Stipulations
Chapter 5 of 11
nagandsevHermione does the only thing a Gryffindor lioness can do—she goes after Sirius.
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"Don't leave here for anything in the world! Do you understand? Stay right here!"
What? What just happened? What the hell is a Code Black?
"Sirius!" cried out Hermione, running to the fireplace. Just like that? He's gone? Panic twisted her stomach into a tight knot.
She stared into the hearth and repeated aloud Shacklebolt's words, "Code Black... Borgin and Burkes. Borgin and Burkes? But that's..."
With a lump in her throat, she remembered. That horrid shop that specializes in Dark objects, anything with strong magical properties...anything and everything devoted to the Dark Arts! She tried to gulp the tension away as she remembered one of her first Investigative Auror assignments. That first time when Marcus Flint and I went there, in search of Dark talismans...We were such novices! Borgin was so loathsome!
Her heart started thumping hard as another, older memory of her, Harry, and Ron came back; visions of following Draco Malfoy through Knockturn Alley flashed through her mind while deciding what to do. Death Eaters... Draco was letting other followers, other Death Eaters, into Hogwarts through that Vanishing Cabinet...in Borgin and Burkes!
She started to pace, then stopped. Knockturn Alley! If that's where Sirius is, that's where I must go!
She gripped her wand tightly as she grabbed Floo Powder, hesitated for just a second. But Sirius told me to stay here! Then she stepped forward and whispered fiercely, "Diagon Alley!"
In the moment, she was stepping out into an obscure tight space between shoddy buildings. Looking up, she made out a sign in the darkness 'Scribbulus Writing Instruments'. Knockturn is near!
Hurrying along a cobbled alleyway, she followed the street signs, marking the way, concentrating on recalling the general twists and turns she needed to take.
As she passed The Coffin House, then The Spiney Serpent, she knew she was now deep within Knockturn Alley.
Pursuing another cause this time, Hermione avoided a few straggling passers-by in the ominous quiet of the nocturnal stillness and pressed on down the dark, crooked street. She made an abrupt sharp turn on the next corner and walked down the steps leading off the main pavement, passing Ye Olde Curiosity Shop...Borgin and Burkes' rival competitors! As she made an immediate sharp turn to the right, the gloomy shop appeared, nestled in among the darkest corner of the narrow lane, its forbidding exterior just as Hermione remembered it.
A dimly lit glow emitted from inside, but the building appeared undisturbed, other than puffs of smoke spouting from its chimney top. She shivered. What was the emergency? What if Sirius isn't even here?
Do I just go inside? Is that... Suddenly, she made out several figures in the dark, closing in on the building from the rooftops, surrounding it from out of the shadows of neighbouring structures.
She stepped back against the wall of the building nearest her, only to have someone's hand cover her mouth and jerk her against the body it belonged to. Her squirming and muffled protests were quickly encased in a Muffliato charm cast around her by the ruffian, who would have frightened her further if she hadn't instantly recognised the musky scent and masculine feel of the body she was being pressed back against.
"I told you to stay put!" came Sirius' voice, low and tense, as he slowly released his hand from her mouth. But not his hold around her waist. He held her clasped against him in an iron grip. She could feel his chest rising and falling, strained in emotion. "I don't want you in harm's way, Hermione! Go back!"
Letting him know she had no intention of returning, she defiantly demanded, "Tell me what this is...what's happening? What's Code Black?"
Seconds passed as a battle of the wills engaged silently between the two, both breathing heavy, their bodies as one, standing there in the shadows, tense and alert.
She could feel Sirius' internal struggle fade into resignation as he huffed and gave in, saying, "It's a special signal we use inside the Ministry, between ourselves... the remaining Order members... Black is the code for Dark followers or suspicious events which bear the marks of former Voldemort-related activities..." His grip relaxed a little, enough to allow Hermione to wriggle around, facing him, their breath warm and fast in the cool night air.
"The Order of the Phoenix?" Hermione saw Sirius' eyes shining, dilated.
"Yes. We know there is a traitor in our midst, several perhaps, within the Auror department, so the Order members have banded together again as a special unit."
She could feel his muscles flexing under her fingers pressing against him as she said softly, "Sirius, I was and always will be a member of the Order...no matter what universe we're in. I'm not leaving! I'll stand by your side and fight along with you all!"
Sirius smiled a wolfish grin, then let go of her. "That's the spirit... my Gryffindor lioness, through and through."
They heard a yell that snapped their attentions towards the building.
Apparently, the other Order members had continued on with their reconnaissance maneuver, and Sirius snapped, "Wands up! Aim to maim and be ready to kill...be sure they will!"
Hermione raised her chin and grinned. "Constant Vigilance!"
He just paused a second to touch her cheek, as if to say goodbye, before ordering, "Follow me!"
They made their way into the dusty shop entrance. There were smells of something burning coming from deeper within the building somewhere.
Sirius motioned to Hermione to follow him, then signalled to two others to move forward...her heart skipped a beat as she saw Harry and George give her a quick look of acknowledgement before snapping back at the task at hand. Then she heard a voice calling out, "Borgin! Where are you? It's Arthur Weasley from the Department of Magical Law Enforcement. On behalf of the Office for the Detection and Confiscation of Counterfeit Spells and Protective Objects, I order you to come out and give way for inspection."
There was a pause for several seconds before Arthur called again, "Borgin!"
A scream answered all.
Hermione shuddered. It sounds like the scream of someone being tortured...someone suffering the Cruciatus Curse! The tortured person seemed to be a floor below them. Or is it above?
In a blur, she was quickly following Sirius and other Order members through a doorway that led to a back storeroom of sorts, filled with Dark objects. Hermione glimpsed human bones and withered body parts of animals. She barely missed brushing against some sort of Medieval torture instrument with pointed edges as she rushed along.
"Watch yourselves!" warned Sirius, motioning forward.
There was an opening in the back of the room, the air smelt fouler as they drew nearer. Going through, it first sloped downward then upward as if it were leading to an upper floor rather than a cellar. As they entered the space above, several things happened at once.
In a small, sooty hearth, something was burning, and Mr Borgin was writhing around on the floor screaming, "No more! Don't! You can't take it back...he'll kill me! He'll kill me...I told him I had it! I promised him!"
Hermione caught sight of two figures in the far right corner of the room...both black shapes. She gasped at their identical, mutated faces before being aware that the other Order members were spreading out throughout the room to corner the two intruders. There's something familiar about them!
Hexes flew from George and Harry's wands at the perpetrators. A jolting breaking of glass was heard as one of the figures crashed through a large dirt-stained window. Then the other turned and viciously sent a hex to Borgin lying on the floor...the man screamed in agony as visible slashes let forth blood.
Hermione saw Sirius barrel towards the remaining figure, and she sprung alongside him, casting an Immobulus Charm at the person but was simultaneously met with an attacking, deflective hex creating a wall of shielding fire with roaring flames between them and the culprit.
In that second, none other than the Minister himself Apparated into the room. Shacklebolt instantaneously released a charm, dispersing the flames, and with a wrathful look, he cast another spell, causing the flames to completely cease.
She heard the bleeding Borgin rasp out vehemently, "You!"
Hermione turned and saw Borgin with his arm extended, a death-grip around his wand. "You...that Mudblood witch! It's all your fault! It's..." Borgin slashed at Hermione, even as a green bolt of light soared from the assailant wizard's wand across the room, hitting the seedy, drenched man, shutting him up forever.
The Killing Curse had hit its mark.
But Hermione had been thrown down, her head hitting the floor hard. Someone was laying half on top of her.
"Harry, George...after them!" she heard Arthur saying, "Bill and Neville have sealed the outside area with Anti-Disapparition Jinxes...they're trapped in the close vicinity. The perpetrators will be on foot, heading for Floo connections! Hurry! I'll be following on..."
"No, Arthur, stay with them; I'll do the further back up," came Shacklebolt's deep rich voice.
"Let's just...here we go, Sirius," Hermione heard Arthur utter as she felt the weight of Sirius' body being rolled off her. "There we go, my dear girl. Sirius? Oh my," responded Arthur in concern.
Her head was throbbing with pain from the impact, but she struggled up into a sitting position. She wiped at something wet on her clothing...Blood! But it wasn't hers.
Eyes clenched, Sirius was gritting his teeth as if in unbearable pain. She quickly saw why. Bleeding profusely, his body began to shake. He took the curse that Borgin meant for me!
As Sirius' body began to convulse, she cried out, "Hold him, Mr Weasley, while..." She knelt and shut her eyes tight, concentrating with all her body and soul. She recognized the curse immediately. Sectumsempra...the counter incantation is...?
Her mind reeled, trying to recall the incantation. It had been so long since she had researched and learned the counter curse...since Harry had used in against Draco Malfoy in their sixth year. Mustering her concentration, she began to tremble slightly. I've never used it!
As Sirius' blood bled forth, pooling on the floor, she started to whisper, then softly chant Vulnera Santera, her wand tracing over and over Sirius' body. She felt as in a trance as she passed her wand over and around his body, feeling her energy and life-force pouring forth, channelling through her wand onto him, into him, and knew not how long it was before Arthur said, "The bleeding has stopped."
Hermione felt exhausted, drained, her body was shaking from her ministrations. She irrationally told herself, this shouldn't be happening...whatever this is... She warily looked around, dizzy, only to focus in on Borgin's corpse, and suddenly a wave of anxiety washed over her, an impulse to grab Sirius and disappear. She felt desperate; she felt she needed outside help. She felt she needed...
"Kreacher!"
There was a loud crack. The ancient house-elf stood before them.
Hermione realized she was panting loudly from the exertion, feeling faint and depleted, but gave Arthur a steadfast look. "If he's taken to St Mungo's, they'll want to know what has happened and where, details. The Order's secret unit within the Auror department could be compromised if they give him a potion that allows him to relax...
"And if it accidentally slips who all was involved, we'll be busy Obliterating the entire staff when our attention and energy are needed elsewhere." The Weasley patriarch frowned. "It's imperative we keep this within our own circle at this time. We can't risk the traitor hearing and catching on that we're trying to catch him."
"Not the fucking hospital...just take me home!" came Sirius' voice abruptly, gruff and highly agitated.
Both Hermione and Arthur snapped their attention to Sirius, who had become conscious momentarily, only to fall back into a feverish delirium.
"I can continue to heal Sirius if Kreacher can take him...he needs Blood Replenisher and complete rest to fully recover." She gave the wizened old house-elf a look for help. "Take Sirius back home and keep him there, watch over him...if he needs help, help him...but don't leave his side! He must have bed rest. Do you understand?"
Kreacher gazed at her with his drooping eyes, croaking out, "Kreacher shall aid if needed. Kreacher will help the Master. Mistress wishes me to take Master home?"
Feeling a little thrown off by the house-elf addressing her as the 'Mistress' of the house, she pushed that aside to confirm. "Yes, Kreacher. Exactly. I'll be right there," she blinked, wondering fleetingly about house-elves' magic, before adding, "find me Essence of Dittany, Moonstone and..." The sight of Sirius' still visibly slashed and bloody body caused her stomach to lurch. "And some Blood-Replenishing Potion. Can you do that?"
"Yes, Mistress." And with another loud crack, both Kreacher and Sirius were gone.
Arthur helped Hermione slowly get up. She glanced at Borgin's grimaced face, stone dead.
"Hermione, my girl, you're not much better. Your head..."
"I'm fine, Mr Weasley."
"Arthur, Hermione."
They swivelled around at the sound of figures entering the room, Apparating, and one climbing back through the broken window from the connecting rooftops.
"Where's Sirius?" asked Harry, beelining to Hermione as George crossed over to the hearth, took a poker and scraped something out.
Hermione answered, "He was hit by a Sectumsempra curse, but I stopped the initial bleeding. Kreacher's taken him home." Harry gave her a curious look as she clarified, "To Grimmauld Place."
There was urgency in Arthur's voice as he said, "Harry, why don't you see that Hermione gets to a Floo safely. We'll check everything and clean up here."
Bill was examining what George had scraped out. "Dad, it seems they were burning things."
"But why? Dark artefacts was Borgin's livelihood."
"Getting rid of evidence?"
"Put together what you can...I'll be right back," said Harry. He turned to Hermione, "Let's go...Sirius needs you."
Hermione nodded, and she and Harry with wands up and on full alert were quickly making their way out of the precarious shop and back along the crooked streets to the nearest common Floo, Hermione asking, "Harry, what is this all about?"
"When he has healed more, Sirius can fill you all in about our surveillance these past few weeks...I must get back. There's some connection between missing artefacts from the Department of Mysteries. We've trailed and pinpointed Borgin and Burkes as an enclave of activities, been monitoring it for about a month now, since, well, since..."
"Ron's death?"
"Yes."
They had arrived at the fireplace in the tight space beside Scribbulus.
Harry looked down into Hermione's eyes, tense and serious; his jaw muscles clenched as he pushed his glasses up. "Listen to me, Hermione. You need to lay low for a day or so."
Her oldest best friend seemed to be deciding about something until he continued, "You'll have to first Floo to the Ministry, and then to Alphard's...Grimmauld Place. All Floo network actions are being heavily monitored now. I'll send a Patronus later on tonight with an update. If any further complications with Sirius...contact me, immediately! Send Kreacher...he'll be loyal to you."
"Yes, I know; he already is...it's a bit odd." Hermione's voice faltered a bit. The elf seemed to recognize her as his master's equal. An equal partner. As if she and Sirius were one and the same to Kreacher.
"It shouldn't be. It's not just elf magic that is different from ours." Harry gave Hermione a bittersweet look. "As you well know, they have an uncanny accuracy and ability to see us and those we love as we truly are."
"Those we love?"
"Absolutely, Hermione." Harry cleared his throat. "Right. Sirius needs you." Harry impulsively hugged her, repeating, "I'll send a Patronus soon!" before letting her go.
After Flooing and switching in the Ministry's Atrium, Hermione called out, "Kreacher!" as she leapt out of the fireplace into the parlour room of Grimmauld Place.
With a loud pop, Kreacher appeared in front of her.
"Where did you put Sirius?"
"Master is in the Master's bed chamber," croaked the elf, motioning upward to the first floor.
Speeding up the stairs, she hesitated at the landing, wondering whether to continue to the second floor. Is he in his old bedroom? She checked the study room on the first floor and then started back towards Ron's room when she saw her room's door open down the hall.
Kreacher appeared in the doorway; the door creaked further open. "The Master is here in the master bedroom."
My room is the master bedroom? Sirius gave it to me... Hermione's thoughts were cut off by what she saw upon entering the room. On the floor? Bleeding afresh again?
"What's happened?" She rushed to the side of the bed, a bloody trail marking the floor, looking down at Sirius. She was shocked at what she saw. He's nude! And his cuts are bleeding again? He's unconscious!
"Master wished to get up, fought to get up, to leave again. He fell, and the wounds from the wizard's curse reopened. Kreacher could not see where the Master was bleeding from. Kreacher removed Master's clothing. Elf magic cannot heal this curse. Mistress said she would be right here." Kreacher's eyes were large and searching as they stared at Hermione. "Mistress did not come. Kreacher could not leave the Master alone. Kreacher has been waiting."
Of course he has! That's what I told him do!
Trying to stay calm, Hermione asked, "You've found some Essence of Dittany...some Blood-Replenishing Potion?"
"Yes, Mistress, there on the dresser."
"Kreacher, bring me some clean cloths and a jug of hot water as well."
The elf Disapparated and Apparated back immediately with the items.
Hermione levitated Sirius onto the bed and rolled her sleeves up, instructing, "Listen to me carefully, Kreacher. As I heal the open wounds, incanting, as soon as the skin closes, you will pour a few drops of the Dittany where the fresh skin has grown over. Understand?"
"Yes, Mistress."
Oh, Sirius! Trying to keep her panic at bay, seeing the duvets soaked with his blood, she knelt beside him and concentrated again, singing in a soft lull, "Vulnera Sanentur", her wand slowly going over again his form. But this time, she could see not just the blood but the fresh cuts and gashes opened on his bare skin. She concentrated harder as one raw wound ever so slowly ceased to bleed, but his sculpted form was deathly still, like a fallen statue.
Don't die, Sirius! Don't die!
They worked together, Kreacher and Hermione, she spelling the slashes to close, the old elf administering the drops of brown liquid sealing and healing further. She felt, each time, her energy draining from her and was lost in time, lost in the trance of the incantation. What seemed like hours passed until at long last all wounds were healed.
She collapsed back against the plush pillows lining the grand headboard and gave the steadfast elf a tired but appreciative look. "Kreacher, Sirius needs the Blood-Replenishing Potion. We might have to force him." She had barely finished speaking when she saw that he held a phial of the liquid in his hand.
She looked at Sirius laying beside her, and now that she had had a moment to catch her breath, she felt her cheeks grow warm as she realized she would need to prop him up and hold him, help him, lest he choke. She reached for her wand and Accioed her blue bathrobe, placing it over his very defined torso and waist area.
"Kreacher, um, I'll hold Sirius up against me, and when I tell you 'now', be ready to pour a dosage of the potion in his mouth."
Kreacher nodded and croaked, "Yes, Mistress."
Hermione took a deep breath. Right. I need to just... She slowly wedged a leg and then her arms and body under Sirius' torso, enough to lever him upwards and inch him on up to a semi-sitting position against her. At the contact of his bare flesh against her chest, the feel of his body, her heart started beating faster. Sirius was of a lean build, but muscular and hard... and his unconscious weight heavy. Huffing, she gave him an awkward hoist up against her more, squeezing him in the process, and he stirred in her arms, half-turning, his inertia pressing her down. "Sirius, it's all right. It's me. Hermione. You've been hurt. Do you understand? You must drink this potion. You've lost a lot of blood. Sirius?"
His eyelids half-opened, and Hermione saw that his focus became alert, his grey eyes burned in recognition as he fiercely whispered, "Hermione!"
She reassured him, "Yes, it's me." Sirius had twisted around; the bathrobe had fallen completely off, but she kept focused to the task at hand. "You were hit with a Dark curse, a Sectumsempra...Sirius, you must drink the Blood-Replenishing Potion. Trust me." She motioned to Kreacher. "Now!"
To her surprise, Sirius was able to fully sit up and knock the potion back, grimacing and exclaiming, "Gah!", and then to her utter annoyance and shock, he made as if to get up, asking groggily, "Where are my bloody clothes? I have to return..."
"You're not going anywhere, Sirius Black! You've just nearly bled to death...twice mind you, and..."
"Kreacher, my clothes, now!"
The elf gave a look to Hermione, then Sirius, then back again to Hermione.
"Kreacher, you are not to give him his clothes back," a wave of frustration washed over her as she added, "or let him leave here until I say so!"
But Sirius was clumsily reaching for his wand lying on the bedside table, his sinewy muscles on his back flexing with the strain. Hermione couldn't help but notice how they rippled in his upper back, which caused her to glance all the way down to his defined buttocks. Very defined...
"Sirius!" She grabbed her wand. "Don't make me Stupefy you...you're not going anywhere. The reconnaissance is over for tonight! Harry says we're to lay low for a day or so..."
Suddenly, a bright-white, translucent animal appeared, a stag. It spoke with the voice of its caster, "Stay where you are. Situation under control and covered. Will contact you both tomorrow. Send Kreacher immediately if you need."
Harry! Hermione gave a huff of relief. "See? I told you so. You need to rest and heal..."
She turned to see that Sirius had collapsed down, unconscious again. Apparently, he had given over fully to his weakened state upon hearing Harry give the confirmation that he wasn't needed. What a stubborn, resilient, exasperating man!
She stopped chiding him inwardly as she slowly stared at the mosaic of scars and wounds marking his sinewy, sculpted body. Slowly, she took the fluffy bathrobe and covered his hip area, her body quickly feeling leaden as the events of the day took their toll on her.
As she pulled the soft cloth up more on his torso, her fingertips grazed the soft tufts of hair which formed his well-defined treasure trail downwards... She looked back upwards and her eyelids were getting heavier and heavier with sleep as she struggled to study his tattoos of runic symbols on his pectorals. Groggily, she strained, making out the patterned symbols meanings: Friendship, Loyalty, Love... and... Passion!
Where's my wand? She sluggishly grasped it, and with the last drops of her energy, she Accioed for blankets; two flew to her, and she gently covered Sirius fully before pulling one over herself.
Exhausted, she fell into a deep sleep of troubled dreams.
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Muffled sounds.
Hermione heard muffled, distorted sounds, vague and mumbled, distant and dull.
Through the haze in her mind, she heard a smooth voice whisper in her ear, "I've taken a part of you...your memory, your essence... My precious conduit... I've even erased the exact memory of who it is that has done this to you. How does it feel, Granger?"
Hermione felt a weight lift off her; she watched as a form rose and stood above her, tucking a silver chain with a phial-like pendant inside his shirt. Dark hair. Tall. He seemed to float.
No, I'm floating... Where am I?
"Everything I've done to you, everything I've used you for, you will forget and keep hidden, forgotten... When you hear the word 'remember' from me, each time, the memories will be muddled, buried deeper and deeper ...become vaguer and vaguer..."
Hermione felt a hex hit her; she felt something inside her...something foreign. Something being taken from her against her will.
She heard screaming and felt pressure and being thrown, hexed, transported, falling. Her body hit a hard surface. Her head hit something hard. Her head was burning. Inside her was burning. A searing pain. Then all was dark. She lay in darkness, dimly making out stars, constellations. She became fixated on one formation in the heavenly bodies. Then she heard screaming as he struck her again with a hex from behind...
"Hermione! Wake up, wake up!"
She was gulping for air, as if from almost drowning. She gasped and cried out, "I remember!"
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A/N: The greatest thanks to my dearest, very patient and caring, alpha/beta Proulxes...thank you for all of your keen insight and wonderful nudging, eternally grateful!
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37 Reviews | 8.08/10 Average
I loved the ideas in this story, nag. The idea of different universes - so dangerous that the knowledge of them has to be hidden deeply within the Ministry. I also loved the way you explored the natures of love and duty, and the conflict between them.... I'm not apologising for the happy ending either! I think that they both could do with a different ending than the one they were giften by JKR!!! Can't wait for your next story, sweetie! Pxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you for all of your support and feedback--yes, perhaps that kind of knowledge would lead to a kind of madness, knowing that your 'other' is living a life with different choices, different consequences... dangerous indeed. Couldn't/Wouldn't have done the happy ending without your Knuts worth;-) Thank you again for all of generosity--truly, deeply, madly appreciate it!
Some people do not take rejection well.
Unrequited love in canon reverberates through time; unrequited love in this story reverberates through time and space. Good depiction of Flint’s self-delusion that first-Pansy needs his help to realize that he is the one for her. It seems second-Pansy has delusions about Sirius, which makes Flint’s obsession with her a delusion.
Flint’s interrogation explains why Pansy made the choice she made in the previous chapter.
An idea held by the Ministry is that some things (this Dark Magic) should be destroyed. There is no way to use them for good (ie., LOTR). There is also the idea (or belief) that, once destroyed, they cannot be recreated again. Contrary to this are the propositions that nothing is all good or all evil (expressed by Hermione) and that anything one person can create, another can (not expressed in the text) and that one should study this item to develop defenses (which doesn’t appear explicitly in the text).
If this were a scifi story, the two homecoming scenes at the end would depict outcomes in different universes, but in this story, they may not. I can’t recall any previous chapters depicting dual universes.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, for all of your thoughtful reviews throughout this tale--I truly, deeply appreciate all of your detailed observations and feedback! Yes, was trying to depict different states of rejection, unrequited love, self-delusion/delusions and perceptions, and tie them all together--also had this notion of exploring the dubious, seemingly hypocritical nature of the Ministry of Magic, flawed but nevertheless persistent to keep face and keep the status quo consistent and protected.Yes, with this particular tale, I'll leave it up to the reader's interpretation of the ending scenes, how they wish to fill in anything not explicitly given/decided--suggestive and inferred ideas regarding the dual universes--again, thank you for your specific, detailed feedback, as it has helped enriched me and given me so much food for thought--thanks again!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, for all of your thoughtful reviews throughout this tale--I truly, deeply appreciate all of your detailed observations and feedback! Yes, was trying to depict different states of rejection, unrequited love, self-delusion/delusions and perceptions, and tie them all together--also had this notion of exploring the dubious, seemingly hypocritical nature of the Ministry of Magic, flawed but nevertheless persistent to keep face and keep the status quo consistent and protected.Yes, with this particular tale, I'll leave it up to the reader's interpretation of the ending scenes, how they wish to fill in anything not explicitly given/decided--suggestive and inferred ideas regarding the dual universes--again, thank you for your specific, detailed feedback, as it has helped enriched me and given me so much food for thought--thanks again!
Good chapter. Great tension and suspense. Enough happened and is revealed that it is difficult to comment on all of it. (One would almost have to take notes for a full review.)Did a previous chapter mention that Hermione had a scar on her neck?The conduit process resembles sex closely enough (penetration, possession, small death) that it makes Hermione ucomfortable with Flint. It may have contributed to her loss of control. Pansy and Marcus appear to be under compulsion from their amulets - Pansy less voluntarily than Marcus. A humane Pansy almost broke through. One might wonder if her fond memories are about Sirius or Harry. Marcus is careless enough that one can conjecture he is not the one in control. On the other hand, he may be certain enough of his power to not be discreet.Of course, a question is how much is Malfoy involved.
Response from MHaydn (Reviewer)
I forgot to mention the reversal with Hermione and Harry where she first cautions him about prematurely provoking people before one has solid evidence and then Hermione pulling that stunt in Malfoy's office.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you for continuing to read,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, and the very thoughtful feedback--truly appreciate your insight! Oh yes, it was mentioned in a previous chapter about Hermione's scar on her neck when Sirius traces it with his finger and asks her about it--should have included a reference to it or have had Hermione touch her scar while reflecting on Marcus, Bellatrix memories--thanks again for the keen insight on (missing) details! ) Food for thought!:-) I'm trying to convey that although Hermione is controlled, a professionally disciplined Auror diligently falling back on doing things by the book, when in a new situation her subjectivity and confusion about those and things done by them in the past doesn't fit in the box and even she can be hypocritical or lose control at times. Yes, I feel with this Hermione, the more the sexual elements of the conduit curse sinks in and the realization hits her, the more uncomfortable with Flint she would be; once she has time to solely focus on it, I'm not sure how she will fully react, but for now, it definitely has layered on and contributed to things overwhelming her in the meeting. Who and what Flint has done to her, her fluctuating memories and experience with him, the Lucius of her universe, etc.--takes its toll and is the last straw. Trying to convey it's all happening too quickly, her (worst) conjectures are true, etc. Yes, Pansy, Marcus and their amulets are all intertwined, who exactly her memories are about will be revealed, the narrative spaced out in the final two chapters, and it's a bit of both, regarding Marcus' behaviour--as always, you're spot on! Malfoy's degree of involvement will also be touched upon. Thank you again!
I admit to being as confused as Hermione. Which Flint started this mess, and whom did he (try to?) resurrect? How would he chose the other universe(s)?Do all three Flints gain from the deal?I kinda see why he'd pick Hermione: she's too smart when not thoroughly confused and thus too dangerous.Hoping you'll soon shed more light to this puzzle!Great narration anyhow. Will they now confide in Harry?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for continuing to read,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, and for your feedback! All will be explained in more detail in the next two, final chapters... well, maybe a brief epilogue, although I will try to cram it all in within the next two chapters. The next chapter's content is fully completed--just waiting for my beta to return from holiday and then I'll queue it. It will explain a lot regarding Flint's detailed motivations, intentions and a partial listing of why he chose Hermione. And then in the final/next to final chapter other details will, hopefully, round out the whole picture. As Hermione realises and confirms in this chapter, 'this' Flint is definitely her Flint--they are both from her universe (don't think I'm letting the cat out of the bag too much with re-confirming that :-) Her Flint definitely started it all, and all we'll know for sure in this story is how this Flint fares, although there will be some speculation about the other two by the end. I appreciate your copmments, and am sorry it's been, perhaps a little too intentional, confusing, so I appreciate your feedback about this.:-)Regarding Harry... next two chapters will reveal the extent of confiding in him;-) Thank you again!
Emotions erupt as the possibility of choosing between worlds arises. Sirius is committed to his true love while Hermione thinks in terms of familiar surroundings and old friends. Hermione might be thinkiing that Sirius will come to resent her because of the separation from his friends. If they are in complete control, they may be able to choose the best mix of different worlds.
Sirius plans a mission that does not include Hermione. I assume he is reacting to what he feels is a rejection.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for reading and the feedback--truly appreciate it! Yes, as the possibilty of returning draws nearer, both must deal with what each has found and what will be lost, and the acceptance of that. Or not. Control is an issue. Sirius plans, reasons, and decisions will become apparent, his perception of being rejected colouring them. Thank you again!
Oh, my, here goes Sirius the opportunist vs Hermione the stickler for the rules! You've comstructed a particularly fitting set of universes for Sirius' logic.I'm beginning to doubt that the current blend was Flint's intention! Or should I write the Flints' intention?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for reading and for the feedback--truly appreciate it! So glad that some dubiousness is coming across on some level; we'll see whether Flint, or the Flints , or how Sirius further contributes to Hermione's situation and decisions, etc. Thank you again!
"Get back here, you impetuous man," called Hermione from the bedroom.
"I'm of the moment," cried Sirius, "and I'm checking family mementos.""When I catch you, all Heaven will descend upon you, and fiery Hades will consume your scorning arse," declared Hermione.
And so it did.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Hahahaha! Brilliant,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
! I've been chuckling and grinning like the Cheshire Cat all day by your gift of a review/drabble! Yup, that sums up the whole kit and caboodle of it--he can run but not hide from a woman on *fire*--lol!Thank you for continuing to read and the generous feedback!
Good action sequence. Good portrayal of Sirius and Hermione.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you for continuing to read and the feedback! So glad the action sequence comes across effective enough as well as the depictions of Sirius and Hermione--thanks again, truly appreciate it!
Marcus and Pansy are such obvious co-conspirators that one wonders why Shacklebolt is not suspicious of them. Why didn’t Sirius detect Marcus suppressing Hermione’s memory?
On the other hand, another Hermione and another Sirius are running around in some other universe. The alternate Hermione was about to marry Ron-of-the-Biker-Chicks and may be a different person. Marcus and Pansy are disrespectful, and this may be pureblood prejudice, but it is also the way police treat suspects.
So, it depends on how twisty you want the tale to be.
Why doesn’t Hermione plan to reach out to Harry and Ginny? At the moment, she is trusting her romantic impulses.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, thank you so much for continuing to read and the feedback... truly appreciate it! Whether Shacklebolt is aware of Marcus and Pansy remains to be seen... Maybe a deus ex machina, maybe not... oops! hehe!Sirius not detecting Marcus' supressing Hermione's memory is due to something that's been done to him similarly by our other culprit which comes out a few chapters later, his senses dulled on some levels, and also a mandatory request by my beta to try to write this story through Hermione's eyes only, or as much as possible, as I have a tendency to (and enjoy it) write multiple characters pov's... so it's been and is very much a challenge for me to keep to seeing/experiencing things through her eyes, and/or force/limit the reader to this... I'm not comfortable with it, so I truly appreciate hearing from you what works and doesn't for you, and all the gaps left! Yes, I see that Marcus and Pansy could have multiple twists incorporated in their characterization and function in the plot... The ending is already written for this tale, but maybe in future tales, I can learn and try to layer on more sophisticated plots--this one intentionally being an obvious one, with the obligatory fangirl romance current winning out I was trying to convey that Hermione was still in a state of not knowing who to trust with their 'secret' except Sirius, being freshly thrown into the situation/parallel universe, but maybe she will reach out to others--she might definitely need to. Thanks again for giving me lots to think about!:-)
Response from MHaydn (Reviewer)
Okay, Sirius missing the memory suppression because he has been subjected to it is a subtle point carried to its logical conclusion. Very good.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Dearest
Both wish to reeturn to their original worlds. Since they are not tempted by new possibilities, their previous lives must have been acceptable to them. Why doesn't the wild Sirius want to explore a brand new world? What does he miss in his home world? Is it the other Hermione?
From the last scene, Flint is more than a physical thug.
The term "Unspeakable Pansy" is almost funny, but what is her relationship to Flint, and her previous relationship to Sirius?
There appears to be a lack of material on alternate universes in the wizard world in contrast to our world which has extensive information, including maps of the near domains. Out of the blue, is the Hogwarts Express a portal between worlds?
(Some of this review is a bit flippant.)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for continuing to read and for all of your feedback and observations! You're spot on regarding why Sirius, initially, misses his home world. ;-)Yes, there is much more to Flint; I'm loosely, very loosely, trying to explore writing an inverted detective story/'howcatchem', where we (both the writer & reader) are shown the criminal act and apparent, obvious perpetrator(s) but other aspects of the characters and the possible resolution of them may still be up in the air... or something like that--lol! It's fanfiction and the wizarding world so anything is possible--hehe! 'Unspeakable Pansy'--HA! *rolling eyes* The phrase is funny, given the different meaning(s) in a different context--lol! More of her relationship to Flint as well as her past relationship to Sirius will be revealed in the next chapter or two--definitely past history there. Hogwarts Express a portal between two worlds--now there is an idea! Maybe true alternate universes in the wizard world could be a sub-genre--so many possibilities! Thanks again for reading, truly appreciate it!
What a thrilling tale. I am enjoying it very much.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for reading! So happy that you are enjoying it--thanks for the feedback, truly appreciate it!
Ooh, that evil Flint. What a bastard. Still, there was nekkid Sirius... ;)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Dearest
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, yes, there is a nekkid Sirius *waggling eyebrows* Surely she can not let that go unnoticed or to waste (the bathrobe is not fooling anyone, eh? lol!) Hehe... Thank you so much for reading!xxx
You big tease! What did she find out? :)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
I have no idea--oh! hehe! More of Hermione's deductive findings in the next chapter--thank you so much for the read, sunny!<3
Ooooh... the plot thickens! Love the way your characterisation of Sirius is developing. I like his vulnerability... and when Marcus Flint asked Hermione to "Remember?"... shivers...! Keep writing! More! More! Pxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Dearest proulxes, thank you so much for rereading this and for all of your support! Yes, it's quite an experience writing this side of Sirius, digging deeper into what might be there if... Lot's of ifs--lol! Thank you for all of the nudging *squishy hug* Marcus... Well, he is Mr Innocent, isn't he? Feeling very *smug & smoothe* Thanks again for everything!<3<3<3
Flint looks like a shady bugger in any universe! :)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Sunny! Thank you so much for reading--truly appreciate it! And I agree, absolutely, Flint can't fool anyone regardless of where he pops up--'a shady bugger in any universe'-heeeeee! Thanks again!xxx
Love how you have depicted Hermione's confusion and trauma -- and I'm also impressed by Sirius' kindness and care. Perhaps there's something else gogn on here... ;) Pxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Aaawww, *squish* thank you for reading, yet again:-) & for your generous feedback before, during and after--I had the help of a dearest friend with the confusion & trauma depiction, couldn't have done it without the one and only proulxes! Yes, I agree, it's, um, *interesting* to see this possible side of Sirius... but maybe only Hermione brings it out of him;-) We'll see what develops between these two in this particular scenario, shall we? lol! Thank you again, for everything!xxx
another great chapter. Looking forward to understand what is going on. I like riddles but unlike Hermione can never understand them. Looking forward to more
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
! I truly appreciate your feedback--more will be revealed about what is going on, and if anyone can solve this, Hermione can:-) We'll see what she does about it! Thank you so much again!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for continuing to read,
Quite a concoction. Events and emotions from three different universes. Well handled.
I have the feeling that this universe is going to create its own mix of emotions and regrets.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, thank you for the read and very thoughtful feedback--truly appreciate it! I'm cracking my knuckles, trying to devise a bit of a mystery plot here (the ending is finished/resolved, however, the characters' developments and narrative in between are fighting back...), wanted to barrel along with the plot... but it became quite clear immediately that the emotions and regrets of each character and the three universes could not be pushed to the side easily... Thank you again for reading!
Response from Fairfield (Reviewer)
Glad to hear about the effort you are putting into the plot. The two characters are initially in shock, but their rational selves will soon assert themselves, and my feelings are that a strong plot is needed to hold this complex scenario together.
Strong enough story to stand on its own. It doesn't really need Hogwarts as a background. It could be any strong and intelligent woman in a society recovering from recent conflict.
Lots of suggestive questions. The narrative presents Sirius as more of an enigma with more potential than Flint (independently of what canon says about them).
Very good.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, thank you so much for giving this a read and the very thoughtful feedback--I truly appreciate your keen insight and opinions. With your wonderful eagle-eyed gift, I love how you've described the essence of the personified Hermione in this tale-- she's/it's new unchartered territory for me, so I appreciate, again, that she and the story's set up are coming across as intended.Yes, Sirius... he is presented to Hermione as very much an ambiguous presence in this first chapter, and Flint the seemingly obvious one--trying to explore character dichotomies in a more focused way in this story than in some of my other ramblings;-) We'll see how it goes... Again, thank you for your thoughts!
Hmm, interested to see where this goes and what's going on.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for the read and the feedback--truly appreciate it! Story is completed, just have to re-write/fill out some of the middle chapters a bit more, but next is in queue. More of how they both got to this time & space and what is going on more specifically in the next chapter--thank you again for reading a rare pair!
Woo hoo! It's here! Love the characters in this story - can't wait to see it played out! Pxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Yes, our baby has finally arrived--lol! Seriously, thank you so much for your nerves and talent you've given/shared with me and this story and characters (no, I didn't mean your blood, sweat & tears... did I? hehe!) These characters couldn't have fleshed out as they have without your nudging & nurturing-thank you again, from the bottom of my heart!naggy pooh
Intriguing, I like a good riddle. I Wonder if Flint is the villain here, and it is nice to meet Sirius agin, it looks like they are together in this time. Looking forward to read more
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for reading and the feedback--truly appreciate it! There will be more of Flint and others;-) and more of how they came to be together in this time in the next chapter (story is completed, just must re-write some in-between chapters with more filling out of the riddling parts in more detail)- Thanks again for reading!xxx
A deduction and action chapter that settles the current criminal case, but leaves many things unexplained.
It appears to have brought our pair closer together.
Accusations and questions are flying. About events in different worlds. And who knows what a slightly different Sirius or Pansy might or might not have done. Or the crazed Marcus.
The chapter suggests that obsession with love - either as a profession in the case of the Department of Mystery personal or as an emotion in the case of Marcus - can be dangerous.
Sirius is revealed as more competent than Hermione had assumed.
At this point, I'm not certain whether or not Sirius and Hermione have counterparts who are now in the wrong universe.
We may discover that some things are irreversible and some things must remain unexplained.
(Canis Major at its zenith. )
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so very much for continuing to read and the detailed feedback--truly appreciate it!Reference to Sirius' and Hermione's counterparts in the other universes will be touched upon in the next/final chapter. Hoping to tie up many of the numerous loose ends of the multiple half-explained or completely unexplained things--perhaps a few will be left for the reader to fill in as they wish, but other things will be specifically, finitely expressed for this version of this tale. Again, thank you for taking the time to give this a read--and I love the Canis Major at its zenith!
An interlude of remembrance, discovery, and bonding.But. Being impetuous is seen as a fault in Sirius, but perhaps it is a matter of his being totally connected to the moment, and its other manifestation is being totally connected to the ones he loves to the point of being willing to die for them.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Dear
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
, thank you for reading and the thoughtful feedback--yes, Sirius is impetuous and the observations about him being connected to the moment as well as being totally connected to the ones he loves will perhaps lead him to make decisions that will clash with how Hermione sees decisions needing to be made, due to his nature... Thank you again, truly appreciate it !
Excellent, really satisfying description of Knockturn Alley which sets the scene for an exciting fight which leaves Sirius seriously wounded -- eek! Can't wait for the next one to post, nag. This is a really enjoyable mystery. Pxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Parallel Dilemma)
Thank you so much for all of the feedback--as you well know, I've been very loosely trying to follow an inverted detective story *thingy* here, a 'howcatchthem' of sorts... I'm so happy you like the Knockturn Alley vision (I know I took extra liberties with it, but yes, I also find it hard to believe that all of Magical London is confined to two narrow alleys, etc., so thank you for entertaining this notion)--thank you again for everything!