mix of emotions and regrets.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, thank you for the read and very thoughtful feedback--truly appreciate it! I'm cracking my knuckles, trying to devise a bit of a mystery plot here (the ending is finished/resolved, however, the characters' developments and narrative in between are fighting back...), wanted to barrel along with the plot... but it became quite clear immediately that the emotions and regrets of each character and the three universes could not be pushed to the side easily... Thank you again for reading!
Response from Fairfield (Reviewer)
Glad to hear about the effort you are putting into the plot. The two characters are initially in shock, but their rational selves will soon assert themselves, and my feelings are that a strong plot is needed to hold this complex scenario together.
Strong enough story to stand on its own. It doesn't really need Hogwarts as a background. It could be any strong and intelligent woman in a society recovering from recent conflict.
Lots of suggestive questions. The narrative presents Sirius as more of an enigma with more potential than Flint (independently of what canon says about them).
Very good.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, thank you so much for giving this a read and the very thoughtful feedback--I truly appreciate your keen insight and opinions. With your wonderful eagle-eyed gift, I love how you've described the essence of the personified Hermione in this tale-- she's/it's new unchartered territory for me, so I appreciate, again, that she and the story's set up are coming across as intended.Yes, Sirius... he is presented to Hermione as very much an ambiguous presence in this first chapter, and Flint the seemingly obvious one--trying to explore character dichotomies in a more focused way in this story than in some of my other ramblings;-) We'll see how it goes... Again, thank you for your thoughts!
Hmm, interested to see where this goes and what's going on.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for the read and the feedback--truly appreciate it! Story is completed, just have to re-write/fill out some of the middle chapters a bit more, but next is in queue. More of how they both got to this time & space and what is going on more specifically in the next chapter--thank you again for reading a rare pair!
Woo hoo! It's here! Love the characters in this story - can't wait to see it played out! Pxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Yes, our baby has finally arrived--lol! Seriously, thank you so much for your nerves and talent you've given/shared with me and this story and characters (no, I didn't mean your blood, sweat & tears... did I? hehe!) These characters couldn't have fleshed out as they have without your nudging & nurturing-thank you again, from the bottom of my heart!naggy pooh
Intriguing, I like a good riddle. I Wonder if Flint is the villain here, and it is nice to meet Sirius agin, it looks like they are together in this time. Looking forward to read more
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for reading and the feedback--truly appreciate it! There will be more of Flint and others;-) and more of how they came to be together in this time in the next chapter (story is completed, just must re-write some in-between chapters with more filling out of the riddling parts in more detail)- Thanks again for reading!xxx
A deduction and action chapter that settles the current criminal case, but leaves many things unexplained.
It appears to have brought our pair closer together.
Accusations and questions are flying. About events in different worlds. And who knows what a slightly different Sirius or Pansy might or might not have done. Or the crazed Marcus.
The chapter suggests that obsession with love - either as a profession in the case of the Department of Mystery personal or as an emotion in the case of Marcus - can be dangerous.
Sirius is revealed as more competent than Hermione had assumed.
At this point, I'm not certain whether or not Sirius and Hermione have counterparts who are now in the wrong universe.
We may discover that some things are irreversible and some things must remain unexplained.
(Canis Major at its zenith. )
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so very much for continuing to read and the detailed feedback--truly appreciate it!Reference to Sirius' and Hermione's counterparts in the other universes will be touched upon in the next/final chapter. Hoping to tie up many of the numerous loose ends of the multiple half-explained or completely unexplained things--perhaps a few will be left for the reader to fill in as they wish, but other things will be specifically, finitely expressed for this version of this tale. Again, thank you for taking the time to give this a read--and I love the Canis Major at its zenith!
An interlude of remembrance, discovery, and bonding.But. Being impetuous is seen as a fault in Sirius, but perhaps it is a matter of his being totally connected to the moment, and its other manifestation is being totally connected to the ones he loves to the point of being willing to die for them.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Dear
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, thank you for reading and the thoughtful feedback--yes, Sirius is impetuous and the observations about him being connected to the moment as well as being totally connected to the ones he loves will perhaps lead him to make decisions that will clash with how Hermione sees decisions needing to be made, due to his nature... Thank you again, truly appreciate it !
Excellent, really satisfying description of Knockturn Alley which sets the scene for an exciting fight which leaves Sirius seriously wounded -- eek! Can't wait for the next one to post, nag. This is a really enjoyable mystery. Pxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for all of the feedback--as you well know, I've been very loosely trying to follow an inverted detective story *thingy* here, a 'howcatchthem' of sorts... I'm so happy you like the Knockturn Alley vision (I know I took extra liberties with it, but yes, I also find it hard to believe that all of Magical London is confined to two narrow alleys, etc., so thank you for entertaining this notion)--thank you again for everything!