Secret Uncovered
Chapter 6 of 7
phoenixRewritten and expanded! It's tough to be a werewolf in a society where you are misunderstood and feared. How does Remus Lupin, the first werewolf to attend Hogwarts, handle this responsibility? A look at the MWPP Hogwarts years.
ReviewedSecret Uncovered
While in the library studying, Remus thought he saw a familiar dark shape peering around the corner. It seemed that everywhere he looked lately, he caught a glimpse of Severus. It was almost as though the Slytherin was following them, spying on them.
Of course, he couldn’t really blame Severus. Sirius and James had stepped up their retaliation. Severus had been randomly hexing them for months. Remus knew he should stop them, but they were justified in their revenge, right? He couldn’t even remember how the feud had started. He didn’t mention this to the others, trying to protect Severus.
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Sirius leaned across the common room table and whispered. “Snivellus has been hanging around a lot. I think he’s spying on us.”
“What for?” asked Remus.
“To get us in trouble. He’s jealous. I’ll teach him a lesson.” Sirius grinned mischievously.
“Haven’t you done enough to him already?” asked Remus.
“Moony, this is Snivellus, you can never do to much to him,” added James.
“You aren’t going to hurt him?”
“Naw. Just scare him a little. Don’t worry.”
Remus could help but worry after seeing the grin on Sirius’ face and resigned himself to keeping an eye on his friend.
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“Hey, Sni… Severus!” called Sirius.
“What do you want?” snapped Snape, levelling his wand at Sirius.
“Whoa! Wand down. I’m not here to cause trouble. I’ve just noticed you following us around. I figured you might want to know what we’re up to.”
“Why would you tell me?” he asked suspiciously.
Sirius shrugged. “If you don’t want to know… I just thought we could stop fighting, and as a goodwill gesture, I’ll tell you about this amazing secret passage we found.”
Intrigued, Snape asked, “What passage?”
“Well, it’s under the Willow, and you can only open it during full moon…”
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“You did what?” shouted James.
“It’s just Snivellus. It’ll teach him to leave us alone.”
“Moony might kill him… or turn him into a werewolf.” He was aghast.
“Come on, this is Snivellus. It’ll just rid us of one more Dark wizard. You know he’ll turn.”
“Yeah? What happens to us? Do you think Dumbledore could turn a blind eye to that? And what about Remus? He’d be expelled! Do you ever think?” James ran out of the dormitory and toward the Whomping Willow, hoping he wasn’t too late. Sirius had been reckless before, but this was going too far.
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Seeing Snape holding the stick, James shouted, “Severus, no!” It was too late. James watched Snape slip under the tree. Sprinting across the lawn, he dove into the tunnel as the tree reanimated.
In the distance, he could see Snape’s wand glowing. Running for all he was worth, James knew he had to catch up. If anything happened to Snape…
He tackled Snape just before he opened the trap door.
Severus struggled. “Let go of me!”
“I can’t let you go in there.”
“Keeping your treasure all to yourself?”
“It’s dangerous.”
“Yeah, right.”
“There’s a werewolf.”
“But, Lupin…” Comprehension dawned.
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The blood drained from Remus’ face.
“Then you knew nothing of this?”
“No, headmaster. I would never want to hurt anyone, not even Snape. I knew Sirius wanted to teach him a lesson…”
Dumbledore wrapped an arm around Remus’ shoulder. “I know the young do many cruel things. Sirius is being severely punished for his poor judgment.”
“And I’ll be expelled?”
“Of course not, you did nothing wrong. I have explained the situation to Severus, and he has agreed not to reveal your secret. New precautions will be added to ensure no one can reach you while you are transformed.”
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Guilt weighing heavily on his conscience, Remus sought out Severus. After two days, he got Severus alone. “I want to apologize…”
“Do you think your apology means anything to me? I know how you feel about me. The only thing you’re sorry about is that your plan didn’t succeed,” Severus snapped bitterly.
“That’s not fair! I have never hurt anyone, not even you…”
“Not directly, but how many times have you stopped your friends from attacking me? I don’t want your apology, or your pity. If you don’t leave me alone, I may change my mind about keeping your secret.”
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A/N: Thanks again to those that have reviewed. The muses very much appreciate hearing your thoughts. I know the story seems rushed, but I thought this would be a good way to look at the major moments of Remus' time at Hogwarts. Hopefully, you are finding that all the characters are staying in character, though getting across nuances in so few words is very difficult.
One more chapter to go and it should be up soon.
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I think you are doing a magnificent job with such limitations! I could never, ever write this well in so few words. I think you are keeping everyone in character and I like the way you played out the scene with Severus and Sirius. I also like that you had Remus go to try to apologise, I think that that was something he would definitely have done. Keep up the wonderful work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks. It really was challenging to write this story in this fashion. I don't know that I'll be doing something like this again for that reason. Though, it has been quite fun. I do think that Remus would have tried to apologize and I'm glad that you agree with me.
Oh, poor Remus! That would really suck, never remembering much of what you had been doing. Very nicely done!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thank you so very much,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I always kind of got the impression that before Wolfsbane, he would lose control, and I supposed memory. Writing this fic made me even more sympathetic towards him than I already was.
Another wonderful chapter! You are doing such a wonderful job! It is like you used a time turner to go back and managed to get into his head. Keep up the great work! Looking forward to more!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I'm glad you are enjoying this. It was a real challenge trying to get into his head when you have a word limit. I'm glad you find this characterization realistic. More will be coming soon.
Again, I loved this - I never thought I'd like something written just about Remus, but the way you've written this is very addictive! -Noelani
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks, Noelani. I found this addicting to write. It was a lot of fun to really concentrate on Remus, though there is some more Marauder stuff in the next couple, but this remains a predominantly Remus story.
Another great one! I like how you are putting in his feelings about how James and Sirius treated Severus and about how he had misgivings about his friends becoming Anamagi. You capture Remus very well. I can't wait for the next one! Keep up the great work and please update soon!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I tried to take the few tidbits we had about Remus's time at school from both Snape's Worst Memory and his own recollections to Harry. I know he felt guilty about his friends and I'm glad to have captured that here.
Another great chapter! You are writing this very well! I really feel for poor Remus! You rock!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks. I was trying to imagine how hard it would be to be Remus. We know that he hasn't had an easy life and I wanted to show that it's been that way the whole time, not just once the first war was over.
That was very well done! I am sure that that is exactly how he probably would have felt. Great job! Can't wait to read the rest!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thank you very much. I know I responded to the other review for chapter 3, but I did want to thank you for taking the time to comment on each chapter. I liked this one because you really get in Remus's mind.
Oh, is this going to include the one I read on your LJ? That was fantatic! And so is this! I love it. I can imagine how hard it must have been to write it. I don't know if I would be able to pull it off. I can't wait for more!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Jen, yup, this will come to include the one I had in the LJ, though it will be marginally reworked, but nothing big, just a few little tweaks as we've seen his transformation in the shack before, no. :)This is truly one of the most difficult things I've written because of the constraints. Telling a whole story in 100 word snippets is hard. That's a very short time to have a scene and then it's on to the next. LOL It was a lot of fun though.
This is really interesting! I love the perspective of this - can't wait to see where it goes! - Noelani
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks, Noelani. This has been a really fun fic to write. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Lovely story. I'm so impressed when I read a series of drabbles that make a complete story. I could never do it. Excellent job, my friend. Thanks for sharing with all of us. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks, Jenny. It wasn't easy. There was so much temptation for me to keep expounding on scenes and make it a much more in depth story, but that would have defeated the point. Not sure I'll do it again, but it was a fun exercise.
Okay, I did leave a review already, but got kicked off line, so I don't think it posted. I think you did a lovely job with this story! I feel really bad for poor Remus, but I am glad that Dumbldore tried to help him and continued to look out for him. You did a magnificent job!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I'm glad you liked it. I wanted to give a bit of a happy ending to someone that's going to have a very rough life. :)
Aw, those drabbles made me have that faith in the Maurarders I had during PoA before I learned the leaders were prats in HBP. Great job!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I had fun with this one adapting a drabble challenge to something unique. I have been thinking about expanding this story to cover Lupin's time at Hogwarts a bit more thoroughly. We'll see what the muses say. :)