I love the paralell to the book,it could have happened this way,great start!!

This is a very intriguing beginning. I love the interaction between Hermione and Severus here.
Looking forward to reading more!

interesting first chapter, looking foreward to following this. Well written

Amazing beginning, Clara. It's intriguing to the point of being absolutely stunning! You've captured their characterisations and voices so well. I am so eager to read more.

great, original start to the story. sadly, it looks as though this story has been abandoned, but it is nevertheless a pleasure to have read this much.

Well done with the first chapter! Grabbed my attention, dragged me in and now i want more!!!!write! write! write!

Excellent, intriguing start, please write more!!